~Mahi*Shabd~fan-fic *The Test*~PART 6pg12 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats so coool😳 update it fassttttttttttt 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12

OMG!

Awesome and cute please continue soooooon!

I liked it who's photo was it is he having an affair?!!?! Naaah yeh nahi ho sakta he loves Mahi tooooooooooooo much☺️

It's his dead mom right?😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey,

ThankU for all the comments everybody really appreciated😛

Part 2:


2 weeks later; Mahi had totally forgotten about the women's picture she saw on Shabds camera. She presumed that the lady was some model that Shabd had worked with.

It was around mid-day and the sun had become hotter then ever. Mahi had become fed-up of carrying 3 big shopping bags in each arm. The cause of all this shopping was the party Mahi and Shabd have thrown for Veer and Raji's baby boy. Mahi decided enough was enough she needed to sit down, she walked in to the nearest coffee shop. As Mahi walked into the coffee shop she bumped into a lady, in one moment Mahi had dropped all her shopping bags causing all contents to tip out side. Before taking a look at who it was that had barged into her; Mahi gave a little whine and immediately attended her shopping. Meanwhile the lady she had barged into looked down at Mahi with out saying a word, she was more interested in the shopping that was scattered all over the floor. She was in particular reading the invitation card, which had on it in big thick blue writing " You are invited to celebrate with the Khurana family at…." . Mahi got up, breaking the lady's concentration. Mahi was not happy, she had a annoyed expression on her face and it sounded in her voice as well..
M: Excuse me, app dekhar nahi chal sakthi?

The lady replied back, but in a clam voice..
L: I'm sorry it was an accident, ok..

M: Ok fine if it was accident but u didn't even have decency to help me pick up the things I dropped instead you stood watching!?!

L: Maine kaha na I'm Sorry, and why should I help, they dropped out of your hands Mrs. Shabd Sareen…

Mahi glared at the women, how did she know her name!
There was something strange about her, Mahi was sure that she had seem this lady somewhere before, but couldn't' force her self to remember where she saw this women..

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Meanwhile at the same time but in the studio Shabd was busy taking snaps of a model. He took photos of her from different angles and encouraged her at the same time. While he was taking snaps a man walked up to him with an envelope in his hand.
M: Sir, this for you (he handed the envelope to Shabd)
S: Ye Kya hai? Kisne diya?
M: Pata nahi, reception ki desk par kisne rakha tha..
S: Urrrrm Ok
Shabd looked down at the envelope, it had had his name on, but before his name someone added on to it "my"
S: Ye kaun ho saktha hai, (he opens the envelope)

Shabd turned the envelope around and peeled off the top flap; bits of a cut out picture tipped out on to the clean floor. Shabd became even more confused he bent down and picked a few bits up he looked at them carefully failing to understand what he was to do with these bits of cut up paper. He looked into the envelope again inside was a small bit of paper folded up, he unfolded the small piece of paper and read it out loud…
S: Iss uljaan ko tum suljaoo, (Shabd looked up in to the air with a confused face) hmmm…….

Out of no where the model spoke, she had been listening and watching Shabd for the last few minute since he stopped paying attention to her,
M: I think its puzzle, put the bits of paper together… shayad kuch milegha..

Shabd looked up to the model with a cute smile,
S: Thanks..

Shabd taking his time carefully arranged the bits of paper as he carried on Shabd realized that it was a photo, photo of someone's eye, a pair of eyes that seemed familiar to him. Where had he seen them he questioned himself, he concentrated but his concentration broke when his phone started vibrating in his blazer pocket. He received it straight away,

S: Hello,
It was Mahi; who had found a nice window seat in the coffee shop, she was holding the invitation card in her and in the other her phone to her ear..
M: Lagtha hai ajj janab busy nahi hai…? Warna toh kaam par meri phone bhi nahi pick up kathe ho
Shabd smiles,
S: Shpping Karli?

Waiter comes with Mahi's order, places it on the table;
M: Haan! Main to tak gayi hoon ye shopping bags utta the utta the..(In a tired voice)
S: Arre itna tired math hoo! Ajj party main to hum dono ko bahut dance karna hai..
M: Hmmm (not really interested, looking out of the window)
The waiter who was still standing next to Mahi, took his chance and without making any noise took the invitation card and walked off..
S: Hmm ka matlab kya hai, meri saath dance nahi karma hai kya..?
M Hmmm (she gives a little smile, she loved to annoy him)
S: Chalo agar asie bhaat hai toh, wait one minute….. Soniya yahaan par aao
Shabd called up the model, who was busy putting lip gloss on.
Son: Yes..
Holding his phone away from his ear so Mahi could hear..
S: Acha Soniya tum ajj free ho na..?
son: Yes But kyon..
S: Ajj meri ghar main ek party hai, tum zaaroor aana, hum dono bahut dancing karenghe..(Amused expression on his face)
Son: (excited) Yes Sir definitely! Main zarror aaonghi..
Mahi listening to this, sits up immediately,
M: Shabd abhi bhaatao, kaun hai who, aur who kyon aayighi MERI PAR….
S: (shouting) Bye Mahi, Main kitna busy hoon, bahut bhaat karthi ho tum, chalo Soniya lets continue! (Ends the call)
Mahi shakes her head with a frown on her face,
M: Dance to meri saath karonghe Shabd…(laughs and hits her head)..Whatever…

A few tables away, a lady was carefully examining the invitation card, the same lady who had bumped into Mahi..
L: Party eh, hmmm

~ Not much romance or anything, i tried to make the phone conversation interesting, don't thinking it worked..😆

~ Next part is the party!😛 Need ideas for songs..

Luv ya..

Ouma
Edited by ~Ouma*n*Eijaz~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: am_786

OMG!

Awesome and cute please continue soooooon!

I liked it who's photo was it is he having an affair?!!?! Naaah yeh nahi ho sakta he loves Mahi tooooooooooooo much☺️

It's his dead mom right?😆



🤣..Not a bad idea..
~ No Shabd isn't having an affair!😳 He luvs Mahi too much..

Thanks

Luv ya..
Ouma
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG WOW! 1stly, i dont read any othr ff's xcept Angad n Kripa, 2ndly, Mahi n Shabd r definetly a reeeeely cute couple and finally, AWESOME FF! WOW! i dint wanna stop readin, both parts were brilliant! loved them.. u gotta continu.. this ff wil definetly b intrestin, its 2 good alredy! luv it!
xx!MWAH!xx
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chotii

OMG WOW! 1stly, i dont read any othr ff's xcept Angad n Kripa, 2ndly, Mahi n Shabd r definetly a reeeeely cute couple and finally, AWESOME FF! WOW! i dint wanna stop readin, both parts were brilliant! loved them.. u gotta continu.. this ff wil definetly b intrestin, its 2 good alredy! luv it!
xx!MWAH!xx
xx Saz xx



*yey* Thnku so much Saz made my day hun..
~I'll continue soon!😛, Ye MS are the perfect match❤️

Luv ya..

Ouma
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
woowwwwww ouma that's gr8!! keep it up interesting! 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was lovely ouma......really well written....do cont. soon...
👏

love
unnati
Edited by unnati72003 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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GREAT GOING, OUMA! 👏 👏 👏
I really like Shabd-Mahi jodi---Thanks for starting a ff abt them! 👏 😳 😃
Who is that mysterious lady? Shabd's mom?

Pallavi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😛~ Thnkx..I'll continue later today!😛

Luv ya..

Ouma

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