*~*~Dil Ka Rishta*~*~(LK) [Part34-Page36] - Page 12

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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 update uru 👏 👏 .poor kt laksh bohut satata hai 😳 .keep up the good work. 😳
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Zinu29

Aww. Uru. Very Cute part. Im off my Vication. so if you need help. ask me anytime!! awesome part. continue soon


Thanks di! Well I am going to PM you for the request. 😃

Originally posted by: nisha921

great job
thanks for updating
continue soon...
-Nisha


You are welcome. And thanks

Originally posted by: ktandlakshyalov

gr8 update uru .poor kt laksh bohut satata hai .keep up the good work.
-abhi


Laksh sure kt ko pura din satata rehta hai, agar shaadi se pehle yeh haal hai toh shaadi ke baad..... baap re baap! 😆

PS: next part will be up soon guys, but i can't say it if it's going to be written by me or Zinu di.
😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Uru. To tell you the Truth. I have no clue what's on your mind, on how to put it together. But, if you want me to do it, which your FF fans don't 😳 ..we'll discuss it through PM 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was mindblowing....do cont... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great Part Uru cont soon please 👏

xxAnuxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi guys..today Uru will be unable to update, due to some difficulties. So, im going to be filling in for her. It might be up by today, soon. I can't say when. Sorry
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Posted: 18 years ago
continue soon zinu :) waiting to read the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
************************************************************ ************************************************************ *********************
PART 20

Hi guys..uru won't be updating today, due to some difficulties. So i will be filling in for her.😊..

AFTER SOME DAYS..

Kt was discarged, a long time ago..
Kt, and Laksh were getting ready for their engagement, today night..
All the preperations were ready.
They both were getting dressed.
After 2 hours, they all came down..
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They were having their sweet engagement..
Everyone was gathered around Laksh and Kt..
They swetly put the rings on eachother's fingers..
The preist announced the wedding..
P: kal ka din, shaadi ke liye bahut shub hai..kal hi ka din shub hai..nahi to agle 2 saal tak koi aisa shub mahurat nahi hai..
Laksh and kt were smiling very happily..and everyone was cheering..for their happiness..
They all had a sweet party for the two getting together..
Laksh and Kt shared a sweet dance..
It was getting quite late, so everyone went back to their rooms..
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Laksh entered Kt's room..
L: kt..
K: haan..
L: (walks up to her)..khush ho..??
K: ofcourse..mai khush kyun nahi hoongi..mujhe mera pyaar jo mil gaya hai..
L: arre waah..maine tumhe yeh kehte huye to kabhi nahi suna..tum to hamesha mujhe chilgosa..chilgosa..kehe pukaarti ho..aaj kya ho gaya tumhe..
K: aisi koi baat nahi hai laksh..
L: haan..haan..jaanta hoon..kitna pyaar karti ho tum mujhe..
K: to batao..kitna..
L: bahut thoda saa..
K: LAKSH!! (hits him)..tum kitne jhoote ho..hmph..jaao..mai nahi baat karti tumse..hmph..
L: kt..mai mazaak kar raha tha..tum mujhe apni jaan se bhi zaada pyaar karti ho mujhe malum hai..
Kt smiles..
L: par kt..yeh buri baat hai..
K: kyun??
L: kyunki..agar tum mujhe itna pyaar karogi..aur jab bacha ayega..woh saara pyaar choo..isliye..kam pyaar karna..taaki tum mujhse aur pyaar karo..jab woh bacha aye..
K: laksh..tum aise kyun keh rahe ho..tumhe mai pyaar nahi kroongi jab bacha ayega??
L: nahi..
K: bilkul galat..mai tumhe utna hi pyaar karoongi..aur waise bhi..uske aane mein..abhi 4 saal to lage ge hi naa..kamsikam 5 saal shayad..
L: meri to lottery khul gayi..
K: Laksh..tum nahi chahte--
L: shhh...kt....bilkul chup..
Kt went silent..
L: abhi shaadi tak nahi hui hai..parr...kal hai naa..kal baat karenge..tumhare aur mere future ke baare mein..abhi....hmm................................(he hugs her from her back, and sweetly kisses her neck).......
K: laksh..bahut raat ho gayi hai..tum please jao...kal ka din hai naa yeh karne ke liye.....plz jaoooo......
L: nahi.............mai yahi rahoonga...
Kt drags him to the door, and sweetly pushes him out..
K: jjaaoooo....please....nahi to man shaadi nahi karoongi...(laughs)..
L: haye...itni kathor pareeksha kyun leti ho...jaata hoon...
He starts walking away...
K: (smiles)..chilgosa...(laughs, and closes her door)..
She was getting ready to go to sleep, when her phone rang..
She picked it up..
A=Anonymous
A: KT..
K: jii..kaun??
A: Laksh se door rehna..agar kal tumhari shaadi hoti hai..to tumhe kal hi ke din..uski widhwa ban na padega..agar tumne usse shaadi kar li..to mai usko jaan se maar doongi..samjhi..yeh koi blank call nahi hai..mai sach mein usse maar doongi..hahahahahhaahha...faisla tumhare haath mein hai..apne pyaar ko bachalo..yah uski widhwa banke jiyo..
The phone goes ingaze..
K: (worried) yeh kaun tha..kya dushmani hai iski laksh ya mere saath..
K: (crying) maine faisla kar liya hai..main shaadi cancel kar doongi..mujhe maaf karde na laksh..mai majboor hoon..
She starts packing her bags..and starts to write a letter for Laksh..
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NEXT MORNING..
It was 4:00 a.m.
Nobody was awake..
Kt quietly walked into Laksh's room..
She sat beside Laksh..
She kept the letter she had written for him, on his bed side table..
She started crying, and her tears fell on Laksh's face..
Laksh woke up..
L: kt...
Kt got scared..
She got up..and started walking..but laksh held her hand..she wiped off her tears..
L: kya baat hai kt..4 baje..kya hua??
K: kuch nahi laksh..mai jaa rahi hoon..
L: par kaha..
K: tumse door...[far away from you]..
L: kyun..kya baat hai..
He gets up, and holds kt by her arms, and turns her face, towards him..
L: jawab do kt..kya hua...
K: mai..mai tumse pyaar nahi karti laksh..(she starts crying)..
L: (lets go of her arms)..(shocked)..kya...tum mazaak kar rahi ho naa..kaho ki yeh mazaak hai..
K: yeh koi mazaak nahi hai laksh..nafrat karti hoon mai tumse..tumhari har baat se..ghin aati hai mujhe tumse...mai jaa rahi hoon..abhi issi waqt..
She leaves..
Laksh goes into flashback's of yesterday night..about how they were talking about their love, etc..
Kt's harsh words are echoing in Laksh's ears..
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DOWNSTAIRS..
Laksh comes running from his room..crying in anger..
Kt is seen walking towards the door..
L: KT!! WAHI RUK JAO...(yells)..
Everyone comes out of their rooms, wondering what the problem is..
Laksh walks to kt..Kt stands there frozen..
Laksh turns kt around..
L: tum yeh kyun kar rahi ho kt..kyun?!
K: bataya naa maine tumhe laksh..tumhe ek baar mein samajh nahi aata hai kya..
L: (yells) samajh to tab ayega..jab tum sach bologi..tum jhoot bol rahi ho..
K: mai jhoot nahi bol rahi hoon..
L: (yells) agar yeh jhoot hai..to phir kal raat to hum dono ke beech baat hui thi..woh kya tha..tumhari nafrat..tum kyun mujhe--
K: LAKSH!!..haan haan..woh sab naatak tha..mai nahi karti tumse pyaar..
L: (yells) to phir meri zindagi mein kyun aayiee tum kt..mere dil mein bas ke..usko kyun toda...agar kisi ke dil ke saath khelne ka itna hi shock tha..to--
L: nahi..tum jhoot bol rahi ho..tum aisa nahi kar sakti..tum jhoot bol rahi ho..
K: nahi laksh..mai jhoot nahi bol rahi..
Laksh takes kt's hand, and places it on his head..
L: nahi karti tum mujhse pyaar?? to phir khao meri kasam..aur bolo, ki..tum nahi karti mujhse pyaar..
K: (cries)..mai nahi karti tumse pyaar laksh..bas sunliya..ho gayi tasali..mai jjaaoo ab..
Laksh lets go of her hand, and falls on his knees..
K: (softly) mai jao laksh...
Laksh dosen't respond..
Kt sadly leaves the house, crying..
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Well here guys..the next part..please tell me how it was..please reply..thanks!!
Love,
Zinu
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zinny.xo thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
no repliez 😭
i guess Uru is way better.
~Go Uru~ 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww poor laksh n kt 😭 who is that anynomous person it thinks its tripti 🤢 i hate her 😡 i like both of urs part.it sooo romatic 😛 😳 n cute 😆 expecially laksh 😉

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