*~*~Dil Ka Rishta*~*~(LK) [Part34-Page36] - Page 13

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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 Zinu di writes waaayyyy better than me, and her parts are even soo better than mine. You are the best zinu di. Go zinu di Go! [Sorry i stole your quote] 😆 But seriouly you are better and there are a lot of fans out here that are commenting for you. 👏 If you wanna continue the next part, you can do so, but now I am going to the library every day, so maybe i can write whenever i get time.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Lol. Ill update one or two parts tomorrow, if you don't mind uru. 😊 i wanted to update on here..but my days were going hectic. now im free..so if you don't mind ill update tomorrow 😊 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
that's sad......... 😭 .plzz bring back laksh-kt together. 😳 😳
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
😭 😭 plz bring lkt 2gether-i bet it's tripi the anonymous caller 😔
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Posted: 18 years ago
very upsetting part! keep it up zinu1 can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww..so sad 😭 😭 😭 ..plz continue soon zinu..im waiting eagerly..and plz make l-k back together as a couple..plz plz plz..continue soon zinu..after a long time u continued in this ff..awesome job 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 21

Laksh is sitting on his knees, covering his face with his hands, and crying..with no noise..
Sahil comes up to him..and keeps his hands, on Laksh's shoulder..
Laksh sadly gets up, and walks to his room..
Everyone tries to talk to him..but he dosen't respond..he just goes to his room, and closes his door..
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He sits on his bed, and opens kt's letter..

Dear Laksh..
I'm leaving you forever. I will come back after some time to meet you. It could be sooner, later or never.
I am forced to do this. Don't tell anyone about this, Please Laksh. Just think, i never was in your life before.
Laksh..promise me one thing..on our wedding day, please marry someone else. I'm sorry for leaving you like this Laksh. I did this for your sake, to save you. Forget me Laksh..forget we even met. It will be hard for me to forget you, but you please forget me. I'm leaving now Laksh. Please eat your food on time, and sleep on time. Don't trouble your new wife that much, and take care of her, and your family. If I had any other option rather than to leave you, i'd kill myself, but, i know you wouldn't like that..besides, i'll be gone that way anyways. Don't try to find me Laksh. Take Care of yourself. Bye Laksh!! I Love You!!

- Kt..

L: (crying) kyun kiya tuimne aisa kt..main nahi jee paunga tumhare bina..kya majboori thi..kyun choda ussne mujhe..
L: mai tumhe dhoond ke laoonga kt..har haal mein..mai nahi reh sakta tumhare bina..
He decides to to find kt..and leaves to go..
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DOWNSTAIRS..
Everyone is sitting in the living room..discussing the matter..
T: aisa kaisa kar sakti hai krishna tulsi..kyun laksh ko aisa bola usne..kuch to baat hai..kal tak to bahut khush thi..ab kya ho gaya
Meanwhile they see Laksh walking towards the door..
T: Laksh..kaha jaa raha hai..
L: mai kt ko dhoondne jaa raha hoon..jabtak woh nahi milti..mai wapas nahi aaounga..
T: nahi laksh..waada kar mujhse..ki tu raat se pehle wapas aayega..waada kar laksh..tujhe meri kasam..
L: (tears drop from his eyes)..waada karta hoon daadi..
He leaves crying..
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OUTSIDE IN THE CITY..

Laksh is going crazy trying to find Kt..
He goes to every shop, and asks for the girl in the picture..but everyone's reply is "no"..
Laksh is thinking of all the places kt wanted to always go to..like so many diffrent cities in india..
He suddenly remembers she really wanted to go back to haridwaar..
He rushes back home..and packs his bags..and informs everyone he'll be back soon..
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NEXT DAY..

Laksh was in Haridwaar..
He went to everyone's house kt knew..but everyone said she never came there..
He spent 2 days looking for her..but there was no sign of her anywhere..
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THE SCENE SWITCHES TO KT..
She's walking on the road..lost in her thoughts..carrying her luggage..with a bug frown on her face..
She see's the big sign that says..
"Welcome to Mumbai"..she passes it..and is no longer in Mumbai..
She turns and looks back at the sign..thinks of all the memories, of her and Laksh had spent together..she cries..and starts walking in the other direction again..walking away from Mumbai..knowing no where..that where her feet are going to lead her..and where she is going to end up..
After a long period of walking, some goons come and surround her..she dosen't know..as she is looking lost in thoughts..she has no clue..what is going on around her..
The goons notice she dosen't care..so they take her luggage, and pick her up and take her to their "place"..
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AFTER 4 YEARS..

Laksh was a very succsessful business man..and he had the biggest deal of his life today..
He hadn't forgotten kt..and he thought it was because of him that she left..he always blamed himself for her leaving the house..
He went in the meeting room..and started to discuss the project, with the other team, etc.
After the meeting was over..everyone voted what project they liked the best..
They all kept their slips in a box..
Meanwhile someone entered the room..
Person: sorry im late..did i miss that much..??
She turns around..
L: Yeah..you missed everything neha..
N: oh!! sorry..what's the point now for me coming huh??
Laksh and Neha laugh..
After they counted the votes, it was announced that Laksh's company had won the project..
Laksh and Neha cheered..and so did everyone from Laksh's company..
Meanwhile someone else came in..
Person: sorry im late. i forgot all about the deal.
She turns around, and see's Laksh hugging Neha happily..
Person: ex-cuse me..i'm here for a deal..
Laksh turns around..after pulling out from neha..
L: our company already won this project..
He looks away, and then suddenly looks back..
L: (shokingly) Kt..??..(he let down a couple of tears from his eye)..
Kt was also crying..not because of the deal..but to see laksh once again..
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What will happen next?? 😕
Will they solve their problem?? 😕
Will they ever re-unite?? 😕
Who is neha?? 😕
Is neha Laksh's wife?? 😕
Did Laksh marry Neha?? 😕
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Well..here's the next part guys..hope you like it..please reply..thanks!! 😊
Next part will be updated by Uru. 😳
Love,
Zinu
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Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww yay laksh kt finally saw each other. whew!!! plz make them together again n kill htat tripti pretty pretty pleaze
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey guys,
It feels really good to be back in I-F now. I will update the next part soon. Well actualy I am really bored right now, so I guess I will write it anyways.
Part 22
Recap:- Laksh turns around..after pulling out from neha..
L: our company already won this project..
He looks away, and then suddenly looks back..
L: (shokingly) Kt..??..(he let down a couple of tears from his eye)..
Kt was also crying..not because of the deal..but to see laksh once again..
Kt ran outside of the cabin and went out of the office's building.
She wasnt thinking anything else, but about laksh. Her cheeks were all wet of tears, and her eyes were really red because of her sadness.
She sat on the bench and she tried to confort herself but she just kept on thinking about their past memories. She can't stop them. It was really hard for her. Kt didn't know that Laksh followed her outside too. He came and sat beside her.
L: kt...
K: hi laksh[ she quickly wiped her tears.]
L: kya hua? tum roh rahi ho?
K: nahi bas aise hi.. kyun kya baat hai? waise tum kaise ho?
L: baat ko mat badlo.
K: maine kab..
L: tum achchi tarah se jaanti h ki mai kis baare mai baat kar raha hoon
K: kis baare mein baat kar rahe ho?
L: ohh! tumhe short term memory ka bukhaar kabse ho gaya?
K: Laksh tum kya kehna chahte ho?
L: theek hai toh mai tumhe yaad dilaau.. yaad hai kt aaj se 4 saal pehle humari shaadi hone wali thi.. I hpe tum uss baat ko toh nahi bhul gayi ho, toh mai yeh keh raha tha ke aisi tumhari kya majboori thi, ki tum mujhe akela chod ke chali gayi thi? Aisi kya baat hui thi ki tumne bas chand[few] ghanto mein mujjhse shaadi karne ke liye inkaar kar diya tha?
K: tum mujhe yeh sab kyun pooch rahe ho laksh?[a few tears come out of her eyes]
L: kyunki mujhe bhi jaan ne ka haq hai. Meri zindagi barbaad kardi thi tumne kt.
K: laksh plz.. sab ke saamne [she got interrupted]
L: aisi to kya majboori thi kt? yah phir mujhse koi ameer ladke ko dekh ke tumhe uss se bhi pyaar ho gaya tha?
K: aisa kuch bhi nahi tha laksh, plz mujhe jaane do. Mai tumhari haath jod ti hoon. She was crying really badly. Laksh felt a bit guilty after he insulted her in the public. But he wanted to know the answer.
L: theek hai par mai uss jawaab ko jaan ke hi rahoonga
K: tum jawaab chahiye naa? toh aaj shyaam aajaa na Q.E.W street unit no. 16, tumhe tumhare saare sawaalo ka jawaab mil jayega
Laksh lets kt go, because he knew that kt would never lie to him.
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In the evening...
Laksh went to kt's house.
He knocked on the door and kt opened it. He noticed something really weird. Kt was just a simple and cute girl, just like an angel. Kt still looked the same way. But she was a business woman, which means a lot's competition between him and her for 4 years and he still didn't notice it.
L: hi kt, may I come in?
K: you don't need to ask. You are my friend.
L: just a friend? Just a friend kt?
K: maybe just a bit more than that.. but when a guy gets married to a girl, he should break all hi realationships with other girls, or any other girl.
They both goes in the house and has a seat on the couch in the living room.
L: so
K: so what laksh?
L: kt I am not here to tell you how I am or how I am feeling today.
K: are you just here to say hi to me?
L: no kt. Plz get to the point. You promised….. remember???




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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part uru. continue soon. im running with high fever again. thats why i updated so late. and i didn't find any time, to update my other one. my brain isn't functioning that well. please cover up for me iff possible. ill let you know when im better. thanks uru. awesome part 😊
Love,
Zinu 😳

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