Shayad yahi to pyar hai-(lk)updated part! - Page 13

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Posted: 18 years ago
Waise this part was a bit sad, but I know abhi a lot. She will make the next part a bit more cute. 😃 And this part was really good too. 👏 👏 👏 I feel sad for lakshu. Hope he feels better when adi comes back. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow this is my most and fav ff ever..it's just how i want it.......do cont. soon....
👏

Pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice and little sad part but i love it!!😭
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😳😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
I know it was sad 😉 😉 but trust me next part will be dam romantic!!! 😳 .....akhir mai apne laksh ko dukhi kaise rakh sakti hoon!! 😉 😆
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
I just have a request!plz do visit my shop just once i'll feel really nice!here isn the link:
😳 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=659136
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 creations abhi and plzzz cont. asap....i can't wait..... 😆 just kidding take ur time...

Edited by unnati72003 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
thakx a lot for liking my ff!! 😳 😳 here is the next part!!:
recap:
L:mai bhi tumhare sath so jata hoon plz!
KT:laksh bachon ki tarah behave mat karo jao......!
L:frowns n says with full frustration! byee nahi aaonga! n goes away
KT:kt feels really bad but cant help it!

now:
Laksh get's back to his room very sadly 😭 .n here kt is not able to sleep thinking about her darling lakshu!! 😳 😳 😆
Suddenly in baa's room!!.........tulsi comes!!
K:baa(t)aap yahan ? 😕
T:krishna mai baa ke sath so jaati hoon tu jaa apne kamre me! 😳 😳
K:baa par aap hi ne kaha tha ki......
T:haan kaha tha par dekha bhi hai!
K:dekha .....kya baa
T:tere pati ko
Kt shy's n looks down!
K:baa woh...
T;haan,haan janti hoon.....ab ja aur use sula. 😆 😆
K:shyly.....jee baa..................n goes to hwer room!! 😳
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She enter's the room n she saw laksh watching t.v. 😳 she went near laksh.
K:laksh tum abhi tak soye nahi!
L:tum ..tum yahan kya kar rahi ho.jao na apne baa ke pas....woh kuch chahiye leke chale jaana! 😳 😡 😆
K:acha........woh baa ne kaha ki mai yaheen so jaoon par tum keh rahe ho toh chale jaati hoon! 😳 😉 😆
She turns to leave just then laksh holds her hand n pulls her on his lap!! 😳 😳 (he was sitting on the cough n watching t.v)
L;khabarda............yahan se hilna bhi mat! 😳 (flirtily)
K:put her hand around his neck!! 😳 ........toh tum cricket dekh rahe the!!
L:haan aap jo nahi thi........kisses her on her cheek!
😳
K:toh ab sone chale!!
L:haan chaliye..........tum ho!main hoon aur bed hai aur kay chahiye!! 😳 😳
K:get's up from his lap 😆 n went towards the bed! 😳 while soon laksh caught her pallu(end of her saree)
KT:laksh kya kar rahe ho chodo!! 😳
L:came closer n started untying her saree!! 😳 😳
KT:caught his hand ...laksh plz!! 😳
L:shhh..........aag no bahana bas tum aur mai!! 😳

L;he slightly tickled her stomach! 😆 ...she hugged him tightly!
Laksh swept off the floor carried her in his strong arms!! 😳 😳 he layed her on the bed and climbed the bed!!
He turned off the light while the moonlight was still giving light!through window! 😳 😳 .he kissed her on her neck nuzzled it........kt moved a little! 😳 he then kissed her on her cheeks ,nose,fore head...............then he kissed her on her lips!! 😳

Then the veiw shifts to the moonlit romantic sky as then the whole night aur sweet n cute mamma-papa were lost in each-others love!!

-to b continue soon!
😳 -plz!!comment!!
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute and romantic......i loved it.....gr8 job...... 👏

Shona 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww so nice and romantic
im addicted to it
plz continue soon i can't wait to read the next part
-tuba
-mango- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was really sweet and romantic. I am so happy that tulsi ntoticed these love birds' problem. Cant wait till Adi comes back. 👏

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