Shayad yahi to pyar hai-(lk)updated part! - Page 15

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Posted: 17 years ago
yay finally u updated.....but what's erong with the size.....????anyways it was awsome..... 👏

Unnati
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Posted: 17 years ago
Okk!!heres my next part!!

After the bedroom romance KT!!came out of the washroom!!while laksh was watching T.V!!Kt's hair was wet so she was drying it!!Laksh did not notice that Kt!! came out!!
Kt!!was standing before the mirror n drying her hair!!Then she noticed laksh who was eagerly watching NEWs!!

Kt!!:ahem..ahem....aag kal mai nazar hi nahi aati hoon na!! 😉
Laksh turned to look at his beatiful wife!n started to walk towards her!!

Kt:yeh hook lagado 😳 (was showing the ends of her mangalsutr)
L;kya baat hai aag tum mujhe bulane lagi ho!!

KT;kyun mai tumhe bula nahi sakti kya?

L:bula sakti ho par bulati nahi ho na!! 😳 😳 n fixed the hook!!n held her by her waist!!

KT:mai toh hamesha bulati hoon par tum nahi sunte! 😉

L:kissed the water dropleton her neck!! 😳 😳

KT:laksh..laksh...stop it!!

L:kyun abhi tak toh kuch keh raho thi na phir!! 😳 😳

KT:par tum(laksh was constantly kissing her) 😳 😳

L;kt mood kharab mat karo!!plzzzzzzz!! 😳 "ADi"aajayega phir chance nahi milega!!

KT:besharam kal raat toh sab kuch kiya ab jao aur ADi ko lao!! 😳 😆 😆

L:kya zaroorat hai!! 😆
KT:kyaaaaa.kya kaha laksh tum!!

L:shhhhhh..sorry jaa raha hoon!!but one last kiss!! 😳 😉 he turned her to face him!!n started moving closer to her!!their lips were just going to meet then!!

(Note:the T.V was on all this time)

T.V announcement:the newsreader said"LOnawala mai adhik bareesh ke karan bahut accident ho rahe hai todhi der pehle kaye 5 saal ke bachon ka maut ho gaya" 😕

Hearing to this laksh moves backward!!n Kt's eyes get teary!!(remember "ADI"has gone to lonawala")

KT:laksh..adi.laksh...mera bachaaaaaaa(crying voice) 😭 😭 😭

-TO BE CONTINUED
_leave ur comments!!
😳
-abhi
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was fantastic but plz make adi reach home safe and sound
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Posted: 17 years ago
and keep the fanfic going it was awesome plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bradford3

and keep the fanfic going it was awesome plz continue

thanx bradford!!😊for Pm ing me n asking to continue i wil sure ly try to contiue soon while my exams r the problem!!😡😡

5 more comments i will continue!!

-abhi

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Posted: 17 years ago
plz continue and adi cant die the fanfic seemed livley when he was in it
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey abhi continued after long and stilll not a long part...... anyways i understand.....by the way it was awsome and mindblowing asusual...... 👏

Pari
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: .:::SHONA:::.

Hey abhi continued after long and stilll not a long part...... anyways i understand.....by the way it was awsome and mindblowing asusual...... 👏

Pari

i try my best to update but 10th so busy!!😭😕n thanx for commenting!!

-abhi

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Posted: 17 years ago
thanx for commenting!! 😳 😳 here's the next part!!

Recap
T.V announcement:the newsreader said"LOnawala mai adhik bareesh ke karan bahut accident ho rahe hai todhi der pehle kaye 5 saal ke bachon ka maut ho gaya"

Hearing to this laksh moves backward!!n Kt's eyes get teary!!(remember "ADI"has gone to lonawala")

KT:laksh..adi.laksh...mera bachaaaaaaa(crying voice)


Now
Kt:laksh........dekho na kya keh rahe hai!!laksh.she held laksh by his colar n started shaking him!! 😭 😭 😭

L:kt chup ho jao kuch nahi hoga usse!! 😳

KT;tumne kaha tha isliye maine beja use ab wohh....(still weeping)

L:shhhhhh...closed her mouth.kuch nahi hoga use kaha na!!bas..chup!! 😭 😭 kuh nahi hoga!!

KT hugged laksh tightly n bth started crying!! 😭 😭 😭 after a minute both pulled out!!laksh held kts face with his both hands like he couped her face!!

L:bas chup mera bacha mujhe chodkar kahin nahi jaayega samjhi!!! 😳 😳
KT:par.....woh!!

L:par war kuch nahi mai abhi jaakar dekhta hoon!!

KT:par tum kahan jaoge!! 😕

L:lonawala !! 😳

KT;mai bhi chaloongi plzzzzz!!

L:nahi KT agar iss samay mai adi ghar aajaye toh tumhe yahan rehna hai na!! 😳 toh chalo mai chalta hoon!! 😳 😳

Laksh within a minute gets ready n starts he walks down the hall way while whole family come towards him!! 😉 (the so called virani's)

TULsi!!:laksh woh news mai abhi dekha!!

L:haan baa isliye jaa raha hoon lonawala(his eyes filled with tears!) 😭 😭

T:kuch nahi hoga use takurgi par bharosa rakh!!

L:jii baa bas woh KT bahut ro rahi hai plz use sambhaliya naa!!

T & ganga:hum dekhlenge!!

Karan & mihir:hum bhi chalte hain tere sath chal!! 😳 😳

L;jii chaliye!! 😳

-to be continued!!
😳 😳
-abhi!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwwwww.... 😭 plzzzz save abhi...... 😭 i really liked him.......my another lil lakshu..... 😭

It was an awsome part 👏

Pari

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