With Love from DK to AA P53 Part - 2 Pg70 - Page 6

autumnleaf, u are just AMAZING!! 👏
i can picture every scene so clearly in my mind! 👏 👏 👏
u are such a good writer! 👏 👏 good job! 👏 👏 please write more soon! 😃 i love reading it 😳 😃 👏

autumn!! u just have left me speechless!! hats off to u dear!!! really.. u have outdone yourself!!! wonderful!! outstanding... beautiful!!! 👏 i was literally imagining all of these scenes happening.. really... it seemed soo real yaar!!! excellent job.. and please do continue!! 😳

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Autumnleaf this time i m really speechless 😳 ..but the suspense is really killing me now 😡 i hope kajal finds out soon that he is dev and we get to see some real action 😉 ,but u r really a terrific writer and soon i will b conducting some chemistry sessions for all bhootnis where u will b the HOD 😃

Jyot, kitni baar kehna padega ke you have to keep your posts pg 13 - aisi baatein PM mein bhi ho sakti hai! 😆

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Autumnji, I'm at a loss for words...you're an amazing writer!

hey jyo and autmn...did you read the new tabela scene called DK-scne for you guys..dedicated to jyo of course and you autumn...am your fan too now...kya baat hai..wah wah subaan allah...mashallah... 😛 sammy

wah wah wah kya alaa story likhi hai yarr. kasam se maza agaya 😛

Thanks a lot to all you bhootnis and friends. I shall continue but only on Thursday. Sorry But my weekend is on tuesday and wednesday this time. Sorry to keep you all waiting. But I shall be back on thursday and till then take care of DK for me and enjoy!!!!!

wow... autumleaf.. You are amazing... Just now read the last 2 stories.... Wonderful.. Mindblowing....

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PLease write more kyon ki Dil Maange More....

Right gals??

Thanks a lot you bhootnis. I don't want to sound like a stuck record, so enjoy the next part. I shall henceforth roll the whole week's happenings in one part. That way I can make it into an interesting and kind of scintillating FF for you all. Hope you like it.......

Part 5.........................................................

They are enjoying in the restaurant. R/D has taken her to the dhaba. 😉 Well but here Kaajjal is so full of her memories of Dev that she by mistake sits on the wooden takhta just like Dev did. R/D stops her "Oy, madamji, what are you doing? This is for the food to be placed and not to sit. Where are you? Again in your dreamworld?" Kaajjal looks at him shocked. The same words, Dev.............

R/D suddenly realises his slip and asks her to sit down. She sits and keeps on staring at him as if he were Dev. The same clothes, eyes, smile, nakhrewala nose in the air, then why.......

the sardar comes to take their order and remembers Dev and asks him if he would like something less spicy and Kaajjal gets tears in her eyes. Dev replies to the sardarji but looking deeply and knowingly in Kaajjal's eyes, "Na na na na na , aaj to aap hamare liya Jalebiyaan le kar aaiye. Inhe bahut pasand hain" Again Kaajjal is shocked and looks at him "I have never told you that I like Jalebis? Then how....." R/D interupts her saying "Sh.... Shhh......... you forget that I am Raju rangeela, I can find out many things. And here I have realised that how truly and deeply you love Dev. So I have now decided to be your friend and do the deed that I have come to finish." She looks up with a renewed respect in her eyes for Raju and smiles and places a hand on his as thanks. Her eyes do all the talking and Dev sings this tune in his mind. "Mere liye tu bani, mujhse kahe mera mann, tera hi yeh chehraa, dikhe mujhe har dam.......in the pyaar hua chupke se tune. She is enjoying the jalebis and he is enjoying just looking at her. He hasn't touched his jalebis and she asks him snapping her fingers "Where are you lost? Eat them they are great." So he nods his head and says still looking at her eyes, "Yes, they look beautiful. Just beautiful" Kaajjal is puzzled, "What, the jalebis look beautiful? Raju?!?!?!" in an amused tone. He snaps out of his reverie and smiles "Yes, they are so lovely and golden in colour shining and round......." Kaajjal says but you are not even looking at them. Here, taste them, they are good." So saying this she picks up a piece and holds it near his mouth to feed him. He stares at her hand and then slowly ever so slowly holds her hand delicately as if to steady her hand and all the time looking at her smiling face eats the jalebi that she has offered him so sweetly. He gets tears in his eyes and looks away. She asks him what is wrong but he says, "I am happy that you are happy. I have up untill now seen your tears but today your smile has touched my heart." He stops before he reveals anything more and starts to joke about Raju style and then they are shown to have a lovely time together. Kaajjal momentarily forgets her sorrow and concentrates only on Raju. They are about to leave when Pahua rings Dev and informs him of the the evil duo's plan to visit Virar. He smiles and says "Don't worry beta, Sannata's granny will take care of it all." Kaajjal is confused and she asks him about it and he tells her everything. And then soon he gets the call from Sannata's gran and all is after all the same as he predicted and planned. Kaajjal again is touched by his thoughtfullness and alertness and touches his arm and thanks him genuinely. He looks down at her with love shining in his eyes and is about to reply when NT rings and informs that she has called the pandit to fix their marriage. Dev is shocked and closes his eyes saying "Why? I mean why so soon?" He speaks a bit and ends the call. He is desparate as he thinks I can't marry her just for her safety I must act soon. Kaajjal too is shocked to hear about NT's news and is sad. R/D assures her we will beat them. After all he is a smart person they are dealing with. Not some nitwit!!!

He then takes her to the police station. "Now why are we here Raju?" He says, "Now look at my flair. Just follow me." (Dev style). she smiles and shakes her head muttering "Nautanki", and gets off and follows him but her dupatta gets stuck in the wheel and she goes to take it off. R/D stops as he doesn't see her next to him and turns around to find her there. He stares at her for some moments closing her eyes and remembers the day her dupatta had got stuck in the chair on her birthday. He gets a grip on her emotions and goes to her and says "Here, allow me" (Again Dev style) and she is again shocked to a standstill but does not let go of the dupatta and D/R at the same time grabs the dupaata. Their hands touch and she again remembers dev had done the same thing on her birthday. Both are down memory lane and ufff that eye locking session again. But R/D recovers composure and pulls her dupatta and she too regains her consciousness and they go in.

All are scared o see Dev as if they have seen a ghost. Dev asks the inspector to hand him his car. The inspector is scared to see Dev and is nervous too, but manages to squeak out that he can't do it as the car was involved in an accident. Dev threatens to call the DGP and the inspector realises that he has to give in. He informs Dev that he will get his car and instucts the hawaldaar to send Dev's car to the garage as Dev instructed. Dev thanks him and is about to leave whene he stops and says "I heard in my absence you were very rude to her. Well you will lose your job." Kaajjal up untill now is in a daze. She does not know what to say or do and is amazed by Raju. She suddenly thinks how does he know all this. She snaps out again from her thoughts and says to Dev its okay. But he stops her with a raised hand (Dev style) and she is once again shocked to a silence. She just simply stares at him. The inspector appologises to her and they leave. She asks him outside why he overdid that then Dev says "Anyone who misbehaves with you shall bear the brunt of amy wrath so they better beware!!" Kaajjal is shocked and Dev covers up "So how was my acting (Raju style)" Kaajjal smiles and shakes her head and they go to the garage. Kaajjal is very sad and the tears return when she sees the car. Again Dev goes near her and he remembers the time during the court case and her accident. He closes his eyes athe thought when he almost lost her. The pain that he goes through and went through at that time is too much, but her reagins control of his emotions again and puts a comforting hand on her shoulders and turns her to face him. He raises her face to look into her eyes and tells her to be strong. "As they make more progress into this investigation you will have to be strong and bear all the situations and emotions that Dev's accident would spring in front of you. But most of all don't lose your confidence, always believe in yourself" Kaajjal remembers the same words spoke by Dev during the court case and again closes her eyes as if to reassure herself that these are other conincidences like the others. This is Raju and not Dev. she nods and they leave after the mechanic informs that someone very cleverly tampered and damaged the brake wires.

They return home to find the pandit and all family memebrs sitting discussing the marriage date. They are shocked. Dev is very nervous as the pandit knows him real well and fears his true identity will be revealed to Kaajjal. Kaajjal is scared as she can't marry Raju as he is not Dev. K-A are wary too as this pandit will reveal that Raju is not Dev. But all is settled and the date is fixed for 25 days from today. Kaajjal is very nervous and then the pandit asks for Dev's hand as if to confirm if the mahurat is fine and Kaajjal suddenly pulls his hand away. Dev closes his eyes in relief and NT asks Kaajjal why she did it. Kaajjal cries with folded hands towards NT and says that hse will not be able to hear all about the same thing again as previouslt it took Dev so far away from them. She fears to see any repeats and is scared. NT agrees and they all fix the date.

Kaajjal is sitting and thinking about speeding their plan where R/D is thanking their stars that they managed to outdo the pandit when Pahua enters saying that chudai is on her way up. They both manage to create a plan and snare chudail in it. chudail leaves and goes straight to the kalyog ka Ram and informs him that these two know anbout their planned accident. He pacifies her and tells her not to worry. They know about the planned accident but don't know that we did it. So rest assured and wait for Dr. Shenoy........................

Preview: Kaajjal slips off the step and falls but Dev grabs her and they stare at each other deep;ly with love shining in each of their eyes..........................

Beautiful continuation Autumnji!! I look forward to the next part! :)