With Love from DK to AA P53 Part - 2 Pg70 - Page 5

Autumnleaf!!!! I had no idea that you continued!!! WOw, now you have two FF going!!! This is wonderful! I love it!! I just loved the suspense, i was really into it! It actually looked like i was watching it! I could picture every scene, every detail! just mindblowing! And pplease forgive me for the delay to read your new part. I cant beleive i had almost missed it! Just too good! 👏

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Oy chup kar marjaniye.........😆 all the little ears are listening. 😆 But here is the next part. Anti-climax isn't it? Well I thought that I should stay a bit with the serial. I shall expose Dev's identity when these serial guys do. till then I will write all relevant FF. But captivating enough for you bhootnis, I promise!!!!

well Autumn the little ears r not that little anymore😛,they r very much aware about the jigsaw puzzles which DK played during their hug in that cliff scene😉😛..and ok fine don't reveal dev's identity till the makers reveal it😛but even with raju-kaju flirtings and huggings and liftings and kissings we bhootnis can get enough satisfaction😃

autumnleaf, autumnleaf , autumnleaf u r toooooo good girl. well u must become a writer a wirte a serial of some channel. it'll be a definite success.

all i have to say here, as i have already said in another post of yours, your every word is love, your every scene is fire, and its just wonderful and heart warming to read the beautiful sequences you create and bring such brilliant life into them.

keep it up and keep them coming. i am waiting for part 4, eagerly.

👏 thanks for continuing. it was birllinant. we raelly need ur FF specially on weekends. u r our savior in the tourchorous weekends withour kaajjal. 😊
waiting for the next part.......

Part 4................................

Boooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmm

That's the sound of a bomb blast outside. They both turn and almost run outside to see their car in total shred and a big ball of fire. The driver comes running towards them all scared and shaken. He says "I don't know what happened. I came back towards the car with this mechanic and the car just blew up!!!

Both R/D and Kaajjal think of the evil duo. It can only be their handiwork. Kaajjal is scared now. That means they are trying to kill Dev/Raju. And Raju thinks the same. He for a moment loses his control and turns to Kaajjal saying "Madamji......" Kaajjal stops him suddenly as feigning to feel faint and Raju suddenly grabs her and takes her back to the tabela. He then curses himself for the slip he gave in front of the driver. He sends them away to arrange for another car and takes Kaajjal inside. She almost screams at him for his mistake but he raises his hand and says, " Madamji, when your life is in danger I can't act. Now those two evil heads want me dead thinking I am Dev" Kaajjal gets a bit irritated by this scared Raju and mutters"Uff stop your raving and ranting, and be a man!!!" Raju/Dev can't stop himself from smiling. He then says "What would your Dev do in such a case?" And as he says this he goes near her and lifts her face with one finger to stare into her beautiful eyes. She for a moment is lost in his velvet depths, while he is lost in her shimmering stare. Suddenly the driver interupts saying "Dev saahab, we have managed a tempo and we are ready to leave." He collects himself and instructs the driver to take them back to Mumbai.

On reaching Mumbai, NT and the whole of the family are there to welcome them back. She hugs them both and thanks God that they are safe. she is about to mention the mahadashaa when Kaajjal interupts her saying, "Dev you must rest. Your hand does not look good." NT agrees and they all go in. Now Raju/Dev's hand is bleeding and Kaajjal gets a bit worried. She tries to go near Raju/Dev and gingerly takes his hand, but Dev feels that this close proximity with her will play havoc with his control, so he says "Madamji, kahin aap hamaare liye pareshaan to nahin? Ya aap Devji ko hum mein dekh rahi hain?" Hum theek hain, don't worry. My hand is fine!!" She looks up again at the similarity of words that Raju uses, the same as Dev would say "Fine".................

She backs away instantly and says "Bakwaas band karo. You can never ever take Dev's place." Just then the doctor walks in with NT and the others. The doctor checks R/D's hand and recasts it. He asks whether R/D had lifted any weight? So R/D looks at our Kaju madam with those killing deep knowing eyes and winks at her. NT does not miss that wink and smiles. The doctor advises total rest for the arm and no more weight lifting.

(Aaaarrrrgggghhhhhh I don't know why I am writing this as I would be most happy to see our chweetu lift his barbie doll a hundred million times over!!!) Well to continue.....

While he is resting NT comes in with the family bangles and requests Dev to put them onto their rightful place. Hearing this both Kaajjal and R/D get very emotional as each in their own thought reminesence the chudi scene. Kaajjal has tears in her eyes and Dev has tears seeing Kaajjal almost sobbing. He can't see her so heartbroken. He puts on the kangans and almost hugs her but Kaajjal leaves from there. He covers up her tears by saying, she is very emotional and leaves to pacify her.

Kaajjal is sobbing away heartbroken. She takes Dev's picture in her hands and speaks to him "Why, do I have to live without you. I know that I have to fulfill your duties. I have to take care of your mother. Save her from all the evil. You would do it had you been present. But since you are not here it becomes my duty and i'm staying and doing this only because I love you and thus has become my duty too. Nobody not a soul on this earth can take your place Dev." While she is uttering these words R/D is standing outside listening to each word and shuts his eyes as each word cuts through his heart like a sword. His heart is bleeding and his arms hurting to take her in his arms and declare the truth to her. He can't bear to see her crying and the trauma she is going through. He almost gives in to the urge but gets a grip on his emotions.

He walks in and says, "Today I am doing what I have never ever done for a human. I fold my hands and ask forgiveness for all the pain that I have put you through. I am sorry I misunderstood you or underestimated your love. I fold my hands in front of God alone, but today I do it for you. Please forgive me" Kaajjal looks up sobering a bit and looks into his moist eyes and can't control her emotions. She gets pulled by R/D's eyes which mirrors her trauma and are reflecting truth in them. she touches them with a raised hand as if trying to reach and find the Dev within them. She trails her fingers over his brows, cheeks, nose and finally rests on his lips. That is the final straw for R/D. He collects her in his arms and showers her with tiny kisses all over her face all the time saying, "You have our pyaar ki nishaani with you. You also promised that you will wear them at all times. Then today why don't you have them on?" Kaajjal is shocked and she looks at him stunned. "Dev, you are Dev!!!" He hugs her lovingly saying "I love you Kaajjal, please forgive me!!!" She hugs him back kissing him all over his face and his hand and hugs him saying "Don't leave me ever, again, ever. forever, just stay with me........

R/D is about to lose his control but he snaps his fingers and she pulls her hand back. She realises that this was just a dream and covers up by saying "Please don't appologise. Today I cry not because of you. My tears are because I am hurt by someone else. You are not the reason of my sorrow."

Dev realises he almost gave himself away and bows his head and leaves.........................................

Kaajjal is wondering why she dreamt that little episode and why did she touch Raju in that fashion. She tries to convince herself that just because Raju looks like Dev...... But she argues with herself, That should not matter. She did not love Dev for his looks, but for the very essesnce of him. then why does Raju make her feel its Dev and not Raju.............................

Autumnleaf how come u outdo yourself everytime,once again just outstanding description 👏

Finally everybody is writing a tabela episode for me 😛 first Sammy and now u Autumn 😳 i m realy feeling priviledged 😳 😆 ,i think even i will end up in tabela on my suhaagraat 😛 😆 and you all can give me some tips 😉 ..but i really wish the makers see your post and input some ideas from it 😉 because your romantic descriptions r really very sensuous and can give anyone goosebumps 😳

Wow autumnleaf! Just fabulous as always!! But why are you tormenting us so much with not revealing it! You have us fully hooked, then it ends up being a dream! But no i'm not complaining! I think thats part of the charm in your FF! Please continue soon!

aaawwwwww autumn you have surpassed my dreams..like jyo i bow down to you...grreatt...awsome..autmn....i look forward to part 3...track...much better than the SONY one 😊 👏 👏

well done Autumnleaf. you amaze me everytime with your well written scenes and passion filled sequesnces.

please keep them coming. we want more and more.

awesome job autumleaf, well done..