DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA-fan fic - Page 5

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Posted: 20 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Shikha88

alrighty .. so i started reading your fan fic abotu 10 min ago.. and
just when you get to the good part.. you didn't continue...

please do soo.. and fast.. i really wanna knwo what happens..

thanks and btw.. good job

Love,
Shikha


😆 😉 well, i'll give u neha's dialogue-suspense is sweetness of life 😆 😆

and thnx 4 reading it, i'm glad u like it
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Posted: 20 years ago
#42
ok guys i'll post the next short pat now in 5 minz
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Posted: 20 years ago
#43
here's the next part!enjoy!

He gets up real fast and says : I'm sorry, I'm really sorry, aapko kahin chot to nahi lagi na? Vo mai apne frnds ke saath khel raha tha aur gati se prithvi ne mujhe dhakka dia aur mai ……… 😳

K: ok, ok , its ok, it really is, mai thik hoon.

A: oh ok.

Angad and company get outta there giggling.

M: kripa, tum thik ho?

K: of course dee, I'm perfectly ok.

M: tune usse pehchcana nahi?

K(brushing sand out of her clothes): ab vo koi prime minster hai kya, jo usse mai pehchanti rahoo??

M: kripa, duffer, vo angad tha, angad khanna.

K(blinking at mishti): w-w-what??????? 😕 😕

Mishti starts laughing: krips yaar tum bhi na, bilkul budhu ho.

K(smiles): watever dee not fair, aap mujhe hamesha tang karte rehte ho. 😡

M(hugging her): awww my stuipid sweet litle sis
😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
#44
Manan enters the scene and says: ab tum dono sisters ka pyar khatam ho gaya ho to chalen raat ho gai hai, mujhe neend aai hai. 😆 😆

M: kya manan tum bhi na, sone ki padi rehti hai, pehle humein dinner karao phir apne ghar jaake jitna sona hai sote rehne 😡

Ma: jo hukum mere aaka 😊

K: dee pehle mujhe change karna hai mere saare kapde to kharab ho gaye 😕

M: haan mujhe bhi, manan ek kaam karte hain pehle mere ghar chalte, fir vahan se dinner karne chalte hain

Ma: ok meri maa ab chalen plss, bhookh se jaan nikal rahi hai. 😕 😕

K & M: kumbhkaran part-2 😆 😆

M: bas khane aur sone ke alawa aur koi kaam nahi hai tumhe?

Ma: hai na, tumhe pyar karna.

M: duh 🤢

And manan gives her a swee kiss on her forehead, and kripa goes: ahem! Ahem! Mai yahin hoon abhi!

M and Ma: kripaa!!

K: ya?

Both of them: shut up!

Ma: kya zamana aa gaya hai, ab mai apni gf ko kiss bhi nahi kar sakta, hayeeeee rammm!!!!!! 🤢 🤢

Now it's the girl's turn o shut him up.

Ma: acha yaar mai to paedayishi chup hoon, ab chalo naaa.

K: haan chalo mere to-be-jeejz

Ma: bhai wah! Meri to kismat khul gai

M:ab chalen????

K & Ma: yep ! let's go!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#45
guyss dont forget to post ur comments plz
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Posted: 20 years ago
#46
an yeah! preview- angad and kripa go out for dinner, with each other or not, just wait and watch 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
#47
hey great story plzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
#48
hey i read it 10 mins ago,its gr8,plz continue!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#49
hey kool gal ur story is truely fab n different so cant wait more............................
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Posted: 20 years ago
#50
ohh wow that waz gr8 plz continue soon!

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