DIL NE JISE APNA KAHA-fan fic - Page 3

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Posted: 20 years ago
#21
that was really good please keep continuing it...
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Posted: 20 years ago
#22
thnx guys i'm glad u like it

i'll post the next part very soon

byee
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Posted: 20 years ago
#23

Wow, that was just too good...👏 love the relation between Angad and Aaliyah...soo sweet!!!

Plz continue...

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Posted: 20 years ago
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thnx... i'll post the next part in 30-40 minnuts

byee
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Posted: 20 years ago
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On the beach,

Prithvi: hey angad, hi aaliyah.

A and Aa: hi prithvi!

A: ssup buudy?

Aa: kaisa hoga bhai? Apni vohi poorani ghisi piti life jee raha hai ye to

P: oh ya?

Aa: YA

P: well, welcome to the club.

And starts to run behind her threatning: aaliyah ki bachi, teri to mai!! 😆 😳

Angad is watching them and laughing like crazy. Finally prithvi catches her and throws like a ton of sand on her clothes. 😕 😕
Now angad is rolling in sand and his stomach is aching 'coz of laughing so much, prithvi is also laughing seeing aaliyah covered in sand. Angad and prithvi give each other high-fives.aaliyah is REALLY MAD by now.

Aa: BHAI AAPKO SHARAM NAHI AATI MUJHE TANG KARTE HUE??????? 😡 😡

A: ummm…….. nahhhh.

And p and a start laughing again 😆

Aa: I hate both u.

A & P: me too.

Aa 😡 : grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr …. Bhai aap to ghar chalo batati hoon, mom ke saath aapko ek kamre mai band na kar dia to mera bhi naam aaliyah khanna nahi. 😆 😆

They both r laughing even harder now, seeing aaliyah so mad. Just then, a tall, handsome guy showers tonss of sand on angad on prithvi 😕 . Both of them immidiatly stop laughing, and turn around. Now the guy is giving high- fives to aaliyahand says: tum dono ne meri sweet si dost ko tang kia, ab bhugto, aage se aisa kia na, to mai dono ko sand main gaad hi doonga.

Aa: yay!!!!!!!! Gud one josh!! I love uuuuuu 😊 😆

A: josh!!!! Gaddar!! 😭
And starts singing: dost dost na raha, pyaar pyaar na raha. 😭 😭

J: chup be!

All of start laughing ang give friendly hugs and punches to each other. 😊

Meanwhile, kripa is playing with waves and mishti and mannan are too busy in each others eyes, right then angad spots her and freezes for a moment, he shakes himself and tells aaliyah: ye dekh, teri hi behen lag rahi hai, dekh kya paglon jaisi harkate kar rahi hai. 😆

Aa: bhai! Shut up! Aapko sharam nahi aati kisi ladki ke baare main aisa kehte hue?

A: ummm….. nahhhhhhh


Aa: watevaa

Now kripa is helping two kids build a sand castle. Manan and Mishti are still busy in each other.

And josh and angad and prithvi and aaliyah are playing something that resembles: tag. While, chasing each other they the spot where kripa, mishti and manan are sitting. And BOOM, a crash! And we see that angad has fallen on top kripa!!!!!!!!

that's it now

i know this was a bit short

but, i'll make it up tommorow

and sorry for leaving u guys in suspense 😆 😆
Edited by kool_gal - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
and yeah i forgot to say: plzz post ur comments 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
#27
an yeah. preview: kripa doesn't recoganises angad.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
hey kool_gal...i just read the whole fan-fic...and its awesome..its tooo good!plz continue soon!👏👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#29

wow....very interesting story...i love it....u r very good writer....u should give this story to Ekta...plz conrinue...

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
#30
thnx guys
i'll post the next part in a bit

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