soulmates(ff naina rajveer)note pg21 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

i'll continue 2morro

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Posted: 18 years ago
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part7
rajveer just stood there shocked.naina was unable 2 control her emotions and she broke out crying unaware of the presence of rajveer.her salty tears were getting mixed with the water of rain.rajveer could feel depression in the air.
rajveer ran 2wards naina who was sitting on her knees and crying bitterly.
r:naian!wat happened
naina looked up 2 see a pair of brown eyes which were filled with concern 4 her.it was this concern that made naina hug him and cry on his shoulder.naina felt a sort of security in his arms.rajveer caressed her hair.he was really very worried 4 naina.

r:naina kya hua?
his words made her realise wat she was doing and how close she was with rajveer.she quickly broke the hug and ran inside the house.
naina ran 2 her room,took out a loket frm her bag and just stared at it with tears flowing down her cheeks.she kissed th locket lightly.soon her eyes became heavy and she was lost in the world of dreams.
next day
naina came downstairs.previous day was very tiring and stressful for her.she was abt to go in the kitchen when she saw rajveer sleeping by the door of backyard(sitting and sleeping)she saw a notepad and a pen besides him
n:(thinking)i think rajveer was writing something and went to sleep while writing only.let me wake him up.well he looks cute while sleeping with his cute smile.


soon she realised wat she was thinking .she drive that thought away
she was abt 2 wake him up when she was the notepad and was curious 2 know wat he might have written.she took the notepad and started reading softly wat was written in it.



Maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 4
aankhein teri - 2, kitni haseen
ki inkaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu
(ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3

ki inakaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu

mujhase yeh har ghadi, meraa dil kahe
tum hi ho usaki aarzoo
mujhase yeh har ghadi, mere lab kahe
teri hi ho sab guftagoo
baatein teri itni haseen, main yaad inko jab kartaa hoon
phoolon si aaye, khushaboo

rakh loon chhupaa ke main kahin tujhako
saayaa bhi teraa naa main doon
rakh loon banaa ke kahin ghar, main tujhe
saath tere, main hi rahoon
julfen teri, itni ghani
dekh ke inako, yeh sochataa hoon


he had not written the last line.
n:hmmm.maybe he doze off to sleep before completing this.wat can be the last line?
she thought and finally came up with
n: how abt saaye me, inake main jiyoon
r:superb
he looked up at naina .her eyes were swollen but her messy hair was giving her an angelic look
n:(shocked)um...um...i m sorry rajveer 4 reading this

he smiled at her


Edited by amritafan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
hey very good part 👏 .............i liked that part when she finished that line and rajeev said superb.. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey very good part 👏 .............i liked that part when she finished that line and rajeev said superb.. 😆

thx

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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
pl continue

it is awsome

that too soon
pl dont make us wait
amritafan thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

pl continue

it is awsome

that too soon
pl dont make us wait

i try my best 2 cont soon but i always fail😕

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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
amazing 👏 👏 👏 please continue soon with longer updates
yoginisahakari thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
pl update soon that too with longer update
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
i like the way you write and frame up things 👏 .. you've got a flair for it... write more da.. and also fast coz i m really interested at whats goin to happen next.. so post the next part soon.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
lovely story..............plz continue soon..........and waiting for longer updates!!!!
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