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Posted: 18 years ago
#81

i m so sorry.i;ll do that soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: koolarch2001

hey continue soon da... missin your story...

sorry but i'll need a bit more time

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: yyyy

common update dear

i ,m soooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry

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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
Awesome part... i luve da pics u use.. so cute!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
part 8
hello guys.thx 4 all ur support.i m rally very sorry coz this is going to be a very small part.nea\xt time i'll try 2 update a longer one.
plz beg with me this time

r:no need to say sorry naina.in fact i m grateful 2 u 4 giving my poem a fab ending.(thinking)after all it was meant 4 u
naina smiled



which brought a cute smile on rajveer's face 2




n:thx.i m making coffee 4 myself .would u care 4 1 ?
r:i'ld like a cup of tea.i don't like coffee
n:ok,i'll make coffee 4 u.
naina went inside the kitchen.she came out with 2 cups ,1 of coffee and another of tea.she saw naveen and rajveer talking.
n:(smiling)morning bhai


nav:morning naina.can u get a glass of juice plz.
n:i knew u'ld like 2 have juice.i've already prepared that 4 u.i'll just get that 4 u.
rajveer smiled on seeing the love betwn the brother and sister.

naina hands the cup of coffee to rajveer.while giving,their hands brush .for the first time along with rajveer ,naina also feels a current passing down her spine.
background

Chhookar Mere Man Ko
Kiya Tuney Kya Ishara
Badla Yeh Mausam
Lagey Pyaara Jag Saara
Chhookar Mere Man Ko
Kiya Tuney Kya Ishara

Tu Jo Kahe Jeevan Bhar
Tere Liye Main Gaaoon (2)
Geet Tere Bolon Pe
Likhta Chala Jaaoon (2)

Mere Geeton Mein
Tujhe Dhoonde Jag Saara

Chhookar Mere Man Ko
Kiya Tuney Kya Ishara

Aaja Tera Aanchal Yeh
Pyaar Se Main Bhar Doon (2)
Khushiyan Jahan Bhar Ki
Tujhpe Nazar Kar Doon (2)

Tu Hi Mera Jeevan
Tu Hi Jeene Ka Sahara

Chhookar Mere Man Ko
Kiya Tuney Kya Ishara


rajveer can't help staring at naina.


(forget abt the rain)
naveen sees this and smiles.naina goes back to kitchen to get the juice
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86

part9
naina gives navin his juice.
nav:naina,can u do me a favour?
n:wat bhai?
nav:actually,shaina has thown a bash 2day.
r:who's shaina
nav:shaina is ourchildhood frend.
n:once navin bhai was also crazy abt her.
r:wat?

naina and rajveer giggle
nav:shut up u 2
thay laugh out loud .rajveer sees naina laughing right frm the bottom of her heart 4 the 1st time with no worries and sadness
nav:naina will u listen 2 me
n:yes
nav:actually shaina is getting engaged 2 day.i wanted 2 give u surprise by taking u to her engagement without telling u .
n:wat?
nav:yes.but i won't be able come.so,can u go with rajveer.
rajveer was like 😃 😳 .now there's something of his interest.
naina hesitates and navin convinces her.
next scene
background music
(u know the music of lamha lamha frm gangster) this is played in the beginning

naina is sitting in front of mirror.only her angelic face can be seen.she puts on her necklace and ear rings.


on the other side
background
lamha lamha doori yun pighalti hai
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai
ho lamha lamha doori yun pighalti hai
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai
khwaahishon ki shaam dhalti hain - 2
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai
la la la ...

teri aankhen dikhati hai
hamein sapanen sitaaron ke
ho ho ho
tere hothon pe likha hai
jo tum bole ishaaron mein
ho ho ho
khwaabon ke karwaan mein raat chalti hai
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hain
la la la...

behakti shaam aayi hai
tujhe lekar ke baahon mein
tujhe chhu loon ke rakhu main
chhupakar ke nigaahon mein
sharmati ithlaati hai machalti hai
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hain
ho lamha lamha doori yun pighalti hai
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai
khwaahishon ki shaam dhalti hain - 2
jaane kis aag mein yeh shabnam jalti hai
la la la ...

rajveer is pacing up and down in the hall waiting 4 naina 2 turn up.

on other side
naina applies lipstick on her soft delicate lips.she puts on eye shadow on her eyes and when she opens her eyes ,a spark can be seen she luks pure and divine

next scene
we see some1 walkingin a red saree.the camera slowly moves up frm down her legs 2 her face .it's none other than naina



n:shall we go rajveer?
rajveer turns around 2 see the godess of beauty.


rajveer thins that naina has definitely done a course on 1000 ways 2 steal rajveer's heart.hmmmmmmmmm not 1000,a million ways to make rajveer go crazy over her.

she luked so simple yet elegant with her hair straight down upto her shoulder,light make-up and her killer smile.

she was the most beautiful thing rajveer had ever seen.

Edited by amritafan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
hey awesome part yaar...plz continue soonnnnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey awesome part yaar...plz continue soonnnnnnn

thx a ton

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part... i luve da pics u use.. so cute!

thx 4 the cute comment

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Posted: 18 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Ritika2025

hey update soon please

i did it babes

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