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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
very funny. šŸ˜†
i m wondering what angad's reaction will be when he finds out that the man is actually kripa's father.worth readin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ˜† LOLLL Out of all the ppl in the world he always gets in an accident wid kripas father loll šŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeya123

very funny. šŸ˜†
i m wondering what angad's reaction will be when he finds out that the man is actually kripa's father.worth readin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

oh, when angad finds out who kripa's dad is...iam telling you every one will be shocked from there meetingšŸ˜›

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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

šŸ˜† LOLLL Out of all the ppl in the world he always gets in an accident wid kripas father loll šŸ˜†

you said it right FROM ALL THE PPL angad had to crash to KRIPA'S FATHER after all i need some story to drag on

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ANGAD!!!!!
My darling sweeto angu, yeh tumne kya kiya baba?!?!?!
Arre sambhalke rakhna chahiye na, nahin toh ab yeh kripa ke dad jo hai, tumko aur kripa ke beech aayega, and then pyaar kaisa hoga?
isliye main hamesha kehti hoon, raaste par handphone par baat karna khatarnak hota hai! šŸ˜†

Sorry, jus couldn't help being lame..... and pls cont soon, it really is a gr8 ff! 😊

<3 Anusha 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I will be posting the next part a soon as i get it typed up, if i get a chance to type it up today that is
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
hi

i love ur fiction ............ 😳

and who is this toking like my grandpa ...."no cell phone while driving amna" lolz .................it is the sweetest coment one can get ...

love it

amna
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_face86

hi

i love ur fiction ............ 😳

and who is this toking like my grandpa ...."no cell phone while driving amna" lolz .................it is the sweetest coment one can get ...

love it

amna

hey thanks for the great comment, means a lot

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4

Angad couldn't believe it he had to take a cab to court, so long for image. Angad was dealing with a murder case and since Angad was a lawyer and a good one too, he had to keep his image up to date for better and richer clients.

Angad was already in a bed mood after crashing his own car and his dad's car but on top of that he got another large amount of a ticket with the same guy from before yelling at him. For now Angad just wanted to forget the terrible morning, and make the rest of the day a good one.

*****

Chiron Sharma entered his office in great anger, it was the first time he had to come in a cab because both his cars were trashed up and destroyed. On top of his Anger there was even more anger in him when he had seen it was the same guy that had trashed his car just yesterday.

"Good morning sir" Chiron's sectary said with a smile. Chiron just replied unpleasantly " There is nothing good about today Christen, by saying that Chiron went into his cabin slamming the door shut in anger.

*****

That afternoon Angad came home with a large smile on his face. His morning was far from good but his afternoon was better then good it was great, he had just won a case in court and his client paid him in full payment of 500,000 pounds. Angad loved murder cases mostly because lawyer get paid like hell for getting people out, from going to jail for life or worst sentence of death.

Angad went strait to Karan's room to share his excitement but then remembered Karan was only five years old! Hear about how he won a murder case would probably be a bad idea for a five year old to hear. So instead Angad just veered to his room to retire for the day.

*****

Kripa entered her room after lunch to see A SHIRTLESS ANGAD KHANNA lying on the bed looking up at the ceiling. At that moment Kripa was happy did yet didn't get around to putting up the curtains on the balcony window because she was loving the sight more then anything in the world.

Kripa went out on to the balcony with a large grin on her face observing Angad but it soon came to an end when Angad heard Kripa's balcony door slid open. Angad got out of bed slowly at first but when his eyes caught Kripa at the balcony he got up faster and took out a shirt to put over his six-pack of a body.

Angad to him-self thought he needed to buy new curtains to put up at his window before Kripa sees him in his Mickey Mouse boxers. Angad went to his balcony to greet Kripa

"Hi Kripa, how was your day" he was almost out of breath when he said this from all the running around to cover himself with a shirt.

"Great, my friends and I went shopping and then went for some lunch" she said happily and it was a truthful happiness. Kripa was happy to go out with her girlfriends after such a long time. After her graduation most of her friends went out to look for jobs but not her, mostly because her father wouldn't let her work at a young age even though she was twenty-two.

"My day was also great, I got a 2,000 pound ticket and crashed my dads car" Angad said sarcastically

"Are you serious" Kripa said with a frown

"Ya, I am serious, but the day got better in the afternoon when I won a murder case and got 500,000 pounds in advance from my client." Angad said with a small smile

"That's great!" Kripa said a bit happier now

"Well, since I had a nice victory and you a nice day, how about we both goes out for dinner together, just the two of us." Kripa couldn't believe what she just heard, was this for real? Was Angad Khanna the hottest guy she ever laid eyes on ASKING HER OUT!

please comment on what you think of this part...coming next part, Angad and Kripa having dinner together

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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
because she was loving the sight more then anything in the world.

i would too so i dont blame her for not pulling the curtains.. haha mickey mouse boxers. im sure ud stil look hot in those too.. lolz

and as for dinner, im sure chiron doesnt know..

great parrttt!!

continue sooooonn

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