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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

reallyy good partt!👏
aww they like each other.😳
but the only thing, or should i say person in their way is.. kripas dad!!😆
anyways continue when you can!😆

lovee maulii<33😳

I dont intend on makeing this fan fic really long thats why theres only one big wall in front of angad and kripa instead of a million😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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agad and a dork?lol..nop way 😉..he could make dorky things look sexy.. 😉..well i absolutely lurvd it..i cant wai for the 2 to find out abt the accident...wonder if kripa is going to hold it against him... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

agad and a dork?lol..nop way 😉..he could make dorky things look sexy.. 😉..well i absolutely lurvd it..i cant wai for the 2 to find out abt the accident...wonder if kripa is going to hold it against him... 😃

well iam not planeing on makeing this fan fic all that long so... you will have to wait and see to know what will happen

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i cant wait 4 the meeting between daddy dear & MR. Angad Khanna...daddy will surely kill angad if he comes near kripa...
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok i will post posting the next part really soon, just have to type it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Prom

"Well, as long as we are into, talk of honesty; then I have to say the truth…you are one beautiful women"

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Part 3

Angad sat on Kripa's bed with Kripa beside him; there was an awkward silence between then. They had no idea of what to say so Angad started talking nonsense.

"So you have a nice room" This was a lie, truthfully Angad hated Kripa's room. It was too pink and girly for his liking. There were books and magazines all over the place and the room as a whole seemed to teenage type.

Kripa noticed Angad's tone and knew he was the worst liar in the world. Kripa knew Angad only for a few hours and already she had him figured out from one sentence. She could tell Angad was one of those guys that were WORK head to toe and nothing more.

"If you don't like my room just say so" Angad was surprised as to how quickly Kripa was able to figure him out so fast.

"Ok then, I HATE your room" Angad said boldly

"Thank you for being honest" Kripa was glad Angad wasn't that nice guy that never did any thing wrong or say any thing wrong. Kripa liked guys that were nice but once in a while a little edge to them wouldn't kill them.

"So you like honest people?" Angad asked trying to start up a conversation

"More then you know it" Kripa said meaning it. Angad gave a grin letting his mind process.

"Well, as long as we are into, talk of honesty; then I have to say the truth…you are one beautiful women" When Angad said this, Kripa blushed head to toe. No one had ever said this to her except her mom and dad. When she was in school all the guys would chase the preppy girls with short skirts on and it was the same in collage but for the first time a guy, a very hot guy, said she was beautiful and this made her go crazy form the inside.

"Thank you" After saying that Kripa took a pillow from beside her on the bed and buried her face in to it.

Angad gave a nice handsome smile unable to believe a girl living in such modern world could blush like the women from the sixties. When Angad looked at Kripa it was like looking at a girl from old, old movies where the women blushed every time a guy gave her a rose or a hug.

"You know Kripa, you look so beautiful when you blush I don't see why to try to hid it by pressing a pillow to your beautiful face." When hearing this Kripa clanked her hands on to the pillow, tightening her grip on it.

"Oh come on let me see that blushing face" Angad pulled the pillow off of Kripa's face seeing her face pink red from all the blushing. Angad gave a large smile.

"Can you please leave my room" Kripa said with a British voice and a blushing smile.

"Your wish is my command" Angad said standing up in his full American boy voice.

Angad went to Kripa's balcony and jumped on to his and soon fell asleep

*****

Next morning when Angad woke up he could see from out side of his window Kripa still sleeping. In a way it almost seemed as if they were sharing the same room or something. Angad got out of bed and went to the washroom to get ready for a meeting; just a few days ago he had taken on a case of a very famous record company president. If he wins this case he was bond to get a few million pound thrown into his pockets.

A few hours later Angad was out of the house driving his dads car since his car was still crashed up from yesterday. That's when it happened, this was when Angad's morning when from good to miserable.

Angad was at the same street where his car crash happened yesterday stopped at a stop light and his cell phone started ringing, he picked it up to have his little brother, Karan scream through the phone.

"ANGAD! You for got my birthday AGAIN!" Karan's voice caught Angad so off guard that he didn't notice the stop light turn green, and a nice black Lexus crash into his car. An old man stepped out of his car in anger and it just happened to be Chiron Sharma, Again!

Please comment about what you think of this part, remember, your comments count!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 again!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆


i can't wait to see kripas dads reaction lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimmu

😆 again!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆


i can't wait to see kripas dads reaction lol

oh ya he'll be pissed off alright 😆

Now you know why Angad will be on the rejection list...FOR RECKLESS DRIVING😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha.. okay once is bad but second time is worse!! i feel so bad for him rite now.. and that lil karan. .doesnt he know he isnt to yell while someone is driving. NO doesnt angad know not to use a cell while driving!!



i dont see his chances of the approval list anytime soon!!

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