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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 OMG!!!!!!! dat was jus toooooo hilarious....i cnt stop laughin.... how can he think of himslef as harry potter.... n btw liked seeing the protective bro side of kavya, it was really sweet!!!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol awwww kavya babyyyyy
he ssooooo cute man i love him not just in serials now even in fan fics lol 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
omng dats was soooooo funi 😆 😆 😆
extremely gd
continue soon 😳
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Originally posted by: DeepaliC

hahah lol that's so funny!!.. harry potter moron! ha that's a good one!


lol thanks soo much! lol that was my favorite part of that chapter lol ohhh kavya lol

Originally posted by: goldi2

hahahahahahahaha lol that was soo funny!@!! o gosh lol why'd u have to stop writing lol hahahaha i wanna read MORE!! lol yes yes i am very greedi girl lol well can u blame me lol!! no serisouly man lol im like in love with this story:D:D:D and yea its sooo darn good to know u continue everyday lol a lot of people on this forum should start dooin that lol it would definetly make my life very very very happy lol
o gosh i luved this part im gonna read it again or sumthing
lol
continue soon!! :D:D:D lol how about parts today?? lol it is monday after all lol
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE:D:D:D:D

lol
:P:P:P

Hina


lol sorry had to stop there or else i would have no story for the rest of the week lol! yup i like continuing everyday lol i cant believe im continuing today cuz i got a practice AP test tomorro and i gotta study but just came on to post it! anyways i added some funny stuff to part 10 and ill post it in a couple min since i already edited lol!


Originally posted by: erier101

Eek sorry forgot to comment!! awesome partss!! woot, loved the previous part in which they discussed what happened, adn teh dances, a-k's discussion, k-a's cute little dance [with uneasiness] and then the neev-prachi thing was sad...hahah i knew it, remember i said they gonna realized their feelings before hte other guys?!!!! lol!!
lol by the end of the week you will know if your right or wrong cuz someone is defintely hooking up this week! 😉

Loved Kavya'a portectiveness over his sister, was it a gentle friendly punch, or a big punch? lol! whatever it was, i found it sho cute!! When there was that knock on the door, i was thinkign it would be neev apologizing, but hey it was a different story..
yeah i like it too! i wish i had an older bro who was protective like Kavya! lol it was a punch that hurt but not that a punch Kavya would give to someone he hates

The guys are slow, they should have made him go and apologize 😆 ...lol...smokin aces ,lol, never watched that one either, i have no movie knowledge at alllll i swear but i wanna watch 300 really bad, because my best friend found it awesome, and her finding a movie awesome is like me finding my ffs awesome, which we all know isnt true because i hate every single part of my ffs 😆 😆 ...
its good but it has some scenes which are kind of uhhh. yea i heard 300 is good!

Lets see...what else....ah loved the little thing when prachi and anjali were both sleeping on kavya's shoulder, and then when neev picked up prachi and kissed her forehead, adn when anjali heard kavya call her beautiful as he placed her on her bed, shoo cuteee 😳
lol yea i added it because I needed a reason for Neev picking up Prachi and not Anjali so i had Anjali cling to kavya.

If onlyy....there was an A-K scene like that!! lol!! Nah, i loved the little A-k scene in the balcony it was awesome, reminded me of MHWGO and Kripa's ice cream craving at night..lol... they move a little closer, ahh they were about to kiss werent they??? ugh!! lol, oh well, the kavya scene was totally worth it, and hey, there will be more kisses in the future 😉 😆
lol well i cant make them keep kissing lol that would be too odd after a while. lol yea they were about to kiss lol but i loved kavya's tantrum!

Harry Potter?! Voldemort, lmaoooooooooo!! 🤣🤣🤣 omg that was hilariousssss man!!! you know soemtimes even i wonder if i talk in my sleep, cuz i have weird dreams, but well, i dont dream of being harry potter, and being scared of a spiderrr, 😆 😆 tht was a first, and im never gonna forgett it numera 😆 😆
lol thanks lol im pretty sure i talked in my sleep in a couple times and once i even started sleep walking and my mom caught me and put me to bed and i got up again lol! good now u will remember my ff's scene when u watch harry potter and chamber of secrets!

Ah the harry potter thing just made me excited cuz i cant wait until the order pf the phoenix movie and the last book comes outt!! eek!! so excited!! lol!! and omg u live in chicago right...did u hear of the fire thingy on clark street.. lol... sorry im just bored and teh news is on and am being my random selff 😆 so yea continue sooon 👏 yea me too! i really want to watch the 5th movie and read the last book! im just hoping he doesnt die at the end!! no i didnt hear bout the fire, the last fire i heard about was the sabri nehari one and that was a while back! i live in niles now but i used to live by devon before lol brown central.



Originally posted by: srk1

🤣 ...god kavya thinks he is harry potter..lolz..that was too god..
the last part of kripa and angad was really romantic, but that harry potter came between..lolz..hehehe

awesome update..cont soon..
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thanks soooo much lol glad you liked my little harry potter scene lol i figured that would redeem me since i stopped a-k from coming closer to kissing.

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

hey. dat was a really funny part. it was so cute how anjali pretended 2 be sleepin so dat kavya would carry her n she heard him say ur so beautiful. awwwwwwwwwwwww. dat was soooooooooo cute n naughty anjali. 😳 . 😆 . n it was super hilarious wen kavya was pretendin 2 be harry potter. 😆 .


lol aww thanks! lol well she wasnt pertending so he would carry her she just happened to fall asleep that way and woke up in time to hear him say that lol but your way works too! lol

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome very cute and sweet and Kavya was hilarious 😆


aww thanks!!

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

ok... first of... i am soooo lateee.... sry abt tht!!! 😳
anywazzz.... AWESUMLY AMAZING & HILARIOUS prt!!! 👏 👏
👏
i LOVED it, like ALWAYS!!! 😳
awww.... poor Prachi... 😭 God... Neev ur in big trouble... u STILL
havent made up with her!!! 😡 u better do tht soon... 😉 FINALLY...
atlaest SUM1 realized it was loooove... sooooo cuteee... now Prachi needs
to sleep on it & figure it out so tht one couple is down... with two more
left to go!!! 😉 😆 awww... Kavya's soooo cuteeee... i wish i had an
older protective brother!!! 😳 well i think Neev shud consider himself
lucky tht he is friend's with Kavya... or else he wud have been dead!!!
😆 ya... it IS a gud thing they didn't wear their nighties... but those
poor guys... unlucky them!!! 😆 jk.... i havent really watched
Smokin' Aces so dunt know much abt it... but ya... i HATE it when movies
start of with 'obscene' scenes!!! 🤢 nd well... guys just seem to LOVE
it!!!! 😕 😆 well... i think its a gud thing tht AK have opposite likes...
coz like they say 'Opposites Attract' 😉 awww.... Neev, i am not TOO
mad at him now... coz wht he did was REALLY cute!!! 😳 nd he's guilty...
so i'll forgive him... let's say 50%!!! 😆 awww.... Kavya's a comfy
pillow!!! 😆 he is sooooo adorable.... 😳 DAME... why did Kavya have
to yell!!! AK's 'romantic' moment was ruined!!! but... tht was soooooo
fing hilarious!!! 🤣
🤣 he thinks he's Harry Potter who's afraid of
spiders!!!!!! OMFG!!!!! tht's HILARIOUS!!!! OMG... i still cant stop
laughing!!!!! 🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣 "Ahhhhh big hairy SPIDER!! Don't eat me mate!!!! AHHH! I
WANT MY MOMMY!! Why won't my wand work! Arachnophobia!
ARACHNOPHOBIAAAAA!!!!" tht prt was THE funniest... well ACTUALLY the
WHOLE last prt was HILARIOUS!!!! yup... he is sooooooo dead.... LMAO... i
CANNOT wait to read more.... getting soooo interesting.... nd Neev better
start apologizing in the next prt!!! 😉 continue soon 😛 👏 👏
👏


lol we'll c what happens with neev and his apoligizing soon lol! lol well yea neev is cute i cant have you guys hating on this cutie pie lol so i softened him up! the kiss on the forehead was a last second add on, just to make it cuter lol! yea he did ruin a-k's moment but there will be many of those eventually! lol i just had to make the reason for the interruption entertaining though! it was a random idea to make him harry potter but it worked i guess! lol i love it when ppl say mate i think its the most hilarious thing in the world idk why. thanks soo much! ::nervous laugh:: about neev apoligizing ::nervous laugh:: well......

Originally posted by: angel_tia

kavya...harry potter 😆 man that was xcellent...even the AK scene!!!!!!


lol thanks sooo much!! keep reading!

Originally posted by: sabzz

wondeful partt and lovely part !! i love it.
heheheh kavaya is so funny but i am angry with his act as he came between angad and kripa romantic scean lol !!
It was such a cute +romantic scean of angad and kripa !!
continue soon ....i cant wait hehehe (lol)

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thanks a bunch!! lol poor kavya just felt really stupid after tryin to hurt angad with his wand LMAO!

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

😆 OMG!!!!!!! dat was jus toooooo hilarious....i cnt stop laughin.... how can he think of himslef as harry potter.... n btw liked seeing the protective bro side of kavya, it was really sweet!!!! 😳 😳 😳


lol thanks soo much! yea i thought that was sweet too!

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

lol awwww kavya babyyyyy
he ssooooo cute man i love him not just in serials now even in fan fics lol 😆 😆 😆


lol thanks!!! i feel special lol! i love him too! hes too cute!

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omng dats was soooooo funi 😆 😆 😆
extremely gd
continue soon 😳


lol thanks!!
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lol sorry it took so long i was replying and then kyph reruns came on and it was the SLAP scene OMG that is my favvvvvvvorite scene or one of them atleast!! he just looked toooo good! ok lol sorry bout the delay today! tomorrow will be kind of late as well since im at school from 3-6 for AP practice test! anyways next part will be in a few minutes! LEAVE COMMENTS!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Chapter 10

They come back from the trip to Goa with a little shopping done here and there. Now it is back to school for them since their long week end has finished. Neev has been trying to talk to Prachi all day now and has gotten quite frustrated with her. He doesn't understand what her problem is. She has been ignoring him the whole day and it is getting too much because he assumes by now she would have cooled off if he gave her space. Neev goes to search for Prachi and finds her sitting with Kripa, Anjali, and Aaliya while Angad, Kavya, and Josh play basketball. The girls are just talking about random girly topics and he catches sight of Prachi enjoying herself, not just enjoying but laughing as well. Here Neev stands totally depressed and upset, while Prachi sits conversing with her friends. He is really mad now more than ever. Neev comes by the girls and sits there while Prachi excuses herself to use the bathroom. Again she avoided him, Neev thought. He too gets up and follows her. When Neev entered, she is inside the stall and he hides in a stall near by. She comes out and begins washing her hands when the lights suddenly go out and there is complete darkness in the bathroom. She turns to the door to leave, but before she can open it she gets pinned to the wall.

She knows it was Neev. She knows his touch, his fragrance, his everything including his anger and frustration. The light seeped in from the windows and she calmly speaks, "Neev let me go" Neev replies with a firm, "NO" She begins to struggle in his grip and he yells, "WHY DAM*IT, WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS! JUST SAY SOMETHING PLEASE, LOOK JUST YELL AT ME, DO SOMETHING JUST DON'T IGNORE ME PLEASE I CAN'T TAKE IT. YOUR REALLY IMPORTANT FOR ME PRACHI, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND…DON'T DO THIS TO ME." Prachi yells with intensity, "I CAN'T DO THIS ANYMORE OKAY NEEV, IT HURTS, IT HURTS BECAUSE I…" She pauses and tries to leave, but Neev tightens his grip on her. Neev's hot breath on her neck and passionate voice seems to intoxicate Prachi. Neev asks softly leaning in closer, "Because you what?" This forces her to pull out from her trance and yell, "BECAUSE I LOVE YOU!" Neev's whole world turns upside down. He is completely shocked, so shocked that he loosens his grip on her and let her run away in tears. In a moment he realizes she's running away so he calls after her, but she wouldn't stop, she couldn't stop. He just watches her run away wiping her tears along the way.

Neev walks around the park, looking at the children play, remembering his own childhood days with everyone, but mostly Prachi. From childhood, Angad and Kripa stuck together like glue, and Kavya and Anjali always annoyed each other right from the start—but they are friends, it is an undeclared friendship. Prachi had always felt like an outsider and a loner. That's when Neev came into the Sharma's and Khanna's lives. He became the other half of Prachi, the part she was missing. That's when Prachi and Neev became best of friends and today his best friend is in love with him. Neev has always known Prachi is a beautiful girl, but she is very reserved something Neev is not used to in girls. His taste in women has been bold and beautiful like Angad and Kavya's. He had to admit though, that Prachi was way more fun and more beautiful than the girls he had dated. He tells himself he isn't in love with Prachi, but feared losing her friendship. Everything has changed and nothing could go back to what it was before, nothing. Oh love is complicated.

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Same day- Kavya and Anjali. Now strangely enough the whole day Kavya has not once bugged Anjali. Forget bugging, he didn't even approach her. He keeps himself busy with girls the whole time. He doesn't even try to sit next to Anjali in any of their classes. She doesn't know what to think of it. She really misses his little annoyances. His annoying behavior became part of her every day routine. Not once has he missed an opportunity to mess with her. This just throws her off completely. It is so ironic that even when he is not annoying her, she is even more annoyed. Anjali tries to not focus on Kavya by keeping herself busy with guys. Now at this point usually Kavya would come over and harass the guy until he left, but nope not this time. What she didn't know was the Kavya is watching Anjali flirt from a distance and is trying really hard to control his temper. So far it had been working, but he didn't know how long it would last. Kavya hates it when Anjali flirted, he doesn't exactly know why—it is his way of being protective over her. Angad, Kavya, and Neev have all learned to look out for Kripa, Anjali, and Prachi since they are their friend's sisters, or at least that's the excuse Kavya tells himself. After Prachi and Neev have left the basketball grounds towards the bathroom, Kavya is flirting with this one girl after the basketball game. She is currently sitting comfortably on his lap. Anjali walks past and says, "Get a room!" Kavya grins, "Great idea!" and laughs at her jealousy. Anjali walks away in a huff. So basically Kavya is annoying Anjali from a distance, but trying to maintain a distance and Anjali is annoyed by this distance.

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Same day in the morning- Angad and Kripa. Angad and Kripa make plans to do their homework together at the Sharma House later. As of now, they are sitting in class listening to a lecture from their math teacher. Angad and Kripa as usual are not paying much attention to the lecture, but passing notes and talking. That's when the door bursts open and in comes the principal with another boy trailing behind. The principal seems to be embarrassed of his 'takla' (bald) head so the guy feels the need to wear a wig, which is the most ridiculous and obvious looking wig one could possibly find. The boy is standing behind the principal so getting a clear view isn't possible. The principal is talking to the professor and then turns to the class and says, "Ok students, we have a new student joining your class and his name is Prem Malhotra." Angad and Kripa aren't really paying attention, but as soon as the Principal steps aside, a young, hot, looking guy stands in front. He looks so carefree and he has his own attitude, like a bad boy. Kripa feels attracted towards him since bad boys were her weakness. She whispers to Angad, "DAM* he's HOT!" Angad looks up and then at Kripa really shocked and says, "Wow Kripa, tumhare itne bure din agaya hai… You think the Principal is hot???" Kripa kicks Angad hard causing him to scream, "OWW!!" The Principal turns his attention to Angad along with the rest of the class and says, "Angad what is the meaning of this outburst?" Angad looks back at Kripa and grins, "Well sir, Kripa seems to think that you are really HOo...OWWWW" Kripa has yanked Angad to sit down and stomped on his foot causing him to say 'how' instead of his intended 'hot'. Kripa interrupts Angad saying, "How sir How do you get your hair to be so shiny?" Well at this the principal turns red at the compliment and starts patting his head like one would to a dog and replies, "Oh I use conditioner you see" and grins widely. At this Angad says, ::cough:: LIAR ::cough::. Now Kripa has to elbow him to shut up since he was bound to get them both a detention.

The principal turns his attention back to the boy, who Kripa now has a crush on. Angad sees the guy and realizes that this was who Kripa must have been talking about. Although Angad hates to admit it the guy has style, but Angad happened to be undeniably hotter than Prem. Angad thought and realizes that they would have probably become friends had Kripa not declared she liked the guy and this is reason enough for Angad to despise him. The Principal asks the professor, who the smartest in the class is and that just so happens to be Kripa Sharma. Kripa beams as Prem is assigned to work alongside Kripa. Angad is totally upset because not only did Kripa stop talking to him in class, she acted like he didn't exist. Kripa s flirting with Prem constantly and even gave him her phone number. She touched his arm saying, "If you need help with anything just ask" in a rather sexy tone. This is only infuriating Angad more.

Angad gets a hold of his anger and after the basketball game with the guys he is walking to meet up with Kripa because they have planned to do their homework together. He suddenly stopped walking when he saw Prem and Kripa talking, laughing, and having fun. It looks like they really clicked. Angad is starting to feel really insecure. Kripa waves Angad over and Prem and Angad talk lightly on some topics. Prem had actually become friends with Kavya so he had come upon his request. That's when he saw Kripa and decided to chat with her. Angad isn't too fond of Kripa and Prem's closeness, but who was he to say anything. Kavya signals Prem over and he says a quick bye and sprints. Angad is loving Kavya at the moment. Angad persuades Kripa to leave, but she keeps insisting on staying because Prem is there. Angad finally gets Kripa in his car and all she says is, "Hmph!" Angad looks over at Kripa and smiles. He stops the car to get ice cream and the frown on her face quickly turns into a bright smile. She kisses Angad's cheek and throws her arms around his neck exclaiming in delight, "THANK YOU!!" and after their little snack they happily drive to the Sharma House. They finish their homework and Angad leaves after a while to go home.

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Angad has become insecure with Kripa's new formed friendship with Prem. Neev has become distraught over his feelings for Prachi, he knows now that the cause of her behavior was insecurity and jealousy. Kavya has begun using jealousy as a weapon to annoy Anjali. Everyone is having problems in their friendships; jealousy has seeped into each of their relationships one way or another.

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k that was the next part! tomorrow will be sorta late like today!!! totally loved your comments guys!! LEAVE COMMENTS!! im not gonna post until i get 10-15 comments and if that means its on thursday then....sux for u cuz i already know whats gonna happen 😛 jk!
Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow. great part. it was so funny how angad was gettin jealous as well as kavyanjali. n omg.it was so sexy of neev to lock her agaisnt the wall. luv ur fan fic.
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 awesome too good 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part i love this f-f ... i will kill that prem and now i am really happy with kavaya as didt came betteewn angad and kripa today lol ...this time he has been a good boy like harry potter ==> (Kavya signals Prem over and he says a quick bye and sprints. Angad is loving Kavya at the moment. )heeheheeh
he make it up for what he did yesterday being a harry potter and distorying the lovley scean 😆 😆 😆
contniue soon .
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Posted: 18 years ago
ahahahaha JEALOUSY!!!! what a way to get them together huh? 😆 😆
sooo prachi finally told neev she loves him 😃 yayyy!!! now neev bacha dont be an idiot and go confess to her too! 😡
lol loved it when anjali said "get a room" and kavya was like "great idea" dang i nearly fell off the chair laughing!!! LMAO!!! 😆
now who's this prem 😡 😡 i hope he doesn't come in between angad and kripa's friendship 🤢 khair angad, main hoon na 😉 no wait main kavya ki hoon actually 😛
haha and when angad said "kripa tumhara taste itna bura hogaya hai...tumhe principal hot laga??" sumfin lyk dat LMAOOOOO oh god my tummy hurts i think i shud stop now 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part.... luved prems entry... n i luv the use of jealousy in each realtionship!!!!! Jealousy is such a bad thing... but sumtimes it can help loll 😆 😆 😆

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