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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 very cute part..loved it..
cont soon.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW!
just read the last 2 parts! brilliant!!

please do continue!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
heyyyy numera
i just read ur fan fic and i love it!
I love the relationship each of the couples shareeeee
esp the friendship between AK it makes them more closer!!
cont soon :D
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just caught up with the past 2 parts! omg sooooo goood....lol the ding dong ditch game was soo funny 😆 i can just imagine the hysterics they were in.....lol n this part....awww poor prachi.....ugh neev u idiot 😡 n oooo anju n kavya getting closer n angad n kripa r sooooo cute together....cnt wait 4 the next part! continue soon 👏
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Originally posted by: deeya123

Yippe i m the first one to comment.great two parts in a day.its double treat.awsum and both were excellent 👏


thanks soooooo much lol actually i posted the other part on saturday cuz for now i post daily but when exams come around im gonna have to cut down! lol yea... thanks for liking the story!

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing parts
hope neev realises what prachi actually means 2 him
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aww thanks! lol i hope so too...

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

FANTABULOUS prt!!! 👏
👏 i decided i shud use
more diverse adjectives... but this doesnt sum it up... it was unexplainbly
gud!!! 👏 i
LOVE LOVE LOVED it!!! like ALWAYS!!! 😳 😆
wow... i must admit its pretty fun to have EVERY1 look at u all the time &
have their attention... it's very... idk the word, but it makes u feel
inportant... 😆 well... tht's wht teenagers do, EVERYTHING revolves
around them!!! 😆 anywazz... tht made no sense did it??? ignore it!!!
😆 i babble alot & most of the things i say NEVER make sense... so
sry!!! 😳 😆
God Neev is tooooo gud!!!! i LOVE him!!! 😆 he is my fav character in
this FF... yet!!! i LOVE the way he teases Prachi... its quite cute & funny...
ewww Prachi... u know ur not tht bad looking tht u go out with a fat, hairy
dude... who ALSO wears pink boxers... with clouds & sheep!!! 🤣 🤣
ya... i can TOTALLY imagine the guy too!!! 🤣
God... why do ALL the guys have to b the same & act the same!!!! JERKS!!!!
😡 Neev is sooooo mean... poor Prachi!!! 😭 😭 well... atleast he's
sorry... he deserves it!!! 😡 now he better make up with her soon & tht
too in a sweet way!!! 😉 😛
WOWO... Kavya's flirting with Anjali head on!!! dancing all close to her &
stuff!!! 😳 i like the way Anjali's behaving at Kavya's touch... its quite
cute & romantic!!! ☺️ FINALLY she atleast admitted it to herself tht she
enjoys his company... soon enuff she will start showing it too!!! 😉
awww... Kavya's sooooo cuteee.... i like him!!! 😳 i am pretty sure Anjali
wont b able to keep the pretense up for tooo long!!! 😉 😆
i dunt think Angad & Kripa will ENTIRELY forget their 'romantic' moments
anytime soon... but YAY... Angad & Kripa r back to normal... i was missing
their fights alot!!! God Angad is sooooo concieted... but i guess he
has rite to be... after all... he IS REALLY hottt!!! 😳 OF COURSE Kripa's
unique... she hasnt QUITE fallen for Angad yet!!! tht's pretty unique!!! 😉
Angad is soooo confused lol... he says she wont find another dance
partner... BUT he wont even let her go & find another dance partner... i
think he is jealous!!! 😉 😆 its quite cute actually!!! i LOVED the prt
where Kripa pinches his cheek... sooooo cute!!!! 😳 i think they have
GOT to be the perfect couple EVER!!! & THEN Neev-Prachi & Kavya-Anjali!!
awww... the wedding over... tht's the worst prt EVER!!! ALL the fun
cums to an end!!! k... i think i will end my comment too.... its quite long!!!
😳 k... i LOVED the prt & continue soon!!!! 😛



lol i like u diversified adjectives lol yup teens do think the whole world revolves around them lol but when they look that good it just so happens that the whole world does revolve around them lol or atleast my story does... haha i like ur babbling its mor fun to read, lol comments with random thoughts turn out soo funny! lol the boyfriend comment popped up randomly in my mind lol it wasnt there before! yea neev's just really confused now but when he does make it up to her it will be good...i think im still contemplating lol yup yup anju cant resist kavya's charm lol he's a born charmer! definitely angad has the rite to be concieted, hes tooo damn HOT! yup angad was sort of jealous and he also knew the other guys would jump at the chance to dance with kripa hence tightning his grip! lol so before i meant that the wedding was over but the night wasnt so who knows what will happen then...

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part... wonder wats gunna hpppen wen prachi n neev meet in da morning!!!!!


lol as i said they wont have to wait to meet in the morning lol as for the final confrontation show down lol that might take some time!

Originally posted by: hello64

love the ff 😃

continue soon 👏

kanwer 😳


thanks soo much! 😊

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow. ur fan fic just gets betta and betta. each of the couples are so funny n interestin. ak are so cute. they try to cover up their uneasiness n just go bak to they're original selves fightin n havin fun. i have a feelin dat anjali's "hatred" for kavya might creat sum probs for them later in the fan fic. but not sure. neev n prachi r really cute 2. i really like neev's name. it makes him sound so innocent.


soooo sweet! yea thats all ak can resort to either be uneasy or forget their problems! for now im trying to keep the ff at a light hearted pace lol melodrama will eventually creep into their lives but this is basically how they lived their lives as friends with pranks and all! but always staying together! lol yea neev's name suits his appearance-- in kayamath hes just too cute so i took the same character and personality!

Originally posted by: goldi2

lol hahaha another lucky day igues!! gosh last night i read 2 new fan fics including this1 lol and im like compltely in luv with them lol!! do u like updsat every day?? i hope lol luv to read :D:D:D
continue asap!!

Hina


lol thanks a bunch! yes i update every day but maybe not so regularly after this week, might have to change it to every other day cuz i have to study for AP exams and then sort of for finals, but its my senior year so wont be that hard lol but lets c!

Originally posted by: srk1

👏 very cute part..loved it..
cont soon.. 👏


thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

WOW!
just read the last 2 parts! brilliant!!

please do continue!!

👏
👏


hehe thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

heyyyy numera
i just read ur fan fic and i love it!
I love the relationship each of the couples shareeeee
esp the friendship between AK it makes them more closer!!
cont soon :D


yay new reader lol! i love having more ppl reading, the more the merrier lol! thanks a bunch! 😳

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

just caught up with the past 2 parts! omg sooooo goood....lol the ding dong ditch game was soo funny 😆 i can just imagine the hysterics they were in.....lol n this part....awww poor prachi.....ugh neev u idiot 😡 n oooo anju n kavya getting closer n angad n kripa r sooooo cute together....cnt wait 4 the next part! continue soon 👏


lol i love playing ding dong ditch lol especially at weddings held at hotels cuz i tend to get bored so i leave with a bunch of friends, it totally makes the wedding worth while lol! lol yes neev is a bonehead that he never noticed! but poor guy was just super shocked to say anything, now he will obviously have to make it up to her, so when he does maybe he will make up for being a jerk now!

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thanks soooooo much guys for the comments! i really enjoy reading them! arite so i'll be posting the next part in a while cuz i have to edit it and stuff but yea... LEAVE COMMENTS!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏
fab job!!
loved it continue soon!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol.. u shuld like really post up the part now.. seriosuly
lol i have been waiting for soo long lol
put it up already lol i mean what there to edit!! lol
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Posted: 18 years ago

Chapter 9

The guys and girls are in their respective rooms. Prachi has been sitting on her bed holding her knees close lost in her thoughts. Kripa and Anjali walk in and notice that Prachi is already there. They both notice how Prachi is in some other realm and decide to find out what is wrong. They go up to Prachi and shake her in order to bring back a lost Prachi. In the guys' room, Kavya and Angad are already there and Neev walks in looking just as lost as Prachi looked. Angad and Kavya notice that the usual cheerful Neev is no where to be found, only this serious looking guy, which was creeping the heck out of them. Angad yells out Neev's name and then Neev realizes that Angad and Kavya have been staring at him. Both Kavya and Angad along with Anjali and Kripa begin their interrogations of their suspects.

Anjali asks, "Prachi, kya hua? What's wrong? Did something happen?" Prachi silently sobs and holds onto Kripa, who brushes Prachi's hair off her face trying to soothe her brokenhearted sister. Upon Kripa asking, Prachi begins to tell, "Pata nahin, I don't know what's wrong with me! When I was dancing with Neev, I felt so happy. I was trying to talk to him but…" Anjali asks, "Did Neev do something?" Prachi says, "No Anju, but he just wouldn't pay attention to me when I was talking to him and I felt so ignored, so hurt, so broken. Then I saw he was looking at a bunch of girls and I felt so angry and I don't know why but I had tears in my eyes and then I just had to leave from there… I… I don't know what's happening to me? (Prachi breaks down into violent sobs)" Kripa continues to comb Prachi's hair trying to soo calm her. Anjali and Kripa both look at each other in agreement knowing exactly what is wrong. Prachi is in love, in love with Neev, her best friend and she is just confused about her feelings because she herself doesn't know what she feels for Neev is true love.

Prachi gets up and straightens herself out and that's when Kripa and Anjali decide to tell Prachi. Anjali and Kripa say, "Prachi, well you might deny what we are saying, but just think about it okay. We think you were feeling jealous that Neev was paying attention to those girls rather than you, his best friend. And you seem really upset about it too, almost as if you felt insecure that those girls were taking Neev away from you. You may not want to accept this, but Prachi this is Love…" Prachi remains silent and in deep thought. Anjali and Kripa know they had some effect on her so they decide to leave her with her thoughts and get ready for bed. Prachi begins to ponder over everything Anjali and Kripa said and decides to sleep on it. That's when the heard a knock…

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Angad and Kavya begin asking Neev what the matter is and why he seemed so out of place. Neev explains, "Well when I was dancing with Prachi, I think she was saying something, but I wasn't paying attention because I was checking out some girls and she really got mad. I never saw her like this before. And not just mad, but I could have sworn I saw tears in her eyes. She never acted this way before so I don't know what's changed or what happened…I don't know what to do I mean she is totally pissed" Kavya punched Neev's arm saying, "Dude you made my sister cry!" Neev complains, "OWW Kavya!! I need help and your making it worse!!" Kavya's still mad because Prachi has always been slightly towards the sensitive side, which is why everyone is so protective over her. Angad says, "Well you gotta make it up to her somehow and she can't stay mad at you forever, after all you guys are best friends! And your never suppose to ignore your best friend for girls! If I did that to Kripa she would have beat me senseless" Neev laughs, "A little whipped aren't you?" Angad yells, "Heck NO!" Kavya interrupts, "You better fix this soon or you're gonna mess up our whole group and then I'm gonna mess up your face Neev!" Neev gets frustrated, "Gee thanks that was soo helpful" Angad and Kavya in unison, "Glad to help" and they get ready for bed.

Angad and Kavya can't seem to fall asleep so they keep tossing and turning. Neev can't sleep thinking about Prachi's tear eyed face. Angad gets annoyed and gets up turning on the lights. Then he announces, "I CAN'T SLEEP! lets go see what the girls are doing?" They all get up and knock on the girls' door, waiting for them to open it.

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Kripa opens the door and Angad pushes Kripa aside and walks into the room. Boy did the girls pick a good day not to wear a nightie because that would have been damn embarrassing since these guys have NO MANNERS. The guys come in after Angad, who is sitting on Kripa's bed, and stand by him leaning against the wall. Kripa folds her arms demanding an explanation for the intrusion. Angad says, "Well we were bored, so we came to see what you guys were up to and I'm guessing nothing so let's order a movie!" Everyone agrees. Prachi and Neev don't sound too enthusiastic. Everyone is on the floor sitting in these positions- Prachi, Kavya, Anjali, Kripa, Angad, Neev. So Prachi and Neev are on opposite sides of the room and she is giving him the silent treatment. They decide to order Smokin' Aces. The girls are grossed out in the beginning because there are scenes with girls, who shall we say in the absence of clothes. Kripa and Anjali cover Angad and Kavya's eyes, while they keep trying to peek. Prachi glances at Neev and surprisingly he isn't even trying to look at the screen. He is actually staring at his hands lost in his thoughts. Neev feels someone one staring and sees Prachi. Neev sees Prachi's red eyes and feels guilty for being the reason for those tears. Prachi immediately looks away. Neev feels depressed to know that his best friend is mad at him. Anjali and Prachi have fallen asleep on either side of Kavya's shoulders. Angad and Kripa are still watching the movie; however, there is way too much violence for Kripa's taste, so she becomes pretty bored. The guys are watching intently though.

As soon as the movie comes to an end Angad and Kripa start arguing about the movie by the door connecting both the guys' and girls' rooms. Angad says, "Kripa you have such bad taste, that movie was GRRREAT!" Kripa replies, "It was GRREAT?? What are you the Kellogg's Tony the Tiger?? And I have bad taste?? Are you kidding that movie was horrible! Only a complete moron would like that movie!" Angad argues back, "Are you calling me a moron!" And this argumentation continues. Meanwhile Kavya finds himself in a pickle because Prachi and Anjali have made a home on his shoulders and he can't even move because Anjali has her arms thrown around Kavya's neck. Kavya signals Neev over to help with Prachi. Neev picks up Prachi in his arms and gently places her on the bed, brushes her hair aside. She looks so innocent to Neev. He kisses her forehead and leaves. Kavya picks up Anjali and tries putting her down, but Anjali just won't let go. He eventually pries himself away and looks back at her angelic face. Kavya goes close to Anjali and whispers, "Your're beautiful", he pulls the covers up and leaves, unaware that Anjali heard him and is slightly blushing to herself.

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Kripa still isn't able to fall asleep. Every time she closes her eyes, her mind goes back to the way Angad was looking at her in the closet. She gets out of bed and heads to the balcony, which is shared between the guys' and girls' room. She looks out towards the city. It is so quiet, she thought. She begins to admire the star lit sky and glowing moon. She thinks back to their almost kiss, the awkwardness, their dance. Then her mind drifts to Prachi and Neev's relationship, which is quite similar to her own. She wonders if she would ever fall in love with Angad, she wonders about the future, who they would marry, what they would become, everything about life in general. Suddenly from behind, someone whispers, "Mere bare mein sooch rahi thi?" Kripa gasps and turns to find Angad behind her. She turns back to the sky with Angad still behind her. He moves closer and puts his hands on either side of the railing, trapping Kripa and pressing into her. Kripa turns around and looks into Angad eyes. She tries to distance herself from him, but can't. They begin moving a little closer to each other when they hear a girly scream from the girls' room… NO WAIT the GUYS' ROOM!!

They sprint towards the guys' room wondering what could possibly be the matter. It was Kavya who was yelling like a schoolboy with a British accent, "Ahhhhh big hairy SPIDER!! Don't eat me mate!!!! AHHH! I WANT MY MOMMY!! Why won't my wand work! Arachnophobia! ARACHNOPHOBIAAAAA!!!!" he keeps squirming around in bed—it looks like he is having a seizure or he's trying to dance. Angad and Kripa watch Kavya screaming for his mommy and raising his hand swishing it around and they both laugh really hard looking at the panic driven face of Kavya. Angad is panting from all the laughter and asks, "Wh..What is he doing? Why is he talking like he's from England" Kripa replies, "HAHAHA that's the nightmare where he thinks he's Harry Potter and he is being chased by that big spider Argon and the Arachnophobia is his spell to make it go away" Angad is surprised, "WHAT? He think's he's Harry Potter!! HAHAHA!" They share another laugh and they both go back to their rooms. Angad goes to Kavya and sees him still having his seizure like he is being "zapped" possibly by Lord Voldemort so he kicks Kavya's rear end so hard he falls off the bed. While falling Kavya screams, "Ahh You ate me!! AHHH!" Angad says, "Wake up you Harry Potter moron" Kavya gets up, not fully in his sense yet and raises his hand as if it were a wand saying, "Oh yea well you won't be laughing when I use this charrrr…….." Kavya realizes what he's doing and sees Angad grinning and groans thinking now he will never hear the last of it.

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lol sorry bout that goldi i went to eat and then i had to edit lol i have a problem keeping my tenses the same so it comes out wierd! in any case here is the part! LEAVE COMMENTS GUYS! lol ok i'll clear this up cuz Guarav's love thinks i'm calling her a moron jk I LOVEEED SMOKING ACES!!! it was really good lol i just meant krips and the girls didnt like it lol!
Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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yes im the first one😛😆
lol r u calling me a moron too cuz i loved smokin aces!!! obv not the obscene part but the movie in general was wicked!!! newayssss bak 2 the ff awww prachiii shes such a sweet girl n kavya is just a great brother 😳 😳 😳

Kavya punched Neev's arm saying, "Dude you made my sister cry!" 😆 😆 dats just sooo cuteee n neev better apologise 2 prachi sooon!!!! lol prachi n anju faling asleep on kavya;s shoulders n kavya calling anju beautiful so cuteeee 😳 😳

the AK moment was soooo sweeet....if only kavya sorry harry potter 😆 hadn't screamed omg i was laffin so hard at tht bit 😆 😆

Oh yea well you won't be laughing when I use this charrrr…….." Kavya realizes what he's doing and sees Angad grinning and groans thinking now he will never hear the last of it.

lolllll 😆 dats toooo funnnny
lol all in all a great part!!!!! plz continue sooon 👏
Edited by Gaurav's Love - 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

yes im the first one😛😆
lol r u calling me a moron too cuz i loved smokin aces!!! LMAO I LOVED SMOKING ACES TOO!!!I saw it in theaters it was soooo good! lol that was the only action movie i could think of that was new, cool and violent! obv not the obscene part but the movie in general was wicked!!! newayssss bak 2 the ff awww prachiii shes such a sweet girl n kavya is just a great brother 😳 😳 😳

Kavya punched Neev's arm saying, "Dude you made my sister cry!" 😆 😆 dats just sooo cuteee n neev better apologise 2 prachi sooon!!!! lol prachi n anju faling asleep on kavya;s shoulders n kavya calling anju beautiful so cuteeee 😳 😳

the AK moment was soooo sweeet....if only kavya sorry harry potter 😆 hadn't screamed omg i was laffin so hard at tht bit 😆 😆

Oh yea well you won't be laughing when I use this charrrr…….." Kavya realizes what he's doing and sees Angad grinning and groans thinking now he will never hear the last of it.

lolllll 😆 dats toooo funnnny
lol all in all a great part!!!!! plz continue sooon 👏


yea i kind of realized while writing the part that Prachi is Kavya's sister and any big bro would come to the aid of family before friends hence punching Neev lol! lol me and my close calls with AK lol well i cant have them repeating their kiss like a billion times and having them ignore their feelings lol! now before it had no harry potter stuff lol i just had the spider part but then when i thought giant spider i thought ARGON from HP! lol so i thought it would be entertaining to make Kavya think he's harry potter and then try to use it on Angad! and guys i'll repeat I LIKED SMOKIN' ACES!! lol ohhh man krip's is getting me in trouble by calling angad a moron for that lol!

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