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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
ok
so AK had a cute lil scene!it was way tooo good!i thought lakshya actually luvvd kripa!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part!!!! hope dat as a bday present kripa tells angad she loves him... also im sooooo happy that ur promo turned out to be jus a joke... i got sooo scared when i read it!!!!! šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

šŸ˜†Thanks a lot! sorry for scaring youšŸ˜³šŸ˜†

Originally posted by: cupcake

Awesome part šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Thanks a lot😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks a lot😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome part šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Thanks a lot😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

ahhh!!OMG..the update was soo perfect...God u had me scared there for a sec..i thought tht mayb Lakshya realli was in luv wid her...lolz...update soon plz

Thanks a lot😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_tia

ok
so AK had a cute lil scene!it was way tooo good!i thought lakshya actually luvvd kripa!!!!!!!

Thanks a lotšŸ˜ŠšŸ˜†everyone tought thatšŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Next day, we see Kripa sleeping on the bed alone, with a cute smile on her face. She then slowly start getting up. When she opened her eyes, she saw Angad standing infront of her with a tray in his hand smilling.

A:good morning,

Kripa smiled and woke up, she then sat and looked at Angad who went to her.

A:yeh raha aapka breakfast(put the tray on her lap)

K:thank you

A:you welcome(smile)

Angad was looking at Kripa waiting her to eat but she wasn't.

A:kiya houa? you aren't hungry?

K:...umm Angad i just woke up and i didn't even wash my face....

A:oh god, i totaly forgot solly

K(smile) its ok

Kripa got tup and went in the bathroom, she after sometime came out and then went and sat on the bed again then start eating. Angad was looking at her with loving eyes, Kripa knew that he was looking at her she liked it but it was quite disturbing.

A:Kripa, aaj tum kiya kar rahi ho?

K(think for a while then say)ummm kuch nahi kyun?

A:nahi, just like that i was thinking to take you out

K:oh my god, i once again forgot, i'm so sorry Angad i'll have to go right now

A(shocked)right now?

Kripa nodded her head and took her cloths then went in the bathroom, after sometime she came out wearing the blue jean and with top she was wearing yesterday.

A:par Kripa....

K:Angad, i'm so sorry i promise i'll call you later promise, and thanks a lot for everything

She went and hugged him tightly then kissed his cheek and left leaving a shocked but happy Angad. Angad touched his cheek and smiled.

A(thinking))she kissed me

Angad jumped in joy, he was so happy. Meanwhile we see Kripa, entering Lakshya house. Lakshya run to her.

L:tumne ussey bataya to nahi ke tum yahan party ki arrangement karne a rahi ho

K:nahi, lekin mujhe bilkul acha nahi laga, mein ussey thik tarhan se baat bhi nahi kar saki(make a sad face)

L:oye, yeh pyar ki baatein baad mein kar lena ok?

K(raise her eyebrow)wait! tumhe kaisse pata?

L:meine tumse kaha tha na, ke mein sab kuch janta houn. Tum chahe kaho na kaho mein janta houn ke tumhare ankhon mein Angad ke liye kitna pyar hai.

K(shocked and sad):lekin woh mujhse pyar nahi karta

L:kissne kaha?

K:Lakshya, tumhe yaad nahi jab mein pehli baar KT se mili thi to ussney kaha tha ke ussey kissise pyar hai

A:woh "kissi" tum bho to ho sakti ho na

K(look at him surprised)kiya matlab?

L:kuch nahi, lekin Kripa ek baat mein tumse zaroor kahounga, agar tum kissise pyar karti ho to jakar ussey kehdo kahi der na ho jaye

K(smile):i'll

L:thats like a good girl! anywes now lets start work otherwise we won't be done still tonight

K:yeah

Lakshya and Kripa were both very busy decorating the house Angad tried a lot to call Kripa but she wouldn't pick up. It was now 7pm, Kripa and Lakshya finished their work, they both went and sat on the sofa they were dead tired.

L:god i'm so tired

K:yeah me too! btw KT kahan hai?

L:she is gone shopping, she said she'll buy the gifts

K:oh ok, anywes i think i should go now Angad must be worried

L:yeah, and don't forget to wear something good tonight ok?

K:what do you mean?

L:i mean wear something nice

K:you mean usualy i don't wear nice cloths

L:no i didn't say that

K:what ever, anyws bye see you later, and yeah ring me when everything will be ready i'll go pick up Angad then i'll come ok?

L:jo hukum sarkar

K:good

Kripa laughed and left. Lakshya called KT and asked her where she was, she said that she's on the way. After sometime, KT came with lots of bags in her hand. Lakshya went to her and helped her. They both put the gifts on the table and the cake too then they left to change their cloths.KT was wearing this:

Lakshya was wearing this:

They both smiled to each other, Lakshya went to her and kissed her passionatly, KT blushed and hugged him. They both then apart, Lakshya rung Kripa. Kripa was in her car, driving she reached Angad house, she went in.

K:Angad

Angad was sitting watching a movie.

K(shoutting)Angad

A(look at her)kiya hai?

K:chalo, lets go

A:(confused)kahan?

K:tum chalo to sahi

She went and took him by his arm, she mae him sit in the car and then left with him to Lakshya place. When they reached, Kripa stoped the car behind the gade.

A:hum Lakshya ke ghar kyun ja rahe hain?(confused)

K:Angad, tum sawal bohot poochte ho

A:tum jawab jo nahi deti ho

K(smile)Angad tum andar jao, mein abhi ati houn ok?

A(confused)ok

Kripa left in her car. Angad was confused, he start walking toward the house, he then pushed the door and entered it was all dark.

A(shouting)Lakshya......KT

No answer, Angad was now worried he wondered why the lights were off he went and on them and turned around. He was shocked to see evryone here.

Eaveryone:Happy Birthday Angad

A:Lakshya, KT yeh sab kiya hai?

L:birthday party aur kiya

KT(went to him and hugged him)happy birthday Angad

A:thanks KT

L(hugged him)Happy Birthday yaar

A:thanks Lakshya

They both apart, Angad was very happy.

A:thanks a lot, its so nice of you

He hugged them again, he then let them go.

L:btw KT,Kripa kahan hai?

KT:woh rahi

Lakshya and Angad both turned and saw Kripa standing smilling.

She was wearing this:

Angad was memorised by her beauty.

A(thinking)she is just like an angel

Kripa smiled and went toward him and hugged him.

K:happy birthday Angad

Angad hugged her back very happy and touched.

A:thanks, thanks a lot

They both apart, KT and Lakshya were very happy seeing them like this. Kripa took Angad by his arm and made her way to the cake.

K:now close your eyes and make a wish then blow the candles.

Angad closed hi eyes.

Angads wish: Always make Kripa smile and give her all the happiness she need and want in her life

He then opened his eyes and blow the candles, everyone clapped their hand Angad cut the cake and gave the first peace to Lakshya then KT then Kripa.Soon everyone start dancing, so KT and Lakshya went too. Angad and Kripa were alone standing.

A:Thanks a lot

K:kiss liye?

A:for this birthday party

K(smile) no need to say sorry

A:Kripa, you are looking...very....beautiful

K(blushed)thanks, i knew it you would like me in indian cloths more than in those jeans and t-shirt

Angad and Kripa both looked in each other eyes. Just then KT came to them, Angad and Kripa looked at her. KT winked at Kripa , Kripa smiled and left without letting Angad know. KT start talking to Angad, when the light went off.

A:yeh light ko kiya ho gaya?

KT:pata nahi

A:wait, mein abhi check karke ata houn

Angad was about to go that a white light oned, Kripa was standing here, we could see only her back, Kripa then slowly turned around, took a mike and said:

K:Happy Birthday Angad

Angad smiled, Kripa smiled to him too then closed her eyes and start singing.

K:seene mein dil

dil mein dhadkan

dhadkan mein kya hai

teri pyaas hai

har pyaas mein

dard hai sanam

yeh dard tera ehsaas hai

Angad joined:

oh dilojaana

teri tamanaa

har saans ko

maine hai dekha

mehsoos karke

iss pyaas ko

K:seene mein dil

dil mein dhadkan

dhadkan mein kya hai

teri pyaas hai

har pyaas mein

dard hai sanam

yeh dard tera ehsaas hai

(honthon pe dabi raastan koi

aankhon mein hai koi sapna

ajnabi sa ek dard hai magar

lag raha hai apna) - 2

A:main na jaanu mere humrahi

kaisa hai yeh kaisa pyar hai

jaan leta hai jo bina bole

kya dhadkan ka iqraar hai

K:oh dilojaana

teri tamanaa

har saans ko

maine hai dekha

mehsoos karke

iss pyaas ko

seene mein dil

dil mein dhadkan

dhadkan mein kya hai

teri pyaas hai

(oh arzoo mein koi arzoo chuupi

saanson mein kasak hai

lamha lamha betaab karti

jo pyaar ki mehak hai) - 2

A:chaahat ke saaye mein bikhari jaaye

teri dosti ki khushboo

tere dil mein hai mera tikaana

mere dil mein hai bas tu hi tu

oh dilojaana

teri tamanaa

har saans ko

maine hai dekha

mehsoos karke

iss pyaas ko

K:seene mein dil

dil mein dhadkan

dhadkan mein kya hai

teri pyaas hai

har pyaas mein

dard hai sanam

yeh dard tera ehsaas hai

ehsaas hai - 2

When Kripa finished, she was very happy and smiled at , Angad was touched and memorised by her voice. Everyone was verry happy, KT and Lakshya winked at each other. When Kripa opened her eyes, she saw Angad starring at her, both had a long eyes contact.

Preview:

Kripa confess her love

Laiba😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
Really sweet part... cnt wait for kripa to confess her love!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
Awesome Part Laiba very cute and sweet
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
ahh...tht was soo touching..lolzZz...cant wait for her 2 say..ILU!!update soon plz

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