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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Really sweet part... cnt wait for kripa to confess her love!!!!

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Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome just too cute and sweet

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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Part Laiba very cute and sweet

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Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

ahh...tht was soo touching..lolzZz...cant wait for her 2 say..ILU!!update soon plz

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👏 awesome part 👏 👏

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Originally posted by: me_iq

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww awsome prt jaaan

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Part10:

The party was over, Kripa was in her room, standing by the window looking at the moon. Angad came and looked at her, Kripa noticed him.

K:aisse kiya dekh rahe ho?

A:apne chand ko

K:kiya matlab?

A(realise what he said)nahi, kuch nahi

K:come on Angad tell me na

A(smile): Kripa yeh jo chand tum dekh rahi ho na, yeh wohi chand hai jo mujhe mere pyar se hamesha jori rakhta hai

K:Angad, tum kisse pyar karte ho?

A:hai koyi, lekin kya faida

K:kiya matlab?

A:woh kissi aur se pyar karti hai

K:yeh jante houe bhi ke tum ussey pyar karte ho(surprised)

A:(smile)nahi, meine ussey bataya hi nahi, socha to tha ke bataounga, lekin ussey pehle ussney apni dil ki aat kehdi

K:aur tum?

A:mein? meine apni dil ki baat apne dil mein dafan kardi

K:kyun?

A:kyunke Kripa, mein ussey itna pyar karta houn ke usski kushi ke liye mein apna pyar kurban kar sakta houn

K(teary eyes):aur kiya tum phirse pyar kar sakte ho?ussey bhool ke kissi aur ko apna sakte ho?

A:nahi, mein ussey bhool nahi sakta, kyunke bachpan se lekar aaj tak meine hamesha ussi se pyar kiya hai, aur hamesha karta rahounga. Aur agar kissi larki ko mujhse pyar ho jaye to mera jawab haan to hoga lekin mein ussey utna pyar nahi de sakounga jitna ke meine uss larki se kiya hai aur karta houn.

K(tears fell from her eyes):kyun?kiya hai uss larki mein jo tum kissi aur se pyar nahi kar sakte

A(surprised to see tears in her eyes)Kripa, are you like crying?

K:please Angad, mere sawal ka jawab do

A(smile):usski massomiyat, usske bolne ka andaz, usski ankhen, usski hassi...Kripa mein tumhare sawal ka jawab nahi de sakta, kyunke uss mein koyi bhi aissi cheez nahi jo mujhe pasand nahi

Angad wiped her tears and smiled to her. Kripa looked in his eyes

K:Angad, mein tumse kuch kehna chahti houn

A:bolo(smile)

K(turn around and closed her eyes) Angad, pata nahi yeh kab houa, kaisse houa but... I love you(Angad was shocked hearing this)Angad, mein nahi janti ke yeh kaisse ho gaya kyunke min to Lakshya se pyar karti thi lekin tumhare saath ne mujhe ussko bhoolane mein itni madat ki ke mein tumhe apna dil de bethi,(more tears fell)Angad, mein janti houn ke tum mujhse pyar nahi karte lekin(interupted)

A:karta houn

Kripa was shocked hearing this, she turned around and saw a smilling Angad who had tears in his eyes.

K:kiya kaha tumne?

A:mein tumse bohot pyar karta houn, Kripa tumhi ho woh larki jisse meine bachpan se pyar kiya hai aur aaj bhi karta houn(tears fell)

Kripa hearing this felt happy, she went and hugged him tightly, both were happy.They had tears of happines in their eyes, Angad then apart from her and wiped her tears and smiled to her, Kripa hugged him again.

K:i love you

A:i love you too

Hearing this, Kripa got even more happy, she hugged him ven more tightly, she then part from him, Angad kissed her lips and both shared a passionate kiss.Next day, Angad and Kripa told everything to Lakshya and KT, they were very happy for them.

L:i knew it! god i'm so happy for you guys

KT:me too

K:waissey Lakshya, how did you come to know that i loved you?

L(look at her and smiled)well one day i went in your room and saw your diary on the bed i took it and was about to put it in your cupboard but before i could my pic fell from your diary i was surprised so i opened our diary and read your diary still you start talking about Angad and your feelings. I was first shocked but then as i was sure that you loved Angad i got a plan and that night i came to you and told you.

K(surprised)what?you read my diary

A:bad manners

L:oh Angad, you shut up! ek to tumhara kam assan kiya hai upar se tum hi keh rahe ho"bad manners"

They laughed and they all hugged each other.Now we see lots of people at a concert, and on the stage the light were off but we could see two couple shadow. Slowly the light oned and we could see KT and Lakshya together and Angad and Kripa together.Angad, Kripa, Lakshya and KT start dancing on:

O mahiyaa - 4
(feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
youth forever
Soniye) - 2

O aja mahi dhunde yeh ankhiyan
tak tak rava hai main thakia
jogan banke pal pal main tarsu
mil jao tum mil jaye duniya
ho 0 0 0
tu hi deewangi tu hi awaargi
rabba mere tu hi meri zindagi..
tauba tauba ishq main kariya - 4

(feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
you forever
Soniye ) - 2

O maahiya - 3

o maula mera dil na toote
maula mera pyar na roothe
maula meri preet na choote
ishq mera faryad lagaye
maula mujhe kutch na suhaye
maula sudh budh ud jaye
maula hothon pe duaaye
ishq mera faryad lagaye
oo ruh ki tajgi husn ki sadgi
rabba mere tu hi meri zindagi
tauba tauba ishq main kariya - 4

feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
you forever

alla yeh barse ankhiyan
alla roshan kar duniya
alla daman main ho khushiyan
hai wari main tujhpe jaoo
hai alla mera deewanapan
alla ho gayi bairagan
alla mil jaye ranjan
tere dar se khali na jao
ho tu hi deewangi tu hi awaargi
rabba mere tu hi meri zindagi
tauba tauba ishq main kariya - 4

(feel the fire
my desire
take me higher
soniye
u r my pleasure
only treasure
you forever
Soniye) - 2

Tauba Tauba
feel the fire
Tauba tauba
my desire
tauba tauba - 2

Then Lakshya came again alone this time and sung

dil ki surkh deewaron pe - 2

deewaron pe

naam hain tera tera - 6

dil ki surkh deewaron pe

deewaron pe

naam hain tera tera - 6

tu hi mere armaanon mein

tu hi mere afasanon mein

khayalon ke paimanon mein tu hi tu

mere jigar ki khwaahish mein

meri vafaa ki bandish mein

mohabbaton ki ranjish mein tu hi tu

dil ki surkh deewaron pe

deewaron pe

naam hain tera tera - 6

jo dil ne dil se bandhaa hain

bada hi naajuk dhaaga hain

kiya jo tune vadaa hain na todna

yahi hai bas tujhse kehna

sadaa meri banke rehna

kisi aur se tu nazaren na jodna

mera yakeen hai mere pari se

dil ki surkh deewaron pe

deewaron pe

naam hain tera tera - 6

Angad came alone and sang Tere Bin by Atif Aslam

Tere bin mein yu kaisay jiya .... kaisay jiya, tere bin
Tere bin mein yu kaisay jiya .... kaisay jiya, tere bin

le ker yaadein teri, raatein meri katein
le ker yaadein teri, raatein meri katein
mujhse baatein teri, kerti hai chandni
tanha hai tujh bin raatein meri
bin tereeee din k jaisay nahi
tanha badan, tanha hai ru, num meri aankhein rahein
aaja meray, ab ru-buru, jeena nahi bin tere
tere bin mai yu kaisa jiya .... kaisa jiya teray bin

kabse aankhein meri, rah mai tere bichein
kabse aankhein meri, rah mai tere bichein
bhoolay se hi kabhi, tu mil jaye kahein
bholay naaaaa mujhse baatein teri
bheegi hainnn her pal aankh meri
kion saans lou, kioon mein jiyou, jeena bura sa lagay
kion ho gaya, tu bewafa, mujhko bata de wajay

tere bin mai yu kaisay jiya .... kaisay jiya tere bin
tere bin mai yu kaisay jiya .... kaisay jiya tere bin
tere bin mai yu kaisay jiya .... kaisay jiya tere bin
tere bin mai yu kaisay jiya .... kaisay jiya tere bin

teray bin, teray bin, teray binnnnnnnnnn
teray bin, teray bin, teray binnnnnnnnnn .... Kaisay Jiya

now we see Angad and Kripa dacing with each other and Lakshya KT together.

Angad:Mere hamrahi suno

Aao chale chand ke pass

Aissi duniya mein kahi dour

Jiss mein na gham ho na ansoun ho

Na ahen ho.....kahi

Aur kuch ho..... tera pyar ho

Tere ass pass

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Mere pass pass

Lakshya:Kabi tanha jo houyi tum

Kissi jeevan ke safar mein

Meri awaz sunogi

Kahi meri darkhan mein

Angad & Lakshya:

Zindagi

Mujhko kabhi,

Tujhse juda bhi karde

Band ankhoun ke

Darichon mein

Tujhe dekhoun

Tujhe dekhoun gaaaa

Lakshya:Mere saye ki tarhan

Tumto rahogi... har pal mein

Angad and Lakshya:

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There are lots of flashbacks of all the happy and sad scenes while the music is playing. When the finished, the both couples were starring in each other patner eyes, they were lost in. Meanwhile the audience were clapping their hand and shoutting as their performance was awsome.We see now once again Angad and Kripa starring at each other, then Lakshya and KT starring at each other, then the both couples.

Laiba😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool finally kripa expressed sorry i cold not comment for the rest of the parts i was kind of busy but yes awesome job laiba keep up the good work!!!!

i am kind of expecting some more romantic secnes 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome Part very cute and sweet finally Kripa confessed

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