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Posted: 18 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Jus read da last 2 parts n da promo, they were totally amazin n da promo has left me speechless i wonder wats gunna hppen... n btw in part 4, wat was dat song angad sang alone in the concert!!!!

Thanks a lot😊! it was Atif Aslam song "Ass Pass"solo 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 👏 👏 awesome 👏

Thanks a lot😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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It was night time, Kripa was in her night cloth, she was sitting alone in the garden. She was thinking of all the time she spend with Angad since she came here. She had a smile on her face, she took out her mobile and start looking at Angad pic which was in her mobile. Kripa know understood her feelings, she was sure that she was in love with Angad. She stood up and start dancing.

K:i'm in love (shouting)i'm in love!

Kripa was very happy. She start leaving toward the house but someone caught her from behind. Kripa turned around and was surprised to see Lakshya here.

L:kiya baat hai aaj bohot kush lag rahi ho

K(smile):haan bohot kush houn

L:apni kushi mujhse share nahi karogi?

K:(smile)waqt ane pe tum houd hi jan jaoge

L:chalo phir humein bhi uss waqt ka besabri se intezar hoga

Suddently its start rainning Kripa was enjoying the rain, she let the cold cloud touch her face by closing her eyes. Lakshya was looking at her and was memorized by her beauty. He slowly start moving toward her he was now very close to her. Kripa felt him she opened her eyes. Lakshya start touching Kripa face, Kripa was scared

K:Lakshya yeh tum kiya kar rahe ho

L:i love you

K(shocked)what?

L:i.....i love you

Kripa was shocked and was starring at him as if he was going to kill her.Seeing her like this, Lakshya start laughing like crazy, Kripa was now confused.

L:omg, do you really think i'm gonna love you(laugh)

K:what do you mean?

L:Kripa upar wale ne to jodiyan pehle se banayi hoti hai, aur humein sirf apne hamsafar ki talash karni hoti hai, mujhe to KT mil gayi hai aab tumhari bari hai

K:mujhe bhi apna hamsafar mil gaya hai

L:really!kaun hai woh?

K:wohi to kaha tha, waqt ane peh tumhe bhi pata chal jayega

L(smile)cool, anywes chalo andhar chalte hain varna iss barish ke niche beeghte beeghte hum beemar ho jayege

Lakshya was about to leave but Kripa stopped him.

K:Lakhya, tumne I love you kyun kaha?

L:(turn to her and smile)isska jawab tum apne aapse poocho, kya tum mere moun se yeh lafz sune ke liye bekarar thi ya kissi aur ke moun se

Kripa was surprised, Lakshya smiled

K:tumhe kaisse....

L:mein sab janta houn Kripa, lekin Kripa mujhe yakeen hai ke mein woh larka nahi houn jissey tum sacha pyar karti ho!Shayed mein tumhe tumhare sache pyar se milane ka ek zariya houn!

Lakshya smiled and left leaving a confused Kripa behind. Next day, we see Angad at his rehersals, he was wearing a skin jean and red tight t-shirt.He was dancing with a girl, but she would always do the wrong step which made Angad mad.

A:what the hell Sonia, kiya tum achi tarhan se step bhi nahi kar sakti ho kiya!

Just then Kripa came, she was wearing a blue jean not that short skirt with a white t-shirt looking hot as usual.

K:hey kiya houa Angad, why are you so angry?

A:nothing

K(put her hand on his shoulder)kiya baat hai

A:Kripa, i've enough i'm here its been now 3 hours but my partner still doesn't know the right step which make me very angry.

K:oh to yeh baat hai

A:(noded his head like a kid)hmmm

K:acha tumhari partner kidhar hai?

Just then Sonia joined them.

S:i'm so sorry Angad, i promise it wont happen again

A:its ok

S:ok so lets do it again

Kripa went at the side and Angad and Sonia start dancing very closely with each other. Seeing this, Kripa was jealous but controled herself. Angad and Sonia were just about to finish their dance but once again Sonia did the wrong step. Angad let her go and turned to the other side trying to not to shout at her.

S:i'm so sorry Angad

A:its ok Sonia

K:Sonia why are you always saying sorry, if you would do it more seriously you could have do it great

S:why don't you try, you will know how much its difficult

A:Sonia don't talk to her like this

S:why can't you see how she is talking to me

A:Sonia i said don't talk to her like this and thats final otherwise the door is right infront of you

Sonia was angry she looked at Kripa then left in anger. Kripa went to Angad.

K:i'm sorry, meri wajah se woh chali gayi

A:its ok, btw do you mind doing the rehersals with me?

K:me?

A:yep

K:sure(smile)

Angad put his hands on Kripa waist Kripa put her hands on Angad chest, both stared at each other and start doing the step. On the background the song, "Aahista Aashista"by himesh reshmiya was playing.They were both lost in each other eyes, their eyes were full of love, everyone was admiring them they had such a great chemistry and Kripa was doing the step too good that everyone wanted her to perform with Angad in his next concert.

At night, Kripa was in her car she was driving very fast and it was rainning outside. suddently her car broke down she came out of the car and was mad. Kripa was hopping to get a lift from someone but there was nobody here. The street was empty, Kripa was looking everywhere when some guys came to her.

G1:hey babes

K:don't call me babes ok?

G1:you are hot damn it and have lots of attitude too

G2:do you want lift?

K:no its ok i'll manage

G3:are you sure(walk toward her)we can drop you to your place

K:don't come near me

The guy1 caught her hand and pushed her toward him and start misbehaving with her, Kripa was now scared she was trying hard to free herself but he was holding so tightly.The guys were laughing. Kripa hit the guy1 on his stomach so hard that he let her go because of the pain. Kripa start running very fast as the guys were running behind her. Kripa wasn't looking at where she was going, so she bumped in someone.She looked at the person it was the guy2, she was shocked. He caught her arm and the Guy1 joined them, he was mad at Kripa.He wen toward her and was about to slap her that someone caught his arm.It was non other than Angad.

A:what are you doing man, tum ek larki peh haat uthate houe sharam nahi ati

G1:its non of your buisness, get lost

A:dekhiye tameez se baath kijiye ok?

G2:kyun kiya kar lega tu?

A:pehle to iss larki ko choro

G1:kyun?

A:meine kahan larki ko choro

G2:kyun?teri kiya lagti hai

A:(angry)meri jo koyi bhi ho, i said leave her

K:Angad please, help me

G1(laughing)haha nahi chorenge, tu kiya karlega

Angad was now mad at them, he start beating them badly. The guys were wadly hurt they were beging Angad to let them go but Angad wasn't stopping. Kripa was watching them fight crying because it was because of her. After beating them so much, Angad finaly let them go. Angad watched them leave and went toward Kripa.

A:its ok woh chale gaye hain! are you ok?

Kripa was crying and wasn't answering. Kripa looked at Angad, his eyes had lots of concern for her, she just hugged him tightly and start crying badly.

A:Kripa please don't cry

Kripa continued crying. After sometime, she lethim go and stoped crying and looked in Angads eyes.

K:Angad, promise me you'll always be there for me, tum hamesha mere saath rahoge, mere saat, mere pass pass(crying)

A:i promise

Angad smiled at Kripa. As it was raining Kripa start sneezing, Angad took her in his car and both left at his place. He took her to his room. He went in the bathroom and gave her a towel.

A:yeh lo

Kripa took it, then Angad went in an other room and after sometime came back with a baby pink night suit. He gave it to Kripa.

A:yeh lo, go take a bath and change your cloths

Kripa nodded her head just like a kid and did what he said. While taking a bath she remembered the scene where the guy was misbehaving with her and how Angad saved her. She closed her tightly and came out of the bathroom. She changed her cloths and came out. Angad was in the room sitting on the sofa but when she came out he went to her and took her to his bed and made her lie then put the sheet on her.

A:now you stay here and don't move i'll be right back ok?

K:ok

Angad left. Kripa start looking everywhere she liked the room. She then took the sheet and smiled she start touching it and she covered herself in it. She felt so good. After sometime, Angad came with a cup in his hand. He went to her and gave it to her.

A:yeh lo

K:yeh kiya hai?

A:hot chocolate

K(take it and smile)thanks

Angad sat on the bed and watched her drinking. Kripa drunk it very fast and when she finished she had milk on her lips Angad laughed seeing this.

K:kiya houa?

A:nayi woh tumhari...(control his laugh)woh dood ki mouche kehte hai na(laugh)

Kripa looked at her lips and laughed she then wiped it and looked at Angad.

K:thanks Angad

A:Kripa, agar tum mujhe har baar thanks kahogi na to mein tumhe kabhi bhi nahi bachaounga(jokingly)

K(with tears)please Angad aissa mat kaho

A(look at her surprised that she was crying)Kripa, tum..tum ro rahi ho

K:Angad ajj agar tum na hote to shayed mein(closed her eyes tightly)........

A:ssshhh... just stop crying, i promise i'll always be there for you so now just sleep, you need rest.

Kripa opened her eyes, Angad wiped her tears and kissed her forhead and was about to go but Kripa caught his arm. Angad looked at her and understood that she didn't want him to leave so he lyed next to her. Kripa put her head on Angad lap and closed her eyes. Angad was playing with her hair. Soon Angad and Kripa fell asleep.

Preview:

Angad birthday

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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
nice part continue soon........i hope AK become together...soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
wow awsome kripa go and tell angad 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
awww jaana ...tht was typical filmi one....i luved it....awsome prt

Iqra
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

nice part continue soon........i hope AK become together...soon...

Thanks a lot😊

Originally posted by: armaghan0

wow awsome kripa go and tell angad 😆

Thanks a lot😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks a lot😊

Originally posted by: me_iq

awww jaana ...tht was typical filmi one....i luved it....awsome prt

Iqra

Thanks a lot😊😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
Awesome part!!!! hope dat as a bday present kripa tells angad she loves him... also im sooooo happy that ur promo turned out to be jus a joke... i got sooo scared when i read it!!!!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
ahhh!!OMG..the update was soo perfect...God u had me scared there for a sec..i thought tht mayb Lakshya realli was in luv wid her...lolz...update soon plz

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