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Posted: 18 years ago
good going ayesha

pl update soon

good job
keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanx a lot guys! I am making this very short but I promise the next part is going to be very very long with lots of action. And I promise to update that part soon! So I hope you all like it and plz don't be disappointed.

PART 16

Naina was stunned. How could this be? She had just met Riya sometime back and now….. she had been dreaming of being a good friend to Riya instead of Bhabi but now she was not even sure if she would see her again. She found no words to console Raj… what could she say?
Naina- Ab?
Raj- Ek taraf mera desh hai aur doosru taraf meri behen. Behen ki khatir mein desh ko kurbaan nahin karma chaahata hoon aur na hi mein apni bahen ko aise dekh sakta hoon. Agar use meri mission ke wajah se kuch ho gaya to…..
He left the question hanging. It took Naina a lot of effort to fight back her tears. She could not see any loophole or solution to bring back Riya. Raj looked broken…. Shattered…
Raj- I wish I could kill myself….. I wish they had done something to me instead of Riya….
Naina- Please Raj… don't lose hope…. Is waqt tum toot nahin sakte ho….. think about Riya….
Raj- Kya kar sakta hoon mein? Ek akela aadmi kya kar sakta hai. Dushmano ki army ko ek sipaahi kya kar sakta hai Naina?
Suddenly a voice came from the doors. "Aap ko kisne kaha ki aap akele ho sir? Apun sab kya showpiece hai?
It was Aalekh. Pooja and the boys stood on the doorway and had heard a little of the conversation.
Ali- Aalekh bhai bilkul theek keh rahe hai, lekin aap aisi kaunsi museebat mein ho?
Raj and Naina briefed them on all what had happened. They were all horrified at the happenings.
Huda- Mujhe to yakeen hi nain ho raha hai ki who log itna gir sakte hai. Riya ko hatyaar kaise bana sakte hai? Chee….
Pooja- Oye jatt, unse hum aur kya expect kar sakte hai. Unke programme mein to humesha se gad-bad hai. Unka to defected software hai.
Ali- Sir app bilkul fikar mat kee jiye hum aap ke saath hai. Woh Riya ko kuh bhi nahin kar paatenge.
Raj- Lekin yeh mera personal matter hai. Is mein mein desh ke sipaahiyon ko kaise use kar sakta hoon?
Yudi- Nahin sir. Yeh aap ka personal matter nahin hai. Humare desh ki ek citizen ko desh ke dushmano ne kidnap kiya hai. Aur sipaahi hote hue yeh humara farz hai ki hum us citizen ko jee jaan se bachaaye.
Raj looked at all of them proudly.
Raj- Aaj tum sab ne yeh saabit kar diya hai ki tum sab sacche kaabil sipaahi ho. Keep it up. Mere paas ek plan hai.
They all huddled and heard the plan. It was difficult to carry out but was, after all their only option. Its failure could mean the death of Riya and even them. But they had to give it a try and had to be very careful….. one wrong move and it would all be over.
Raj looked at them hopefully.
Raj- Yeh mera plan hai, Umeed hai ki aap sab meri madad karoge.
Huda- Fikar mat karo sir, ab to Riya jitni aap ki responsibility hai utni hi humari bhi. WE ARE GOING TO SAVE HER!!!!!!

YES WE ARE!!!!!!!!! (All cadets)

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Posted: 18 years ago
Good part 👏 👏 ...ok will wait for ur next longgg update..
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice exciting part.. phir kya hoga.. wat happens next.. tell jaldi se... i cant take the suspense.. not on weekends!!! lol.. update soon ayesha..!! thanks
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ayesha

good part

please continue soon


dont make us wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
The responses for my previous part were at an all time low….. but I cant complain…. Maybe it just was not up to the mark. Sorry if I have been disappointing you. Thanx a lot to those who did write responses encouraging me like Diya, Yogi, Khnk_rox. This part is dedicated to you for not letting my morale go down! Its long and action packed so I hope you enjoy it. I have planned some very romantic and interesting parts ahead so I hope you guys enjoy them!

PART 17

Rajveer walked towards the old fort with a box in his hands. The kidnappers had called again 1 day later telling him to meet them here with the triggers (for which they had given him one day's time to get). The cold air, haunted feel and thundering would make you and me scared but not Capt. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat. He walked confidently inside.
Raj- IM HERE WITH WAT YOU WANT!
Suddenly 5 spies rushed out. They looked at him with gleaming eyes.
1 of them- C'mon now captain. Give it here.
Raj- No. Not to you. I want to give this to your boss.
They laughed.
Spy- You are in no position to argue. Do as we are saying.
This time it was Raj's turn to laugh.
Raj- Why are you so scared then if you know that I am in no position to do anything? Just as you instructed, I am unarmed and completely at your mercy. Then why is your boss frightened of coming in front of me? You know that you have the upper hand now.
The spies growled.
Spy- Our boss is not scared of someone as low as you. He just does not consider meeting you important enough for him.
Raj- Then what does he do? Just sit around while you do the kidnapping, negotiations and everything else?
One of the spies almost jumped on him with anger. But a smooth voice suddenly interrupted.
"Wait Abay, don't let him aggravate you. He want to meet me huh? Then let him"
The head spy walked in surrounded by other spies. The other floor was suddenly filled with spies pointing guns at him. But instead of getting scared ow worried, Raj smiled- His plan was working!

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Yudi, and Pooja were standing guard outside the fort, unseen by others, so that if Raj was in any trouble they could run to his defence. Naina, Huda,Aalekh and Ali stealthily got into the fort from the huge hole in the broken wall when the spy boss had gone to Raj. They knew that now the attention of all other spies in the fort would be on Raj and their Boss. They had to get to Riya. It was not difficult knowing which room she was in- It was the most heavily guarded room on the ground floor. It was lucky that the fort had only 2 floors, with the top one devoid of any rooms. The crept slowly to the door, now that Rajveer had all the attention of the spies, saying things which could easily have him slaughtered. But the heated argument had kept the spies distracted so it worked for the cadets. Once they got Riya safely out of the fort, they along with reinforcements Which were waiting at a distance, carefully hidden would enter the fort to stun and capture the spies, which fortunately were not that many in number as they had expected. They neared the room. 3 spies were guarding it. Quickly, Naina, Huda and Aalekh moved in and killed them by snapping their necks. It was instant and silent and had not diverted the attention of the other spies.Aalekh and Ali Huda and Naina dragged their bodies into the rooms as silently as they could while Aalekh and Ali crept inside. Riya was gagged and tied up to a chair, but thankfully awake. Just like outside, they were successful in killing the 2 guards inside too. They went and untied Riya but she looked at them suspiciously.
Riya- Kaun ho tum? Kya chaahate ho?
Ali- Hum KMA ke cadets hai. Hum tumhe yahan bachane aaye hai.
Riya- Bhaiya kahan hai? Aur mein yeh kaise maan loon ki tim sach keh rahe ho?
Aalekh- Dekh, tera bahi bahar hai, un gundon ka dhiyaan apni aur kheench raha hai. Aur Apna uniform dekh ke tere ko pata nahin chalta hai kya ki apum KMA ka cadet hai?
Riya- Uniform nakli bhi to ho sakte hai
Aalekh looked annoyed- Dekh abhi dimag ka dahin nahin karne ka. Samjhi? Apun kya proof apne jeb mein lekar ghoomega kya?
Naina and Huda just entered the room and heard wat was being said.
Naina- Nahin Aalekh, yeh sahi keh rahi hai. Is waqt kisi bhi anjaan aadmi par yakeen karma bewakoofi hai. Lekin tum mujhe to pehechaanti ho na Riya?
Riya quickly went upto her, hugged her and broke into tears.
Naina- Riya kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho? Ab tak to tumne itne saahas se kaam liya hai to phir ab, jab jeet itni kareeb hai, tum kamzor kyun ho rahi ho.
Riya- B…Bhaabi at t…tak t…to apne aap ko roka hi hai l….lekin ab aur n….nahin….
Naina stroked her hai. Riya wiped away her tears.
Riya- But you are right bhaabi, jab jeet itni kareeb hai to phir hausla nahin haarna chaahiye.
Naina- That's it! Ab tum Raj ki behen lagti ho. Come….
They slowly got out of the for just as they had entered. They quickly ran to the reinforcements van and left Riya there. They hurried back with other soldiers. Raj and the spy head had been in the most intense battle of words and now things were getting too out of hands. Even the calm and composed spy boss was boiling with rage. Naina was getting worried. Was Raj overdoing it……They were all in position. Suddenly one soldier screamed- ATTACK!
They all rushed into the fort. The unsuspecting spies were taken by surprise and the battle which followed was intense. But the army had the upper hand. They outnumbered the spies 1:4 and were more prepared. The spies fell like a pack of cards. Raj was busy in fighting with the army boss. While fighting, Raj couldn't help but admire the way all the spies had fought, especially the spy boss. Although they were not as well armed or prepared as the soldiers they fought with unprecedented skill and had been able to keep the soldiers off for long. When the spy chief saw that his men were losing terribly and that very soon he would be caught and captured (since he was sure that he would not be killed as they would keep him for interrogation), he pulled something out of his pocket, with a mad gleam in his eyes. He would never bear the humiliation of being captured by his worst enemies. NEVER. Raj saw what he had taken out of his pocket and his eyes widened with shock. He paled when he realized what the spy chief was going to do…
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" he screamed!

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Posted: 18 years ago
its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue da next part soon fast asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey that's excellent, sorry for not replying to the last part I only manage to read fics every few days cause of uni work. It was good to have some action and I'm looking forward to the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
cliffhanger.. plz tell me the spy boss is unable to kill himself.. n raj captures him.. n gets info outta him.. nice part.. update soon ayesha..
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Posted: 18 years ago
huh? dats it? is my fic dat bad?
thanx a lot andrea, sweta and khnk_rox..... 😭

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