Pyaar....(LRL- RN fic - THE END- pg 31) - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
😛 😉 😊

Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanx guys!!!! I'm glad you all liked that part. It took me a lot of time to write that bcoz I had to describe his pain as well as I could. I'm happy that to an extent I was successful. Plz keep commenting and enjoying!!!!

PART 13

Naina could not believe that this was the same Raj. For the first time he seemed so lonely, so vulnerable…. Now she realized why he always wanted others to be happy…. So that wat happened to him would not happen to anyone else. She pulled back and wiped away her tears.
Naina- Raj…. Hum sab ki zindagi meiin kuch aise pal hote hai jo dard aur dukh se bhare hue hai….. lekin har raat ke baad ek savera aata hai na….. bhool jao un dukh bhare palon ko aur dekho ab zindagi ne tumhare liye kitni khushiyaan rakhi hai.
Raj smiled and got up.
Raj- You are right Naina… chod do in baton ko…. Lets talk about something else…
Naina- I know! Lets go for a walk around the academy.
And that's wat they did. They changed the topic and started talking about other things and gradually their moods lightened. Soon they were again laughing and talking. Suddenly Naina fell silent.
Raj- Kya hua?
Naina- Bas…. Mein in sab baton mein itni involved ho gayee hoon ki mein bhaiya ke bare mein bhool hi gayee…. Aur mere mission ke bare mein bhi…..
Raj smiled- par mein nahin bhoola. Aaj shaam 7 baje hum Colonel Shakti se milenge.
Naina- colonel shakti? Kyun?
Raj- Naina he is the officer in charge of the trigger management. He was in the same position even at Naveen's time. With his help we can find out more about his death.
Naina looked excited
Naina- 7 bajne mein kitna waqt baaki hai?
Raj looked at his watch and yelped.
Raj- we lost track of time…. Its already 7:10
Both of them ran to Raj's room where colonel was already waiting for them.
Colonel- you are late captain
Raj- sorry sir…. I lost track of time…. Errr… this is cadet Naina Singh… actually we wanted to talk to you about Naveen Singh Ahluwalia's trial.
Colonel- go ahead… I'm listening.
Raj- Sir as you lnow Dr. Ritu was the spy in the academy who wanted to steal the triggers and get me in trouble. She wanted to marry me so that her mission gets easier. But did you know sir that she was Naveen's girlfriend?
Colonel: what!!!!
Raj- Yes sir, so does it make sense if I say that she manipulated Naveen into falling in love with her, got close enough to him to get to the triggers, stole them and when the fear of getting caught arose she hid them in his bag?
Colonel- yes that makes complete sense, but wat proof do u have that she was his girlfriend?
Raj took out the picture.
Raj- this. Sir I would like to have the case reopened. As you know Naveen was not given a chance or a good lawyer to defend himself properly thanx to Major bhargav.
Colonel- I will myself investigate this case and reopen it. If you are right, and I have a strong hunch that you are, then it can become a national phenomenon.
Raj- thank you sir!
Colonel shakti left with the photo and as soon as he did so Naina squealed and jumped into Raj's arms.
Naina- oh my god! I cant believe this! I'm so happy! We are getting close to our mission.
Raj laughed.
Raj- relax naina. We have a long way to go. But to celebrate this joyous occasion I have planned a surprise for you.
He covered her eyes and led her to his bedroom. When he opened it she was stunned. There, in the middle of the room was a neatly arranged table for two with candles lit all over the room and soft music playing in the background. Raj came close to her.
Raj- you like it?
Naina- Like it? I love it!!!!!
They sat and had a delicious dinner and then started dancing to the sow romantic songs. They were in each others arms and lost in each others thoughts dancing slowly for a long time. Naina suddenly spoke.
Naina- Its 10 o clock. I should go now. Its well past lights out.
But she said it without any real conviction.
Raj- Hmmm…. Go…..
But they continued dancing the same way for the next one hour. Suddenly there was a knock at the door. Naina and Raj were jolted back to reality. They looked frightened. It was 11 o clock. Who could it be at this time? Suppose it was some faculty member? What if they were caught? Tentatively Raj went to the door and opened it. Suddenly a girl jumped into his arms. He was taken aback but the hugged her back, smiling…..


ayeshacassim thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
COMMING UP NEXT- Who is this surprise visitor?
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ayesha

good part yaar

good presentation


well i can guess the surprise visitor is Raj's Sister

What say

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Posted: 18 years ago
dat was coool...n i also think its Raj's sister bt yeh koi time hai apne Bhaiyya aur uski GF ko disturb karne ka 😉

Ne-ways update soon...n keep up d good job!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ohh I was enjoying the dance..superbly sweet part ayesha..

Ya me too sure that the gal is his sis..any point for being so confident!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part... its probably his sis, well dats my guess!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 I'm sure it's Raj's sister...good,now she can meet her bhabhi(well,hone-wali bhabhi) waiting for the next part..plz cfontinue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey where are u?


Please update
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Guys! Im back after a very long time! I hope you have not forgotten me! Thanx for your awesome responses! Here is the next part! And all your guesses were right! That girl is Raj's sister 9her part will be played by the girl who plays the role of Priyanka in Dhoom Machao Dhoom)! Enjoy!

PART 14

She pulled back and looked at him with overjoyed yet mischievous eyes! Raj simply looked stunned…..
Raj- Riya…. Tum yahan? Is waqt? Do you know the time? And why didn't you tell me anything before coming… hey Riya….
But Riya just walked into the room laughing but immediately stopped when she saw Naina, the candle light dinner and the soft music playing in the background. She looked from naina to Raj, both of whom froze….. and then her face broke into a wide grin. She went up to Naina and held out her hand.
Riya- Hi…. Im Riya, Capt Rajveer's sister. You?
Naina- Oh…. Um…. Im Naina….. his student….
Riya- wow! What an awesome way of taking classes bhaiya! And what an awesome time!
Raj and naina exchanged uneasy glances but Riya just laughed. She understood what was going on and was very happy. She sat on the bed her eyes fell on Raj's uniform that was hanging on the wall. Her smile faltered…… Raj saw this and was shocked…. Usually Riya was very proud of having a brother in the army……. Then what happened to her today? He knew something was wrong.
Raj- Riya, kya hua? Sach sach batao.
Riya sighed and started telling Raj the reason for her sudden arrival. From the past month she had been receiving calls in her boarding school threatening her that if her brother did not stop his "mission" then those people would kill her, her brother and his brothers new found love…… they had forbidden her from telling this to anyone except raj and if he did not listen to what she said then they would do exactly what they said.
Riya- yeh kya mission hai bhaiya? Kaun hai yeh log? Kya chaahte hai woh? Ab kya hoga?
Raj- Riya, relax. Yeh kaayar log hai jo apne dushmano ka dat kar muqabla nahin kar sakte. Mera mission desh ki suraksha hai aur woh desh ke dushman. And don't worry, who tumhe kuch nahin karenge…. Unhme to itna bhi dam nahin ki who mujhse baat kare, isliye to tumhare zariye messages bhej rahe hai na?
Riya seemed convinced. She got up.
Riya- accha bhiya, mein chalti hoon.
Raj- are you crazy? Its midnight! Do you think I will let you go? Don't be crazy.
Riya- bhaiya chill. Gaadi mein driver aur kuch guards bhi aaye hai. I will be fine… plz let me go….. Mujhe bahut accha laga app ko dekh kar…. Aur apni hone wali bhabi se milkar….. she is wonderful….
Raj and Naina blushed….
Riya went away as suddenly as she had come. And Naina also went to her room since it was getting late. Raj was thinking about all that had happened but was so tired that he fell asleep on his chair itself. Suddenly the phone rang at around 3 in the morning. Raj picked it up. And what he heard made all colour drain away from his face…..
Raj- No….. it cant be….. No….


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