Pyaar....(LRL- RN fic - THE END- pg 31) - Page 14

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey. just caught up with ure ff. its mind blowin.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey ayesha ur previous update was gud yaar 😊..
This one!!..what to say??awesome...really well potrayed..n of course a well desired longer one...but the last line..scares me..what is the thing??why raj got shocked??
I have a request..pls don't be late...this time 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ayesha


too good

good going

keep it up

pl continue yr ff is not bad at all

it is just that may be the readers are not getting time to read it so may be you cannot expect instant replies.

but pl dont get disappointed

pl continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon da next part soon fast asap now only.
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Posted: 18 years ago
There! That's the spirit! Thanx a lot 4 all ur sweet replies guys! I feel much better now. I know I have gone a lil bit off track since this was supposed 2 B RN fan fic but here I am including all action and all, but I just thought it will be nice to give you some variety! Any ways, now there will be lots of romance and cute parts, I promise! Im sorry but my updates will be a lil slow since I am keeping very busy nowadays, but all the same I will try to update as often as possible! Thanx for all of you who sent me such encouraging PM's. Thanx a lot Sweta and Diya! U guys rock! This part is for you!

PART 18

The man had pulled out cynyte and put it into his mouth. Within a matter of seconds he was dead. The battle was over and most of the spies were dead. They had managed to capture few of them but Raj doubted if they would be of any use in cracking the spy network. Raj kicked the wall in anger. A golden opportunity missed bcoz the spy boss killed himself. Or else he would have been captured. Raj felt a reassuring hand on his shoulder. He turned around to see Naina.
Naina- Its all right Raj, its all right.
Raj- No its not naina. Agar hum us spy chief ko interrogate kar paate to phir…
Naina- To phir kya? Tumhe kuch aur spies ka naam pata chal jaata? Don't u realize? Their network is just too large to crack. And there are so many spy groups. Do you think that he would know about them all? And look at the bright side…. We saved Riya!
A smile came on Raj's face.
Raj- Yes…. Riya is fine…. Thank god! Come, lets go. I just wanna see her now…. Fine, fit and laughing….
Raj and Naina made their way to the van with Huda, Yudi, Aalekh, Ali and Pooja, all of whom were extremely happy with their successful mission. Riya was half asleep in the van, from fatigue and stress. But when she saw her bhaiya, her face immediately lit up. She ran out of the van and fell into his arms. Raj was ecstatic on seeing her all right.
Raj- Riya…. Thank god you are fine. Wat would I have done if anything happened to you! They all went in and sat in the van. Riya was introduced to all the cadets who seemed extremely impressed at her wit, presence of mind, looks and masti filled eyes!
Pooja- Magar ek baat to maani padegi. Good looks run in the family. Capt. Sir shahrukh to behen Preity Zinta.
All of them laughed at this, heading towards the academy hoping for the dark cloud over them to move away so that bright rays of happiness could fill their lives.

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The next few days were definitely bliss! Raj and the cadets were praised and awarded medals for their bravery in saving Riya and killing the spies. Riya was invited to stay for a few days in the academy as the academies guest and would later be escorted back to her school with full security. Riya was only too glad to accept. Soon she became the life of the academy with her friendly attitude and always smiling face. She became very close to Pooja Di (who shared her interest in mobile phones), Yudi bro (with whom she spoke endlessly about the latest technology gizmo's and gadgets), Huda bhaiya (who told her fascinating tales about life in the village, girls who were mad about him and especially bahinses!!!), Aalekh bhaiya (who told her touching stories about his past and vice versa) and Ali bhai (who told her great words of wisdom and principles). But she got along best with her "pyaari bhaabi". They spent as much time as they could with each other and soon became best friends. They spoke about lots of stuff especially Raj's past.

One day when raj was free he, Riya and Naina went to his room for some chitty-chatting. Thete Naina settled herself on a sofa in Raj's arms and Riya cozied up in a bean bag. Soon Naina and she were talking about Raj's college days which (to Raj's annoyance) was leaving both Riya and Naina in splits.
Riya- And you know what bhaabi? Every year, whenever valentines day would approach, all the girls in the college would start flirting with bhaiya, trying to get him for a date. And bhaiya would get scared of them! He was very shy at that time u know, especially around girls. Secret cards, flowers and phone calls would keep pouring in and bhaiya would shy away from them. He would make me take all calls at that time and if they were from any girl for him he would tell me to say that he was ill or bathing or something.
Naina burst out laughing. It was hard for her to imagine macho man (and ever flirty) Capt. Rajveer ever shying away from anyone.
Naina- And on Valentines Day? What would he do?
Riya started giggling- he would not even go to the college! Infact, he would not even go out of the house. Quite silly of him, really. Whenever I would ask him why he was behaving like a child he would just say "Valentines Day is to celebrate true love and I want to celebrate it only with the woman whom I love whole heartedly, who is the one in my heart. The one who I love truly. And till I don't find her- no valentines day for me" I heard it so often, I have by hearted it!
Naina started giggling harder than ever.
Naina- (pulling his cheeks) Awwwww….. choo chweet! My cutie pie darling!
Raj (getting red with embarrassment)- Stop it riya. (he threw a pillow at her)
Riya- Oh you stop it (throwing the pillow back)
Raj made a face at her and Riya stuck out her tongue.
Naina was laughing so hard that her stomach started aching.
Naina- Oh god Raj! You are acting like a kid.
Riya- Oh this is nothing. Bhaiya is a real child. When ever he would come home, he would steal my chocolates from the fridge. He is crazy about chocolates you know!
Naina could not believe her ears. Capt Rajveer, a chocoholic?
Raj groaned.
Raj- thanx a lot Riya. So much for my macho man image.
But naina only laughed and hugged him.
Naina- I never knew my darling captain was such a child at heart! Now I know where you get your chocolaty looks from.
This time even Raj could not help but laugh.
They were all so happy…. The happiest they could possibly be in an unsure, mysterious and peril filled world……

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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 good work...keep it up...and continue soon. 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwww...nothing much left to say...u stole almost all words of appreciation from me...so I would just say...rocking, awesome part... 👏 👏 👏...rest of the words I will mention for those lovely sweet romantic RN scenes...which will follow soon.. 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ayesha

too good

👏

Pl update the next soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awww.......there are so cute...RN rock in ur story...continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
that ws choooo chweeet.. esp the chocolatey looks line.. hahaaaaa.. 😆 nice update.. continue soon..

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