{RN}....Love Station....{ :-D End Pg-125} - Page 95

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Posted: 18 years ago
YIPEE!!! I was right.. and finally they confess 🥳 🥳 🥳.hehe.. thanks Sanya...

I'd guessed the same thing would happen.. so I'm right! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: mahek-e-gulab


bas yaar thak gayi main nach-nach ke....i mean bale-bale to shodo maine to bhangda, dandiya aur garba sab kar liya is part ko padne ke baad 😆 😆 😆

guddoo u rock!!!! 👏 soniye aaj to dil kush ho gaya jo koi nahi kar paya woh tune kar dikhaya....

Rajveer Ko mil gayi Naina 😊
bhaad me jaye zamana....
geet-sangeet ko shodkar...
sabne sheda hai "love station" ka tarana❤️🤗
wah! wah!😛😉😆



Wah-wah....kya shayari hai yaar!! too cool...seriously!!👏
THodi si balle-balle inki happy ending ke liye bacha ke rakhi hai ya nhin...I really hope dat u hve😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: khnk_rox



ooooooooooooooooooo..... kitnaaaaa romantic tha.. cmon sanya.. how

is confessing ur love on radio not romantic.. u said ke confession

romantic nahi hoga.. i luuuuuuuvvvddd it.. i read it n i ws like..

hai mai mar jaawaaan.. hahahahaaa... too cute.. raj is choo chweet..

n so r u for writing such a cute part.. i know u said thanks nahi

bolna.. but this ws tooo cute.. so thank u soooo much.. mera dil

garden garden ho gaya.. cant wait for the BIG part comin up

next..


Well d pleasure is all mine n u kno wat i think all I need to do is

to brush up my definition of romance nhin to aise cuute jhatke

jhelte rehna


😉 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: seasons



its too good,excellent yaar





THanx Varsha!!! 😃 Last par comin up soon!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: yyyy



awesome sanya......Surely raj rocked

in this part.....so finally they confessed ...good





Yessssss..Finally they did...Phew!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari



hey sanya

i am also running ou of words this time to comment

well the part was really excellent one of the best according to me.

well as said by SAHELIGSWM
LRL me to ab RN dekha kabhi nasib nahi hoga to tumhare FF se hi kam

chala lete hai.

great job pl continue soon

yaar muzse ab aur intezar nahi kiya jata





😃 Bas ek zara

intezaar!!!Jaldi update kar doongi yaar...n i remember..B4

4...rite...I'll do it pucca!!Ne-ways thanxx yaar!!😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: SAHELIGSWM




Now,I think I am the first one to comment this time .You nearly took

my breath away.Even I could hear my thumps.I am running out of words

to comment this time.You are toooooooooo good .Naina's

impatience,raj's confession,everything is just too perfect. Asli

LRL mein to RN dekhna kabhi phir naseeb nahin hoga ,lekin tumhari

fic padke woh kami puri ho jaati hai .Waise thanks for the radio

show.Was missing it terribly.







😃Radio show k liye thanxx is not required yaar!!It was supposed to b

there rite frm d beggining!!Bt coooool...Me soo glad u luvd all of
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Posted: 18 years ago

Happy Ending!

Naina rushed out of the Radio-station. She knew where exactly to look for Rajveer. She rushed to the parking and as expected, Rajveer was waiting for her in his car. She slowed down. She got inside the car but didn't look at him. Rajveer was waiting for her to turn but she didn't.

"Naina at least look here."

"No... Pehle jo show pe bola tha woh phir se bolo.... Face-to-face."

He smiled.

"Tum footage khaye bina koi kaam nahin kar sakti?"

"Nope."

Rajveer held her arm and pulled her towards himself. Naina's hand went on his shoulder for support as she got imbalanced. Rajveer slipped his other hand around her waist and pulled her closer. Naina had a mischievous smile but she hurriedly hid that. They looked straight in each other's eyes. She lowered her eyes. To her own surprise, she was blushing.

"I love you." Rajveer said that again and Naina looked up. That very moment he kissed her on her lips. It took her a second but she responded. It was a warm and gentle kiss unlike their passionate first one. They separated.

"Humein kahin jaana hai." She reminded him.

"You are right."

He started the car and drove away in the opposite direction of Naina's house.

"Raj kahan jaa rahe ho? Humein ghar jaana hai."

"Wahan bhi chale jaayenge."

"Lekin sab ghar pe wait kar rahe honge. Unhone bhi to show suna hi hoga na. And anyways hum jaa kahan rahe hain?"

"Woh bhi bata doonga."

"Kab?"

"Pahuchne ke baad."

Naina knew there was no point arguing besides she wasn't up to it. She sighed and rested her head on his shoulder. She wrapped her hands around his arms and looked at him with her twinkling eyes and gave him a big smile. He planted a peck on her forehead and continued driving.

Around half an hour later they stopped outside a high rise building. He took her to the 25th floor and unlocked an apartment.

"Yeh apartment kiska hai?"

"Usse pehle yeh batao ki yeh apartment kaisa hai?"

He asked signaling her to move in.

She entered and looked around.

"Acha hai.... Furniture hota to aur bhi acha lagta."

There wasn't even a single furniture in that apartment.

"Ab to batao ki yeh haunted place hai kiska?"

"Haunted?"

"Aur nahin to kya? Na insaan na insaan ke hone ka nishaan."

Rajveer smiled. He hugged her from behind and said.

"Kyun... Hum insaan nahin hai?"

"Haan hain... lekin... Wait a minute. Are you trying to say ki..."

"Ki yeh apartment chahe kisi ka bhi ho lekin agar tumhein pasand hai to ghar hamara hoga."

Naina was so happy to hear that.

"Hamara Ghar!"

"Aur ise tum khud sajaogi."

She looked around the entire apartment and her face told Rajveer how much she liked, actually loved the place.

"So you like it?"

"Of course... yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai?"

"Come with me."

He took her outside a room.

"Yeh hai hamara bedroom. Check it out."

As Naina pushed the door, rose petals fell over her that he had kept on the door. She looked at Rajveer who was smiling. He winked at her and gestured her to enter and she did. But Rajveer himself stayed outside and closed the door.

As she entered she found a red rose on the wall before her. It was attached to the wall with the help of a cello tape and a small piece of paper was rolled around itsstem. She took out the rose and read the note on that piece of paper.

"Few years back I met this girl who is an absolute sweetheart and whose one smile can brighten up your day. But I wonder why has she become so stingy with her smiles."

She remembered that Rajveer has given her this compliment when he called her up for the first time on her show. She turned around to look for him but he wasn't there. But there was another rose on the wall she was facing with another note. She read the note.

"I have only one promise to make to you. I'll always love you a little more than my love for you a day before."

She went to open the door to go to Rajveer but she found another rose behind the door with yet another note.

"Have some patience. Before we meet, open the cupboard."

She did as was directed. There was another rose inside the cupboard.

"I don't think I still need to tell you that I love you."

A big smile came on her face. She found a big box in the cupboard neatly gift wrapped. She opened the box and found a beautiful transparent white sari with pink colored lace on the border. It was a very simple yet very beautiful sari. She picked it up and there was another rose under it. She read the note.

"Even you don't have to tell me that you love me. Just wear this for me."

She quickly changed into the sari and came out of the room. Rajveer was waiting for her. He was enchanted to see her looking gorgeous in that sari and holding those red roses in her hand. It was the first time he had seen her in a sari but he knew she would look beautiful in that. She stood there waiting for a compliment from him. He went closer to her and looked at her adoring her beauty.

"It's almost perfect." He said.

"Almost! What's missing?"

"I am."

She blushed. He held her bare midriff and kissed gently on her eyelids.

"We are incomplete and imperfect without each other. Right?"

She nodded in agreement. He pulled her closer and took her in his embrace. Biting on her earlobes he whispered,

"Now you look just perfect."

***********

She was standing in the balcony quietly after surveying the entire house.

"Tumhein kya hua... Abhi to itni excited lag rahi thi."

"Ab bhi hoon... Bas I need a little time to let things sink in... I mean I still can't believe that it's actually happening. Kal tak hum dono ek doosre se theek se baat nahin kar pa rahe the and today we are together and that too in our own house. It looks like a dream... So beautiful and so perfect."

Naina went closer to Rajveer and he took her in his arms. They stood like that for long until Rajveer took her hands and brought her inside. He made her stand against the wall and gently kissed on her forehead. He brushed his lips against her eye lashes slowly sliding down to her cheek and gradually came down on her neck. He kissed her on the neck. Her hands were on his back... She was pulling him closer. He pressed her hard against the wall with his body. He was holding her waist slowly running his fingers on her back, tickling it. He slowly moved in upward direction kissing her incessantly. He came back on her cheeks. After a small period of kissing and caressing, he took her lips inside his own. He enjoyed her lips gently for a while and then gradually they increased its fervor. He started circling around her navel with his fingertips. They stood there holding each other tightly, with their eyes closed, lips sealed in a kiss and a passion running through their bodies. They finally parted. Rajveer pulled her away from the wall and went behind her. He put his one arm around her shoulder and pulled her into himself. With the other hand he slipped the strap of her blouse from her shoulder and started kissing it. They were completely lost in each other. They lost the track of time they have been there for. He planted a peck on her nape and ran his hand on her curves burying his face into her hair. She turned back and now it was her turn. She kept her hands around his neck. She kissed him on his neck and unbuttoned the two topmost buttons of his shirt. She ran her fingers on his chest penetrating her nails into his skin. That was teasing him badly. He pulled her closer. She kissed continually on his chest slowly shifting to his neck. Her fingers played with his hair pulling them gently in between. Rajveer enjoyed Naina taking over the 'charge'. He just kept moving his hand caressing her back. After a little while he took her face in his hands and pressed his lips on her. This time they didn't had to be gentle. They found themselves drowning in the divine ecstacy of their love. Suddenly Naina remembered something.

"Oh my god."

"Kya hua?"

"Raj humein ghar bhi to jaana hai."

"Hum ghar mein hi to hain..."He said playfully.

He was on his neck again. She pushed him apart.

"Raj, hamare nahin mere ghar."

"Arrey haan.... Aapke Bhai sahab ko bhi to report karna hai."

"What? Report?? Ahhhhhh..... CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT!! Arrrggggghhhhhh..." She cried.

"Jee nahin."

"Nahin matlab?"

"Matlab mujhe aur Navin ko promotion mila hai. And now it's Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat."

"Aur tum mujhe yeh ab bata rahe ho."

"Haan woh...." But Naina didn't let him complete. Her fingers were on his lips.

"Nothing more... one more good news aur khushi ke mare mujhe Heart Attack aa jayega."

"Shut-up Naina.... Let's go."

He turned to leave but Naina held his hand and stopped him.

"Kya hua?" He asked.

"I love you Raj."

Her eyes showed her sincerity and affection.

"Miss Naina Singh Ahluwalia.... Maine to apse yeh baat aise nahin kahi thi.... Not fair. Ab jab tak tum bhi mujhe waise hi I love you nahin kehti, jaise maine kaha tha, we are not going anywhere."

She smiled and put her arms around his neck. She didn't move nor did she say anything. Her eyes showed a little of mischief but that look was immediately replaced by seduction. She was very slowly moving her face closer to his. With one hand she covered his eyes hinting him to close them while her other hand slowly came down to his chest. He was enjoying the feel anticipating a kiss but before he could comprehend anything she hurriedly took out the car keys from his pocket.

"Hum abhi jaa rahe hain.... You get that?" She told him in a dominating tone while retreating.

She turned and left. She reached the door but Rajveer didn't even move. He was looking at her. He was disappointed for not getting his kiss but was happy to see his naughty Naina back. He loved her, adored her but for that kiss... well he still wanted more..... not just a little more but more, more, more and more.

"Tum sach mein nahin chaloge kya?"

Her voice shook him out of his thoughts. Half-heartedly he came outside.

"Mujhe bhi saari duniya mein ek yehi mili thi pyaar karne ke liye." He was talking to himself as he locked the door. She heard that but didn't say anything. She just smiled. As he turned Naina planted a quick peck on his lips.

"Let's go love."

****************** The End ******************

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Posted: 18 years ago
This is my longest update ever n I dont think I'll ever write anything dis size again...Bt ne-ways Finally d fic is over!!!Somehow I was bored of d idea of candles, soft music & large bouquets & floral decors for d romantic set ups..so I thot may b u guys wont mind a lil change... Hope its not dull & u guys like it!!

BTW DOOMED UPDATED

Luv,
Sanya..
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sanya

good yaar

finally i your FF Rn have come together

agar actually ye ho jata to kitna excited hota LRL

well i have imagined each and every part of your as an episode

well finaaly awsome imagination and presentation

you really deserve he award for best FF writer and also more importantly for regularly updating the FF

Good job

you deserve a 👏

and thanks a lot for updating before 4 and making my day

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