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sadia

@sweetheart101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#121

yeah i can't wait to hear the plan write soon. we're all wating.

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Iqra

@Mrs.SalmanKhan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: sweetheart101
yeah i can't wait to hear the plan write soon. we're all wating.

lol look who finally found time to comment!😳

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sadia

@sweetheart101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#123

lol. how rude i've been commenting u just havn't recieved like half of them.lol.

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Iqra

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Posted: 18 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: sweetheart101
lol. how rude i've been commenting u just havn't recieved like half of them.lol.

rite dude. w/e

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@everyone: I'll be posting it maybe tommorow or the day after. Just havent found time lol.

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-mango-

@-mango-

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Posted: 18 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Mrs.SalmanKhan

Like it?
I really loved the part, when aaryan talks rudely to aarchita and aayesha.

What do you think the plan is?

I can't guess anything at this moment.
Wanna know?

Definetly!!!
Wait for the next epiisode!
And srry for all da spelling mistakes and no pics I was in a hurry 😳

It's okay if there is no pictures. I just like reading it.
Luv&Hug to allzz 😉

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Iqra

@Mrs.SalmanKhan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#126

Recap:
Kajjal's trying to make Anita understand that it wasnt aaryan'z fault.
Aaryan had a plan that will totally make her forgive him and Dev was involeved in it.
16th epii;;
Anite Kajjal and anitaz whoel family was seatred around the dinning talking busily rtalking about the day wen anitas dad interuppted everyone.
The Dad: I have 2 tell yu all sumthing especially you anita.
Anita:jee Papa?
Dad: Betas tunke yaad hei shukla aunti?
Anita:jee papa.
Dad:Unka ekk ghar hei haredwar mei bohat salo sei ganda para hein, aur voh vaha jaake rehna chaati hein. aur voh puch rehe thi agar tum college sei 1-2 weeks ki break lake unke liya voh clean karo? Unka koi family member nahien hei na issliya.
Anita:Jee papa I dont mind.
Dad:Great! u have 2 lve tommorow after college.
Anita:Jee
*****At aaryanz house****
Aryan was getting readt to leave, he calls dev to ask where he was.
Dev:I'm outside of ur house rite now come.
Aaryan:arrite.
Aaryan goes outside and gets in his car.
Dev:Hey man
aryan:hey dude whuttsup?
Dev:nm. okay tell me the plan once more.
Aryan:Okay you see before i called you i called Kajjal on her cell and luckily she was still at Kajjals and asked her to get Anita's bro, and Anita's parents out of the house, and she sayd she will say they were going for a walk and take them all. And you will go there and make sure that they take more them 15minutes buy distracting themm sumhow. And in tht time I will go over to her house and work my magic.
Dev:whutever dude.
***At anita's house*****
Over at ANita's house Kajjal had conviced Anita's parents and brother 2 go, luckily Anita had sayd she didnt want to go.
Kajjal:are you sure you dont want to go?
Anita:yep you go on.
Kajjal:Arrite.
They say that and they all leave. Anita sits down with a book.
***Dev's Car****
Aaryan:Look, there they all are! Now go go go!
Dev:Fine.
Devs gets out of the drived seat and Aaryan drives off. Aaryan goes to Anita's house and knocks, Anita opens the door.
Aaryan:Hey, Can I come in.
Anita moves out of the way and says "come" and lets him in.
Anita:Why have yu come don w/ aarchita? Found time?
Aryaan:are you still mad? i sayd im srry
Anita'z still standing, he moves closeer to her.
Aaryan:Anita. . .
Anita:Aryaan it really hurts wen you get dissed like that.
Aryan:I'm really sorry i really am.
He moves closer, coler, until they were just 1 cm apart. Anita didnt know whut to do she tries to move but he brings her even closer and whispers in her ear "
Chehre par banavat ka gussa
aankhon se chhalakta pyaar bhi hai
Is shauk-e-ada ko kya kahiye
inkaar bhi hai aur ikraar bhi hai"
Anita gets all shy.
Aaryan:Maaf kiya ya nahien?
anita was about to say something but there was a knock on the door. It was her family. Anita freaks out.
Anita:Oh no, now whut? Dad will get furiouse to see u here!
aaryan: Oh god. Cant Dev and Kajjal do anything rite.
Anita:Whuttt? Dev and...Kajjal?
Knock again
Anita:Oh shit man. Umm you uhh go up to my room 2nd to the left. go go go!!!
Aaryan:arryte im going im going!
He runs up. Anita opens the door.
Her mom:Anita itni dher lagadi darwaza khol ne mei?
[Why did you talk so long to open the door?>
Anita:voh ma mei apne room mei thee isliye.
Mom:Oh Acha.
Anita:voh Kajjal kaha hei?
Dad:Usse koi dost milgaya tha aur vo itna bolta tha Dev tha uska naam shayad. aur menei socha tha ki hum late ho rehe hei isliya voh vahien hei hum agay.
[She found a frend named Dev, He kept talkinng i thot it was getting late so shes still there we came>
Anita:oh acha. teek hein. Baba nmei room mei umm packing kar rehe thi mei jaao?
Dad: Oh ok beta go.
Anita hurries up and closes the door and calles out to aaryan.
aaryan:well i could come out but wen i heard sumone coming i ran inside ur closet and now I'm sort of umm stuck.
Anita laughs.
Anita:Rukho mei tumhe nikalti hoon.
Anita takes her rite hand and pulls him out and sumhow trips and they both fall something liek this.

But with aaryan on top instead.
Aaryan:maaf kiya ya nahien?
Anita:hmmmm.
aaryan kiya yah nahien?
Anita:teek hei kiya.
Aryan lightly kisser her on her forehead.
. . .
Aaryan and Anita get up. Aaryan holding Anita from her shoulder still.
Aaryan:Aab khabi mujhse naraaz hogi?
Anita:nahien.
They hugg. 😳 [awwww lol]
They were still hugging when there was a knock on the door..
*****End of Epi*****
Did you like it?
Was it worth waiting for?
Who do you think it is?
Do you have any suggestions? If so pm me. 😛
A big thankss to "Amisra" in the SOS forum for letting me use her poem 😳 thnks hun.
IqraK<333

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Hira

@hIra_89

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Posted: 18 years ago

#127

awww it was such a nice epi 👏
continue soon 😛

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Iqra

@Mrs.SalmanKhan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#128

Important:
Guys, my computer has betrayed me and it's busted and I don't know when I'll get it fixed. Maybe two months from now, maybe next week, or maybe tommorow! I don't really know. And till it's not fixed, i can't continue. Just a lil heads up if you guys are wondering why I havent posted in a loong time. And btw this is a great chance for all of you to PM any suggestions you have!! I'm really sorry but you mite have to wait awhile. And if your wondering, I'm at the library right now 😳
Hope you guys understand,
Iqra<3333😉

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-mango-

@-mango-

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#129

I never knew computers can betray people, like other people. 😕
No I am just joking. [Get well soon Iqra's computer!!!] 😆 Me no like you. Anyways, Do continue as soon as your computer works. 😊 Can't wait tiill the next part Iqra. 😃

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maham

@maham_93

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Posted: 18 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Mrs.SalmanKhan

Important:
Guys, my computer has betrayed me and it's busted and I don't know when I'll get it fixed. Maybe two months from now, maybe next week, or maybe tommorow! I don't really know. And till it's not fixed, i can't continue. Just a lil heads up if you guys are wondering why I havent posted in a loong time. And btw this is a great chance for all of you to PM any suggestions you have!! I'm really sorry but you mite have to wait awhile. And if your wondering, I'm at the library right now 😳
Hope you guys understand,
Iqra<3333😉

arrey yaar...its no problem! computers often betray us! we'll wait till u continue! so, take ur trym!😊