Pyaar ki Kayamat-Full 17th epi page 20!! - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey iqra it wasn't boring but a nice and cute epi 😳 😳
i hope your broken fingers heal soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.SalmanKhan

Ok, I know this epi was boring,

What are you talking about girl? It was really good!

I was goin to make them go to the temple and the hsop 2day

You can make them go to the temple in your next part, but what's hsop? First I thought you were going to end them up in the hospital😆. I guess it's shop[shopping].

but the place where I get my pics from wasnt available rite now, So did'nt do it.

Where do you get the pictures from anyways?

Not a great epi,

You are lying. Don't you know you write so good?

but enjoy. Sorry 4 late update.

That 's fine. I know you broke your finger playing ball!😆

Luv&Huggz<3
Iqra'z signin' out.

Plz continue soon!!! I think I am your biggets fan of your writing!!! Do continue soon, because of you break your finger again, I won't be able to read your fantastic parts!😊👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
@nIha: Thnks hun'. 😳
@Armaghan: thnks yar. 😛
@uru:Thnks. 😆 😆 Oops I meant "shop" lol hospital 😆 My pics of A&A are all from pulkitmouni.piczo.com and my D&K pics are mostly from the Kajjal forum 😉 "You are lying, dont you know you write so good" 😆 Thanks man, that means alot<3 And yes thnks for being my biggest fan! Ur so kind, uru 😳
Luvz&hugs<3
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Posted: 18 years ago
tht was so cute! luved the epis! plz continue soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

it is awesome!!😳😳

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
@Maham_93: Thanks sweetie' will cont soon.
@RadhaKrishna123: Aww thnks. Love your lovely comments,always!
@Everyone:I'm in the middle of my 14th Epi will post before weekend ends. 😉
Edited by Mrs.SalmanKhan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Recap: Aaryan was dropping Anita off at her house, D&K where on there way to the temple

14th Epi;;
Aaryan was droppin Anita of, They were in the car the theme song of Kaisa yeh pyaar hei was playing on the radio. . .Aaryan started singing along.
Andekhi anjaani, kya yeh mohabbat hai...
Chupke se milte dilon ki yeh aahat hai...
Kyun pyar ke sab diwaane?
Jo kho gayaa, woh hi jaane. . .
Aaryan:Hmm. . .mei acha gaata hoon naa?
Anita:Haan Haan, bohat acha. 😆 {it was horrifing}

Aaryan was about to say something,but then he noticed Anita'z house was here.
Hey Anita, your house is here.
Anita:Oh umm arrite. Bye for now, I guess.
Aaryan:Arite, I'll be over at your house in about an house, K?
Anita:okay

Anita was about to open the door but before she could, Aaryan grapped her hand. . .and lightly but sweetly kissed it 😳 😳
Anita shylt runs off. Aaryan smiles to himself and drives off. Anita goes insidde her house and tells her mom, that she is going out in a while. . .
Her mom:Kahaan ja rehe ho ?
Anita:oh vo waise goomne pherne. Okay, mei tyaar hone lagee hoon

And she goes to her room to get ready.
***********Dev&Kajjal****************
Dev and Kajjal had just gotten to the temple, they had parked there car and where walking across the road wen a really fast car comes and splashes Kajjal with mud.
Dev:Kajjal, your whole blue dress has gotten dirty.Stupid people can't see.
Kajjal:It's Okay, Dev don't worry. Lekin Hum gaande[dirty> Kapro mei to pooja mandar mei nahien kar sakte naa, I think we should just go home.
Dev:Ofocurse not! Come there is a store right near here. Lets get you sum new clothe.
Kajjal:oh no, Dev its Okay honest. We can come back another day.
Dev:No Kajjal lets go.
Kajjal:Dev. . . Oh Okay

They head to the store. Dev sees a gorguzz blue suit for Kajjal.He asks Kajjaal if she liked it. She said she loved it. But, when she saw the price tag she said "No, I don't want it." Dev noticed that she had said no after seeing the tag..
Dev:Cumon Kajjal it would look absolutly fab on you trust me.
Kajjal:No it's okay. Dont worry, It's no biggie!
Dev:Fine if you don't want to buy it dont! I'm going to buy it for you cause It would look great on you.

Before she could say anything he moves closer to her, she moves back, and more closer, and she moves back until she's against a wall and lightly kisses her on the cheek and whispers in her ear "Your beutiful" 😳 He holds her hand and walk to the cashier guy and after he tells her to go change in the changing room while he goes waits in the car.
She goes into the changing room, changes, and comes out.
She goes outside of the store to see where Dev was. . .and to her surprise she could'nt see him anywhere. She was looking for him when Manthan shows up and started teasing her.
Manthan:Hello Kajjal-Ji kese hei aap?
Kajjal:Manthan get lost.
Manthan: Why sweetheart all I asked is how are you?
Kajjal: Manthan plz go.

She says that and starts walking, Manthan just like he twisted Anita's arm he twists hers and trys coming close to her. Dev who was on the other side in the car, sees gets mad and goes to Kajjal.
Dev:Manthan get lost, now!
Manthan:Hey Dev man, whut the hells wrong with you, mind ur own bussiness.
Dev:She'z with me, leave her.
Manthan:Fine, gosh.
He sayz that and walks away, Kajjal who was barely in tears runs to Dev and hugs him

Dev who is more then happy hugs her for a long time and after whhipes Kajjal's tears away

And start walking towards the car.

After, finally they drive to the mandar, and when they get there D&K go and make prayer

After they are done, the baba of the mandar hands them a locket and says "Yeh beta hamesha aapne paas rakhna aur koi buri naazar nahien tumhe lage ge"
He says that and leaves, Kajjal hands the locket to Dev and says Always keep this with you!
Dev puts it around his neck
After doing pooja, Dev puts his arm around Kajjal and they walk to a resturant.

*****************Anita and Aaryan*******
At Anita's house, Aaryan had just honked, and Anita had ran out the door after saying her respects to her parents. Outside, she opens the door to Aaryan's car and gets in. when she gets in she says
Anita:Hey Aaryan.
Aaryan:Hey gorguzz.

Anita asusual goes blushing again. . .Aaryan drives the car with his left hand and the whole way kept his right hand on Anita's hand. Making little converstations with each other.
After they get to the store, Anita starts picking out diffrent dresses. She absolutly loved this red one, she picks out and holds it against her.

Aaryan comes and says
Aaryan:hmm Anita not this one, yeh itna acha nahien hei

Anita:Really? I thought it was pretty

Aaryan:It is pretty! I was just joking Anita.

They were still choosing when a girl named Aarchita comes up to Aaryan

Aarchita:hey sexy! long time no see!
She says that and gives him a little hug & kiss on the cheeck.
Aaryan:Oh hey Aarchi, yeah long time.
Aarchita aka the 2nd drama queen after Aeysha looks at Anita and says. ..
Aarchit:Umm Aaryan whose this with you?
Aaryan:Oh sorry forgot to introduce, She's Anita my really good frend.
Aarchita:Umm her ur frnd? Aaryan sweety are you sick?
Aaryan:That's not nice! Aarchita!

Anita looks hurt

Aarchita:Oh whutever Aaryan. . .Come here with me, I gotta show you this dress I saw. . .
She says that and pulls Aaryan away He's saying "Aarchita stop I'm here with Anita not you..." But Aarchita still pulls him away...
Anita looks really sad

...and mad!

{pretend the lady aint there}
She angrily looks for Aaryan and Aarchita but when she does'nt see them, she takes the clothe to the cashier, checks them out and starts walking home madly.
Aaryan over at the store, is trying to get rid of Aarchita and is trying to find Anita, no use. He realises she left. He tells Aarchita he has to go and starts looking for Anita.
**************End of Epi*************
How was it?
I think it was pretty daym long. lol.
How do you like D&K?
How do you feel how the story is going for A&A?
Is it a good thing I included 2 lovestories in here [D&k and A&A> instead of just Aaryan & Anita?
Was it a good epi?

That's it.
I'm out.
Buh-bye lovely people.
Iqra<3

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Posted: 18 years ago
Whut a long epi and no comments 😃 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago

i loved it!! it is great!! can't wait for the next part!! hope they get back together!!👏👏

Plzzzzz continue soon!!😛😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

[Quote]How was it?

It was really a great part.
I think it was pretty daym long. lol.

This part was long! I am sure it would have took some time ot write this part out.😊
How do you like D&K?

Thier part was really cute. Manthan adn Kajjal's part was freaky but in the end, it was overall a good one.
How do you feel how the story is going for A&A?

Their story was sad. But I think you are giving your story a climax.
Is it a good thing I included 2 lovestories in here [D&k and A&A> instead of just Aaryan & Anita?

Both of the stories are going great. If you just added one love story than it would be a bit boring. Well it was just a bit of my advice. Don't take it as an offence.
Was it a good epi?

YUP!!! It was a good episode.
That's it. I'm out.
Buh-bye lovely people.
Iqra<3

Iqra I wanted to know something. Is archita a new character in your story, or she is only going to be there for 1 or 2 parts? I thought it was suppose to be aayesha instea of archita, because laksh's fiancee is aayesha. Anyways this part was really good.

Edited by uru_hershey - 18 years ago

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