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Posted: 18 years ago

Recap: A&A are in a big problem, If u dont knoe the problem go read the last epi lol

17th Epi;;
Aaryaan and Anita were having a little moment in anita'z room when there was a knock on the door, anita freaks out she tella aaryaan to quiet down and says:
Anitta:kaun?
Door person: Darvasa khola yaar!
...It sounded like Kaajjal. . .
Anita:Kaajjal?
Gurl:haa baba! aab darvaza kholo naa.
A&A calmed down.
Thnkk god I got so scared for a sec!
Anita goes to open the door, while aaryaan sits down on Anita'z chair, on the side.
. Kaajjal comes in, and starts talking without noticing Aaryaan.
Kaajjal:Neetu, did Aaryan come? I'm so sorry its just that I got distracted when Dev came!
Anita:Yes, he came. And its absolutly fine if ma baba and bhaiya came before!
Aaryan:ahem ahem. Hell-llo!

Kajjal looked and saw Aaryan!
Kajjal:Aaryaan!! Anita, does uncle knoe??
Anita:dont yell. baba will come and no he doesnt know!

aaryan starts laughingg.
Aaryan still laughing:hello Kajjal!
Kajjal:Hiya Aaryaan.
Anita: Hi shi baad mei, pehle batao kiska plan tha?
Aaryaan with a mysteriouse yet sexcii smile: Plan? Kiska plan? Konsa plan?
Anita:Dont lie, cumon I knoe its not a coincedance tht you dev and aaryaan all met together!
Kaajjal:Voh to umm. . .
Aaryan:Okay it was my idea, so i could come here and nobody but yu would be here, and I could apoligized.

Anita:Mujhe paata that koi to ghar bhar hei!
Kaajjal starts laughing, so does Aaryaan and Anita!
Anitas'z mom was passing in the hallway, she heard the laughter, she tot she heard a guy'z voice , so she knockede.
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[knock knock]
Ma:Anita. . .
Anita:Hee mama?
Ma: beta tum aur Kajjal hei waho ho naa?
Anita:Jee ma aur kon ho sakta hei?
Ma:Nahien. waise hee pucha tha. . .
And she walks away. . .
Aaryaan: Phew! Mujhe to ekk minute kilye laga voh to undaer aajaye gee!
Kaajjal: yeah totally!
Aaryaan:hmm sochne wali baat hei, how will I go home?
Kajjal:Window sei! jaaise Ishq Cishq mei Shahid Kapur nei kiya tha!
Aaaryan:ha-ha sorry babes, but this aint bollywood and I aint shahid!
Anita: I think your gonna have to wait till ma baba and bhaiya go to sleep.
Aaryan: I dont mind staying all night!
He said wid his same cute-devilish sweet smile!
Anita:hah, no chance!
Kaajal:hmm. I dont want to be a "kebab mei haadi!" mei chalti hoon.
Anita: you are so not a haadi [laugh]
Aaryaan: yeh totally, stay!
Kaajal: Nahien yaaar. I am hoing het btw, tomm I'm going to school wid Dev kay?

Before Anita could answer, Aaryan did.
Aaryaan: Dont wrry go ahead, Anita will go wid me.

Kajjal sayd bye to them and left.
Aaryaan comes clower towards her. . .
Aaryan: So sweetheart, where were we?

Anita walks backwrds..
Anita: we were umm
Aaryan: we were whutt?

Aaryaan moves more closer, she moves back, & he keeps moving closer and she movies backwards, and more back and den bamm she was against the wall
Aaryaan: Abb kaha jao ghi?
Anita:Aaryaan. . .vohh..
Aaryaan:Shhh
He lifts her head and lightly but beautifully kisses her on her forehead.
Aaryaan: anita ur gorguzz.
Anita:hmphh. .
Aaryan:Anita, i love you [awwh!]

Anita ofcourse knew he likeed her but it sounded so unreal she became shocked.
Aaryaan pulls back, his smile vanished.

Aaryaan: IS something wrong? was it sumthing I sayd or did?

Anita smiles: nothing is wrong at all. I love you 2!!!!

This time SHE pulled him into a loongg hug. They were hugging for awhile, when again there was another knoch on the door, This time, it was "bhaiiya"

Bhaiiya: Anita mom dad went to bed, I'm going too. Dont say up to late. tomm's school 'kay?

Anita: kay bhaiya g'nite.

Bhaiyya: g'nite.

and he walks to his room.

Aaryaan: maan, why does ur family keep coming?

Anita laughs: Who knows?

Aaryan: ahah. So should I leave now?

Anita:hmm if u want to yu can stay u knoee.

Aaryan: Okiyy then, but if I'm staying i gotta tell u sumthing.

Anita: umm okay go ahead whut?

Aaryan: I want food! I'm starving!

Anita: ofcourse yu do it'z 10:00 wait I'll get yu sum snacks kay?

Aartan: arriteyy! thnkss man

Anita:no prob.

Anita goes and closes the door behind her. Aaryaan spots Anita'z lappy, and decides to turn it on & checkk his emailz. It sayd u had to enter the passwrd to turn it on. He tried Anita'z last name; wrong. He treied there school name; wrong. He tried SalmanKhan [her fav actors]; wrong wrong wrong. He tried many othr things all wrong! But then just for the fun of it, he thot "maybe mera naam ho sakta hei" But then again, he thought no that cant be it but he tried it anywayz, he was 99.9% sure it was going to be wrong, but righ tthen it sayd WELCOME

Aaryaan2self: arre, why would she keep my name as her passwrd?

Just then Anita walked in with sum food, She was surprised to see Aaryaan near her lappy.

Anita: Aaryan, kya kar rehe ho?
Aaryan: Oh nothing, u were talking longg so i thot of cheking my emailz.
Anita: Oh okay, should i put the passwrd in?
Aaryaan: I alreddi did!

He looked her rite in the eye, she started blushing.

Anita: howd u know that it was ur...uhhh. . .name?
Aaryan: I knoe my sweetheart pretty well.

Another halfish hug!

Anita in a muffled voice w/d her half face besides Aaryaan'z chest: Aaryan, tumhe bhook lagi thi, chalo ab tora sa kalo.

Aaryaan: 'kay, lets sit on ur bed, eat, and listen to by ipod?
Anita: arriteythen.
They both sit down, Aaryaan takes out his ipod.
Aryaan: you like the song Laree Choote?
Anita; yeah its iight.
Aaryan: k den I'll put it on foe u
Anita: 'kay

Aaryaan puts it on, put the ipod down and put his hand in Anita's hand and starts stroking her hand, Anita puts her hand on Aaryaan'z shoulder [MAJOR AWHH<3] The song was playing, but none of them were listening to the song, they were deep in there thoughts of each other.

Anita: He'z awesome. He could have had anyone. he could have had Ayesha, the diva of the school, who everyone dies foe, but no, he picked me! He loves me!!

Aaryaan2self: gosh, Anita rocks. She'z so nice, not pushy at all like Ayesha! I feel like, I feel like never leaving her side! [AWWH WHUT A SWEETY<333]

Just then Anita remmberd she was going tomm, she thot she should tell Aaryaan. She takes out her earphone and takes out Aaryaan'z too.

Aaryaan: ehh, kya hua?

Anita: I remmberd something I need to tell you!

Aaryaan: uhmm. . .Okay...?

Anita: after school tomm, I'm going to Mumbai for 2 wekks.

Aaryaan: whut! no way! thts like 14 dayyz widout seeing you!

Anita: I knoe, but i gotta go, baba said so.

Aaryan: hmm why u going?

Anita explained it all to him. . .

Aryaan: hmm Aunty shukla ehh?

Aaryan: I have an idea!!

Anita: idea? idea for whut?

Aaryaan: I'm cuming with you.

Now it was anita'z turn to be surprised! 😆

Anita: whut?!!?? Noo u dont knoe my baba yaar he'll be mad!

Aaryaan: dont wrry, mei asa kuch karo ga, khi tumhare baba khud mujhe kehe gaye ki "Beta, Aaryaan, Anita kei saath jao"

Anita: Aaryaan, whut r u going to doo?

again wid his sexcii yet mysteriouse smile: sumthing!

Anita laughs: Aaryaan aaryaan arryaan. . .

Anita: 'kay den. whutevver. well i listen to music while i go tinkle [bathroom]

Aaryaan chuckles: alriteyy

She leaves, aaryaan half laying half sitting, puts his earphones on for like 2 minutes, but then since it was 11:30-ish. He strted to feel sleepu. . and more sleep. . & more, and finally widoiy knowing he fell asleep rite on Anita'z bed! Anita cumes back & sees an extremely cute guy sleeping, she didnt want to wake him up. .

Anita2self: whut if. . whut if he sleeps over? i'll wake up extra early and make him leave in da morning! yes, thats it he'z staying.

Anita went, took his earphones off, put them on the side, got the "Zaari" & spread it ovr him, She lightly kissed him on the forehead😳😳 and took the sofa-bed in her room out and slept on it. . .

* * * [/center]

So aaryaan'z sleepin ovr, will they be caught?

Was it an okay epi? Be honest yaar! So srry for taking so long, next epi will be up after 4-6 comments!!

😳😳Luv, Suhit ki rani,

Iqra😆😆


Edited by Mrs.SalmanKhan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part n really gr8. 👏 👏 👏 .continue soon............ 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
worth the w8! plz continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.SalmanKhan

awhhh thnks so muchhh! and im continueing it asap. Im half done typing the epi, srry my cuzzins are ovr so dont think i can finish it today! But will try after they leave so sorry!

And especially sorry to my impatient uru😳

That's okay. But you stopped on the "suspence".

Good job writing your part.

And it's okay, i mean i was a bit hyper that day and did everything up ad down.😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

That's okay. But you stopped on the "suspence".

Good job writing your part.

And it's okay, i mean i was a bit hyper that day and did everything up ad down.😆

lol thnks man😳 there are alwayz dayz we go hyper I understand, my day for hyperness was today.😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
Cmment guys i just finished the whole 17th epi page 20 if not 4-5 comments no next parttt 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
it is wonderful!!I loved it!!😛😛

Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!👏👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Plz continue soon. So you just added the next part under the first part right? So I read the next half, and it was really good. SO when are you continuing? I can post 2 more comments in here and then you can continue right? 😆 Just joking. Don't take it seriously. Continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
^^ it was the same part, before I just posted half the part cause thts all i got done, and then wen i got the rest half of the epii done just posted it dere :P
haha nah u guys are loyal enof, enough comments.
Will cont soon, just gotta finish riting the part, den typing it. . I'll post it on the weekend foe sure =) [unless sumthing cumes up lol]
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Posted: 18 years ago
great update 👏 👏 👏
continue soon 😊

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