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Posted: 18 years ago
fantastic awesome job done once again 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
ooo wow continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 41 recap [rahul lies to neha as he is taking her to kaali maa temple but they go somewhere else, there neha gets to know the truth about rahul, rahul insisits neha to marry him, but she rejects n run away... on the other hand when sanjay reaches sunset point..as rahul lied to him tht neha n he will b their. rahul's another frnd ankur tells the truth about rahul to sanjay..n sanjay starts finding neha..n somehow he reaches the place where rahul took neha, then neha was running away from rahul for the 2nd time n she was hiding but rahul gets her..n when he was about to slap her sanjay comes n stops him n rahul gets shocked to c him there]

now part 42 begins...... 😊


[same scene, as rahul was about to slap neha for the second time sanjay holds his hand, n rahul turns back n gets surprised to c him there] R:- TU...... tu yahaan kaise....(rahul says this in nervous tone, n sanjay looked at him...n after a pause he says) S:- HAAN....MAIN YAHAAN... TUJHE KYA LAGA THA RAHUL KI MAIN NEHA KO DHOONDH NAHI PAAUNGA.....(thn sanjay freeds neha's hand from rahul n takes her to his side, n neha interuppts n says in nervousness n terror) N:- SANJAY !!! ACCHA HUA TUM AA GAYE... PLS MUJHE BACHAALO ISSE.. (then sanjay stares at rahul n says to neha) S:- kuch nahi hoga tumhe...darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...ye hamara kuch nahi bigaar saktaa... N:- chalo sanjay yahan se!!!, (and as they moves back somebody hits at sanjay's head wid a rod…it was one of the man whom rahul hired …n as sanjay's head was bleeding badly neha gets shocked, n rahul passes a smile….as rahul was standing behind sanjay, n sanjay was about to falls on rahul…rahul takes out a big knife n he puts it on his back..n neha shouts) N:- SANJAYYY!!!! (n sanjay falls on the floor…n neha also kneels down to sanjay..n screams n says wid tears in her eyes) N:- SANJAYY!!! SANJAY UTHO… PLS UTHO…(n when she c tht sanjay has stopped responding neha cries by burying her face wid both her hands.. rahul smiles at this and touches neha's head gently n says) R:- dekha main isiliye keh raha tha.. ki chupchap mujhse shaadi kar lo.. lekin tum meri baat suno tab naa… (after a pause he says) neha main ye khoon kharaaba nahi karna chahata tha…lekin tumne aur ISS sanjay ne mujhe majboor kar diyaa. (thn neha looks at rahul n gets up..n she pushes him back in anger..rahul still smiles at it..n neha..comes to him in rage..n beats him wid her hand…n rahul still smiles… n after a while he looks at neha n suddenly grabs her by her hair n says) R:- bohot ho gaya neha…ab chalo vo marriage certificate sign kar do...(neha suddenly gets normal n then she looks at sanjay lying on the ground n then she looks back at rahul..n she smiles n says)

N:- tum mujhse shaadi karna chahate ho naa rahul… (rahul smiles n says) R:- main to kabse taiyaar hoo nehaa.. (she also smiles and says ) N:- ok.. to phir chalo main vo marriage certificate sign kar deti hoon.. (rahul gets surprised n smiles..then he holds neha's hand & takes her near the car, n sanjay's bike was also there n petrol was again leaking from it.. as rahul was walking towards the car neha suddenly looks at the leaking petrol..then rahul reaches near the car n he takes out the papers n gives it to neha…n neha smiles by seeing the leaking petrol n says to rahul) N:- tum mera jawaab chahate hona..(rahul looks at her wid lots of questions in his eyes, neha then snatched the papers from rahul's hand n she tears it n throws it on his face..on this rahul gets into rage…n he remembers the time when rahul offered her a check n she tore it n threw it on his face..then he comes from the flashback… n he grabs neha by her hair…n throw her on the ground n unfortunately the ground was wet by the petrol…suddenly rahul looks at sanjay's bike n at the ground which was wet by the petrol….then rahul smiles…at it.., but on the other hand sanjay comes to his consciousness but as rahul put the knife on his back n his head was also bleeding so he could not stand up n walk but was crawling to go near neha…but he was also unable to do it… n out of frustration he shouts…rahul n neha looks at sanjay..neha was on the ground n rahul was standing..then rahul again looks back at neha n in blind rage he says) R:- neha..agar tum mere saath nahi ji sakti… to tumhe jine ka koi haq nahi hai… (neha gets shocked, n rahul takes out a match stick, strike it..n drops it on the ground…,n neha's clothes also catches the fire..n rahul moves behind….suddenly sanjay gets shocked at this…after some seconds sanjay's bike also catches the fire n it blasts rahul kneel down n was looking at neha burning alive….she was shouting, screaming n after the blasts..her voice lost in some silence….maybe silence of the death…sanjay shouts her name but..neha was not going to return back..or respond to sanjay now…n after a while sanjay again becomes unconscious…..the other men whom rahul hired came.. n one of them said..in a nervous tone) SAAB SAAB..CHALO YAHAAN SE…. KAHIN POLICE NAA AAJAAYE… (rahul as he kneel down on the floor he was quite n looking at neha's body getting burn into fire… then suddenly they heard the sound of police jeep is coming the men anyhow took rahul wid them…..)

This part ends here….

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Posted: 18 years ago
oh wow.. stupid rahul.. cant believe he did that..
great update.. please continue..
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Posted: 18 years ago
Interesting part .. and thanks for the PM again :)
- Navi .
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW!!!...i have no other words coming to mind...IT WAS GREAT!!!...and...update soon...lol 👏

-Nisha ❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
recap of part 42 [ sanjay comes n forbids rahul's hand to slap neha....after some arguments.. the men whom rahul hired, one of them... hit sanjay wid a rod n then rahul put a big knife on sanjay's back... n he falls on the floor... neha shouts...n she thinks tht sanjay is dead.. so she decides to kill herself also... so she, makes a plan n agrees to rahul's proposal... when rahul takes her near his car, neha notices tht sanjay' s bike was also their...n she intentionlly provokes rahul's anger... by tearing the marriage certificate... n throwing it on rahul's face...rahul gets in blind rage...he throws neha on the ground.n after tht whn he notices tht the ground is wet by petrol he strikes the match stick on drops it on the floor...n neha's clothes catches the fire...on the same scene sanjay comes to his senses but he was unable to move n seeing neha. burning into fire he again losts his senses..then after sometimes rahul also becomes quite, but the men he hired..they takes him from the spot....]

now part 43 begins....[ the men rahul hired, they take him from the murder spot, sanjay was lying on the ground unconciously...his eyes were closed but tears were running through his eyes...n neha's body was burning and after sometimes rahul's car also catched the fire..so there was another blasts...everything got ruined...then the police jeep came at the spot... n desaai (who actually is wid rahul n mr mehra) came out of the jeep...n he was shocked to c this whole thing...n then... ]

Desaai;- OHH MY GODD....(n he says to one of the police constable) YE SAB...YE KYAA HAI.....( desai gets completly shocked...n when he looks at neha's body...4 a while he do not understands about what to do...but later they extinguishes the fire...n covers neha's dead body..then one of the police constable..looks at sanjay lying at a distance..being unconsicous n the constable says to desai) SIR!!!! VO DEKHIYE ...KOI VAHAAN GIRA HUA HAI...(n desai n other constables rush towards sanjay to help....one of the constables takes out the knife from his back...n thn desai checks his nervous n says to one of his constables] LAGTA HAI YE ZINDA HAI... CHALO ISKO HOSPITAL LEKE CHALO... (n they takes sanjay to the hospital, n desai says to two of his constables) AUR TUM DONO EK KAAM KARO... AMBULANCE BULAAO AUR USS DEAD BODY KO POSTMOTEM KE LIYE JALDI BHEJ DO.... [ then desaai n some other constables take sanjay to the hospital]....

[scene shifts to the present now the party which was going on is finished, it is 5:00 in the morning n pari, tulsi n sanjay are still in sanjay's room......pari was sitting on a sofa, by burrying her face wid both her hands, tulsi was standing n wid a shocked expression...n sanjay was telling them]

S:- to iss taraah rahul ne meri zindagi se sab kuch cheen liyaa...(then he sits near pari...n says)

S:- yehi vajey hai pari ki main nahi chahata kit tum usse shaadi karo,(after a pause sanjay says) meri neha ko usne zinda jalayaa. ab aap dono khud sochiye..ki ye kis hadd tak gir sakta hai... TULSI DAADI, RAHUL IS MENTALLY UNFIT...VO PAGAL HAI ...... (tulsi was completly shocked as well as pari, n then pari looks at sanjay wid tears in her eyes but having courage in her eyes she says) AB TUMHE FIKR KARNE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI SANJAY,,, HUM SAB TUMHARE SAATH HAI... aur rahul ko ab main sazaa dilwane mein main aur naani tumhare madat karenge... (sanjay looks at pari, wid surprised expression, n tears run through his eyes..n then tulsi says) T:- HAAN SANJAY!!!! har buraai ka ek anth hota hai....aur agar har din ke baad raat hoti hai... to hume nahi bhulnaa chahiye... ki har raat ke baad ek saveraa bhi hota hai...n she looks at the rising sun...from the window..

[scene shifts, it is the next day after the party…pari is now in her room getting ready, today she is going to join the office of viranis..she is looking at the mirror n thinking..the day she met rahul n whatever truth sanjay told her last night…thn somebody knocks at the door, pari turns back.. it was sanjay]

P:- are sanjay…andar aao.. (then sanjay comes to pari) S:- pari aaj tumhare office ka pehela din hai, main chahata hoon ki tum apni zindagi ek naye tarah se jeena shuru karo…main jantaa hoon yeh asaan nahi hai aur, jo baatein maine tumhe kal raat party mein bataiyi..mujhe vo sab nahi kehna chahiye tha, lekin main tumhe tumhari zindagi kharaab karte hue bhi nahi dekh sakta tha..P:- sanjay tum apne aap ko kisi baat ke liye dosh mat do, issmein tumhari koi bhul nahi hai..maine jisse pyaar kiya hai vo insaan hi galat hai..aur mujhe ye soch ke aapni kismat pe hansi aa rahi hai ki maine rahul ke vajay say apne gharwaalon se jhagra kiya, kitni galat thi main(as pari says this, a drop of tear runs through her cheeks, n sanjay takes her face wid both his hands n says) S:- dekho pari, main jaanta hoon ki tumhe iss waqt rahul se bicherne se bohot dukh ho raha hai, par ye dukh zindagi bhar ke takliff se bohot kam hai, main tumhe nahi kahoonga ki tum mat ro, balki main chahata hoon ki tum RO. Aur aapna saara dard inn aasunon ke zariye beh jaane do,(then pari hugs sanjay n she breaks down in to tears n says) P:- MUJHSE YE NAHI HOTA SANJAY!!! JISE MAINE ITNAA PYAAR KIYAA HAI, MAIN KAISE USSE NAFRAT KARUNGI, (then sanjay looks at pari) S:- pari, main sirf itnaa chahtaa tha ki tum sach ke saath kadhi ho, main chahata tha ki, tum ek galat insaan se shaadi karke apni zindagi khraab naa karlo … tumhe samjhaana mera farz tha..ab aage tumhari marzi(he says this n leaves, n pari looks towards him)

[scene shifts in the office, to rahul, gataum n karan]

K:- hume jo ye nayaa project mila hai, main chahata hoon ki iss project ko rahul aur lakshay dono milke sambhaale… G:- HAAN karan.. ye sahi kaha tumne…. Aur iss tarah lakshay bhi office ka kaam seekh legaa.. what do u say rahul.. (rahul throws an attitude an says) R:- PATA NAHI SIR… usse kya kya sikhaana parega.. K:- Usse sirf uska kaam samjhana hai tumhe rahul.. other than that..he knows how to work.. (rahul passes a smiles, n says) R:- dekhte hai karan sir..(n then rahul leaves the office room, n then karan n gatuam both looks at the door n says) K:- ye larka bohot overconfident hai.. G:- haan karan mujhe bhi aisa lagta hai..acchaa hua.. papa ne pari aur iski shaadi ke liye mana kar diya..

[scene shifts…it's afternoon time n karan was sitting in his office when somebody knocks the door] K:- (karan was looking in2 the file n he says) YES come in.. (n pari enters, n karan gets surprised to c her) K:- are pari beta.. andar aao.. (n she sits) K:- kyaa baat hai tum yahaan office mein.. P:- haan mama.. mama vo baat ye hai ki, aap to jaante hai ki main apni graduation pass kar chuki hoon.. so now I want to start working, (karan smiles n replies) ye to bohot acchi baat hai beta ki tum khud ko financially independent banana chahati ho. I really appreciate you.. (n after tht karan agrees to give her job in that same office)

[scene shifts as pari comes out of karan's room, in the corridor rahul comes in front of her, pari now looking at him wid anger, n rahul is still thinking tht pari loves him, n he goes near her ]
R:- pari!! Main jaanta hoon tum kal raat, sanjay aur mere jhagre se bohot pareshaan thi, aur main binaa kuch bole vahan se chala gaya tha, (pari was quietly looking into his eyes) vo actually mera jhagraa usse mobile phone ke vajey se hua tha, main phone pe baat kar rahaa tha, aur usske dhaaka maarne se mere haath se phone gir gaya tha…that's all.. aur koi baat nahi thi, (thn pari breaks her silence n says) P:- NEHA !! ko jaante ho rahul…(rahul then suddenly gets shocked and says) R:- KON NEHA…MAIN KISI NEHA KO NAHI JAANTA..(he gets nervous) P:- are maine to sirf naam liyaa, tab hi tumhari aisi halat hogayi hai..agar vo ZINDA HOTI MR RAHUL MEHRA..TO TUMHAARA KYAA HOTA. Haan mujhe kal raat sanjay ne sab kuch bata diyaa hai, aur tumhe jhoot bolte hue sharam nahi aati…R:- pari meri baat suno, P:- BAS!! AUR KUCH NAHI SUNNA MUJHE..(then tears comes to her eyes n she says) maine tumhe bohot pyaar kiya tha rahul..but u know wat u don't deserve it!!! (she says this n was about to go when she again turns back n says) ..AUR HAAN!! Ek baat to main batana bhul hi gayi..aaj se apne din ginna shuru karo mr rahul mehra…kyunki ab main tumhe jail ke sallakhon ke peeche pohonchake hi rahungi….N I MEAN IT… (she says this n leaves, rahul is nervous but also very angry n he says to himself) JIS SACH KO MAINE PARI SE CHUPAKE RAKHNAA CHAHA.. vo sach usse sanjay ne bata diya hai….MAIN USSE CHODUNGA NAHI…HE HAVE TO PAY 4 THIS…

(this part ends here….)
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part duyus plz cont soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
Great updates :)
COntinue pleaase !
& Thaanks for the PM
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Posted: 18 years ago
you should sell your fanfic...you could be come rich, famous and sucessful all at the same time. 😆 Continue soon. 👏
-Nisha ❤️
Edited by nisha921 - 18 years ago

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