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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Gr8 part... poor angad n kripa... i wonder hu he is tlkin to???

thanx nehagupta

Originally posted by: tava

great part continue sooon 👏

thanx tava keep reading all and thanx for the comments😃
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#32
Previously:

The scene shifts to Angad's house he is talking to someone in his office and is very dark

Coming up: Who do you think Angad is talking to?

Part 5: The Mystery

A- Arre mujhe kya pata tha ki woh Kripa ussi ghar mein rehti hai aur agar main jhanta tha ki Eklavya bhi ussi khandan ka hai tho kya tumhe lagta ki mein usse bhi dosti karta (laughs)

??- Yehi tho tumhe karna tha jab log tumhe vishwas karne lage thab sab paise chooralo aur Prithvi ke sar pe dhalo. Phir tum bach jao ge aur mein bhi. Vaise bhi lota behta hai adopted son

A- Vaise bhi tumhe uss ghar ka kya rishta hai

??- Rishta hai lekin abhi nahin bataoonga mein baad mein bataoonga

Angad leaves the room (who do u think the person is cuz i am not goning to reveal him as yet)

A- (in his thoughts) Pata nahin uss ghar ka kya rishta hai iska bas yehi jhanta hoon ki woh paise mujhe choorane parege aur mujhe aisa scene banana parega ki Prithvi pas jaye aur mein aur woh nahin

The scene shifts to Kripa's house

K- Kya karabee hai us mein, Angad bohat acha ladka hai aur mein yeh baat khanti haoon

G- Kaise khanti hoon, kitna jhanti ho tum uss lardke se

K- Zada nahin...Lekin usne mera humiliation bacha ya tha

G- Jho bhi ho mein behes nahin karna jhati samjhi

Kripa goes away angrily. Scene shifts to Angad. Angad is walking to Prithvi

A- Prithvi!!

Prithvi looks back and right in front of him is Angad

P- **** off

A- Prithvi mujhe pata hai ki maine bohat bharee ghalti ki hai humari dosti torne ke liye

P- Tho kehna kya jhate ho

A- Yahi ki i want to be friends again

P- Kya...Angad tumhe pata nahin hai aaj tumne kaisi kushi di hai mujhe

A- (in his thoughts) Ok mission accomplished dosti ki hai aab mujhe Prithvi ko yakeen dhelana hai ki Kripa ek bohat achi lardki hai(smiles evily) (to Prithvi) Tho hum chale

P- Kahan

A- Kripa se milne ke liye

P- Nahin dheko mein Man u ko kitna nafrat karta hoon sarak pe mein man u t-shirt pa sakta hoon lekin usske ghar kabhi nahin jaoonga

A- Tho chale

Prithvi looks at Angad. Angad has this real big smile on his face

P- What ever chale

A- Yes...Lekin tumhe ghanti bajani paregi

P- Woh kyun

A-Professional (he bends his two fingers) jealousy

5 minutes later them two reach Kripa's house. Angad hides and Prithvi does the doorbell. Inside Kripa is reading a book the doorbell rings and she shouts...

K- I'll get it

She runs down stairs, she opens the door

K- Prithvi!! What a pleasant surprise andhar tho aaho

Prithvi grabs her by the hand and takes her outside

K- Btw sexy jacket yo

P-(Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh)

Angad comes out and they all three run

P- Tumhe woh saab kehni ki kaya zaroorat thi

K- Zaroorat thi

P- Lekin kyun

Kripa walks around him and hits him with her bum everytime she talks

K- Kyun ki...agar mein...yeh nahin...karti tho...mama ko lage ga ki...hum dono lar rahe hai

P- Can you stop that

K- If you say so

They all laugh. Kripa looks at Angad she looks at his smile and melts a song called Thare Vaste plays in the background from Shakalaka Boom Boom

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Mere dil mein kya hai kya hai tera pyaar hai

Tujhe milne ko humesha bekarar hai

Mere chen ki manzil jana tere paas hai

Mere dharkan mein tera hi ehsaas hai

Door door nahin jhana nahin jhana nahin jhana

Na mujhe tharpana tharpana tharpana

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Tujhe paake mit thi hai mere tanhaiya

Mere kwaabon mein rehti hai tere rubaaiya

Mere aahon mein kya hai tere hi kawahishe

aah poori karde karde mere parmahishe

Tera mera har charaha hai mere mere har baat mein

Tuhi tuhi basti hai basti hai mere jasbaad mein

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Love you i love you jaana tu hi armaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Thare vaste dhedenge jaan ve

Thare vaste dil hai qurbaan ve

Kripa gets out of her thoughts and thinks what am i doing what if mama finds out

Coming up: What is Angad going to do if Kripa does not exept his friendship cuz of her mum

xxAnuxx

Edited by Anu1993 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
hehe great part 😆 😆 lol kripa's funny.....continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
u know wen the guy said blame it on Eklavya he was ment to say Prithvi soz guys
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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#36

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

hehe great part 😆 😆 lol kripa's funny.....continue soon

thanx rach
thanx moni

Originally posted by: tava

great part continue soon 👏 👏 👏

thanx tava
xxAnuxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
Previously:

Kripa gets out of her thoughts and thinks what am i doing what if mama finds out.

This Part:

What is Angad going to do if Kripa does not exept his friendship cuz of her mum.

Part 6

The Kidnap

Kripa is in town doing shopping. While she is walking sha bumps in to...

K- Arre Mishti tum London se kab aayi

M- Bas kal hi

K- Aur tumhara pati Sahil Kaisa hai

M- Woh bilkul teek hai aur guess what sirf ek hafte pehle mera aur Sahil ka ek naya mehman aaya tha

K- Sach!!! Congratulations

M- Teek hai main chalti hoon u take care

K- I will

Reality

D- Main kabhi Mishti anuty ko pasand nahin karta tha. You know she is one of those people who **** you off

A- Dhruv

Angad grabs hold of Dhruv's ear they all laugh and the story goes on...

Flashback

While Kripa is waving goodbye Angad comes up to her and taps her on the head. Sha looks back and sees no one there. So she keeps on walking and some dude accidently pushes her she trips and has her eyes closed. When she opens them Angad is in front of her carrying her.

K- Tum!!!

A- Haan main aur kaun

K- Mujhe neeche utaro

A- Kyun

K- Kyun ki maine kaha!!!

A- Teek hai karta hoon. Itna gusaa haune ki koi zaroorat nahin

Angad let goes of Kripa and she falls on the floor

Reality

D- OOOOH! Aap dhono uss waqt kitne close the na

A- Haan but i could not help my self

Flashback

K- Angad!!!

Kripa gets up and runs after him. Angad keeps running and says

A- You run like a man

Kripa looks at him very angrily as if she is about to kill him. While them two are running they reach thi very dark place. Kripa holds Angad's hand tightly. Amgad looks at his hand

A- (Thinking) Agar iski vaje se mera mission possible nahin hua tho mera kya hoga yeh sirf main jhanta hoon. Yeh mera haath kyun fhar rahi hai. (To Kripa) Mera haath choro

K- Lekin Angad hum yahaan ek jhage main hai jahan sirf hum doh hai kher..

Kripa let goes of his hand

A- (Thinking) Phew!

Someone grabs Kripa by the arm and gives her an injection to make her go to sleep

A- Thankgod tum aagaye varna pata nahin kya hota.

??- Kare kare mu kyun dhek rahe ho jao

A- Jee sir

??-Aur mujhe sir mat bhulao main koi sao(100) saal ka bhuda nahin hoon.

Reality

D- Papa aap kise baat kar rahe the. Mere ser main chakar aah rahe hai ,phir kya hua...

Flashback

Angad leaves the place with Kripa thier. All of this makes Angad realise that why he is doing all this and for his boss. Angad vows to find out what is the whole secret and truth behind what ever is happening.

A- Woh adami mujhe yeh saab karne ke liye itna paisa dheta hai. Aur mujhe paiso ki sak zaroorat hai.

Angad leaves and goes clubbing with his mates and sees people messing around with his sister Tanu (frm KGGK)

Reality

Dhruv- Papa vaise aaj Tanu bua kahan hai

K- Beta jab tum pandra saal ke the..

A tear falls out of her eyes

Dhruv- Mama kya hua

A- Beta Tanu iss duniya mein nahin hai

Dhruv- Kya. Agge batao na

Flashback

A- Ahhy. Mere behen ko chordo

A dude comes in front of him

D- Tu kaun hai. Hum jho bhi kare tumse kya hai. Yeh apun ka life hai aur tu iss life se door raho

Tanu runs up to Angad and hugs him

T- Bhaiya!!!

Reality

D- Papa are you going to beat the crap out of them

A- Hum kal batayenge aab suanjao

D- This is not fair humesha kal kal khete rehta hai, kher its ok you can tell me tommoro

Flashback next part coming up:

Angad beats the heck out of the dudes and says no to his boss for the first time. He makes friends (propaly this time not for a purpose) with Kripa anf instead of hurting her he will protect her all her life

xxAnuxx

Edited by Anu1993 - 18 years ago
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Previously:

What is Angad going to do if Kripa does not exept his friendship cuz of her mum.

A dude comes in front of him

D- Tu kaun hai. Hum jho bhi kare tumse kya hai. Yeh apun ka life hai aur tu iss life se door raho

Tanu runs up to Angad and hugs him

T- Bhaiya!!!

Reality

D- Papa are you going to beat the crap out of them

A- Hum kal batayenge aab suanjao

D- This is not fair humesha kal kal khete rehta hai, kher its ok you can tell me tommoro

Angad beats the heck out of the dudes and says no to his boss for the first time. He makes friends (propaly this time not for a purpose) with Kripa and instead of hurting her he will protect her all her life

Part 7:

Angad picks up a rock...

Reality

D-AHHHHHHHH Papa thank god aap aaj zinda hai pata nahin kya hota

Angad looks at Dhruv in an unmannered. Dhruv stares back at him

A- Tum abhi hatjao varna main tumhari jeeb keech loonga

D- Main aapse dartha hoon bohat darta hoon kyun ki kahin aap bhi pathar mere ser par marde Phir kya hua doh theen thapad tho milne chaiye na (He laughs)

Flashback

Back at Angad's house Naina is wooried for him

N- Itni raat ho chuki hai angad aur Tanu abhi tak bapaas nahin aaye hai

D- Don't worry woh ghar aah jaye ga

Naina puts the television on. Flashes comes on Naina's face after she saw what was on television. A tear feel out of her eyes

D- Naina kya hua aab kyun ro rahi ho

Dilip looks at the television screen and flashes come on his face too

D- Kya yehi humara behta hai jisne humne janam diya tha

Naina looks at Dilip and gets up angrily

N- Yeh sab apki vaje se hua hai zaroor humari shaadi ek samjoda tha lekin iske matlab nahin hai ki aap humesha mere mamta ko tukrao. Apne na kabhi Angad ko behta mana na kabhi use vishwas kia. Aur yeh sirf mein jhanti hoon abhi abhi main us ke liye mamta ka pyaar de rahi thi bareshaan thi main. Lekin apne kaha tha ki don't worry woh aah jaye ga. Sach humesha karva hota hai. Humesha doosre ke moo se sumte aaye hai aap aab aapko mere moo se suna parega kee Angad apka behta nahin hai mera nahin hai balki...

Dilip slaps her Thwak

Reality

D- Ha apki mother India ko thapad mila vaise aap kiske bete ho

A- Tumara (mocking about)

D- Teek hai tho main aap ko bhi thapad dheoon

A- Dhruv you touch me and your dead

D- I know iss liye main kar raha hoon main apka behta nahin ban na jhata hoon aap bohat daroni ho

K- Dhruv

D- Sorry mum

K- That's better

D- Phir kya hua

Flashback

D- Ahinda kabhi mat kehna ki Angad humara behta nahin hai. Tumne kabhi socha hai kya beete gee uspar agar usko pata chalgaya ki woh humara behta nahin hai

N- Achi tarah se jhanti hoon mein ki aap kitna pyaar mujhse karte hai. Apne kabhi mujhko patni ka darja nahin diya naa hi mujhe kabhi apka patni mana

Naina leaves slamming the door behind her

D- Kahan jaa rahi ho

N- (Shouts from behind) Police station aahna hai tho aaho koi nahin rokhe ga apko

Dilip follows her

When Naina reaches the police station she goes to her uncle who works there

N-Uncle jee kya Angad kee bail ho sakti hai

U- Jee nahin is ke liye tho court main jhana parega kyun ki angad ne ek bohat barah jurm kia hai. Mihir Virani ke behte Karan Virani ko marah tha usse pathar ke saat. Kyun ki Laran apne bhai ke liye lar raha tha Harsh

N- Teek hai kya hum usse mil sakte hai

U- Jee haan

Naina goes up to Angad behind bars. She asks if she can go inside the police said yes she went inside the jail where Angad was. Angad sees her mum and dad

A-Mama Papa maine kuch nahin kia mera yakin kee jeey

Naina slaps Angad Thwak

Reality

D- Hahahahahahahahaha dheka maa maine kaha tha zaroor papa ko thapad mile ga phir kya hoga dadi apko ghar se bhar nikalde gi hahahahahahahahahaha

Flashback

N- Tune kuch nahin kia (softly) tune kuch nahin kia!!!!!

Naina slaps him again Thwak

Reality

D- Hahahahahahahahahahahaha papa ko phir se thapad laga

A- Dhruv trust me I will grind you

D- Tho karlo kaun rokh raha hai

A- Actually tu hamesha hasda tha kyun ki mujhe thapad mila aab main tujhe thapad doonga aab pata chal jayega

Angad chases Dhruv round the whole house and trys o hit him

A- Bas bas (breathing in and out deaply) main aur nahin chal sakta

D- Bhude ho gaye hai aap

A- Yeh sach nahin hai main abhi bhi utna sexy ho jitna pehle tha

D- You and sexy Pishhhhhhhhhh what eva phir kya hua

N- Kya um vahi behte ho jisne maine janam diya nahin kyun ki woh Angad kabhi kuch ghalat nahin kar sakta tha. Ajanak itni ghatiya insaan kyun ban rahe ho

D- Naina shant ho jao sab kuch teek ho jaye ga

Dilip and Naina leave. Angad sees Kripa. Kripa looks at him and goes to her

K- Angad (crys) Tum salako ke peeche kya har rahe ho

A- Woh main Karan Virani ko marah pathar ke saat

Flashes come on her face

K- Angad miujhe nahin pata tha kit um aisi ghandi…

A- Bas! Mere mama ne bhi mujhe tane di hai main nahin jhata ki koi mere itne kareeb hokar hbi mujhe daate

K- Main kehne vali thi ki main tumse poora barosaa karti hoon aur aaj se vaada karti hoon ki main tumhara saat humesha doongi dosti ki khatir

Reality

D- Aap dhono tho zaada hi close aah chuke the

A- Chalo aab raat ho chuki hai aab Dhruv son jao

D- Papa apko pata hai ki sab log mujhe college mein kya bulate hai mujhe

A- Kya

D- DK see Dhruv Khanna, AK for Angad Khanna and yeh tho sabse hasne vali hai KK for Kripa Khanna

Angad fakes to laugh

Coming up: Will Angad beable to get out of jail find out in the next part of EPSB

xxAnuxx

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Edited by Anu1993 - 18 years ago
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nice part continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Previously:

K- Angad mujhe bilkul yakeen nahion aahraha hai...

A- Bas! Mere mama ne bhi mujhe tane di thi main nahin jhata ki koi mere itne kareeb hokar hbi mujhe daate

K- Main kehne vali thi ki main tumse poora barosaa karti hoon aur aaj se vaada karti hoon ki main tumhara saat humesha doongi dosti ki khatir

Part 8:

Kripa's phone rang

K- Hello

??- Hey

K- Kaise ho tum

??- Main teek hoon

K- Kab aah rahe ho tum

??-Woh aaj

K- Aaj? Tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahin batayia

??- Arre baba teek hai i am sorry

K- You should be

Kripa disconnects the phone off

A- Kis ka phone tha

K- Angad woh mere sabse ache dost ka phone tha

A- Kab se jhanti ho uss se

K- Jab se mein phanj saal ki thi tab se woh actually jab yeh yahan iss sheher main aahyi thi Mumbai mein tho maine iske saat apni dosti ki thi

A- Oh. Aur...

K- No more questions please

Kripa leaves.

A- (thinks) Kash mera bhi koi aisa dost hota

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Next day Angad was sitting down like a bad boy

A- Hai Bhagwan please mujhe bachao

The police comes in

P- Apki bail ho chuki hai

A- Kya

The police leaves

A- Thank you god I love you

Angad goes outside he stops...

A- Excuse me kya aap bata sakte hai ki meri bail kisne kar wai

P- Kisi Kripa naam ki ladki ne

A- Thank you

Angad goes outside smiling when he hears someone scream

??- Mera bag. Chor chor pakaro usse

Angad looks at the girl properly

A- Kripa?

Angad runs after the person..Mean while back at Kripa...

K- Stupid lying jerk. Mujhe kya pata tha ki flirting karte karte woh mera bag chura le ga

Kripa sees Angad coming back

K- Angad mera bag

A- Woh le gaya

Kripa sits down with a frown on her face and fakes to sobs

K- Main apne bag ko miss kar rahi hoon. Angad tumhe pata hai ki mere zindagi sirf mera bag, makeup aur shoes hai agar mere watch bhi ko jaye tho bhi mujhe itna dard nahin hota hai

A- Kripa ab bholna band bhi karo aur ankhen bhi band karo

Kripa closes her eyes

A- Ab kolo

Kripa opens her eyes and in front of her is her purse

K- Aaah Angad mera purse.. Ek minute phir woh kya tha jho tumne abhi kaha

A- Just having fun Kripa. Can't a guy have some fun in his life

K- What eva

A- I dont no whats with you girls and the words what eva. Tum larkia bhi na woh Kabhi Kushi Kabhi Gham film mein bhi aisa kaha tha uss Kareena ne.

A/K- Hate her

They both laugh

K- Tho agar tum Kareena ko nahin pasand karte ho tho kis se

A- Priyanka Chopra

K- Really

A- Tum itni excited kyun hoti ho

K- Kyun ki meri favourite Actor female Priyanka Chopra hai

A- Cool so we got the exact same personality...but you know what they say Opposites attract I am getting bored with you already. Yeh jhankar ki humari pasand bohat milti hai

K- Ummm...Angad

A- Yes

K- Do you have a girl friend?

A- Yes i do

K- Oh

A- Why

K- Cause i was going to ask you out

A-(thinks) ****

K- But its kinda ur loss. Because some people actually think i am attractive

A- Yeah people who are quite young

K- Kya

A- Woh ladka dekh rahi ho

K- Yes whats wrong with him

A- He is 5 years yoanger than you

K- Hoooooooooooooo Oh my gosh urgh he is ugly then

A- Aur woh tujhe dekh raha tha

Angad keeps laughing. Kripa pushes him. Angad is still grabbing on to Kripa so they roll down the stairs together. Angad is on top of her and she is on the bottom. Kripa looks at Angad and he looks at her. They have a romatic scene together the song, Hey Shona plays in the back ground from Ta Ra Rum Pum

Tumhe pata tho hoga

Tumhi pe main fida hoon

Tumhe hai jabse chaha

Hawaaon mein udta hoon

Tumhi mere har pal mein

Tum aaj mein tum kal mein

Hey shona, hey shona

Hey shona, hey shona

Tumhe pata tho hoga

Ki mere dil mein kya hai

Chalo kahe deti hoon

Kabhi nahin jo kaha hai

Tumhi mere har pal mein

Tum aaj mein tum kal mein

Hey shona, hey shona

Hey shona, hey shona

Tum jo ghusa bhi karo tho

Mujhe pyaar lagta hai jaane kyun

Main tho jo bhi kahoon

Tumhe ikraar lagta hai jaane kyun

Choro bhi yeh adhaa

Paas aakhe zaara

Baat dil ki koi kehdo na

Hey shona, hey shona

Hey shona, hey shona

Saree dhuniya kho chorake

Maine chaha hai ek tumhe

Maine zindagi se manga

Hai tho sirf manga hai ek tumhe

Ab issi chaha mein

Ab issi raha main

Zindagi bhar mere tum hona

Hey shona, hey shona

Hey shona, hey shona

Tumhe pata tho hoga

Tumhi pe main fida hoon

Tumhe hai jabse chaha

Haawaon mein udta hoon

Tumhi mere har pal mein

Tum aaj mein tum kal mein

Hey shona, hey shona

Hey shona, hey shona

Shona, hey shona

hey shona, hey shona

The music stops playing and them two are still looking at each other then Kripa remembers that Angad has a girl friend

K- Get off of me

Kripa pushes him off of her. After they got up Kripa brushed all the dirt off her Angad did the same

K- Kya mein tumse kuch pooch sakti hoon

A- Haan poochon

K- Tumhari girlfriend ka naam kya hai

A- Mere girl friend ka naam hai...

Coming up : What will be the name of Angad's girl friend and who will she be find out in Part 9

xxAnuxx

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