EPSB- Angad n Neevs punishmentPt-11 Pg-9 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Excellent part!!!! I like the switch between flashbacks n reality, dats kool!!!!

thanx rach my sis thought it was cool aswell

Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part
i love druv's dialogue D- (mocks Angad) 'Dhruv zada over react maat karo' Over reacting mein nahin aap kar raha tha, Papa over react tho aap kar rahe the. Carry on mujhe aur batao

u spell dhruv with an h not with out one and thanx i liked that dialogue too i thought it was kinda funny

Originally posted by: brainychild92

awww... love ar first site or just respect for women.. either U GO BOY!!! that guys is her friend. rite?

continue soooonnn

i thought vivan was the kid's name...

no just as rach said

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

hey hun.....vivaans the dude who plays dhruv

vivaan is the person hu plays dhruv and bout the guy u have to find out 😈 i dont want to spill anything out 😈 anyways thanx

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hi
just read yr ff n is too gud
cont. soon

thanx so much i am touched

Originally posted by: tava

great part continue soon 👏 👏 👏

thanx
thanx for commenting people
xxAnuxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part anu!!!!!!cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Previously:

Flash Back

Kripa runs away but somebody stops her. His feet are shown, then his eyes, his lips and then his face.

Part 3

Flash back

The person is Eklavya (Kripa's brother)

E-Kripa yeh kya kar rahi ho mafi tum kyun mang rahi ho. Tumne kuch ghalat tho nahin kia.

K- Lekin bhaiya

E- Tum dhono idhar aaho

Prithvi and Angad walk to Eklavya

E- Mafi yeh nahin mange gi tum dhono mange ge. Mafi mango

A- Kripa….mujhe maaf karo. Mein yeh sab karna nahin jhata tha, lekin mein aurtho ki izat karta hoon isliye. Lekin mera dost kabhi yeh nahin maan sakta

E- Dhekho jho bhi tum dhono ka naam hai, tum dhono ke paas dhoosri aurate hain. Unse koi problem nahin hai, phir Kripa se kya problem hai,

A- Mera naam Angad hai mujhe Kripa se koi problem nahin hai. Aur iska naam hai Prithvi, Mein inkhi taraf se mafi mangta hoon

E- That is not done Prithvi ko bhi mafi mangna parega varna mera hath uth jaye ga

P- Tho..tumhe kya Lagta hai mein tumse dartha hoon oooh dhekho mere hath kamb rahe hai oooh mujhe bohat dar lag raha hai (Prithvi laughs)…aur haan agar tum mujhe paise bhi dhete tho bhi mein kabhi mafi nahin mangta hoon

E- Teek hai iske liye tumhe bohat bhari pehga

And before you know Eklavya punched Prithvi. Prithvi fell on the floor and with a jump he got up and Them two had a little stare at each other and then started beating each other up as if they were in a wrestling ring. On one hand Angad was trying to stop Prithvi and on the other hand Kripa was screaming her head off

K- Bhaiya yahan se jhaiye please yeh sab band karo

Reality

D- Mum mein samaj sakta hoon ki aap uss waqt kaise mehsoos kar rahe the, aap uss waqt roh rahe the?

K- Haan lekin…..

D- Lekin mere paas tho koi bhai behen nahin hai iss liye mein poori thara samaj nahin pa raha hoon

A tear fell out of Dhruv's eyes

D- Anyways carry on (crying)

A- Aww bechara

Flashback

Kripa kept constantly crying. While Eklavya was fighting Prithvi on the front Kripa kept hitting him on his back with her bag. Prithvi pushed her

P- Chal hat

Kripa went flying back but Angad ran and grabbed her

A- Prithvi you *******

Reality

D- Haw papa apne ghali kadi. I am ashamed of you. Arre mujhko hamesha kehte ho yeh na karo woh na karo

K- Woh hai is liye kyun ki humne tumhe ache diye hui sanskaar diye hai

D- Tho aap dhono ke maa baap ne apko kuch bhi nahn kaha. Jab jahe yeh karo jab jhahe who karo

Flashback

Angad ran it and joined hands with Eklavya. Those two never stopped; after Prithvi was beaten up he was so badly injured he had tp be admitted to hospital. The principal came

Prin-Yeh kya ho raha hai mere college mein . Guards, guards. In ko hospital mein admit karo. Now as for you to…….tum dhono ek mahine ke liye iss college mein kabhi nahin ayenge samje. You two are excluded.

Eklavya and Angad looked at each other shook hands and hugged each other

E- Thanks buddy Angad tumne tho mere jaan hi bachali

A- Thanks tumhe nahin mujhe kehna chaiye agar tumhare liye nahin tha tho mein kabhi realize bhi nahin karta ki Prithvi din raat kya karta hai

Kripa was looking at them both in confusion

E- Haan Kripa mere behen mujhe pata hai ki tum kya soch rahi ho

K- Kya

A- Yehi ki um dho ek doosre se itni achi tarha kaise jhante hai

K- Haan

E- Actually hum dhono nursery ek saat jahte the. Anagd mera sabse acha dost hai

A- Haan Kripa iss liye mein tumhe har takleef se bachata aiyan

E- Arre haan Angad tumne kabhi Prithvi ko bataya kyun nahin ki tum Kripa se koi pyaar vyaar nahin karte ho balki you know what na

A- Kher main ghar chalta hoon

E- Nahin tum aise kaise jha sakte ho mein aur Kripa tumhare saat chalet hai

Kripa, Angad and Eklavya were walking back to there homes together

Coming up: What talks will go on in between Angad and Kripa

xxAnuxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part anu 👏 👏 👏
angad n eklavya knew eachother lol 😆
n angad punched prithvi
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yes! he is in the hospital. no, he will want revenge..


continue soonnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 part anu 👏 👏 👏
angad n eklavya knew eachother lol 😆
n angad punched prithvi
cont. soon

Thanx i know u feel bad bpou prithvi gettin beaten up by his best frend sorry but spicing it up now

Originally posted by: brainychild92

yes! he is in the hospital. no, he will want revenge..


continue soonnn

lol thanx lol
thanx neha
thanx everyone for commenting lov ya loads 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: johnrocks96

great part anu!!!!!!cont soon 👏

soz about not quoting u b4 anyways thanx jaspreet 😃
xxAnuxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Previously:

Flash Back

A- Kher main ghar chalta hoon

E- Nahin tum aise kaise jha sakte ho mein aur Kripa tumhare saat chalte hai

Kripa, Angad and Eklavya were walking back to there homes together

Coming up: What talks will go on in between Angad and Kripa

Part 4-The talk between A and K

A- Tho kahan rehthi ho tum

K- Umm.....

A- Kya iss ke liye soch na pare ga

K- Nahin woh dukaan jhante ho jahan sabseeyaan (vegtables) kareed the hain

A- Haan

K- Uske samne ek mansion hai vahan main rehthi hoon

A- Ooh, tho tum mansion mein rehthi ho. bohat barah hoga na

K- Haan barah hai lekin mein nahin jhathi hoon ki koi iss ghar ko nazar lag jaye

A- Haan lekin tareef (praise) tho karni paregee

K- Haan woh tho hai

A- (To Eklavya) Teek hai mein tumhe milne ahoonga aur ghar bhi dhekloo ga

K- Woh tho nahin ho sakta

A- (To Kripa) Kyun?

K- Woh issliye hai ki har friday Eklavya bhaiya dubai jahte hain

A- Woh kyun?

K- Kyunki bhaiya vahan job karte hai. Issliye tum bhaiya ko weekend mein nahin mil sakte.

A- Oh thats not fair. Eklavya tumne batayaa kyun nahin?

E- Because it was a surprise aur mein jhata tha ki Kripa hee tumahe batayegi samje

A- Haan samaj gaya

K- Tho angad tum job kare ho

A- Haan mere papa family buisness samalte hain. Aur ussne mere liye ek office save ki hai. Main vahi mein kaam karta hoon. What about you?

K- Me?

A- Yes you?

K- Mein kaam nahin karti hoon mere papa kehte hain ki, betiyaan family buisness nahin karte.

A- Oh,

K- Lekin hum dost tho baan sakte hai aab hum dho ek doosre ke bhare mein khafi jahnte hai. Mujhse dosti karoge

A- Haan

K- Great

E- Yeh kya hai tum dhono tho aise baat kar rahe hai jaise ki main yahan nahin hoon

Reality

D-Bohat lambhi conversation thi pata nahin aap dhono kaise bored nahin hui kyun ki mujhe sone ka maaan kar raha hai

K- Badmash tu chup re pata nahin tumhari zuban se aur kya niklega. Agar dubara kuch kaha tho zuban keech lu gi main tumahari

D- Mother apne just chill gana suna hai

K- Haan

D- Tho aap bhi zarah sa chilled ho jayiye....oh haan mein tho bhul gaya tha aap tho aab bhudi ho gayi hai

K- Dhruv!!!!!

D- Sorry sorry (laughing) mein iss lambhi kahani mein swaad la raha tha, phir kya hua

K- Phir...

Angad and Kripa laugh

A- Anyways main chalta hoon mera ghar tho raste mein hai

E- Nahin Angad mein aur meri pyaari behen tumhe aise nahin jhane de ge. Kyun nahin Kripa?

K- Haan bhaiya teek hee tho keh rahe hai. Chalo main aur bhaiya tumhe ghar valo se milate hain

A- Ok it's fine with me

A comes along with K and E to their house. They come inside the house. When the family see Angad they all freak out. Gayatri comes up to Angad

G- Oh Angad Khanna. It is nice to meet you again

K- Maa aap Angad ko jante hain?

G- Haan dharasal Angad ke papa tumhare papa se nafrat karte hain

K- Kya matlab hai aap ka?

G- Mera matlab hai ki Angad aur usske papa Dilip Khanna humare rivals hai

Surya comes down the stairs.

S- Gayatri ghar pe kaun aiyaa hai

G- Tum yahan aaho. Jhatka lag jayega

Surya comes downstairs and gets the shock of his life

S- Yeh yahan kya kar raha hai

K- Papa yeh tho Eklavya bhaiya ka dost hain

S- Acha Eklavya bhaiya ka.........Tum dhono sunlo aaj ke baad isse ghar mein koi Khaana rishtedhar nahin aahyega

Reality

D- Aap dhono aab kaise ek saat hai jab ki aap ke parivaar ek doosre se nafrat karte the

K- Nahin Dhruv hum aap nahin aab bataonge varna surprise kaise re ga

Angad leaves, Kripa runs up stairs and Eklavya gets ready to go to dubai for his job. After Eku packs up he goes to Kripa

E- Kripa tum.....

K- Main roh rahi nahin hoon

E- Tum teek tho ho.....Mera matlab hai ki tum dhono ki dosti hui ek ghanta bhi nahin hua aur toot gaya

K- Haan bhaiya but i don't care. Main mama ki baat sunogee. aur mujhe lagta hain ki tumhe bhi mama ki baat sun ni chaiye

E- Teek hai lekin chalta hoon

K- Bye

Kripa goes up to Eklavya and hugs him

K- Jhaldi anna

E- Teek hai

The scene shifts to Angad's house he is talking to someone in his office and is very dark

Reality

D- Haaww papa what were you up to

A- Woh mein kal bataoon ga tu aab sonja

D- Teek hai

Coming up: Who do you think Angad is talking to?

xxAnuxx

Edited by Anu1993 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Gr8 part... poor angad n kripa... i wonder hu he is tlkin to???

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