EPSB- Angad n Neevs punishmentPt-11 Pg-9

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Anupreet

@Anu1993

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

Here is the banner i made it hope u like the banner

Hi everyone u all shud know me Anu hu does Dil Hi Dil Mein anyways i am making a new ff it is called Ek pyaara sa bhandhan.

This story is all about Kripa and Angad and the tribulations them 2 face. This story is set now but i am telling it as though it was 20 years ago i am sure u guys wud understand wat i have put here anyways:

Characters:

Angad:Now in 2007 he is 40 years old. He lives with kripa and his son who is 20. 23 yrs ago Ak got married.

Kripa:She is 38 now lives with Angad in the Kum-Kum house.

AK's son: Vivaan frm KK: He is 20 and is in love with Antara. 3 yrs before he was born AK got married.

Antara:She is 18 and wat ever is happening between these two happened between AK sirf thorak sa fark.

You will find out wat has happened in these 20 odd years as the story goes along. I am sure u all will have read She loves him by Gaurav''s love. This is like that but a lot of difference in it. Hope u will enjoy this ff as much as Dil Hi Dil Mein.

Intro-Page 1

Part 1- Page 2- How A and K are together 20 years after

Part 2- Page 3- They meet

Part 3- Page 4- Attack Prithvi and The mystery guy

Part 4- Page 5- The Trouble

Part 5- Page 5 The Mystery

Part 6- Page 6 The Kidnap

Part 7 - Page 6 The Arrest

Part 8 - Page 7 Romance

Part 9 - Page 8- Introduction of ...

Part 10- Page 8- The wild ride of Angad and Neev

Part 11- Page 9- Angad and Neevs punishment

Edited by Anu1993 - 18 years ago

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shraddha

@guju_girl1

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

can't wait for the first part continue soon 😊

Edited by tava - 18 years ago

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Rutu

@berkeleygirl818

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

WOW!!! sounds REALLY interesting!!! continue soon!!! 😃

p.s. nice pic of Iqbal! 😉

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Anupreet

@Anu1993

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: tava
can't wait for the first part continue soon 😊

thanx i am so glad u liked it

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9
kool, rite the 1st part soon.

don't worry the 1st part shud be coming soon

Originally posted by: spring92
cool! sounds interesting! 😛

thanx i wanted to do a new kind of style so i thoght of one and here it is i did it

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818
WOW!!! sounds REALLY interesting!!! continue soon!!! 😃

p.s. nice pic of Iqbal! 😉

thanx so much for calling my ff wow and with the capital letters😃 and i have more i can give u them if u want me to? but the pic was nice😛 its from kavyaanjali. when he was shaurya in thier.

anyways thanx for all ur comments i really appreciated them 🤗i just wanna hug u all rite now

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Anupreet

@Anu1993

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

Here is the banner if u didnt see it up there

xxhope u all like the banner i made it this time not rachxx

xxAnuxx

Edited by Anu1993 - 18 years ago

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

cool story and banner.. prettyyy iwth all the hearts.

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

sounds like a cool story and banner.. prettyyy iwth all the hearts.

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Anupreet

@Anu1993

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

Part 1

Angad and Kripa are shown in a big house (the one from kumkum) they were sitting next to each other. Their son Dhruv came and sat on the floor in front of Kripa to get his hair oiled

D - mom

K - hmm

D - voh aaj college mein pata kya hua.....

A - kya hua?

D - main chup chaap bet raha tha canteen mein ke achanak ek larki ne aake mujhe zor se chata mara

K (laughs) - kya?

D - I know mom, mujhe tho pata nahin tha ke voh kaun thi....mujhe kyun maar rahi thi

A - tune hi kuch kiya hoga

D - me?

Dhruv turned around and faced his dad

D - kehna kya chahte hai papa?

A - yehi ke tune hi kuch kiya hoga jo voh larki ne tujhe maara

D - thats not fair, ma tell him, maine kuch nahin kiya

K - acha? tho usne maara kyun?

D - mujhe kya pata? shahid ke usse kuch bahana chahiye tha Dhruv Khanna ke kareeb aane ke liye

A - haan.....Dhruv Khanna...most elegible bachelor of all of India kyun?

D (smiles proudly) - haan voh tho hai

Angad smiles, Kripa hits him lightly, Dhruv realises that Angad is being sarcastic

D - papa...aap mera mazak ura rahe hai?

A - main? aur mazak? bilkul nahin........main tho tumhari taang keech raha hoon

D - ma!!! inhe kahiye

K - acha bas bhi karo Angad, kyun sata rahe ho mere bete ko

Dhruv puts his head on Kripa's lap and hugs her

D - thats like my good mom

K - of course

A - oh tho saare pyaar bete ke liye? mere liye kuch nahin?

D - papa....aapko tho mom bees saal se pyaar karti aayi hai, mujhe ab thoda sa tho lene di jiye

A - nautanki kahin ka

D - main nautanki kar raha hoon? me? Mr Dhruv Khanna?

A - yes you Mr Dhruv Khanna!

D (laughs) - aakhir beta kis ka hoon

Kripa and Dhruv laugh, Angad gets upset

A - Dhruv! behave yourself!

K - kya Angad......

A - vaise baat tho sahi kahi isne

D - kaunsi?

A - aaj yeh Mumbai ka sabse elegible bachelor hai

D - correct

A - tho jab main teri umar ka tha....pata kaun Mumbai ka sabse elegble bachelor tha?

D - definately Prithvi uncle

A (laughs) - Prithvi!! pagal hogaya hai....bachelor main tha! sab ladkiyan mere peeche bhaag thi thi

Dhruv starts laughing

D - papa jhoot mat boliye

A - main jhoot nahin bol raha! I was the most handsome guy in my college.....tabhi tho teri maa mujhpe fida hui

D - really? mom aap bataiye aapko papa se kaise pyaar hua?

K - mujhe tho ab bhi yaad hai jab hum pehli baar mile the

Angad holds Kripa's hand

A - mujhe bhi

I know its not that long but it's just the introduction, the next part will be longer

Edited by Anu1993 - 18 years ago

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Neha

@miss_neha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

KOOL part... so the story is in flashback type thing rite??? KOOL!!!! awesome cont soon...

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Rutu

@berkeleygirl818

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#10

awww, such an AMAZING nd CUTE prt!! 👏
i agree, it was KINDA short!!! 😆 but anywazz continue soon!!!! 😛
with a longer prt!!! 😉 😆

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