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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
that was a really gr8 part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 4

kripa grab angad jacket's colar n hide her face under his jacket n said:"plz save me,he will kill me".angad said:"where u saw him"(he asked her quickly).kripa point out tha gangster with her finger but she is not letting angad go to catch that gangster,she is very much afraid,angad tell her to leave his jacket but she didnt n said:"no angad!he will kill both of us,he is very dangerous n he has gun also"(she sounds really scared plus inocent),n that gangster also saw angad with kripa n he got succeed into escape frm thr before angad can trap him.

this was the first time when any criminal escape in front of angad n he cant do any thing.after escape of that gagnster,angad push kripa with a jerk n said:"becoz of ur stupidity ,he succeed into escape in front of me".(he was very furious)...he contiued:"wat u think im ur body guard n i dnt hav anything else to do....protecting u is just a part of my duty coz i wont let go that gangster for blackmailing to other ppl for ransom like they did with ur father"(he said all with rudeness).kripa felt very insulted.she said:"i never told u to proctect me,this is my life n i want to live every single moments of my life....i cant ruin my life in fear of those gangster, i want to go bak to london(she said stubbornly but in a half way her tears chok her voice).angad said:"u n ur father shud think before when u ppl file the case against those gangster(he said sarcastically),now u cant rid frm this situation.".then angad quickly change the tyre of the car n said kripa to sit inside the car(he order her).kripa was feeling very insulted bcoz of his attitude ,no one had talk with her like this before,.angad drop her at her home n said in a stirct tone:"u will not going anywhere with out my permission".kripa's mouth fell open on his tone.


she run inside the house,n went direct to her room,mr bajaj was not at home ,he was in his office.kripa throw herself on the bed n starts crying,n said to herself:"how dare he talk me like this..."she was hitting the pillow ...after a while when she cried out all her tears n feel much lighter ,she said in her heart:"u dnt knw me mr angad khanna!u took the responsibility of my protection now u hav to protect my life at any cost,at any where,at any situation....i will show u stars in daylight"(then she smile on her plan which she made recently).

kripa call all her frnds(k.t,aliya,prithvi,laksh)n she told them to do party tonight,they all decided to go in some disco.kripa get ready n went down stairs..mr bajaj ask her that where she is going n she said that she was going with her frndz...
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thnk u guys for all ur lovly comments, 😊 n keep writting ur comments
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
hey. awesome part. kripa is wickkkkkked. hehe. cant wait 2 c the effects of her plan. cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
hahaha kripa is soo sillyy.....amazing prt fatii
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
i just read the whole fic its awsome magnificent marvellous and kripas character so sweet well angads really rude kripa remind me of the kid in the movie champion 😆 well i was kinda sad that ur fic jnkt ended but u came back with another heck of a fic just simply adored it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
Awesome part... i wonder wat kripa is up to, hmmmm interestin!!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
awesome part!! gosh, angad is sso mean 😡 😆 .... go kripa...take ure revenge and show him uer gurl power 😉 😆 ..lol...cant wait so see what happens.... someone is gonna be reallly pissssssed!!!!!!!! continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 5


mr bajaj asked kripa that where she is going,kripa said that she is going with her frndz,mr bajaj said:"if that isnt necessary then y r u going ...im very much afraid now...i cant take chance for ur life".kripa wrapped her arms around mr bajaj neck n said:"dad! dnt worry ,nothing will happen to me...".kripa said this so confidently that mr bajaj felt angad is also going with her. mr bajaj said:"is angad also comming with u??"kripa said:"he has to".mr bajaj didnt understand her daughter's intension he said:"kripa!i dnt want u to take any risk...i love u beta!".kripa smile n give a tight hug to him n said:"i love u too dad!"n then she took her steps toward the main door of the house...but she cant cross the main gate again as those two constable stops her way n said:"mam!u cant go outside".kripa said:"if u wont let me go then i will not a reponsable for ur suspension....i can do suspend u by telling to commisser uncle!".constable said:"no mam!plz dnt do that..."(they r begging).kripa said:"then let me go".constable said:"but mam!plz try to understand us...angad sir gave us a instruction of not letting u go any where n we hav to obey him".kripa took out her cell phone n pretending that she is calling to commisser uncle for thr suspension...those constable finaly give up n give her a way to go...

after kripa's left,constable call angad n said that they cant able to stop kripa once again n she went somewhere,angad gone furoius on constables n said:"u ppl r good for nothing,cant u handle a girl"..then he disconect the phone...after few min ,angad call mr bajaj n ask him abt where kripa went,mr bajaj also doesnt knw abt kripa that where she went for the party,(as he never ask question to his daughter abt her living style,he has full faith on her daughter that she will never do anything wrong...n he always gave her a full freedom of living her life in her own way..)but mr bajaj said to angad:"mr khanna!is any thing abt to worry ..i mean isnt she safe"..angad dnt wont to scattered mr bajaj,he said:"no mr bajaj,thr is nothing to worry abt...i just wanted her cell number"...then mr bajaj gave him a cell number of kripa.

after 5 min or so angad dialled kripa's cell number n waiting for her to recieved his call.

on the other side,kripa n all her frnds in the disco n enjoying eachother's company,they all dancing in some dance number,when k.t ask kripa abt this sudden plan of doing party.kripa said:"actually i want to run someone after me every time".k.t said:"wat??? r u intrested in some one".kripa said:"well im intrested in distracting some one".laksh interrupt:"hmmm u mean to say u want to make someone crazy after u".aliya ask impatiently:"but whoz that guy??".but before kripa can tell them a name of that guy..her cell phone rings....

it was a angad call ,she recieved his call but cant able to hear anything as the music was very loud,she excuse herself frm thr n went in some corner to attend the call...angad said :"i told u not to go anywhere".kripa said:"wat u think angad khanna!u told me to do anything n i will do that"(she said stubbornly).angad said sarcastically:"i never saw an idiot like u ,who even not care abt own's life"(angad being straight forward).kripa said:"y shud i care abt my own life when u r always been thr for me,for protecting me"(she taunt him).angad said:"where r u right now??".kripa said:"oh common angad khanna!dnt tell me u cant trace me..after all its ur duty "n then she cut the phone.

angad gone mad after talking to kripa on phone,he said to himself:"this girl is mad,tatally mad".then he think for a while n with in few min,he get the clue tha where she has to b,when angad call kripa that time he heared a loud music at the other side n noise of ppl,that mean she has to b in some disco coz she dnt knw much ppl around that she can party with the large number of ppl,angad confirmed to himself:"yes she has to b in some disco"then he think that in which disco...thr r 100's of disco in mumbia city....then suddenly his mind strikes that disco shud b quite near to her house coz when constale call angad n angad call kripa it take just 10 to 15 min n with in such less time kripa reached in some disco that mean that disco is not so far frm her house(angad is a genious).

angad reached at the disco, n soon he point out kripa but inspite to go in front of her,he sit on chair which palce near bar corner.he took a drink n look around the disco to just find any suspecious person who wud focusing kripa.looking at the ppl around ,he giving glance to kripa also.who was enjoying dancing with her frnds with out knowing that angad already reached thr.

angad eyes stuk at kripa when he saw her while laughing.it was the first time when he saw her laughing.angad admitt in his heart that she has the most beautylful smile.then he observe her deeply frm head to toe,she was wearing long shoes in her feets,mini skirt,with mini top but thankfully having jacktet on it.once again angad's heart admitt that she is the most beautiful girl...angad was completely lost in admirring her beauty in his heart,when suddenly his mind felt that someone else also noticing kripa.he get up frm thr n try to look the face of that person,angad look that person n he is non other than that gangster which escape infront of him in the morning...that gangster spying kripa n trying to get a chance to kidnap kripa,.that gangster keep talking on the phone while looking at kripa.

kripa who was busy with her frndz n doesnt knw abt angad presence n that gangster presence in the disco.the dance number is finish on which they all were dancing.n now some romantic ,slow number is play.when all of sudden angad swing kripa by her waist n get her in his arms.
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kripa was shock to see him n said:"uuuu".angad said:"sshh".kripa said:"wat?"angad said:"keep dancing...."kripa once again:"wat??".angad wishpers:"that gangster is here n he doesnt get to knw that im also here ....this time i wont let him escape".
Edited by cup-of-tae - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
hey. dats an awesome part. luv da pic. cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
i just read ure fanfic.its mind-blowin. plz cont soon.

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