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Posted: 18 years ago
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Amazin part.... i jus luved it... he was checkin her out 😆 Cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey

great going so far... i hope he catches that gangster..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 6

kripa was shock to see him n said:"uuuu".angad said:"sshh".kripa said:"wat?"angad said:"keep dancing...."kripa once again:"wat??".angad wishpers:"that gangster is here n he doesnt get to knw that im also here ....this time i wont let him escape". angad try his best to hide himself in the crowd,he was observing every move of that gangster while dancing slowly with kripa.his full attention toward that gangster.
on other hand kripa was totaly mesmorized by getting in angad arms.his hands were wrapped around her waist n her arms were wrapped around his neck.she cant take off her eyes frm his face.she keep looking in his eyes which were on that gangster.angad feel her gaze on him,he give her a look which makes kripa bit embaress,kripa said :"how do u get to knw that im here"(she said just to hide her abashment).angad said with arogance:"thats non of ur bussiness....".kripa felt insulted once again n all of sudden her eyes r filled with tears,she is the girl who always used to recieved the love frm others,either frm her dad or frm her frnds,n this was the first time when someone's behaviour hurting her,though she is a kind of girl who never care abt anything or anyone's behavoiur but she cant stop herself for taking interest in him...n that was the first time when she ask herself that y she is trying to gain his attention,y she cant let go his thoughts frm her mind......"then she excuse herself n went to the washroom with out giving him a chance to stop her.....

angad was a bit surprized that all of sudden wat happens to her,the way he talks to her is his usuall way of talking,he just carry off his shoulder n said in his heart:"silly girl"..for few moments angad forget to trace the moves of that gangster...

kripa went to the washroom n try to control her tears when some one put the gun on her temple n said:"dnt try to scream other wise u will dead".kripa was shock .that gangster grab her with him ,he took kripa with him to get succeed in kidnap her....he try to escape frm the disco in front of everyone..for a sec angad get a shock but very next moment he comes in front of that gangster n took out his gun n target him to shoot,angad said:"leave her".gangster said:"dnt try to come near,other wise i will shoot her".angad keep taking his steps toward gangster n kripa.gangster said:"i said stop other wise i will kill her"(that ganster is afraiding now frm angad braveness).that ganster twist kripa's wrist very badly by which she scream frm pain n tears r fell out frm her eyes....for that moment angad felt weak by hearing kripa's painful scream.....n gangster took an advantage of that moment n he got succeed in escape dragging kripa with himself.....

kripa look at angad with pleading eyes to help her,angad make a fist of his palm to control his anger n then he sit on his car n follow that gangster.....

angad drove the car very fast to block his way ,n soon he succeed in that...angad's car comes in front of that gangster's car,but that gangster not stop his car n try to hit angad's car but before he hits angad car angad make a target of his head by laiser light of the gun n shoot him....that gangster died with in a moments...n kripa who was still sitting in that car.....angad screams:"kripa!jump frm the car"....but kripa was hesitating to jump frm the running car..angad screams once again:"jump frm thr".kripa still in delimma to jump or not frm the running car,that gangster was dead on the driving seat when angad said:"nothing will happened to u......trust me!"

then kripa jump frm the running car n roll down on the road of the high way....she hardly balance her self to roll down further....when angad grab her in his arms n ask concernly:"r u ok"..kripa just stare him with afraidness by which she was passing through few mins before....
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keep writing ur comments n do tell me that u like the concept of my this ff 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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magnificent part ur writting style is peculiar and graceful
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
dat was such a cool part. so much action yet filled w/ luv in the air. it was really cute. keep writng. cant wait 4 angad n krips to get closer. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
awwwwwwwwwwwww fati jaaana....tht was terrific!!!cont sooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww fati jaana....it was terrific
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
Excellent part... totally awesome... luved it!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 7

angad ask her concernly:"r u ok?".kripa look at him with such afraidness frm which she was passed through few min before.but before she can answere him,angad's car hit by that gangster car n both car blast with great explosive ,for a moment angad took her in his arms to make her feel safe,she cant able to speak anything,she just look at angad with thankful eyes.angad hold her hands n said:"dnt b afraid ....look!u r fine...i told u nothing will happen"kripa nodded her head in "yes"like she is agree with him that nothing happened to her.

after few moments ,angad told her to get up ,they hav to find some mean of transport as they both were stuck in the middle of the lonely high way.kripa try to get up but she cant.angad look at her like(now wat).kripa hold her ankle n said:"i cant get up....its hurting".angad said sternly:"so wat...u hav to make it...we hav to catch some transport...we cant stay here in this dark night n in the middle of this lonely high way"...kripa said:"but i cant...it really hurting"(her eye fill with tears not bcoz of any pain but bcoz of his stern attitude).angad give her a side glance n said:"wat u want me to do??".kripa happily lift her arms toward him indicating that he has to carry her in his arms.angad said:"no ways!carrying u is not a part of my duty"(said with attitude).kripa said:"how can u b so rude....a girl whoz ankle is hurt n she cant able to walk n thr is no one else who can help her----"angad interrupt:"ok ok!"then he carry her in his arms.




kripa keep staring him while angad is walking on the empty road...angad also staring her.....while staring eachother angad think in his heart:"dnt knw when i get freedom frm this beautiful calamity......"that was the first time when someone's(kripa's) painful scream made him weak....n that time he got that this girl has some thing which he cant ignore.
on the other side,kripa was thinking in her heart:"i dnt y angad!but i really enjoy being close to u".

one line of a song plays in background

sajnaaa! kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai


she keep saying in her heart:'im sorry angad that i lie to u......my ankle is not at all hurt but wat can i do if i wanted to b close to u".

one line of a song plays in background

sajnaaa! kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai


after walking for a mile angad put down her frm his arms n said:"i cant able to carry u any more...u r so heavy"kripa was shock to hear this,she said:"no way!im the most smart girl"(she said with proudness).angad said:"who said to u that .."(he ask cheekily)..kripa said:"ppl around me said that...ok!"angad said:"they just said bcoz they never carry u".kripa's mouth fell open on his stupid comments.

angad take her in some tree shed n said:"hmm lets take some rest here then we will go frm here...".kripa make some cute funny faces n then she sit beside him in tree shed.after a while angad felt asleep resting his bak on the tree.a beautiful smile comes in kripa face,he is looking quite cute while sleeping....those expesssions which angad used to put on his face vanish frm thr.kripa slowly moves closer to him n softly put her cheek on his lips just to make a kiss on her cheek.angad is in deep sleep ,he doesnt knw abt this inocent act which made by kripa.after then she blush on her own act n once again she look at him to absorb his every face feature in her heart.

one line of a song plays in background

sajnaaa! kya ye mera pehla pehla pyar hai


after then she cant able to take some rest atleast for a while.

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frndz!i read ur comments...it make me so glad that u ppl r enjoying my ff 😊
thnk u so much for apriciate me 😊


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Posted: 18 years ago
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yay. kripa's fallin in luv w/ angad. cont soon.

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