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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: NYC_gurl_17

ok, now i can comment. angad made that move a little suddenly. he should give kripa some time.. wait is this all a prank?? cuz it fits the title.. sry i'm stupid. prem-mukti part was sweet with mukti getting all jealous. laksh-kt was also sweet, he cut himself just to get kt's attention. kavya-anjali was also nice, lol basically every couple was sweet and funny. loved the a-k part and the k-a part the most this time. k long enough comment, continue soon.

Yea, better comment! lol, thanks lauraaa [:

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Originally posted by: NYC_gurl_17

awww poor kripa, she probably like wth. but shes smart enough to figure out that its a prank. maybe she might even come up with a prank 2. nd angad is just .... angad . ok that was stupid, continue soon.

Originally posted by: kt4lakshya

hey sabrina fab part and i loved the LK scene u rock and cont soon with more LK scenes

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Thanks darling!


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Originally posted by: Inshira

Hey I just read ur whole story I luved it ur an amazing writer plz continue soon can't wait to read the next prt

Thanks, that was really sweet! (=

Originally posted by: Fashion101

hey waz up and i finally caught up with ur FF and it's awesome. It took me a long time but i finally finish and i am happy about i love ur FF i can't wait 4 the next part plz plz continue soon.

Luv,

Saniya

Saniya!! My love! Where have you been? Well, even tho we just had p-ms recently.. Hah. Thanks for commenting jaan!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Saraa~

I just finished reading ur FF..and i have to say its great!!..Good going hun! Continue soon will be waiting

Thanks! REALLY glad you commented! [=

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**Author's Note**



I'm writing in this way now::

For expressions, and stuff ,to describe how the character is speaking, there will be stars..* and *
ex:: Preeti
*shocked* uhh..what??
For any important info. things i want you guys to know, will be in [ and ].
ex:: Preeti- what??
[she stepped back.]

Now lastly, i might use both at the same time..
ex:: Preeti
* shocked* wh.what?? [ she stepped back]

I put them in color so they could stand out and u guys know what im talking about!!..
Okay, hope you get it! i like this way and i think it will be easier to write with and read from!! so .. thats all!!
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Recap:

Part 21 Page 74

Today: Part 22 Page 79

Kripa tried to push past him, but being "angad" himself he couldn't possibly let her go. He chuckled as she kept on trying her hardest. He held her wrist harder, to which she stopped struggling and kept her gaze on him. Angad wanted to see the effect he had on her, if any. He let his arms find the way up to her mid-back, and down again. He slowly repeated, as Kripa had her eyes shut. " Hmm, so I do have an effect on her," Angad thought.

He took his hands off her back and rested them on her luscious cheeks. Kripa shot her eyes open and pushed his hands off of her cheeks. She turned around, hoping he would get the hint that she didn't approve of him doing that. It made her feel weak, as if she was actually in love with him. Being as stubborn as he was, Angad forcefully turned her around.

"Kiss me."

That was all he said. Those 2 words, Kripa didn't think of in her worst nightmares. She didn't even have the courage to look him in the eye, forget kissing him!

"Now." Oh, God! What was she to do now? With no other choice left, she looked him in the eye, and he was staring back. No emotion, whatsoever. She felt nervous as if she was a rat being chased by a cat. Well, there was no chasing in this. Angad could clearly see the nervousness in her eyes, as she tried to speak.

Kripa: I, uhh.. Um I. -

Angad: You what?

Kripa: I..I, I don't want to kiss you, I'm not a w**** like the other girls that'll kiss you in a matter of seconds.

Angad just stood there, smirking at her innocence. " Sweety, who said you have a choice? I mean, think about it. We are locked in a classroom, just the two of us. I am Angad Khanna, I could do anything, I repeat: anything, with you, so think before you speak." Kripa thought he was overacting, but all she could do as stare right back at him with her big caramel colored eyes. " Oh, and if that doesn't bring you down, then I'll consider including 'the bet'." Kripa wished to stab him right now, but sadly that wasn't one of her choices.

Kripa leaned in, slowly as a turtle. She bit her lower lip, nervously as Angad was grinning like hell. Just then the door opened, and the teacher came in. She cocked an eyebrow, but Kripa was more than glad for the interruption. She collected her bags and ran out, showing her tongue to Angad. "Don't worry Kripa, I'll make you kiss me.. Hmm, possibly fall in love with me. Let the games begin," Angad whispered to himself. He winked at the teacher, who in return shouted "Get the hell out of here!" Angad made a face and followed Kripa out. He held her wrist tight. Kripa flinched by his touch once again and Angad let her go. He walked ahead of her and into the parking lot. He sat in the car and waited for Kripa to get in. He knew for a fact that if she didn't come in the car within 2 minutes, he would toss her in. He opened the passenger door, but she didn't move a muscle. Annoyed, he shout out " I swear if you don't get in I will drop you in!" Knowing he wouldn't do that, Kripa shook her head and turned her back on him. Nostrils flaring, Angad got out and picked her up. He dropped her in the seat, and sat in himself. She sat there, shocked outta her wits.

Kripa thought: Did he just do that?! He did NOT just drop me in!? Ugh, he dropped me in!! Bandar kahin ka!! Kutta!!

Angad saw her condition, and couldn't help but snicker at her. That was the exact expression he wanted her to have. This would be easy, he thought.

As soon as class ended, Prem and Mukti went into the car and drove off.

Prem: Basanti ahh I mean Mukti, wanna go out with me?

Mukti: what?!!

Prem: Jeez, I know it's amazing but you don't have to scream!

Mukti scoffed and turned him down " no, I don't want to." She smiled at him and turned the other way. Her heart was thumping, Prem asked her out and she refused!

Prem stopped the car with a jolt and stared at her.

Prem: Excuse me? Did you just turn me down?

Mukti: uhm yea, I did. So?

Prem stood there surprised, no only did she refuse him, but she acted like it was no big deal. wth? Prem wouldn't get mad that easily over some girl, but this ticked him off for some reason. Prem Looked at her and told her that he's going to a party.

Mukti: Right now? Ehh, drop me off then.

Prem: no, I'm late as is and I don't want to waste my time.

Mukti: but..but I don't want to go!

Prem: toh kya, basanti?

Mukti: I wont enjoy "your type" of party. Drop me off!!

Prem: no.

Mukti: you're an arrogant jerk!

Prem*to himself* and you're a piece of ethereal beauty..

Mukti: did you say something?

Prem: no.

And he drove away. They reached the party, and Prem stepped out without a word expecting Mukti to follow. Mukti followed him there, sulking all the way. Within an hour of the party, Mukti had danced with 2 extremely hot guys. Prem knew, but he kept on dancing with random girls. She got a few more offers, but she didn't feel like dancing. She went up to Prem and tapped him on the shoulder. She thought he was close dancing with a girl, but turns out he was making out with her. She felt disgusted, and told him to take her home. Prem once again refused and continued making out. Mukti was in no condition of fighting back, so she simply went back to the bar and started drinking. She couldn't believe he asked her out, and when she refused he started making out with someone

?!! She was clearly disgusted, and drank her second glass. Not being able to take it anymore, she went up to him and slapped him hard across his cheek. He touched the spot where she slapped him and saw her run out. He ignored it for a while, and drank wine while dancing with another girl. He finally went out and saw her walking down the road not to far away. He walked up to her and pulled her towards him. "What do you think of yourself, huh!?" He kept shaking her. Mukti, being drunk, didn't follow him up. She flinched her eyebrow, confused as to what he was saying. Then, her mind filled with previous events, like him asking her out, her getting drunk, and slapping him. She turned mad and pushed him off of her. "Leave me alone!!" Prem did as told. He went into his car, and turned on the engine. Just when he was about to drive off, he heard a girl scream as if she was getting kidnapped. He knew it was Mukti, so he turned around and saw himself. The guy was certainly not kidnapping her, but harassing her. By the look on Mukti's face it seemed as if she would collapse any second. He ran up to them and snatched Mukti away from the hobo. "Get in the car. Now." That was all he said, Mukti just stared at him confused. "Now." Oh, there goes the repeat. He was serious, so she ran upto the car and sat herself in. She turned around, trying to make out what he was doing.

Mukti's head::

Oh, not a lot. Just a few punches here and there..stomack kick…ahh twisted arms..prem getting smacked..wait.. prem getting smacked?! Shit.

Mukti tried her best to go there and help him, but then remembered his serious expressions while saying the five words "get in the car now." She didn't know what to do, till she saw him get back up and continue fighting .. like a man. She let out a sigh of relief and sat back in. Her head was still spinning, and she felt as if she would fall unconscious any moment now. She held her head with both her hands, and saw Prem in a blurry vision trying to come to her. Before she could make out anything else, she felt hot. Hot hot, as if she was in a burning room. She tumbled down and fell unconscious, only to be catched by Prem. He shook his head realizing he shouldn't have come with her, and kicked himself. He gently put her in the back, and laid her down. He took his seat in the front, and remembered how he asked her out. Honestly, he had no idea why he asked her out so suddenly. There was just something about her, which made him want to be with her, nothing more, nothing less. But oh well, he'd have to make her like him. He glanced back every now and then, striving to see her angelic face. He carried her bridal style, and reached her bedroom. He laid her on the bed, taking her shoes off in the process. He pulled the covers to her face, and left. He was still a bit mad at her, but he'll get over it.

Laksh ran to where Kt was and asked her

"Why do you always have to ignore me?"

To which she replies "Why do you always have to annoy me?"

"I asked you first."

"Yeaaa, and I asked you second."

"I'm not kidding around, answer me."

"Neither am I."

He just stared at her, figuring she wouldn't tell him. He picked her up, stomach on his shoulders. She was, of course, punching his back with her tiny fists, and Laksh thought it was cute. He chuckled and took her to his car. He dropped her in and sat in himself. He drove off, ignoring her screams and questions. Kt saw that he had taken her to some sort of stranded place. She looked his way noticing he was already sitting at the hood of his car. She got out and sat besides him.

KT: What was that all about?

Laksh: what was what about?

KT: you knoww.. Carrying me.. Then dumping me in the car.. And this stranded.. place. What do you want?

Laksh: Just answer me.

KT: I never got the question..?

Laksh sighed before answering: Why are you ignoring me? Do you like.. I don't knoww.. Not like me?

KT: what?!

Laksh: well, it's just that.. I can't take it when someone I care about is mad at me.. Or dislikes me..

KT: S..so you care about me?

Laksh immediately shot his head up at Kt, who was surprisingly blushing. God, she looked adorable!

Laksh: God, you look adorable!

KT: what??

L: n, n…never mind. So, you're not mad?

KT: well, no.. should I be?

L: I guess not.. Well, anyways, ready to leave?

Kt: what was the point of coming here, then?!

Laksh: I don't exactly know..

Saying that he lturned and walked back to hid car, grinning as in victory. Kt was left there fuming, until he honked the horn.

Kt: what are you doing?!

Laksh: I'm honking!

Kt: uhm, I meant why are you doing that?

L: Get in, you retard!

KT*mumbled*: now I turn into a retard?

She stepped in and he pretended to accelerate. In a whiz, she backed out and fell back, hitting her back. " You jerk!!!" Laksh would've helped her, but he was too busy laughing to do so. She felt like slitting his wrists and strangling him. She let out an uneasy moan, to which Laksh looked her way. He smiled ever so cutely and went towards her. She held her hand up in the hair.

KT: go away! Don't you dare touch me!..

Laksh shook his head to her behavior and scooted her up in his arms. This obviously angered her as she silently spoke " You carry me as if I'm some sort of handbag." Laksh just smiled at this and took her home.

Well, somehow I always end up making Angad-Kripa and Prem-Mukti parts longer than the other 3 couples!!

I don't know why, but it just happens. Sorry for the L-KT, S-K, and K-A fans.. I promise I'll make their parts longer! This was the first half, as I've deff. Went over board with the posting date.. Once again, SORRY!! L The last half will be focusing on S-K and K-A.. so stay tuned for that! Okay, with that said.. Have a great week! [:
Edited by Sabrinaa xo - 17 years ago
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i hope you don't me commenting like this...i find certain parts way too hilarious so had to comment in between while reading the parts so read on and u'll see my comment in red😃

Originally posted by: Sabrinaa xo


'LoveinCalifornia'

Recap: Part 21 Page 74

Today: Part 22 Page 79

Kripa tried to push past him, but being "angad" himself he couldn't possibly let her go. yess the egoistic maniac!!! He chuckled as she kept on trying her hardest. He held her wrist harder, to which she stopped struggling and kept her gaze on him. Angad wanted to see the effect he had on her, if any. so self centered isn't he!! godd!! but still hott!!😳He let his arms find the way up to her mid-back, and down again. He slowly repeated, as Kripa had her eyes shut. " Hmm, so I do have an effect on her," Angad thought. who wouldn't!!!!😍

He took his hands off her back and rested them on her luscious cheeks. Kripa shot her eyes open and pushed his hands off of her cheeks. omg!! why would u do that!! he just touched you!! ::sigh:: i would die to be in her place She turned around, hoping he would get the hint that she didn't approve of him doing that. It made her feel weak, as if she was actually in love with him. lol honey you are!!! hehe Being as stubborn as he was, forcefully turned her around. tsk tsk no zarbardasti man!!!

"Kiss me." shocked out my wits!! how the heck can he ask her like!! how rude also!!

That was all he said. Those 2 words, Kripa didn't think of in her worst nightmares. She didn't even have the courage to look him in the eye, forget kissing him! lol hon everyone would be in the same position

"Now." Oh, God! What was she to do now? With no other choice left, she looked him in the eye, and he was staring back. No emotion, whatsoever. She felt nervous as if she was a rat being chased by a cat. lol thas soo funny i can imagine that haha!!🤣 Well, there was no chasing in this. Angad could clearly see the nervousness in her eyes, as she tried to speak.

Kripa: I, uhh.. Um I. -

Angad: You what?

Kripa: I..I, I don't want to kiss you, I'm not a w**** like the other girls that'll kiss you in a matter of seconds. hehe you go girl tell him whose boss!!!

Angad just stood there, smirking at her innocence. " Sweety, who said you have a choice? I mean, think about it. We are locked in a classroom, just the two of us. I am Angad Khanna, I could do anything, I repeat: anything, shocked he wouldn't do anything!! he is to sweet but u never know!! with you, so think before you speak." Kripa thought he was overacting, but all she could do as stare right back at him with her big caramel colored eyes. " Oh, and if that doesn't bring you down, then I'll consider including 'the bet'." Kripa wished to stab him right now, but sadly that wasn't one of her choices. ugh the stupid bet!! stupid boy!!!

Kripa leaned in, slowly as a turtle. awww she shy!! She bit her lower lip, nervously as Angad was grinning like hell. Just then the door opened, and the teacher came in. thank god!!! She cocked an eyebrow, but Kripa was more than glad for the interruption. She collected her bags and ran out, showing her tongue to Angad. "Don't worry Kripa, I'll make you kiss me.. Hmm, possibly fall in love with me. Let the games begin," Angad whispered to himself. He winked at the teacher, who in return shouted "Get the hell out of here!" haha!! winking at the teacher!! is he mad or what!! 😆Angad made a face and followed Kripa out. He held her wrist tight. Kripa flinched by his touch once again and Angad let her go. He walked ahead of her and into the parking lot. He sat in the car and waited for Kripa to get in. He knew for a fact that if she didn't come in the car within 2 minutes, he would toss her in. she is not a bag which you can toss in!! He opened the passenger door, but she didn't move a muscle. Annoyed, he shout out " I swear if you don't get in I will drop you in!" Knowing he wouldn't do that, Kripa shook her head and turned her back on him. Nostrils flaring, Angad got out and picked her up. He dropped her in the seat, and sat in himself. She sat there, shocked outta her wits. me too can't believe he that!!!

Kripa thought: Did he just do that?! He did NOT just drop me in!? Ugh, he dropped me in!! Bandar kahin ka!! Kutta!! hahaha!! how about monkey duffer gadaaa!! hehe

Angad saw her condition, and couldn't help but snicker at her. That was the exact expression he wanted her to have. This would be easy, he thought. he's soo mean!!!

As soon as class ended, Prem and Mukti went into the car and drove off.

Prem: Basanti ahh I mean Mukti, wanna go out with me? what!! where did that come from!!!

Mukti: what?!!

Prem: Jeez, I know it's amazing but you don't have to scream!

Mukti scoffed and turned him down " no, I don't want to." She smiled at him and turned the other way. Her heart was thumping, Prem asked her out and she refused! 🤣haha she refused!!! good job!!

Prem stopped the car with a jolt and stared at her.

Prem: Excuse me? Did you just turn me down? i think so sweetie!

Mukti: uhm yea, I did. So?

Prem stood there surprised, no only did she refuse him, but she acted like it was no big deal. wth? Prem wouldn't get mad that easily over some girl, but this ticked him off for some reason. Prem Looked at her and told her that he's going to a party. another egotistic bum!!!

Mukti: Right now? Ehh, drop me off then.

Prem: no, I'm late as is and I don't want to waste my time.

Mukti: but..but I don't want to go!

Prem: toh kya, basanti?

Mukti: I wont enjoy "your type" of party. Drop me off!!

Prem: no.

Mukti: you're an arrogant jerk!

Prem*to himself* and you're a piece of ethereal beauty..awww soo sweeeeeeeeeeet!!

gosh isn't he being such a tyrant!!

Mukti: did you say something?

Prem: no.

And he drove away. They reached the party, and Prem stepped out without a word expecting Mukti to follow. Mukti followed him there, sulking all the way. Within an hour of the party, Mukti had danced with 2 extremely hot guys. Prem knew, but he kept on dancing with random girls. She got a few more offers, but she didn't feel like dancing. She went up to Prem and tapped him on the shoulder. She thought he was close dancing with a girl, but turns out he was making out with her. ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww🤢 She felt disgusted, and told him to take her home. Prem once again refused and continued making out. Mukti was in no condition of fighting back, so she simply went back to the bar and started drinking. drinkin is bad!! i think we may have a problem here She couldn't believe he asked her out, and when she refused he started making out with someone?!! She was clearly disgusted, and drank her second glass. Not being able to take it anymore, she went up to him and slapped him hard across his cheek. He touched the spot where she slapped him and saw her run out. omg!! is she crazy!!!He ignored it for a while, and drank wine while dancing with another girl. He finally went out and saw her walking down the road not to far away. He walked up to her and pulled her towards him. "What do you think of yourself, huh!?" He kept shaking her. Mukti, being drunk, didn't follow him up. She flinched her eyebrow, confused as to what he was saying. lol!! that must loook adorable Then, her mind filled with previous events, like him asking her out, her getting drunk, and slapping him. She turned mad and pushed him off of her. "Leave me alone!!" Prem did as told. He went into his car, and turned on the engine. Just when he was about to drive off, he heard a girl scream as if she was getting kidnapped. He knew it was Mukti, so he turned around and saw himself. The guy was certainly not kidnapping her, but harassing her. By the look on Mukti's face it seemed as if she would collapse any second. He ran up to them and snatched Mukti away from the hobo. "Get in the car. Now." That was all he said, Mukti just stared at him confused. "Now." Oh, there goes the repeat. He was serious, so she ran upto the car and sat herself in. She turned around, trying to make out what he was doing. yayyy!! prem comes to the rescue!! goo premmm!!!

Mukti's head::

Oh, not a lot. Just a few punches here and there..stomack kick…ahh twisted arms..prem getting smacked..wait.. prem getting smacked?! Shit. lol not a lot!! he is getting hit for u!!

Mukti tried her best to go there and help him, but then remembered his serious expressions while saying the five words "get in the car now." She didn't know what to do, till she saw him get back up and continue fighting .. like a man. yup a brave strong man!! so hott!! She let out a sigh of relief and sat back in. Her head was still spinning, and she felt as if she would fall unconscious any moment now. She held her head with both her hands, and saw Prem in a blurry vision trying to come to her. Before she could make out anything else, she felt hot. Hot hot, as if she was in a burning room. She tumbled down and fell unconscious, only to be catched by Prem. He shook his head realizing he shouldn't have come with her, and kicked himself. He gently put her in the back, and laid her down. He took his seat in the front, and remembered how he asked her out. Honestly, he had no idea why he asked her out so suddenly. There was just something about her, which made him want to be with her, nothing more, nothing less. But oh well, he'd have to make her like him. He glanced back every now and then, striving to see her angelic face. He carried her bridal style, and reached her bedroom. He laid her on the bed, taking her shoes off in the process. He pulled the covers to her face, and left. He was still a bit mad at her, but he'll get over it. awwwwwwww thas the sweetest thing he has done!! aww is prem falling for his basanti awwwwww

Laksh ran to where Kt was and asked her

"Why do you always have to ignore me?"

To which she replies "Why do you always have to annoy me?"

"I asked you first."

"Yeaaa, and I asked you second."

"I'm not kidding around, answer me."

"Neither am I."

He just stared at her, figuring she wouldn't tell him. He picked her up, stomach on his shoulders. She was, of course, punching his back with her tiny fists, and Laksh thought it was cute. haha this part was adorable!!! laksh and kt are just adorable!! He chuckled and took her to his car. He dropped her in and sat in himself. He drove off, ignoring her screams and questions. Kt saw that he had taken her to some sort of stranded place. She looked his way noticing he was already sitting at the hood of his car. She got out and sat besides him. hmmm what is cookin in laksh's mind

KT: What was that all about? yeah me wonderin the same thing!!

Laksh: what was what about?

KT: you knoww.. Carrying me.. Then dumping me in the car.. And this stranded.. place. What do you want?

Laksh: Just answer me.

KT: I never got the question..?

Laksh sighed before answering: Why are you ignoring me? Do you like.. I don't knoww.. Not like me?

KT: what?!

Laksh: well, it's just that.. I can't take it when someone I care about is mad at me.. Or dislikes me.. omg!! awww he cares!! how sweet and cute!!! awwwwwwwwww

KT: S..so you care about me?

Laksh immediately shot his head up at Kt, who was surprisingly blushing. God, she looked adorable! awww

Laksh: God, you look adorable! omg! he said that out loud awwwww

KT: what??

L: n, n…never mind. So, you're not mad?

KT: well, no.. should I be?

L: I guess not.. Well, anyways, ready to leave?

Kt: what was the point of coming here, then?!

Laksh: I don't exactly know.. haha! laksh is too funny and cute!! i think i mentioned that a few times already!! hehe

Saying that he lturned and walked back to hid car, grinning as in victory. Kt was left there fuming, until he honked the horn.

Kt: what are you doing?!

Laksh: I'm honking!

Kt: uhm, I meant why are you doing that?

L: Get in, you retard! okay so they had a lovey dovey moment and now he is back to callin her names!! so stupid...i tell you all of them are stupid!!! but cute!

KT*mumbled*: now I turn into a retard?

She stepped in and he pretended to accelerate. In a whiz, she backed out and fell back, hitting her back. " You jerk!!!" u made her fall!! help her stupid instead of laughing at her!! Laksh would've helped her, but he was too busy laughing to do so. She felt like slitting his wrists and strangling him. She let out an uneasy moan, to which Laksh looked her way. He smiled ever so cutely and went towards her. She held her hand up in the hair.

KT: go away! Don't you dare touch me!..

Laksh shook his head to her behavior and scooted her up in his arms. This obviously angered her as she silently spoke " You carry me as if I'm some sort of handbag." Laksh just smiled at this and took her home. again how sweeet and cute!! they are just cute!!!!!

Well, somehow I always end up making Angad-Kripa and Prem-Mukti parts longer than the other 3 couples!! I don't know why, but it just happens. Sorry for the L-KT, S-K, and K-A fans.. I promise I'll make their parts longer! This was the first half, as I've deff. Went over board with the posting date.. Once again, SORRY!! L The last half will be focusing on S-K and K-A.. so stay tuned for that! Okay, with that said.. Have a great week! [:



i hope you didn't mind me commenting like this but it had to be done...if you didn't like it sorry!!😳

can't wait to read about SK and KA

great part!!!👏
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Page 79?! Holy! Oh Sabrina, how am I gonna catch up? 😆 God help me 😆 😳
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ph kool prt..cant waut for ka and sk!!
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wonderful part Brina
u should continue soon.
Loved PM part, think Prem
is fallin in luuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrve with
his BASANTHI
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amazing update.....pm prt was 2 good 😳
plzzzzz continue s000n!!!

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