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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

continuing:

setting: a tall figure stands over a table laden with various materials, among them lies a small box of alcohol swabs.

Niyati quickly reassures everyone around her that she is fine and when Ms. Khan turns around for a second, she quickly steps out of her reach and heads for the door.sure she is fine.. after looking at agni.. who can be fine

re you going?" he asks, hurrying to catch up with her.

Niyati keeps on walking, looking for that face, those eyes.

Shourya doubles his pace and overtakes Niyati in a matter of a few steps. stop flirting with her.. she is not interested.. buddy get the HINT!!😡

He stands in front of her.

Shourya: "Niyati? Are you okay? Do you want to go to the nurse or...?" he asks puzzled.

Niyati looks at him, and quickly replies:

Niyati: "What? No...I...actually, yes, I would like to go to the nurse, I feel a little light-headed..." she says hurriedly, her eyes peering past Shourya's shoulder.arrah bhai!! Agni are assar hai.. i go weak knee too😳

Shourya cuts her off.

Shourya: "Light headed? Niyati! Ok dont worry, I'll take you..."

This time Niyati cuts him off.

Niyati: "I'll manage Shourya, you just please tell me where the nurse's office is." she says.

Shourya looks at her with concern but decides that he should respect her space, and so he complies.

Shourya: "Just make a right there and its the last door in the corridor." he says, somewhat hurt.

Niyati goes up to him and squeezes his shoulders and smiles, thankfully.

Shourya smiles and slowly turns to leave for the dance studio.

Niyati watches him fade away, and quickly turns and makes a left.

The corridor is silent; classrooms are not found in this range. She can see the janitor's closet, and a small lounge, and finally the nurse's office.

She hesistates outside of the door, but knows that this is the right thing to do. She slowly peers in and her eyes fall instantly on the tall figure in front of her swabbing his left bicep... the series dont do justice to his **ahem ahem**biceps....😳

But she can see that he is not actually swabbing the now swollen scratches completely, probably because of the stinging pain it would cause.

She quickly strides over to him, and she is about to speak, when Agni turns towards her.

His eyes overwhelm her and suddenly she is very conscious of her intrusion on him. his eyes.. his eyes!!!!😳

Niyati: "I'm sorry, I didnt mean to intrude, actually I'm sorry for..."

But Agni whispers "shhhh"

He studies her, his gaze deliberate and intent on her concerned face.

Agni: "did Ms. Khan send you?" he finally says, his voice dark.

Niyati: "...no...I came on my own to..."

Agni cuts her off.

He steps back, but does not lift his eyes from Niyati.

Agni: "...to check if I did not die from your amazingly deep gashes?" he asks, his voice mocking her concern. Agni be nice!!! i would be concern too... 😳

Niyati stumbles for words.

But Agni does not let her speak, as he comes a little closer to her.

She can feel the intensity of ridicule his eyes for her behavior.

Agni is now inches away from Niyati, but Niyati is frozen and can only hope that he cannot hear the feverish beats of her heart.it is getting HOT in here..

Agni: "if you dont mind, I'd like to tend to my, oh what should I call them, ah yes, wounds that you have so nicely made on me." he says, his voice threatening and low.
mai maar jawa...😳


As he turns his back to Niyati, Niyati can feel the full impact of his words. But she knows that they are wrong; she never meant to hurt him, why would she, he had saved her.

She looks at his back towards her, her eyes in disbelief and finally after a moment takes a deep breath and slowly says:

Niyati: "I'm very sorry I hurt you, I had no intention of doing so. I came here, not to bother you, but to thank you for catching me and for apologizing for hurting you." here she paused, but slowly began speaking again. "But maybe I was wrong to even come here, but my God knows and I know that it is only right for me to show my concern, and thank you." okay.. here i am cheering for niyati.. you go girl!! love this scene.. now the attraction starts... hmmmmm😍

with that she quickly walks to the door and out, tears stinging her eyes.

All is silent as Niyati's footsteps fade away into the distance.

Agni does not move from his spot, his eyes glued to the floor below him, Niyati's words ringing in his ears: **ahem**😳

"But my God knows and I know that it is only right for me to show my concern and thank you..."

He slowly turns towards the empty door and gazes at it, lost in his thoughts.

He had known instantly that Niyati was no ordinary girl. The moment he had stepped into the dance studio he had seen her capabilities as a dancer. Capabilities that had eraptured his own passion for dancing. He had found himself watching her every move with fixed attention and was astonished to find no fault in her form. And now he had found out that she could not only answer him on the dance floor but also back-answer him and withstand his devestating blows.

Agni while still looking at the door says out loud:

Agni: "How often do I get to take on a person of my standards, huh Agni?" he asks himself.hun...what are you talking about... i have been waiting for ya


A menacing grin appears on his lips, and a zestful gleam in his eyes.

Agni: "pleasure to meet you..." he stops talking out loud and tries to remember her name.

He suddenly remembers Ms. Khan's concerned words back in the studio.

Agni: "...Niyati." he whispers.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww😳

Back in the corridor Niyati refuses to spill any of her collecting tears as she walks briskly towards the studio and back in the doorway of the nurse's office, Agni cannot stop smiling devilishly ahem... he is the devil!!! and his smile just killed me!!!
as thoughts of having substantial competition on the dance floor spread like wilfire in his mind.

Agni takes the alcohol swab in his hand and this time, rubs his entire swollen area on his biceps, going into dream world!!😍
and as a sharp stinging sensation engulfs him, he grins wildlly and says:

"touche Niyati, touche"
touche pri touche.. i can hear his say that.. hehe.. kidding dia..

alright.. this update was not good.. CUZ IT WASN'T LONG ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!! i am jokin yaar..you are soo good.. i was blushing all the way still the end.. the way he is looking at her.. and the way he is smiling at her.. and his BICEP I loved it soo much yaar.. you are too tooo too too too good.. i love ya for making my agni soo sexy in your ff...

you have a nack for writing.. and i am so happy that you decided to write a ff.. cuz you are amazing at it.. i love it.. my writing queen..hehe.. alright.. back to what i was doing.,. luv pri

Edited by pc84 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: pc84

alright.. this update was not good.. CUZ IT WASN'T LONG ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!! i am jokin yaar..you are soo good.. i was blushing all the way still the end.. the way he is looking at her.. and the way he is smiling at her.. and his BICEP I loved it soo much yaar.. you are too tooo too too too good.. i love ya for making my agni soo sexy in your ff...

you have a nack for writing.. and i am so happy that you decided to write a ff.. cuz you are amazing at it.. i love it.. my writing queen..hehe.. alright.. back to what i was doing.,. luv pri

haiiiiiiii!!! thankkooooo love!!! 🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

haiiiiiiii!!! thankkooooo love!!! 🤗

no thank you yaar.. for mentioning his biceps and his eyes.. and him being all lover boy with niyati!!!

👏🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: pc84

no thank you yaar.. for mentioning his biceps and his eyes.. and him being all lover boy with niyati!!!

👏🤗

haiiiiii!!!! 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#65

thank you Tahira 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
I have only compliments to give you and no criticism at the moment.......but when I do find it, I'll surely give you the full blow!😉


Great update as usual.....👏👏

However, I did find a couple of grammar/spelling mistakes, which I'm not going to pound you for....so chillax my friend!😆

~diljaani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: diljaani

I have only compliments to give you and no criticism at the moment.......but when I do find it, I'll surely give you the full blow!😉


Great update as usual.....👏👏

However, I did find a couple of grammar/spelling mistakes, which I'm not going to pound you for....so chillax my friend!😆

~diljaani

criticism will be most appreciated! 😃

haiiii, thank you huma puma! 😛🤗

pounding is most welcome; after all whats a writer with a few grammatical errors?! 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

continuing:

setting: a tall figure stands over a table laden with various materials, among them lies a small box of alcohol swabs.

Niyati quickly reassures everyone around her that she is fine and when Ms. Khan turns around for a second, she quickly steps out of her reach and heads for the door.

Shourya: "Niyati? where are you going?" he asks, hurrying to catch up with her.

Niyati keeps on walking, looking for that face, those eyes.

ofcource.... anyone who once see his face/eyes they cant stop searching for them....😳

Shourya doubles his pace and overtakes Niyati in a matter of a few steps.

He stands in front of her.

Shourya: "Niyati? Are you okay? Do you want to go to the nurse or...?" he asks puzzled.

Niyati looks at him, and quickly replies:

Niyati: "What? No...I...actually, yes, I would like to go to the nurse, I feel a little light-headed..." she says hurriedly, her eyes peering past Shourya's shoulder.

Shourya cuts her off.

Shourya: "Light headed? Niyati! Ok dont worry, I'll take you..."

arre shourya niyatiki itni chinta ki jaroorat nahi..... and even if you reallly wanna worry about someone... i am alwayss there!!!

This time Niyati cuts him off.

Niyati: "I'll manage Shourya, you just please tell me where the nurse's office is." she says.

Shourya looks at her with concern but decides that he should respect her space, and so he complies.

Shourya: "Just make a right there and its the last door in the corridor." he says, somewhat hurt.

aww shourya darling.....dont worry MAIN HOO NAA!!!

Niyati goes up to him and squeezes his shoulders and smiles, thankfully.

Shourya smiles and slowly turns to leave for the dance studio.

Niyati watches him fade away, and quickly turns and makes a left.

The corridor is silent; classrooms are not found in this range. She can see the janitor's closet, and a small lounge, and finally the nurse's office.

She hesistates outside of the door, but knows that this is the right thing to do. She slowly peers in and her eyes fall instantly on the tall figure in front of her swabbing his left bicep.

hayeeee uski bicepss!!!

But she can see that he is not actually swabbing the now swollen scratches completely, probably because of the stinging pain it would cause.

aww my poor baby!!!

She quickly strides over to him, and she is about to speak, when Agni turns towards her.

His eyes overwhelm her and suddenly she is very conscious of her intrusion on him.

Niyati: "I'm sorry, I didnt mean to intrude, actually I'm sorry for..."

But Agni whispers "shhhh"

He studies her, his gaze deliberate and intent on her concerned face.

Agni: "did Ms. Khan send you?" he finally says, his voice dark.

Niyati: "...no...I came on my own to..."

Agni cuts her off.

He steps back, but does not lift his eyes from Niyati.

Agni: "...to check if I did not die from your amazingly deep gashes?" he asks, his voice mocking her concern.

oooh good line...very rude... yet awesome!!!

Niyati stumbles for words.

But Agni does not let her speak, as he comes a little closer to her.

She can feel the intensity of ridicule his eyes for her behavior.

obviously yaar..... i have already drowned in them... not only once but everytime i see them.... (off to my dreamworld)

Agni is now inches away from Niyati,(ooh if he was ever soo close to mee) but Niyati is frozen(i would have frozen too.... i mean its agni comeon) and can only hope that he cannot hear the feverish beats of her heart.

is it just mee or its getting a lil HOT!!!

Agni: "if you dont mind, I'd like to tend to my, oh what should I call them, ah yes, wounds that you have so nicely made on me." he says, his voice threatening and low.

hayee even his threatning sounds soo goood.....

As he turns his back to Niyati, Niyati can feel the full impact of his words. But she knows that they are wrong; she never meant to hurt him, why would she, he had saved her.

She looks at his back towards her, her eyes in disbelief and finally after a moment takes a deep breath and slowly says:

Niyati: "I'm very sorry I hurt you, I had no intention of doing so. I came here, not to bother you, but to thank you for catching me and for apologizing for hurting you." here she paused, but slowly began speaking again. "But maybe I was wrong to even come here, but my God knows and I know that it is only right for me to show my concern, and thank you."

with that she quickly walks to the door and out, tears stinging her eyes.

aww poor niyati baby... bad agni...yet handsome adn hot agni!!!

All is silent as Niyati's footsteps fade away into the distance.

Agni does not move from his spot, his eyes glued to the floor below him, Niyati's words ringing in his ears:

"But my God knows and I know that it is only right for me to show my concern and thank you..."

OoOoOoOoOoOoO
He slowly turns towards the empty door and gazes at it, lost in his thoughts.

He had known instantly that Niyati was no ordinary girl. The moment he had stepped into the dance studio he had seen her capabilities as a dancer. Capabilities that had eraptured his own passion for dancing. He had found himself watching her every move with fixed attention and was astonished to find no fault in her form. And now he had found out that she could not only answer him on the dance floor but also back-answer him and withstand his devestating blows.

Agni while still looking at the door says out loud:

Agni: "How often do I get to take on a person of my standards, huh Agni?" he asks himself.

A menacing grin appears on his lips, 😳😳and a zestful gleam in his eyes. (hayeee)

Agni: "pleasure to meet you..." he stops talking out loud and tries to remember her name.

He suddenly remembers Ms. Khan's concerned words back in the studio.

Agni: "...Niyati." he whispers.

😳
Back in the corridor Niyati refuses to spill any of her collecting tears as she walks briskly towards the studio and back in the doorway of the nurse's office, Agni cannot stop smiling devilishly(yepp he is a devil..... but a very hot adn sexy one😳) as thoughts of having substantial competition on the dance floor spread like wilfire in his mind.

Agni takes the alcohol swab in his hand and this time, rubs his entire swollen area on his biceps,(again hayeeee) and as a sharp stinging sensation engulfs him, he grins wildlly and says:

"touche Niyati, touche"

"touche angele, touche"

ahh i can soo hear agni say that too mee....!!! woo and now its continously ringing in my ear...... ok byee everyone ...mee off to my dreamland again.......



oh kool ff....
lol the first ff i read soo far....
hmm ummm do you know if there are any other kulvadhu ff...
i just watch that serial soooo....
wanted to read some more...!!
anywyasss reallly awesomee work....
ur awesomee writer yaar..!!!
hayee everytime you metion agni's biceps.... my knees grow weak 😳

❤️Angele
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

haiiiiiiii!!! thankkooooo love!!! 🤗

ii loveeeed itttttt !!!!!!!!!

aaaaaahhh agni & his bruises aww.. soo cuteeeeee only if niyti helped him put alchoal on his woundssss.. sooo romanticc -iSH .. evilishh lol but u used very proffesional vocabularyy!! it made my fanfic look like garbage lol.. 😆 i luvvv itt.. ahHH more HOTT agni mommentss 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: diljaani

I have only compliments to give you and no criticism at the moment.......but when I do find it, I'll surely give you the full blow!😉


Great update as usual.....👏👏

However, I did find a couple of grammar/spelling mistakes, which I'm not going to pound you for....so chillax my friend!😆

~diljaani

ok aunty 😳😆

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