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Posted: 18 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: pc84

[color=red] haila.. u r making me blush!!! you are soo cute yaar. hm.. yea... i was only kididng.. everythign is in you head.. make it good.hehe.. like i have to say that to you hon..

i love you more..hehe

good nite hon

sweet dreams



nope, me love you more 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: diljaani



I'm no aunty, I'm the luvly 'di' everyone luves!😳

dont make me get my danda out!😡


~diljaani



😆😆😆 silly shazeen 😆😆😆
Edited by bollywoodfan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: diljaani



BRAVO!! 👏 BRAVO!!👏

~diljaani



haiiiii 😳
thank you 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: me_iq

awwwwwww jaan tht was gr8



thank you meri pyari si dost! 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

continuing:

setting: The dance studio...

Niyati steps back into the dance studio, unaware of anything but the sheer force it is taking for her to regain herself and to stop the tears in her eyes from spilling over.

gosh this seems so real coz every time niyti makes tht crying face n her tear comes outt lol yaar niyti ye rona dona bund kar.. (lol jaanu wht graat work its acually even real lol)

Ms. Khan: "Niyati dear? You're back? What did the nurse say? Do you feel better? Niyati?" she asks rapidly shooting questions at Niyati with an anxious face.

arrrre aunty sabar kar na.. itna question kyon kar ri ha.. lol

Niyati blinks in realization as she steps out from her thoughts.

She quickly strives to answer, but is interrupted by an overwhelmingly familiar voice.

"she is fine" and with a pause adds "right Niyati?"

oooo hooo mera agni intna cute hai.. ! abhi agni thoda flirt kaar.. hehe

She doesnt have to turn around to see his mocking smile and dark eyes.

moking smile? more like cute n sexy smileee

Ms. Khan lets out a breath of relief and walks towards Agni.

Ms. Khan: "thank you Agni, you saved my best female dancer; otherwise how could she dance in next month's show?" she says as she pats Agni on his shoulders and turns to smile kindly at Niyati.

BEST? pssh please im the best lol.. just kiddingg
Niyati, upon hearing this, quickly turns to look at Ms. Khan, confounded by Ms. Khan's generosity.

Agni shows no reaction.

Niyati: "Ma'am, I dont know what to say...I'm not that apt, maybe..."

But Ms. Khan interrupts her with a sharp laugh.

Ms. Khan: "Maybe you dont trust me Ms. Niyati, it seems, but I have never seen such a female dancer in such form and balance in these four walls, except for you. And I suggest that you not take yourself so lightly; what you did today is no less than perfection. You will dance as my main female lead, end of story." she says sternly, but with a admiring smile.

Niyati is stunned; she has never thought of herself as such a good dancer...

Ms. Khan walks over to Niyati and gently pats her arm and says:

Ms. Khan: "No more thinking Niyati, only practice."

She smiles kindly at Niyati, who without thinking, hugs Ms, Khan.

Ms. Khan is pleasantly surprised and warmly hugs her back.

Ms. Khan: "now shall we get back to work?" she says as she and Niyati seperate.

Niyati nods slowly.

Ms. Khan: "Good, now everyone make a line on the dance floor right now."

All the students bustle to shape themselves in a line; Shourya smiles gently at Niyati as he takes his place next to her.

Niyati smiles back, but the smile quickly disappears as Agni steps besides Niyati too.

Agni sees Niyati trying to focus on Ms. Khan at the front of the room, but he knows she is only focusing on him; it doesnt matter to him that Niyati was obviously uncomfortable next to him; it only delighted him in knowing what effect he was having on her.

"the worse the better" he thought thinking of the grand competition he woul have with her on the dance floor. The angrier she became, the harder he would crush her on the dance floor.

Ms. Khan's voice suddenly invaded his thoughts.

Ms. Khan: "Now as you all know, well, Niyati will know now, we're going to have our monthly dance shows, and the first one is next month. But next month is coming fast, and from the likes of you all, it seems, we have much to do" she says with an exasperated sigh.

She continues: "But I expect you all to shape up well, especially because I have chosen Niyati as our main lead, and as you all know, as always, we'll have our best male dancer on the floor besides her..."

Before she can finish the sentence with the name of that dancer, Shourya's right hand shoots up.

Ms. Khan looks at him with an annoyed glare, but finally calls on him.

Ms. Khan: "Yes, shourya, what can i do for you now?" she says, sarcasm in her every syllable.

Shourya ignores her tone and says:

Shourya: "Ms. Khan, if you dont mind, I would like to try out for the male lead."

gosh shourya terko bi kiya haa.. let my babii doo itt hehe

Agni turns to look at him in sheer amusement.

Niyati also turns to look at him, smiling.

Ms. Khan makes a small snorting sound, but Shourya does not react, and instead looks more adamant than ever.

Ms. Khan sensing this, tries to cover her amusement up by coughing, but it only highlights it.

She regains herself.

Ms. Khan: "May I ask why Mr. Rathore? If I'm not mistaken, you have never shown any keen ineterest in the male lead, or for that matter any show we've ever done. And yet, today, you have demonstrated otherwise. I'm suspicious Shourya, what are you up to?"
she asks eyeing him.

Shourya turns a slight red, and some students laugh, but he ignores them and speaks.

Shourya: "See thats the thing Ms. Khan, I have finally seen the art of dancing when Niyati danced today..and.."

But before he can continue, Ms. Khan interrupts him:

Ms. Khan: "Shourya, you mean to say youve never seen me dance?" she asks, her voice alert.

Shourya: "No ma'am, I mean yes ma'am, but thats not what I meant..."

Ms. Khan: " I know Shourya, that that is not what you meant, in fact, I know you never actually mean anything." she says ridicule in her voice.

Agni smiles silently.

ooh lalala sileently n HOTafully and sweetly lol

Niyati looks on worriedly.

Shourya: "Please ma'am, I really mean it this time..." he says, his voice low with embarassment.

Ms. Khan walks over to Shourya and lifts his face, and looks into his eyes and after a moment says:

Ms. Khan: "You may try out, it seems youve made up your mind anyways regardless of my decision, as always" she adds.

Shourya smiles at her gratefully and opens his mouth to speak, but Ms. Khan stops him.

Ms. Khan: "no more talking Shourya, we'll hold your try-out tomorrow-"

as she says this, a bell rings.

Class has ended for the day.

Ms. Khan gestures towards the door, as her students scramble to leave.

Agni walks over to Ms. Khan, eyeing shourya with a demeaning smile.

Shourya does not take notice as he joins Niyati at the door.

Shouya looks happy, but there is something funny in his eyes.

Niyati: "whats wrong Shourya? Arent you happy? Ma'am gave you permission to try out" she asks.

Shourya: "She has but the try out competition isnt exactly easy..."

Niyati: "I'm sure you'll top the rest."

Shourya looks at her and says:

Shourya: "Niyati there is no rest, just one."

Niyati: "thats even better!"

Shourya: "I'd rather have more than one competitor than having him as my only competition" he mumbles.

Niyati looks him in the eye.

Niyati: "who exactly is your feared competition?" she asks slowly.

Shourya ruffles his hair and looks down and says:

Shourya: "Agni"

hahaha niyti teri tho annkhan tho kul gayi.. soo much shock isnt gud for ya niytii lol yay agni is gunna be ur dancer coz shouryas lil self doesnt stand a chance against the hot and sexy agni !

Niyati's face contorts with surprise as Agni's name echoes through her mind.

hehe hope ya dont mind the extra comments jaanu hehe

i luved it.. i hope agni is the main lead.. hehe then romantic momments r sure to comeeeee 😳 😳

gud job!!!!!! 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
just read the entire FF nd gotto say tht it rocks....keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: miss5stars

hehe hope ya dont mind the extra comments jaanu hehe

i luved it.. i hope agni is the main lead.. hehe then romantic momments r sure to comeeeee 😳 😳

gud job!!!!!! 👏

thank you shazeen for your kind words 😊

indeed the romantic moments are just around the corner 😉

i love your comments, anywhere and everywhere 😳

do keep reading 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

just read the entire FF nd gotto say tht it rocks....keep it up

why thank you! 😊

its encouraging words likes yours that inspire me 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
No update?😕

I guess its not just me who's busy nowadays....😭

But your *LONG*😆 updates are well worth the wait sweetheart😳

~diljaani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
awsomme a really magnificent and exquisitely unique fic just read the whole thing after sp long its amazing

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