Love in Motion (updated p.10) - Page 5

Originally posted by: banju

great part

Originally posted by: aman123

Hey awsome update 👏 lots of Anu and Shourya talk and not Niyati. 😭 BTW where Agni? 😃

Originally posted by: queenyuks

I cant believe I missed 2 updates!!!! maybe I should check for updates more often.
Okay the last two parts were really great. Awsome (with a capital A)!!!!!
So finally Shourya enters. And this time it's him who's in love with Niyati. It's a nice change actually.
But mera jaanu Agni kahan hai jaan?
Well, I'm sure he'll be coming soon.
Update soon!!!

Yuks

Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

patience sweetoooo patience 😉

Woh hi toh nahin hai.😆

Originally posted by: aman123

Woh hi toh nahin hai.😆

once i get the perfect entrance plan for mr. hot himself, ill update 😉

Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

once i get the perfect entrance plan for mr. hot himself, ill update 😉

Okay I think I can wait till then.😆

Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

🤗
thank you meri jaanemann😳
I will def. read your new FF; I'm sure its going to put mine to shame! 😉😃👏

ur welcum pixie.....motii agar phir aisi baat ki 2 main tumhay msn per block kardoon gii....lol

continuing:

setting: The small hand touches 8 while the big hand hits 12 on a small square, plain, rustic clock on an off-white wall. Pale green eyes take their gaze off of the clock and turn to look at a classroom at the end of the hall. Niyati starts running towards it...

The door is kept wide open with a wooden triangular block and as Niyati steps one foot inside the door, the work outside filled with bustling college students and the frenzy that comes with it vanishes as she fully steps into a world unlike the other. No one is hurrying, no one is in a rush. Calm and quiet engulf Niyati and her worried heart relaxes.

"Niyati?"

Niyati turns towards the deep voice calling her name. Her eyes fall on a particularly handsome boy with eyes so clear that Niyati could almost see herself in them.

Shourya: "Niyati right?"

As Shoury spoke, he fought to keep his heart from racing right through his chest. Niyati was much more beautiful in person than in the picture. Her green eyes were incredibly enticing and so pure... Her black hair came down to her waist; a color so black he was almost blinded by its lustre. She wore a fitted salwar kameez that highlighted her amazing figure. She was the Taj Mahal personified: absolutely perfect.

Niyati's words cut through his gaze and brought him back to reality.

Niyati: "yes...um, im sorry I am late sir I didn't realize the bus would take so long and..." Niyati nervously babbled, her eyes pointed at the floor.

Suddenly she hears laughter.

Shourya: laughing, "Niyati, relax, I am not the dance teacher. I did not know I looked so old or so..."

Niyati cut him off midsentence.

Niyati: "then forgive me, but have we met before?" she enquired her brows coming together in confusion.

Shourya: "actually, we've never met, but I think you know Anu?"

Niyati: "Ye..s..." she replied hesitantly.

Shourya: "great! Anu and I know each other, and she had told me about you, in fact she showed me your picture..."

Niyati cut him off again.

Niyati: "my picture?" she asked with a still confused, but stern look plastered on her pleasant face.

Shourya turned a slight pink in embarassment. He didnt realize how it would have sounded to Niyati saying that Anu had shown her picture to him.

Suddenly Shourya extended his right arm, cleared his throat and said:

Shourya: "I'm very sorry, can we start all over again?" he asked, his eyes filled with hope.

Niyati looked at him, not sure what to do, but his apologetic smile told her that he hadnt intended anything wrong. "Plus, Anu knows him, so maybe..." Niyati thought to herself.

Shourya: "thats ok I understand..." he said his eyes reflecting hurt.

Niyati: "what, no no, its nothing like that" she quickly replied, and finally shook his hand.

Her hands reminded Shourya of rose petals. They were as soft and delicate as Niyati's hands were. Before he could regain himself, the handshake was completed.

Shourya: "Niyati, I'm Shourya Rathode. I've known Anu ever since she moved out on her own from her parents' place. We met in a restaurent and I had needed tutoring for biology and she took me up on it. The rest is history." he said, smiling.

He quickly added "and about your picture, she showed it to me because she had been so excited that you were coming here so..."

Niyati laughed softly.

Shourya: "what happened?" he asked.

Niyati: "nothing except that Anu and you are quite alike."

Shouray was about to speak.

Niyati: "thats a good thing" she replied, taking the words right out of his mouth.

They both laughed. Shourya watched as Niyati laughed, her laugh sounding so jolly, so lively...

"Everybody put your bags, helmets, water bottles whatever nonsense you dont need right now away in the closets and come quickly on the dance floor." said a female voice in the front of the room.

As Niyati looked over, Shourya whispered to her:

Shourya: "thats Ms.Khan, the actual teacher."

He smiled playfully.

Niyati: "Anu and you are the same person; you tease, and she teases and in the same manner!"

Shorya: "should I take that as a compliment or...?"

Niyati playfully slapped his left arm and left to put away her bag.

Shourya watched her leave; her touch leaving his arm completely numb.

"Reminder to self: thank Anu for bringing Niyati into my life" Shourya whispered to himself, smiling.

He kept smiling even as he joined Niyati on the dance floor and awaited further instructions from Ms.Khan.

More coming up later...

Originally posted by: me_iq

aww tht was amazing

thank you yaar 😳