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Posted: 18 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Angele



oh kool ff....
lol the first ff i read soo far....
hmm ummm do you know if there are any other kulvadhu ff...
i just watch that serial soooo....
wanted to read some more...!!
anywyasss reallly awesomee work....
ur awesomee writer yaar..!!!
hayee everytime you metion agni's biceps.... my knees grow weak 😳

❤️Angele

awww, thank you so much angele sweetheart!!! your kind words make me blush! 😳

thank you dear! 🤗Your comments were marvelous! 😃

there is another kulvaddhu FF by shazeen whose link you can find in the archive thread in the Kulvaddhu forum! 😃

trust me youre gonna go weaker in the knees as this FF continues...😉😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: miss5stars

ii loveeeed itttttt !!!!!!!!!

aaaaaahhh agni & his bruises aww.. soo cuteeeeee only if niyti helped him put alchoal on his woundssss.. sooo romanticc -iSH .. evilishh lol but u used very proffesional vocabularyy!! it made my fanfic look like garbage lol.. 😆 i luvvv itt.. ahHH more HOTT agni mommentss 😳

awww, thank you my sweetiepie!!! 🤗

BTW, your FF rocks, DUHHHH!!! 😃⭐️

more hot agni moments to come, but later! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#73

continuing:

setting: The dance studio...

Niyati steps back into the dance studio, unaware of anything but the sheer force it is taking for her to regain herself and to stop the tears in her eyes from spilling over.

Ms. Khan: "Niyati dear? You're back? What did the nurse say? Do you feel better? Niyati?" she asks rapidly shooting questions at Niyati with an anxious face.

Niyati blinks in realization as she steps out from her thoughts.

She quickly strives to answer, but is interrupted by an overwhelmingly familiar voice.

"she is fine" and with a pause adds "right Niyati?"

She doesnt have to turn around to see his mocking smile and dark eyes.

Ms. Khan lets out a breath of relief and walks towards Agni.

Ms. Khan: "thank you Agni, you saved my best female dancer; otherwise how could she dance in next month's show?" she says as she pats Agni on his shoulders and turns to smile kindly at Niyati.

Niyati, upon hearing this, quickly turns to look at Ms. Khan, confounded by Ms. Khan's generosity.

Agni shows no reaction.

Niyati: "Ma'am, I dont know what to say...I'm not that apt, maybe..."

But Ms. Khan interrupts her with a sharp laugh.

Ms. Khan: "Maybe you dont trust me Ms. Niyati, it seems, but I have never seen such a female dancer in such form and balance in these four walls, except for you. And I suggest that you not take yourself so lightly; what you did today is no less than perfection. You will dance as my main female lead, end of story." she says sternly, but with a admiring smile.

Niyati is stunned; she has never thought of herself as such a good dancer...

Ms. Khan walks over to Niyati and gently pats her arm and says:

Ms. Khan: "No more thinking Niyati, only practice."

She smiles kindly at Niyati, who without thinking, hugs Ms, Khan.

Ms. Khan is pleasantly surprised and warmly hugs her back.

Ms. Khan: "now shall we get back to work?" she says as she and Niyati seperate.

Niyati nods slowly.

Ms. Khan: "Good, now everyone make a line on the dance floor right now."

All the students bustle to shape themselves in a line; Shourya smiles gently at Niyati as he takes his place next to her.

Niyati smiles back, but the smile quickly disappears as Agni steps besides Niyati too.

Agni sees Niyati trying to focus on Ms. Khan at the front of the room, but he knows she is only focusing on him; it doesnt matter to him that Niyati was obviously uncomfortable next to him; it only delighted him in knowing what effect he was having on her.

"the worse the better" he thought thinking of the grand competition he woul have with her on the dance floor. The angrier she became, the harder he would crush her on the dance floor.

Ms. Khan's voice suddenly invaded his thoughts.

Ms. Khan: "Now as you all know, well, Niyati will know now, we're going to have our monthly dance shows, and the first one is next month. But next month is coming fast, and from the likes of you all, it seems, we have much to do" she says with an exasperated sigh.

She continues: "But I expect you all to shape up well, especially because I have chosen Niyati as our main lead, and as you all know, as always, we'll have our best male dancer on the floor besides her..."

Before she can finish the sentence with the name of that dancer, Shourya's right hand shoots up.

Ms. Khan looks at him with an annoyed glare, but finally calls on him.

Ms. Khan: "Yes, shourya, what can i do for you now?" she says, sarcasm in her every syllable.

Shourya ignores her tone and says:

Shourya: "Ms. Khan, if you dont mind, I would like to try out for the male lead."

Agni turns to look at him in sheer amusement.

Niyati also turns to look at him, smiling.

Ms. Khan makes a small snorting sound, but Shourya does not react, and instead looks more adamant than ever.

Ms. Khan sensing this, tries to cover her amusement up by coughing, but it only highlights it.

She regains herself.

Ms. Khan: "May I ask why Mr. Rathore? If I'm not mistaken, you have never shown any keen ineterest in the male lead, or for that matter any show we've ever done. And yet, today, you have demonstrated otherwise. I'm suspicious Shourya, what are you up to?"
she asks eyeing him.

Shourya turns a slight red, and some students laugh, but he ignores them and speaks.

Shourya: "See thats the thing Ms. Khan, I have finally seen the art of dancing when Niyati danced today..and.."

But before he can continue, Ms. Khan interrupts him:

Ms. Khan: "Shourya, you mean to say youve never seen me dance?" she asks, her voice alert.

Shourya: "No ma'am, I mean yes ma'am, but thats not what I meant..."

Ms. Khan: " I know Shourya, that that is not what you meant, in fact, I know you never actually mean anything." she says ridicule in her voice.

Agni smiles silently.

Niyati looks on worriedly.

Shourya: "Please ma'am, I really mean it this time..." he says, his voice low with embarassment.

Ms. Khan walks over to Shourya and lifts his face, and looks into his eyes and after a moment says:

Ms. Khan: "You may try out, it seems youve made up your mind anyways regardless of my decision, as always" she adds.

Shourya smiles at her gratefully and opens his mouth to speak, but Ms. Khan stops him.

Ms. Khan: "no more talking Shourya, we'll hold your try-out tomorrow-"

as she says this, a bell rings.

Class has ended for the day.

Ms. Khan gestures towards the door, as her students scramble to leave.

Agni walks over to Ms. Khan, eyeing shourya with a demeaning smile.

Shourya does not take notice as he joins Niyati at the door.

Shouya looks happy, but there is something funny in his eyes.

Niyati: "whats wrong Shourya? Arent you happy? Ma'am gave you permission to try out" she asks.

Shourya: "She has but the try out competition isnt exactly easy..."

Niyati: "I'm sure you'll top the rest."

Shourya looks at her and says:

Shourya: "Niyati there is no rest, just one."

Niyati: "thats even better!"

Shourya: "I'd rather have more than one competitor than having him as my only competition" he mumbles.

Niyati looks him in the eye.

Niyati: "who exactly is your feared competition?" she asks slowly.

Shourya ruffles his hair and looks down and says:

Shourya: "Agni"

Niyati's face contorts with surprise as Agni's name echoes through her mind.

Edited by bollywoodfan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

continuing:

setting: The dance studio...

Niyati steps back into the dance studio, unaware of anything( well duhh...agni ka jadoo hai yaar😳) but the sheer force it is taking for her to regain herself and to stop the tears in her eyes from spilling over.

aww niyati baby... dont worry!!!😃

Ms. Khan: "Niyati dear? You're back? What did the nurse say? Do you feel better? Niyati?" she asks rapidly shooting questions at Niyati with an anxious face.

Niyati blinks in realization as she steps out from her thoughts.

She quickly strives to answer, but is interrupted by an overwhelmingly familiar voice.

"she is fine" and with a pause adds "right Niyati?"

hayeee agni!!!!

She doesnt have to turn around to see his mocking smile and dark eyes.

Ms. Khan lets out a breath of relief and walks towards Agni.

Ms. Khan: "thank you Agni, you saved my best female dancer; otherwise how could she dance in next month's show?" she says as she pats Agni on his shoulders and turns to smile kindly at Niyati.

Niyati, upon hearing this, quickly turns to look at Ms. Khan, confounded by Ms. Khan's generosity.

Agni shows no reaction.

Niyati: "Ma'am, I dont know what to say...I'm not that apt, maybe..."

yaar you dont know how talented you are.... you made our agni competetive....

But Ms. Khan interrupts her with a sharp laugh.

Ms. Khan: "Maybe you dont trust me Ms. Niyati, it seems, but I have never seen such a female dancer in such form and balance in these four walls, except for you. And I suggest that you not take yourself so lightly; what you did today is no less than perfection. You will dance as my main female lead, end of story." she says sternly, but with a admiring smile.

right ms khan.... thats the way you should command her!

Niyati is stunned; she has never thought of herself as such a good dancer...

noone ever thinks herself as good... but you never know...😉

Ms. Khan walks over to Niyati and gently pats her arm and says:

Ms. Khan: "No more thinking Niyati, only practice."

She smiles kindly at Niyati, who without thinking, hugs Ms, Khan.

Ms. Khan is pleasantly surprised and warmly hugs her back.

Ms. Khan: "now shall we get back to work?" she says as she and Niyati seperate.

Niyati nods slowly.

Ms. Khan: "Good, now everyone make a line on the dance floor right now."

All the students bustle to shape themselves in a line; Shourya smiles gently at Niyati as he takes his place next to her.

Niyati smiles back, but the smile quickly disappears as Agni steps besides Niyati too.

Agni sees Niyati trying to focus on Ms. Khan at the front of the room, but he knows she is only focusing on him; it doesnt matter to him that Niyati was obviously uncomfortable next to him; it only delighted him in knowing what effect he was having on her.

kaash he would know what effect he has on meee.....(off to my dreamworld again)

"the worse the better" he thought thinking of the grand competition he woul have with her on the dance floor. The angrier she became, the harder he would crush her on the dance floor.

haaah you think of crushing her..... but you'll end up crushing on her!!!( hope i make sense...😆)

Ms. Khan's voice suddenly invaded his thoughts.

Ms. Khan: "Now as you all know, well, Niyati will know now, we're going to have our monthly dance shows, and the first one is next month. But next month is coming fast, and from the likes of you all, it seems, we have much to do" she says with an exasperated sigh.

She continues: "But I expect you all to shape up well, especially because I have chosen Niyati as our main lead, and as you all know, as always, we'll have our best male dancer on the floor besides her..."

Before she can finish the sentence with the name of that dancer, Shourya's right hand shoots up.

Ms. Khan looks at him with an annoyed glare, but finally calls on him.

Ms. Khan: "Yes, shourya, what can i do for you now?" she says, sarcasm in her every syllable.

Shourya ignores her tone and says:

Shourya: "Ms. Khan, if you dont mind, I would like to try out for the male lead."

weeee!! go shourya! go shourya!

Agni turns to look at him in sheer amusement.

Niyati also turns to look at him, smiling.

Ms. Khan makes a small snorting sound, but Shourya does not react, and instead looks more adamant than ever.

Ms. Khan sensing this, tries to cover her amusement up by coughing, but it only highlights it.

She regains herself.

Ms. Khan: "May I ask why Mr. Rathore? If I'm not mistaken, you have never shown any keen ineterest in the male lead, or for that matter any show we've ever done. And yet, today, you have demonstrated otherwise. I'm suspicious Shourya, what are you up to?"
she asks eyeing him.

Shourya turns a slight red, and some students laugh, but he ignores them and speaks.

Shourya: "See thats the thing Ms. Khan, I have finally seen the art of dancing when Niyati danced today..and.."

shourya...y dont you understand... she is not for you.... come to meee!!!🤗🤗🤗

But before he can continue, Ms. Khan interrupts him:

Ms. Khan: "Shourya, you mean to say youve never seen me dance?" she asks, her voice alert.

Shourya: "No ma'am, I mean yes ma'am, but thats not what I meant..."

uh oh.... phas gaya!!

Ms. Khan: " I know Shourya, that that is not what you meant, in fact, I know you never actually mean anything." she says ridicule in her voice.

Agni smiles silently.

Niyati looks on worriedly.

Shourya: "Please ma'am, I really mean it this time..." he says, his voice low with embarassment.

Ms. Khan walks over to Shourya and lifts his face, and looks into his eyes and after a moment says:

Ms. Khan: "You may try out, it seems youve made up your mind anyways regardless of my decision, as always" she adds.

Shourya smiles at her gratefully and opens his mouth to speak, but Ms. Khan stops him.

Ms. Khan: "no more talking Shourya, we'll hold your try-out tomorrow-"

as she says this, a bell rings.

Class has ended for the day.

Ms. Khan gestures towards the door, as her students scramble to leave.

Agni walks over to Ms. Khan, eyeing shourya with a demeaning smile.

hayee thikning of his smile makes mee blush!!!!!😳😳😳

Shourya does not take notice as he joins Niyati at the door.

Shouya looks happy, but there is something funny in his eyes.

umm let me guesss nervousness cuz he will be competing agni!!


Niyati: "whats wrong Shourya? Arent you happy? Ma'am gave you permission to try out" she asks.

Shourya: "She has but the try out competition isnt exactly easy..."

Niyati: "I'm sure you'll top the rest."

Shourya looks at her and says:

Shourya: "Niyati there is no rest, just one."

well duhh.... AGNI DARLING!!!

Niyati: "thats even better!"

Shourya: "I'd rather have more than one competitor than having him as my only competition" he mumbles.

aww dont worry shourya baby!!.. you'll do fine.....(theres difference in fine adn perfect...and agni will be perfect...😆😆😆)

Niyati looks him in the eye.

Niyati: "who exactly is your feared competition?" she asks slowly.

Shourya ruffles his hair and looks down and says:

Shourya: "Agni"

Niyati's face contorts with surprise as Agni's name echoes through her mind.

well that happens alot to mee...... its not somethign new... but it might be for you...niyati baby!!!



awesomeee part dia.!!!!!🤗🤗🤗
just noo word to describe it....
yayyyy shourya and agni's competetion...!!!!
hehe i will happy whether shourya dances with niyati or agni......
i mean they are both just perfect naaa!!
oh yea.... btw... is shourya played by sachin or imraan???
i like both of them.. i think sachin is better in acting and imraan is cuter😳😳😳
and agni is simply HOTTT!!!!and is the best in acting and cuter than both imraan and sachin.......
hehe... ok soo i guess thats it....
continue sooon babezz!!
will bee waiting...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Angele



awesomeee part dia.!!!!!🤗🤗🤗
just noo word to describe it....
yayyyy shourya and agni's competetion...!!!!
hehe i will happy whether shourya dances with niyati or agni......
i mean they are both just perfect naaa!!
oh yea.... btw... is shourya played by sachin or imraan???
i like both of them.. i think sachin is better in acting and imraan is cuter😳😳😳
and agni is simply HOTTT!!!!and is the best in acting and cuter than both imraan and sachin.......
hehe... ok soo i guess thats it....
continue sooon babezz!!
will bee waiting...

haiiii, thank you so much angele! 🤗

even I cant wait for Agni and Shourya to compete! 😆

I imagine imran to play shourya in my FF 😳

will update soon , i hope 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

continuing:

setting: The dance studio...

Niyati steps back into the dance studio, unaware of anything but the sheer force it is taking for her to regain herself and to stop the tears in her eyes from spilling over.

Ms. Khan: "Niyati dear? You're back? What did the nurse say? Do you feel better? Niyati?" she asks rapidly shooting questions at Niyati with an anxious face.

Niyati blinks in realization as she steps out from her thoughts.

She quickly strives to answer, but is interrupted by an overwhelmingly familiar voice.

"she is fine" and with a pause adds "right Niyati?"

She doesnt have to turn around to see his mocking smile and dark eyes.

everytime you mention his eyes... i go **hai**.. and his biceps!!! oooooo...

Ms. Khan lets out a breath of relief and walks towards Agni.

Ms. Khan: "thank you Agni, you saved my best female dancer; otherwise how could she dance in next month's show?" she says as she pats Agni on his shoulders and turns to smile kindly at Niyati.
he might have saved niyati but he has stolen my heart.. what is Ms.Khan going to do that..... get him arrested for being HOT!! haiiii.........


Niyati, upon hearing this, quickly turns to look at Ms. Khan, confounded by Ms. Khan's generosity.

Agni shows no reaction.

Niyati: "Ma'am, I dont know what to say...I'm not that apt, maybe..."

But Ms. Khan interrupts her with a sharp laugh.

Ms. Khan: "Maybe you dont trust me Ms. Niyati, it seems, but I have never seen such a female dancer in such form and balance in these four walls, except for you. And I suggest that you not take yourself so lightly; what you did today is no less than perfection. You will dance as my main female lead, end of story." she says sternly, but with a admiring smile.

Niyati is stunned; she has never thought of herself as such a good dancer... oh niyati..when will u learn...



Ms. Khan walks over to Niyati and gently pats her arm and says:

Ms. Khan: "No more thinking Niyati, only practice." yes.. patience for Agni...... hmmmm.... delicious!!

She smiles kindly at Niyati, who without thinking, hugs Ms, Khan.
haila.. can you imagine.. rajlaxmi and our very own niyati hugging.. yes.. i am imagining ms khan being played by rajlaxmi


Ms. Khan is pleasantly surprised and warmly hugs her back.

Ms. Khan: "now shall we get back to work?" she says as she and Niyati seperate.

Niyati nods slowly.

Ms. Khan: "Good, now everyone make a line on the dance floor right now."

All the students bustle to shape themselves in a line; Shourya smiles gently at Niyati as he takes his place next to her.

Niyati smiles back, but the smile quickly disappears as Agni steps besides Niyati too.yes.. the smile is now being replaced by LUST!! hehehe.. hey niyati.. stay away from my AGNI!!! or you will get the raft of my danda.....

Agni sees Niyati trying to focus on Ms. Khan at the front of the room, but he knows she is only focusing on him; who wouldn't babes...😳 it doesnt matter to him that Niyati was obviously uncomfortable next to him; again.. who wouldn't be.... it only delighted him in knowing what effect he was having on her. or on EVERY WOMAN ON THE IF KUL FORUM!!!

"the worse the better" he thought thinking of the grand competition he would have with her on the dance floor. The angrier she became, the harder he would crush her on the dance floor.

Ms. Khan's voice suddenly invaded his thoughts.

Ms. Khan: "Now as you all know, well, Niyati will know now, we're going to have our monthly dance shows, and the first one is next month. But next month is coming fast, and from the likes of you all, it seems, we have much to do" she says with an exasperated sigh.

She continues: "But I expect you all to shape up well, especially because I have chosen Niyati as our main lead, and as you all know, as always, we'll have our best male dancer on the floor besides her..."

Before she can finish the sentence with the name of that dancer, Shourya's right hand shoots up.

Ms. Khan looks at him with an annoyed glare, but finally calls on him.

Ms. Khan: "Yes, shourya, what can i do for you now?" she says, sarcasm in her every syllable.

Shourya ignores her tone and says:

Shourya: "Ms. Khan, if you dont mind, I would like to try out for the male lead."

Agni turns to look at him in sheer amusement. haila dia.. you have replaced his anger with that of amusement!!! soo good yaar....

Niyati also turns to look at him, smiling.

Ms. Khan makes a small snorting sound, but Shourya does not react, and instead looks more adamant than ever.

Ms. Khan sensing this, tries to cover her amusement up by coughing, but it only highlights it.

She regains herself.

Ms. Khan: "May I ask why Mr. Rathore? If I'm not mistaken, you have never shown any keen ineterest in the male lead, or for that matter any show we've ever done. And yet, today, you have demonstrated otherwise. I'm suspicious Shourya, what are you up to?"
she asks eyeing him.

Shourya turns a slight red, and some students laugh, but he ignores them and speaks.

Shourya: "See thats the thing Ms. Khan, I have finally seen the art of dancing when Niyati danced today..and.."haila... flirt flirt.. what are to do with this stupid dude... dia kill him off 😆

But before he can continue, Ms. Khan interrupts him:

Ms. Khan: "Shourya, you mean to say you've never seen me dance?" she asks, her voice alert.


Shourya: "No ma'am, I mean yes ma'am, but thats not what I meant..."

Ms. Khan: " I know Shourya, that that is not what you meant, in fact, I know you never actually mean anything." she says ridicule in her voice.

Agni smiles silently. haila.. i need to go to the hospital

Niyati looks on worriedly.

Shourya: "Please ma'am, I really mean it this time..." he says, his voice low with embarassment.

Ms. Khan walks over to Shourya and lifts his face, and looks into his eyes and after a moment says:

Ms. Khan: "You may try out, it seems youve made up your mind anyways regardless of my decision, as always" she adds.

Shourya smiles at her gratefully and opens his mouth to speak, but Ms. Khan stops him.

Ms. Khan: "no more talking Shourya, we'll hold your try-out tomorrow-"

as she says this, a bell rings.

Class has ended for the day.

Ms. Khan gestures towards the door, as her students scramble to leave.

Agni walks over to Ms. Khan, eyeing shourya with a demeaning smile.
i am going to get a heart fail.... him smiling.. haila..


Shourya does not take notice as he joins Niyati at the door.

Shouya looks happy, but there is something funny in his eyes.
keep smiling baacha... dia i tell ya.. kill him.. heheh.. kidding..


Niyati: "whats wrong Shourya? Arent you happy? Ma'am gave you permission to try out" she asks.

Shourya: "She has but the try out competition isnt exactly easy..."

Niyati: "I'm sure you'll top the rest."

Shourya looks at her and says:

Shourya: "Niyati there is no rest, just one."

Niyati: "thats even better!"

Shourya: "I'd rather have more than one competitor than having him as my only competition" he mumbles.
you are not competition to him!! we All know that..


Niyati looks him in the eye.

Niyati: "who exactly is your feared competition?" she asks slowly.

Shourya ruffles his hair and looks down and says:

Shourya: "Agni"

Niyati's face contorts with surprise as Agni's name echoes through her mind. hmm.. entering dream world!!!!

what can i say about perfection!! hm.. yea. it was perfect.. it was sooo good yaar.. amazing.. i loved it.. i was sleepy but now i am away.. and no mention of his biceps😭.. hm. can you mention it again for the next update... ooo... i would love that.. hehee.. and you mention his eyes.. good..hehehe..

but i love this ff soo mch..no words to describe it yaar...... simply perfect

luv pri

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: pc84

what can i say about perfection!! hm.. yea. it was perfect.. it was sooo good yaar.. amazing.. i loved it.. i was sleepy but now i am away.. and no mention of his biceps😭.. hm. can you mention it again for the next update... ooo... i would love that.. hehee.. and you mention his eyes.. good..hehehe..

but i love this ff soo mch..no words to describe it yaar...... simply perfect

luv pri

haiiiii, youre "kill him off" comments were hilarious!!!! 🤣

dont worry meri jaan, more of agniiii hot moments to come 😳

you are soooo kind; me love you! 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

haiiiii, youre "kill him off" comments were hilarious!!!! 🤣

dont worry meri jaan, more of agniiii hot moments to come 😳

you are soooo kind; me love you! 😳

[color=red] haila.. u r making me blush!!! you are soo cute yaar. hm.. yea... i was only kididng.. everythign is in you head.. make it good.hehe.. like i have to say that to you hon..

i love you more..hehe

good nite hon

sweet dreams

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Posted: 18 years ago
#79


I'm no aunty, I'm the luvly 'di' everyone luves!😳

dont make me get my danda out!😡


~diljaani
Edited by diljaani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bollywoodfan

continuing:

setting: The dance studio...

Niyati steps back into the dance studio, unaware of anything but the sheer force it is taking for her to regain herself and to stop the tears in her eyes from spilling over.

Ms. Khan: "Niyati dear? You're back? What did the nurse say? Do you feel better? Niyati?" she asks rapidly shooting questions at Niyati with an anxious face.

Niyati blinks in realization as she steps out from her thoughts.

She quickly strives to answer, but is interrupted by an overwhelmingly familiar voice.

"she is fine" and with a pause adds "right Niyati?"

She doesnt have to turn around to see his mocking smile and dark eyes.

Ms. Khan lets out a breath of relief and walks towards Agni.

Ms. Khan: "thank you Agni, you saved my best female dancer; otherwise how could she dance in next month's show?" she says as she pats Agni on his shoulders and turns to smile kindly at Niyati.

Niyati, upon hearing this, quickly turns to look at Ms. Khan, confounded by Ms. Khan's generosity.

Agni shows no reaction.

Niyati: "Ma'am, I dont know what to say...I'm not that apt, maybe..."

But Ms. Khan interrupts her with a sharp laugh.

Ms. Khan: "Maybe you dont trust me Ms. Niyati, it seems, but I have never seen such a female dancer in such form and balance in these four walls, except for you. And I suggest that you not take yourself so lightly; what you did today is no less than perfection. You will dance as my main female lead, end of story." she says sternly, but with a admiring smile.

Niyati is stunned; she has never thought of herself as such a good dancer...

Ms. Khan walks over to Niyati and gently pats her arm and says:

Ms. Khan: "No more thinking Niyati, only practice."

She smiles kindly at Niyati, who without thinking, hugs Ms, Khan.

Ms. Khan is pleasantly surprised and warmly hugs her back.

Ms. Khan: "now shall we get back to work?" she says as she and Niyati seperate.

Niyati nods slowly.

Ms. Khan: "Good, now everyone make a line on the dance floor right now."

All the students bustle to shape themselves in a line; Shourya smiles gently at Niyati as he takes his place next to her.

Niyati smiles back, but the smile quickly disappears as Agni steps besides Niyati too.

Agni sees Niyati trying to focus on Ms. Khan at the front of the room, but he knows she is only focusing on him; it doesnt matter to him that Niyati was obviously uncomfortable next to him; it only delighted him in knowing what effect he was having on her.

"the worse the better" he thought thinking of the grand competition he woul have with her on the dance floor. The angrier she became, the harder he would crush her on the dance floor.

Ms. Khan's voice suddenly invaded his thoughts.

Ms. Khan: "Now as you all know, well, Niyati will know now, we're going to have our monthly dance shows, and the first one is next month. But next month is coming fast, and from the likes of you all, it seems, we have much to do" she says with an exasperated sigh.

She continues: "But I expect you all to shape up well, especially because I have chosen Niyati as our main lead, and as you all know, as always, we'll have our best male dancer on the floor besides her..."

Before she can finish the sentence with the name of that dancer, Shourya's right hand shoots up.

Ms. Khan looks at him with an annoyed glare, but finally calls on him.

Ms. Khan: "Yes, shourya, what can i do for you now?" she says, sarcasm in her every syllable.

Shourya ignores her tone and says:

Shourya: "Ms. Khan, if you dont mind, I would like to try out for the male lead."

Agni turns to look at him in sheer amusement.

Niyati also turns to look at him, smiling.

Ms. Khan makes a small snorting sound, but Shourya does not react, and instead looks more adamant than ever.

Ms. Khan sensing this, tries to cover her amusement up by coughing, but it only highlights it.

She regains herself.

Ms. Khan: "May I ask why Mr. Rathore? If I'm not mistaken, you have never shown any keen ineterest in the male lead, or for that matter any show we've ever done. And yet, today, you have demonstrated otherwise. I'm suspicious Shourya, what are you up to?"
she asks eyeing him.

Shourya turns a slight red, and some students laugh, but he ignores them and speaks.

Shourya: "See thats the thing Ms. Khan, I have finally seen the art of dancing when Niyati danced today..and.."

But before he can continue, Ms. Khan interrupts him:

Ms. Khan: "Shourya, you mean to say youve never seen me dance?" she asks, her voice alert.

Shourya: "No ma'am, I mean yes ma'am, but thats not what I meant..."

Ms. Khan: " I know Shourya, that that is not what you meant, in fact, I know you never actually mean anything." she says ridicule in her voice.

Agni smiles silently.

Niyati looks on worriedly.

Shourya: "Please ma'am, I really mean it this time..." he says, his voice low with embarassment.

Ms. Khan walks over to Shourya and lifts his face, and looks into his eyes and after a moment says:

Ms. Khan: "You may try out, it seems youve made up your mind anyways regardless of my decision, as always" she adds.

Shourya smiles at her gratefully and opens his mouth to speak, but Ms. Khan stops him.

Ms. Khan: "no more talking Shourya, we'll hold your try-out tomorrow-"

as she says this, a bell rings.

Class has ended for the day.

Ms. Khan gestures towards the door, as her students scramble to leave.

Agni walks over to Ms. Khan, eyeing shourya with a demeaning smile.

Shourya does not take notice as he joins Niyati at the door.

Shouya looks happy, but there is something funny in his eyes.

Niyati: "whats wrong Shourya? Arent you happy? Ma'am gave you permission to try out" she asks.

Shourya: "She has but the try out competition isnt exactly easy..."

Niyati: "I'm sure you'll top the rest."

Shourya looks at her and says:

Shourya: "Niyati there is no rest, just one."

Niyati: "thats even better!"

Shourya: "I'd rather have more than one competitor than having him as my only competition" he mumbles.

Niyati looks him in the eye.

Niyati: "who exactly is your feared competition?" she asks slowly.

Shourya ruffles his hair and looks down and says:

Shourya: "Agni"

Niyati's face contorts with surprise as Agni's name echoes through her mind.



BRAVO!! 👏 BRAVO!!👏

~diljaani

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