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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx😳,,,,i luv ur siggy!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome introduction, cnt wait for u to cont

thank you so much.......i'll try to post a part tonight😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi1219

this is an awsome ff.. i really like it so far.. cant wait to know about kripa's thoughts and their first meeting..

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tthank you!😳...i hope you continue to like it...i'll describe their meeting in more detail later.......

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja1221

omg! this is probably the best fan fic i've read for a while!!! it's so gud!!!! 😊 😛 i cant wait until you continue... hurry up 👏

lol...thank you so much for your wonderful words😛..😃.........if u want best ...rd..the other fan-fics (lol)...this is nothing compared to those....they're awesum!!!..i'm just trying to entertain myself.😆......please tell me if i can improve it anyhow...thanx again

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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWESUM, i REALLY like this FF!!!!!! 👏 it is cute & unique!!!!! 😳
PLEASE continue soon!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx for the comments nehagupta_9,berkeleygirl818,and diya_snow.It really means alot to me......😃...i'll post the next part by tomorrow morning.................working on it......

luv ya all,

nishaat😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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KOOL!!! no prob hunz, cnt wait to read da nxt part!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

As the two cars approached the grand mansion and drove up the long majestic driveway, Shalini and Karan Khanna stood at the front entrance of the house. Alisha and Riya, both dressed up in completely traditional Indian outfits, stood beside them. All of them had wide beams spread upon their faces. Shalini held a pooja ki thali as per the Indian tradition. Shalini and Karan had been very great friends with the Kapoors throughout their college days and they were both looking forward to this day for several days. Everyone had anticipation hidden behind these smiles of course. The impending decision of Angad and Kripa's marriage worried them all, made them apprehensive, especially Karan Khanna. In spite of moving to New York, years ago, he had always maintained contact with the Kapoors, and the thought that this friendship might be ruined forever by anything that goes wrong now disturbed him much. "It was all up to the kids now," he thought.

Seema and Vivek Oberoi stepped out of the car as Arjun stepped on the brakes, Angad's car not too far behind them. They all hugged each other affectionately having met each other after a good few years. Riya and Alisha stood by greeting them Namaste's and touching their feet. Angad brought the car to a stop and held the door open for Kripa, who stepped out quickly, blushing faintly..

"And this must be Kripa ,"said Riya. "We've heard so much about you. Welcome!"

"Bohauth hi pyaari bacchi hai." said Karan, as she touched his feet.

On the side, Arjun murmured to Alisha,"Wah! Aaj koi miracle hogaya kya? Are you sure you're Alisha? What have you done to my sister? Yeh sati-savitri kaun hai?"

"Oh..shut up,Bhaiya..I'm only doing this because Dad said that he won't pay my phone bills for six months if I didn't .I'd go broke."

"Aww!..That's so sad; my poor sister……serves you right..These clothes make you look like a grown-up girl….for once!" replied Arjun quietly, watching his adorable sister glare back at him, and quickly looking away before she thought up a way to get revenge on him.

"Aap log bauhot tired honge itnee lambe safar ke baad.Abhi aaram kar lejiye,aur evening ko baat chit karenge. I think that'll be fine. What do u think?" announced Angad's Dad, looking around.

"That should be fine." replied Vivek.

"Ok. then.. Shalini and I will show you your room ….We've got a lot to catch up on, "saying so, Karan led the Kapoors toward the other end of the house, chatting away and laughing merrily.

Kripa glanced around at everyone else, wondering whether anyone was going to show her room.

Alisha goes up to her and introduces herself, saying, "Hi! I'm Alisha. Angad's younger sister. And this is my bhabhi, Riya." She gestures towards Riya standing beside her. "And you've probably met Arjun Bhaiya already, "she says, glaring back at Arjun."And don't worry .This is so not the real me, you know all the traditional stuff .Want to cum along for a cup of coffee?" Alisha said, trying to break the ice and it worked.

Kripa let out a small laugh, "Hi! I'm Kripa. You probably knew that already. Umm…..I'd love to talk…but could you show me my rooms first so that I can you know get a bit settled first then you can take me anywhere you want," looking extremely tired now, due to her lack of sleep on the plane.

"Oh…..of course…."Alisha's cell rang; she picked it up turning away gesturing to Kripa to wait for a sec.

Meanwhile, Riya and Arjun had disappeared into their room with worried looks on their face. Left in the main hall was only Alisha, who was chatting away on the phone like there was no tomorrow, Angad, and Kripa.

Angad flopped down on the sofa and invited her to sit down as well." Teddy, please take the luggage up to everyone's rooms. "The butler hurried away with the luggage.

Kripa, on the other hand took a seat gladly as she was feeling extremely weak for some reason, probably because she hadn't slept in more than 24 hours. Both of them looked in different directions, averting their gaze from each others. Kripa managed to look at him when he was staring the other way. "He's handsome," she thought," very handsome, in fact. Why da hell doesn't he say something? Is he waiting for me to start? What should I say? Oh no ,he's looking at me" She turned her head away just an instant before he turned his head, feeling someone's gaze on him.

His gaze lingered upon her, as her eyes carefully examined the grand collection of movies next to the huge plasma Tv before her." She's really beautiful," he thought," and I feel like I've known her for years? This is weird. Angad bacchoo, you've finally cracked." He shook his head at himself.

Kripa suddenly looked up at him feeling as though he had said something and their eyes met for the second time that day. Their eyes locked upon each others, and they both stared deep into each other's eyes. All of a sudden, they were unaware of their surroundings, oblivious to everything around them. His eyes drew her deeper and deeper into his own. She felt like she was falling into them…..melting away…………………………

Alisha abruptly snapped her cell shut with a loud squeaky noise and grinned upon catching sight of Angad and Kripa. She snapped her fingers before their eyes. Instantly, thee staring session that had somehow started broke, and both of them looked up, embarrassed at the awkward situation.

"Kahan khon gaye tum dono?Accha Kripa. I'm so sorry, but my boyfriend's told me to meet him for lunch. I totally forgot! He's going to kill me. You won't mind if I go? Would you?"

"Oh no .Of course not…..You go ahead…Some other time then…I'm really tired anywayz."

"ok..than…...thank you…Kripa Di…Can I call you Di?....."

"Yh……sure. I'd love that…"

"Accha Bhai. I've got to get out of these uncomfortable clothes too…so can you show Kripa her room please? Thank you!" grinning secretly, she quickly pecked Angad's cheek and hugged Kripa. She was on her way out, smiling because her plan to get them to spend sum time alone had worked, before Angad fully managed to figure out what she had just said.

"Alish…….wait...what?!?!!?" Angad stuttered after her, staring at the spot where she had been standing seconds ago. "Oh, well, ok, I guess …Come on. It's on the second floor. I'll show you."

Kripa, now looking paler than before, just nodded her head and followed him up the stairs. When they stepped onto the second floor, Angad quietly spoke,"By the way…….Your room's on the right .Agar aap ko koi bhi zaroorat ho, please don't hesitate to ask me."

"Oh, I'm fine .Just need some sleep. Thank you very much," she replied shyly, uncertain of what she should say, especially after the episode downstairs.

"No problem ….well…I guess you should freshen up now. See you at dinner." Angad walked to his room which was a few doors away from Kripa's on the same floor and stopped his hand on the brass doorknob. He waited to hear the click of the door as she opened and closed the door behind her. He looked back once more, and then turned to go into his room. "She's a sweet girl," he thought to himself.

All the while, Kripa stood behind her door, her heartbeating slightly fast, listening to Angad's movements as he went into his room, her ear pressed against the door. Her breath caught iin her throat ,without her realizing it herself. She turned around, hearing the click of the door and smiled vaguely. "There was something special, something different about him, and she liked every bit of it," she thought to herself, as she turned away to unpack her bag, looking forward to some well-deserved hours of sleep after a long, warm bath.

Edited by Nishaat Laila - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww... it's gr8 i really cant wait for tomorrow!!! i'm really feelin it 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heyy Jaanu awesome FanFic! Totally rockin plz go on soon!

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