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Posted: 18 years ago
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this seems kool.. especialy the title..

but u didnt introduce riya, arjun's wife(if shes not main atleast tell us who she is played by so we can picture her)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gerat intro can't wait for the first part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Promo

They have never met…..

Never known each other…..

Never liked each other…..

Never even seen each other….

Yet…..

When they meet, will the sparks fly?

When they know each other, will they fall madly in love?

When they meet each other, will they love or hate

What will happen?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Promo

They have never met…..

Never known each other…..

Never liked each other…..

Never even seen each other….

Yet…..

When they meet, will the sparks fly?

When they know each other, will they fall madly in love?

When they meet each other, will they love or hate

What will happen?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Introduction

New York, USA

6th February, 2007

The sun rose steadily over the horizon. Its magnificent glow spread in all directions, peeking in on everybody's lives. The camera focuses on a huge white mansion set among several other ones of the similar type. It shows us the vast green lawns spread with grand fountains. It takes us in through a gate into the house .Undoubtedly; the inside was just as sophisticated. Shiny white tiles paved the way. The modern architecture implied that this was the work of no one ordinary and this wasn't the house of any ordinary person either. The camera takes us up the stairs and into a room on the right. This particular room seemed totally out of place amidst the rest of the house. A blue alarm clock rang chaotically on the bedside table. Then, we see an attractive young man sprawled out on the bed. His mouth hanging open and his body tangled up in the blue comforter, completely oblivious to the annoying sound. Suddenly, his conscious mind awakens. And with his eyes still closed, half-asleep. He murmurs something about telling the dog to shut up .Slowly; his hand wanders to the bedside table and after groping around for a good five minutes. He succeeds in turning it off. Only to be disturbed by an astonishingly loud scream in his ears that almost burst his eardrums. He opens his eyes in shock and looks up to find none other than his own sweet sister, Alisha, who was anything but sweet at the moment. And it's none other than ANGAD.

"Kya? Kya hua?..Kaun margaya??!?!?!?"he suddenly burst out .

"BHAI! Utho naa!!..It's already 10 o'clock. Aapko mujhe college bhi drop karna hai."

"What?Why'd you have to do that then?!?!??! Normal, civilized way mein nahin jaga sakti thi kya?..god!"

"Accha whatever.Ab jaldi se tayyar ho jaiye naa….hume college jana hai.aur phir baad main Kapoors ko pick up karne bhi jaana hai aapko …airport."

"Sh**! I totally forgot…ok..you wait for me downstairs .I'll be down in 5 min."

"Theek hai.Aur bathroom mein jaakar so mat jaane."

"When did I ever do that?!!?..theek hai."He gets out of bed and heads into the bathroom.

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Meanwhile, Alisha struts down the stairs and into the kitchen while talking to her new boyfriend on the cell phone. We see a lady, middle-aged .preparing breakfast at the stove. She is wearing a salwaar kameez and turns around as her daughter enters the kitchen. Alisha plants a sweet kiss on her mom's cheek and mouths a good morning .She picks up an apple and bites into it. As she sits down at the table, we hear another strong masculine voice from someone who's had his head hidden reading the newspaper all the while.

"Yeh kya pehen rakha hai ?!?.....haan,Alisha?....."

Looking down at her extra mini-skirt and backless top paired with pencil heels,she stares at her brother, Arjun, and replies ,"BHAiya!....not again..I look perfectly fine ..and..waise bhi,yeh aaj kal ka fashion hai.Aapko nahin pata.."She pouts her mouth in an angry way.

"Fashion dashion kuch nahin hai yeh….par tum se pala parne ka koi faida bhi nahin hai..atleast,put on a coat before you leave.."

In walks Riya ,looking particularly cheerful and dressed in a simple sari and simple make-up with sindoor on her forehead. "Good morning maa ji!..Hey Alisha ...Good morning jaanu…",she says brushing her lips against his .Arjun grins …,having forgotten all about his discussion with Alisha. "Papa kahan hai?"

"Hey bhabhi!" pipes up Alisha, beaming at her savior.

"Woh office chale gaye…subhe subhe,kuch kaam tha shayed …waise,shaam tak sab ko ghar aa jaana chaiye haa.please…Arjun aur Angad jaayenge larki waalon ko pick up karne.Please behave.I hope ke iss baar Angad ko larki pasand aa hi jaie.She's your Dad's best friends daughter u know."

"Don't worry maa ji!..Everything will be fine. I've made all the arrangements," says Riya.

"I hope so,"said Shalini uncertainly,still looking a bit worried.

"Oh come'on mama .Everything's gonna be fine."said Alisha.

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Meanwhile, upstairs, Angad walks out of the bathroom, freshly-shaved, looking absolutely dashing in a simple white shirt and jeans. He wanders over to his dressing table, puts on his watch and takes his cell phone off the edge of his table. He quickly hurries down the stairs, hoping Alisha hadn't realized that he'd actually take half an HOUR. He was right she didn't, she was too busy talking on the phone.

He walks into the kitchen, greeting everybody in a hurry.

"Chalo naa Alishu…jaldi karo."

"Theek hai bhai .Aarahi hoon!"

He follows her out of the kitchen after Shalini forces him to grab an apple for breakfast.

"Accha ,I'm leaving too..I've got some work .See u later Mama.Bye, love. ".

He grabs his suitcase and heads out as well.

The two charming women turn back to their work.

After dropping Alisha off at the college, Angad heads back to his car playing with his mobile. He had a good few hours before he had to meet Arjun to go pick up the Kapoors from the airport. He got into his sleek BMW and zoomed off. Eventually, he parked his car by the seashore after driving around aimlessly for a while. He turned on the radio, and the song Mehendi Laga Ke Rakhna from DDLJ began to play. He turned it off. He got out of his car and walked a bit close4r to the shoreline. HE finally sat down on a huge boulder; the usual spot .He had never brought anyone here before. It was a very peaceful paradise, undisturbed. Miles of pure beauty. He started thinking. Today was the day. He would actually meet her. How was she going to be? Would he like her? Would she like him? What would he say when he met her? He had never really considered marriage before. He had obviously had a few girlfriends in his school days and later in college, but none of them were serious. He had seen her photo a few weeks ago due to his mom's insisting and she was beautiful. In fact, she looked just like how he had imagined her to be. Stunning. Simple yet still gorgeous. Then, he snapped back to the real world. He shook his head back and laughed at what he had started to think about. He ran a hand through his dark black hair, jumped up, and checked his watch. Realizing that he was running late, he jump into his car and sped off to the airport, where Arjun was probably waiting for him already .

Preview: Kripa's Introduction. Her thoughts. Angad and Kripa meet.

The beginnings going to be pretty slow ….hopefully…it'll get better later...Plzz comment….thanks everyone who commented! I really appreciate it.And, there are loads of mistakes. Sorry for that, I'll edit them out next time. I was in a hurry, sorry! Btw, I'm getting my results tomorrow. .Plzz pray for me.

Love,😛

Nishaat

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg! this is probably the best fan fic i've read for a while!!! it's so gud!!!! 😊 😛 i cant wait until you continue... hurry up 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is an awsome ff.. i really like it so far.. cant wait to know about kripa's thoughts and their first meeting..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome introduction, cnt wait for u to cont
Edited by nehagupta_9 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg!..thanx soooooooooooooooo sooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 ...i was checking it for awhile yesterday to see if anyone commented..and...i couldn't see any of ur comments...sumthing wrong wid my computer...and..den when i posted.....i saw them..i can't tthank you enough....i thought it sucked..i'm so happy u liked it 😳 ...btw,i got my results today..i got 99.93% as my aver age.its kk i guess....i'll post the next part soon..i've just gotta type it. up 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Pyaar Hai Nafrat Bhi

Part 1

La Guardia Airport,New York &a mp;n bsp;

2:00 PM ,same day

When Angad arrives at the airport,he quickly scans the crowd for any sign of his ever so punctual brother and spots him sitting at a Starbucks joint in the airport with his head buried in the newspaper as usual.Nothing out of the ordinary😉.He darts upto him .

"Hey Bhai.Sorry,thoda late ho gaya .Waqt ka pata hi nahin chala."

"Never mind that.The flight's been delayed anywayz.So,we've got to wait for awhile."

"Oh,"says Angad ,looking slightly disappointed but more surprised .His brother was always so strict with time .Angad suspected there was definitely something on Arjun's mind.But he decided not to ask since he knew Arjun would tell him when he wanted to.He wouldn't hide anything.They never did.That was just how their relationship was."Cool,then.How long do we have to wait?"

"Why?Koi kuch zyaada hi utavla(excited) ho raha don't you think....,"Arjun fired back,now grinning from ear to ear.

"Really?!?!.Mujhe to koi dikhai nahi de raha hai ,Bhai.Kaun?"Angad shot back,pretendingto act clueless.

"You know very well,"said Arjun,laughing.

"Bhai,aap bhi naa.Main to bas aise hi pooch raha tha,"angad mumbles,suddenly looking very interested in the menu before him.

"Aw!..Come'on...I know ur very excited..Admit it."

"I don't know ,Bhai.I guess...,"shrugged Angad,looking away.

Suddenly,Arjun's cell phone starts ringing,and he turns away talking animatedly to whoever haad called."Judging by the dreamy smile on his face,it was definitely Riya Bhabhi,"thought Angad.Arjun contines to whisper sweet nothing's into the phone,while Angad stares blankly into space .

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Meanwhile,on the airplane,the atmosphere is all dim and tranquil.In the stillness of the cabin,the camera focuses on a young,petite figure wrapped up in one of the airplane blankets.As she shivers ever so slightly,we can tell that she's chilly.The young woman runs her hands up and down her bare arms in an attempt to warm herself,but to no avail.Giving up,she turns on her iPod and plugs the headphones into her ears.Restless,she tries to sleep but alas.Eventually,she gives up and turns it off ,putting it away in her shoulder bag.She was a fine-looking girl,dressed in tight jeans and a short ,simple kurta that came up to her hips.She wore very light make-up with her dark-brown hair pulled back into a ponytail.Looking out the window at the tremulous white clouds,she started thinking about her fate,about everything that was happening.Sighing,she turned away from the window..Everything was happening so fast,like a ...blur.Only a day ago,she had been a happy-go-lucky girl,free,without a single worry in the world.Now,she was off to the other end of the world to meet a guy she didn't even know.THAt tooo,why?for MARRIAGE.It was just too much to digest.It wasn't like she was against marriage or anything.In fact,she had always had a romantic fantasy of her Prince Charming and a happy married life some day.But..she had never imagined it to actually happen."And what if this guy was like seriously different from her ?Would they get along?How will he be?"

She glanced at an elderly couple sitting two seats along the row,sleeping calmly,their heads rested sweetly on each others.Her parents,Seema and Vivek Kapoor.She smiled ."What if she didn't like the guy?How would she break their hearts,hopes,happiness?It would tear her apart to see tears in the eyes of the two people she loved most in this world."she frowned,deep in thought.

Was this really going to be her dream come true....or would it just destroy her life...become like suffocation ?A storm of thoughts raged her mind.Eventually,she just gave up.Telling herself that her fate was what God had written for her and she would accept it gracefully.She finally manages to drift off to sleep with a simple radiant smile on her face.

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"Flight MA6043 arriving from Mumbai,India has arrived at Terminal number 6,"announced the mechanical voice of the airport announcer.

Hearing the announcement,Angad snapped out of his thoughts and looked around eagerly.Arjun too had hung up his call by now .

"Chalo na,Bhai."The two brothers made their way to the terminal and stood there,waiting....Karan,having met Shalini and Karan uncle before, had a vague idea of who they were expecting ,though he hadn't met Kripa before either.Their ayes searched the stream of people walking through the arrivals gate for a good ten minutes.

"Kahaan reh gaye honge?I hope they haven't lost their way.I just spoke to Mom too.She said they're all prepared to welcome them.We've got to go straight home from here,"Arjun said to Angad whyo was staring the other way.

"Hey Bhai!LOok!Isn't that her...i mean...aren't they the Kapoors?" hollered Angad suddenly,quickly covering up his slip of tongue.

Following Angad's gaze,Arjun replied,"Umm..I think so...Chalo dekhte hain..."The teo went upto them,spotting Seema and Vivek Kapoor walking ahead.As they neared them,Angad caught sight of Kripa behind them looking around the huge airport and pulling her suitcase along beside her.Her dazzling eyes seeked someone........

"Namaste Uncle .Namaste Anuty .Kaise hain aap ?.Such a pleasure to meet you after such a long time.I hope the flight was fine .Koi problem to nahi hui naa?"Arjun greeted them warmly,pulling them both into a big hug.

"Oh no ,beta.The flight was wondeful.How are you?And who's this young man here beside you?"enquired Vivek.

"Hum sab theek hai ,uncle.Yeh Angad hai.Mera chhota bhai..He's been looking forward to meeting all of you.I believe you haven't met him before,"said Arjun,smiling widely and patting Angad on the back.

Just as Arjun stated these words,Kripa's eyes traveled swiftly back to Angad's face.Their eyes met for a split second,unoticed by anyone.Angad saw a mix of curiosity,fear,eagerness,and many other emotions in her eyes.She then luked away ,embarrassed by the situation and perhaps actually realizing what was happening around her."His eyes are awesome,"she thought,"full of profound meaning."Somehow,she knew that everything was going to be just fine.With just one look in his eyes..How could dat be?She didn't understand this emotion.

"Ah!...my future son-in-law.."Seema said,chuckling ."Jokes apart,how are you beta?Very nice to meet you."

"Wonderful,aunty.Namaste."he said ,while Vivek pulled him into a hug as well.

"Accha ,I think we should hurry now.Everyone's waiting for us at home I suppose,And you must be tired after such a long flight,"Arjun finally informed them,taking the two bags from Kripa's parents' hands."Angad,will you and Kripa come in your car then?Since,we've both brought our cars and all of us can't fit into mine."

"Sure,Bhai."

"Haan,beta.I believe we should.Lead the way."replied Vivek.

As they went down into the car park area,the only two left behind wereAngad and Kripa,uncertain of what to say.

"I'll take your bag then ......I guess,"said Angad,trying his best to avert his gaze from her.She nodded her head.

As he took her bag,their hands brushed ever so slightly,and Kripa felt a tingle run down her spine.He held the door open for her and then got in on the other side of his BMW.Neither of them uttered a single word the whole way,both of them lost in their world of thought.Although I can't really say Angad didn't sneak certain glances at her when she wasn't looking.😉

*Not much of AK interaction in this part....next part...promise!😛😃

Edited by Nishaat Laila - 18 years ago

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