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Posted: 18 years ago
The 5 of them bought some goody-goody stuff from there, from the grocery shops, stuff like juices, they bought 5 bottles. 1 orange, 2 mixed ones, 1 litchi and 1 mango. EEEEEEWWWWWW! Who drinks Litchi and Mango! I toh only like Orange and Mixed Fruit! Anyway, they also bought a think like Imli, I don't know what is it called there, in Paris, it had a very peculiar name, something like 'Kela' or something! Now this Imli was for Granny, as per her request! Then, they also bought these breads, actually, they were Eclairs. You know what Eclairs are? Okay, I'll tell you. They're like Hot-Dog buns, but the only difference between Hot-Dogs and Eclairs is that, Hot-Dogs contain Non-Vegetarian food, and Eclairs contain Chocolate, melted chocolate. Not exactly like syrup, thicker than that. But I swear, they're so very yum! Well, the chocolate syrup is put on top of the bread, and there's a white cream inside the bread. It's so yummy! I feel like having it right now! They also bought these very yummy rectangular breads, salted ones. They were very nice! Tasty, delicious! See, my mouth is still watering! And then they bought some other stuff too! Now one thing, that you'll ask is that, where, from where do they get the water to drink! Yes, exactly, that WAS the first question in my mind. It's no unusual thing for them. Even in New York it happens like this. The water that comes in the taps of the house, like for example in the taps of the kitchen, is used for drinking. And that's the reason why the water bottles are not very useful or famous out there. In hotels, they use the water from the toilet taps, for drinking. And believe me, it's very clean! Unlike India, it is absolutely hygienic, and dirt-free. And that's why you'll find those glasses kept in the toilets of the hotel rooms. Good naa? Yes, it indeed is.
It was now around 7:50, and they decided to go back as soon as possible, because it had, very suddenly, started to pour and that too, very heavily. Naina, as she told before, was carrying raincoats and umbrellas in a big black bag. She took them out and gave one raincoat to each of them. Bliss, thought everyone! They quickly got into the bus and came back to the hotel.
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"It feels so nice and warm to be back in the hotel. Gosh! I was so exasperated, by that quivery rain! See, I'm still shivering!" said Pooja. "Yeah, same here." said everyone else.
"Acha guys, toh aaj bhi, are we going out?" asked Huda. "Well, I think we should first ask everyone. Nahin?" said Pooja. "Going out, why?" asked Naina, looking at everyone, confused. "Nainaji, do you want to have the hotel's food today?" asked Alekh, who very well knew that Naina was very tired. "Oho, woh toh main bhool hee gayi naa. Acha, theek hai. Let's go. But, baahar, ki aaj yahin khaalein?" asked Naina, slyly. "I think we should have it here only. Well, seeing that all of us are so tired, let's have it here only. I'll call all the others." said Alekh. Alekh went over to the reception to phone everyone. "By-the-way, tum logon ke parents kab aa rahe hain?" asked Naina. "Dono ek hee flight se aa rahe hain, kal subah. They made this very sudden decision together only naa." said Huda, smiling. "Oh! By-the-way, Huda, tum bhi toh college mein hee ho. Which one?" asked Naina. "St.Teresa's in Manhattan." said Pooja. "Oh Good! I've heard it's the best over there. Is it?" asked Naina. "Yeah, it is", said Huda, "but now, as we're planning to shift to New York only, I have already applied for the Oxford." "Arrey that's awesome!" said Naina. "Phir toh hum sab ek saath hee honge. Great!" said Alekh, joining in. "What did the say?" asked Naina. "Well, I called up mummy, and she told me that Uncle aur Aunty un hee ke paas hain, aur woh log kal waale restaurant gaye thhey, aur wahaan se woh khaana le aaye hain." said Alekh. "Acha, so we're having food here only. Good." said Pooja. "So, let's go." said Huda. And they went upstairs.
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Edited by praks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
alright guys. so here's d next part. i really hope u like it.... 😊 please, please, please do reply.... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
okay guys... now... i just wanted you people to tell me how has been your reading experience of my fic, and how do you think that i can improve upon it.... please do write... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
ye ur ff is gr8,n ur a fabulous writer n my experience is gud,n the suggestion for ur ff is inroduce raj.........
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Posted: 18 years ago
well, well.... thanx a lot.... i loved your comment!!!!! 😳 . thankyou so much... well, i hope u keep liking it he way you are, and i hope i make it better every time i write it.. and yeah, surely, i WILL introduce raj... one day or the other... 😆 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
well guys... y aren't u replying??! 😭 😭 i don't write that bad, after all! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: praks

well, well.... thanx a lot.... i loved your comment!!!!! 😳 . thankyou so much... well, i hope u keep liking it he way you are, and i hope i make it better every time i write it.. and yeah, surely, i WILL introduce raj... one day or the other... 😆 😊

waiting for his introduction naina nahin to koi prob nahin neelu is also ok..........
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: seasons

waiting for his introduction naina nahin to koi prob nahin neelu is also ok..........

😆.... thanx for the suggestion... 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
first of all sorrriiiiii..I know I'm verrrry late
😭 😭 😭
and abt the fanfic...I've already told many times-I just love ur narration style...and do introduce raj but I like the naina-alekh jodi in this fanfic.... not that I'm a alekh-naina fan or anything..I'm a RN fan..but for some reason in this fanfic I like the alekh-naina pair.... 😊
and yea..UPDATE ASAP!
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Posted: 18 years ago
yeah.... i will, ASAP... thanku... atleast u replied... 😉

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