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Posted: 18 years ago
people i think u can reply sumtimes... na?! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm,its fabulous,waiting for next update.
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Posted: 18 years ago

They knocked on the door. When they couldn't hear any reply, or when Granny did not attend to their knocking, they went inside the room. Both the girls were shocked to see no one in the room. "Dadi! Dadi!" shouted both of them. "DADI!" shouted Naina, extremely worried. "Arrey! Main yahaan hoon." said Granny, who came out of the washroom, just as both the girls were beginning to feel as if Dadi had been kidnapped! Dadi, kidnapped! No no, not possible! If someone kidnapped Granny naa, then that person himself would bring her back, and instead, he will himself give the ransom to the family. Yes, you got it right, Granny talked a lot, and because she was very clever, she could take out any solution to irritate the kidnapper! She was just like a naughty child, yet, she was very mature at the same time! "Dadi, hum toh dar hee gaye thhey." said Naina. "Kyun puttar. Tum logon ko laga ki main kidnap ho gayi hoon?" asked Dadi, laughing. "Dadi! Please, behave yourself." said Pooja. "Hmmmmm… ab chalein. Bhookh lag rahi hai, mujhe bhookh lag rahi hai. Bhookh lagne se, bhookh lagne se, something something something ho raha hai!" said Dadi, singing as if she hadn't eaten food since 5-6 years now. "Dadi! You're too much! Let's go. Kya hoga aapka?!" said Pooja. After switching off the lights of the room, and after making sure that it was properly locked, they went to the room, where the YUMMY food awaited them!

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Edited by praks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

well guys.... so here's the updated part. i hope u like it and please please please do reply...😊😉

Edited by praks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
people... i think sumtimes dere's no harm in replying to fanfics... na?! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
but this was already up dated plz update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
okey... people.... so, here's d next part... i hope u like it, and please please please reply! and do tell me if u don't like it... 😊 😉 ur suggestions are most welcome! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

"Gosh! Badi jaldi aa gaye." said Huda, when he saw all the 3 of them arrive. "Oyester kahaan hai?" Alekh asked, to a worried Naina. "Kya? Oyester toh yahin tha naa. Main usey yahin pe toh chodke gayi thi." said Naina, almost weeping. "Nahin Naina, woh toh tumhaare saath hee gaya tha. Tumhaare peeche-peeche." said Huda. "Alekh, are you sure?" asked Pooja. "100%!" said Alekh. "Main, main abhi dekh kar aati hoon, yahin-kahin hoga." said Naina, who had started to cry. She just turned away towards the door, when she heard a 'Woof!' behind her! "Oye!" She turned around, and there- she saw Oyester in Alekh's hands. "Oye baby! Tum yahaan ho. You know, baby, I was so worried for you!" said Naina, taking Oyester away from Alekh's hands. Alekh started mimicking her. "Shut up! Tum toh mujhse baat hee mat karna. I will NEVER talk to you Alekh, NEVER!" said Naina. "Arrey Naina! Uski kya galti hai? Plan toh yeh hum sab ka tha!" said Naina's pa. "PLAN? Mujhe rulaana aap sabke plan mein tha? You people are so bad… and mean… and… and cruel… and…!" said Naina. "Dekho bhai Naina, agar hum sabko yeh bataa bhi dete, ki tum uss Caf mein royi thi, aur tum Navin ko miss kar rahi thi, toh koi humein believe toh karta nahin. Isiliye, to prove our point, humne aisa kiya. Aur ab, Hudaji mujhe 5 Dollars denge! Kyun Huda?" said Alekh. "Yes! He's right. Well, maine aisi bet lagaayi thi ki agar hum tumse yeh kehte hain, ki Oyester yahaan nahin hai, toh tum nahin rogi. Lekin Alekh ne kaha tha ki tum zaroor rogi. Isliye, main haara aur Alekh jeet gaya." said Huda, taking out 5 Dollars from his wallet. "Hahaha, very funny! Oyester kitna dar gaya hoga!" said Naina. "Oye, Oyester dar gaya hoga, ki tum dar gayi theen?" asked Pooja, trying to tease Naina. "Acha… Jo bhi ho… It's one of the same things." said Naina, trying to hide her embarrassment. All of them started to laugh. "Ab hum khaana khaa sakte hain, please?" asked Dadi, who had now begun to feel hungry, seeing all that yummy food, which was kept on one of the side of the side table. "Yeah, sure. Oho! By-the-way, khaana toh hai, lekin khaana hum khaayenge kis mein?" asked Alekh's pa. "Naina bete, kya tum aur Pooja jaakar le aaoge neeche se thodi-si plates?" he asked. "Yes Uncle, sure, why not. Chal Pooja. Aur iss baar Alekh aur Huda bhi chaleinge humaare saath, warna agar in logon ne sach-much Oyester ko guma diya naa, toh main inhe… I'll not leave them!" said Naina. "Okay, okay. Let's go."

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Edited by praks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
thankyou... people.. why do i see only her replying most of the times... is it that only one person likes my fic? i mean, if u don't like it, u can still reply na! i said na that ur suggestions are most welcome! 😊 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
okey guys... iss bar toh i was highly disappointed by u all! i mean, only i reply?! haila! kya hoga meri fic ka?!!! 😭 ... neway, yeh raha next part, i hope u like it and pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeee reply guys! 😊 😭

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