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that was awesome.waiting for the next part.nice to see raj and shalini's bonding.pls continue soon.

dat was amazing sanya dear! 👏 plzzz post da next part as soon as possible! 😉 me cant wait 2 kno if poo is fine 😳

hey sanya!! 😃
i jus read both d parts, n i hav 2 say..its mindblowing!! 👏 👏 👏
ur keepin d suspense up really well!! 😃 👏 👏
cant wait 4 d next part!!its gr88!! 😳
plzzz continue soon!! 😳

Hey Sanya.. that's a brilliant one 👏 .. but could you please use a darker font??? It'll make it easier to read..

sweety im so so sorry for not commenting yesterday..

but thats why two double comments now.. even tho i ve read it before, its really realy well written and awesome.. I love it soo much!!! 👏

cant wait to know whats going on after this.. do continue soon!! 😛

hi. i am umang . i am new.i want to make friends 😊



and the fan fiction was great.keep going

umang

👏
wonderful sanya.... 😊 😊
don't let pooja die 😕
plz plz 😳 😕
waiting for the next part! 😳

Originally posted by: coolgirl_13

hey sanya!! 😃
i jus read both d parts, n i hav 2 say..its mindblowing!! 👏 👏 👏
ur keepin d suspense up really well!! 😃 👏 👏
cant wait 4 d next part!!its gr88!! 😳
plzzz continue soon!! 😳

THanx a lot Prerna.

Originally posted by: drymaple

👏
wonderful sanya.... 😊 😊
don't let pooja die 😕
plz plz 😳 😕
waiting for the next part! 😳

Originally posted by: angeliclooks_me

dat was amazing sanya dear! 👏 plzzz post da next part as soon as possible! 😉 me cant wait 2 kno if poo is fine 😳

Chill guys, no one is gonna die!!!

Originally posted by: devilangel

sweety im so so sorry for not commenting yesterday..

but thats why two double comments now.. even tho i ve read it before, its really realy well written and awesome.. I love it soo much!!! 👏

cant wait to know whats going on after this.. do continue soon!! 😛

Thanx for double comments Shreyu.I thot u'll post ur comments on the third part directly bt I m so glad u came before that.
BTW even I think u were rite,it looks better without abbrviations.I hve tried editing the parts bt some abreviations r still there.And I m trying to write shorter lines..but nahin ho raha hai.Bt ne-ways thanx for ur suggestions.