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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii

hey rabi cntinue sooon plzzz can't wait more 😭

Honi i will def send it soon,really sorrry aap ko itna wait karna para

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hacker7

just started reading it...it was awesome plz cont soon

Thank u so much will send it soon Inshallah

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dear Friends!!!!

Hope u all are fine Inshallah.i know main kafi late post kar rahi hoon am sorry for it..So pls read and do ur comments...

Do Dil…

Episode 2:

20 mins later train started… sare log apni seats par wapas a jate hai…..after a little chit chat sare log so jate hai….now it's a bright new day…. Also the last day of their journey….next day at about 4 they will reach to their destination…so this was the last day for all of them being together….half of the day passed in normal chit chats…n other pleasantries…but abhi tak arushi n adi ne ek dusre se bat nahi ki hoti hai….arushi was as usual busy in her book and adi he was looking a bit disturbed and was getting irritated on small things……but his friends were handling him quite calmly…. It was now 5 in the evening…every body was talikg to each other except adi…he was luking out of window busy in his thoughts…

Simmi: adi ap humesha kya itne chup chap hi rehte ho…

Adi: hmm….nahi aisi bat nahi hai…. mai bas….

Arushi: chor na simmi bare log hai….

Adi arushi ko ghurta hai….

Adi:[to simmi] ap kuch keh rahi thi….

Simmi: mai ye pooch rahi thi ke app humesha hi ittna kam bolte hai????

Rohan: ye aur kam bolta hai….simmi is galatfehmi me mat rehna…. Infact tum to shukra manao ke janab aj kam bol rahe hai…

Adi: u mean ke mai humesha bolta rehta hu…

Rohan: u r absolutely right….

Adi: u no sumethng rohan yaha sabko dikh raha hai ke kaun kitna bolta hai….

Abhi: ye dono phirse shuru ho gaye…guys tum dono shanty se nahi reh sakte hai….. jab dekho shuru ho jate ho….

Adi: dekh mera dimag pehle se hi kharab hai is rohan ko bol de ki mujhe aur pareshan na kare…

Abhi: kyou tujhe kya hua???

Adi: are yar ghar se koi call nahi aya..

Abhi: to tu karle na…

Adi: kab se try kar raha hu but lagta hai ghar me koi nahi hai….

Arushi: abhi abhi chain ki sans li hogi….so rahe honge sakun se…ghar se bala jo tali…

Adi: hey miss…whts ur problem???tab se dekh raha hu bina bat ke ap mujhe taunt mare ja rahi hai….

Arushi: did I talk to u???? waise bhi meri zuban meri marzi jo chahu bolu….

Adi: hey don't try to act smart okay….

Arushi: I will do whatever I like….waise bhi maine galat kya kaha hai…ap ek problem hi ho….jab se train me aye ho kit kit kiye ja rahe ho….apne dosto ko ye ehsas dilane me lage huye ho ki unhone apko kis narak me dhakel diya hai…mana tumhare pas bahut paise hai to iska matlab kya hai tum is logo ko is bat ka har pal ehsas dilwate rahoge ke ye tumse kam hai… tum ek aise insane ho jise apne siwaye kisi ki parwah nahi…..mujhe taras ata hai tumhare ma bap par… pata nahi itne din kaise tumhe bardasht kiya hoga…

Isse pehle ki arushi apni bat puri karti adi waha se bina kuch kahe chala jata hai…..abhi uske peeche jata hai while rohan wahi pe shocked khara rehta hai…..

Simmi: arushi… kya bakwas kar rahi thi tu….tujhe pat abhi hai tune usko kitna kuch bol diya…kya jarurat thi ye sab bolne ki….kitna bura laga hoga usko….

Arushi: bura lagta hai to lage….maine wahi kaha jo mujhe sahi laga….kab se aisi vahiyat harkatein kiye ja raha tha….. mujhe to lagta hai ki ise kisi ki parwah hai hi nahi

Rohan: bilkul galat lagta hai apko….

Arushi: ji….

Rohan:ji han apne abhi do min pehle jab hi adi ke bare me kaha uska ek ek lafs galat hai jhut hai….apko lagta hai in 12 ghanto me apne adi ke bare me sabkuch jan liya..adi ko janna itna asan nahi nai mam…. Apko pata hai wo yaha is train me sirf humari wajah se aya hai…train me hi kya wo yaha is sheher me hi humari wajah se aya hai wo bhi british college of law me apna admission cancel karwake…. Aur apko lagta hai ye sirf apne bare me sochta hai..huh…apko pata hai apne usse kya kaha hai??? Apne usko uske ma bap ka wasta diya hai na….for ur kind information adi ke ma bap 10 sal pehle hi ek car accident me guzar chuke hai… uske ghar me sirf ek uncle hai….n ye jo adi phone ko lekar pareshsan tha na wo isiliye nahi tha ke use apne ghar ki yad a rahi thi….wo is bat se pareshan tha ke uncle ki dawai ka waqt ho chukka tha….n use ache se pata hai ke wo apni sehat ko lekar kitne laparwah hai..isiliye wo unko instruction de kar aya tha ke dawai lene ke fauran bad use call kare…par apko kya hai…apne bina jane hi use itna kuch suna diya…..

saying this rohan bhi waha se chala jata hai…..leaving a guilty arushi n angry simmi…..

simmi: ho gai tasalli….par gaya chain… pata nahi tujhe usse kya problem hai…jabse wo aya hai tabse uske peeche pari hui hai…aur is bar to tune had hi kardi itna sab suna diya usko…mai poochti hu kya jarurat thi….usne tere sath koi badtameezi ki… kuch bhi ulta seedha bola….nahi na…to phir tu kyou uske peeche pari hai…. Tujhe uski kit kit to dikhai dii pat ye nahi dikhai diya ke wo apni dosto ki koi bat nahi talta tha…ye dikhai nahi diya ke har bat me unka sath deta tha aur humesha unko cheer up karne ki koshish kar raha tha…..par nahi tujhe to bas usme burai hi nazar a rahi thi…..really aru tht was disgusting…

arushi: am sorry simmi…

simmi: mujhe srry bolne se kya hoga….bolna hi hai to adi ko jake sorry bol…..

arushi: ya…..

ab arushi besabri se adi ke lautne ka intezar kar rahi thi taki wo usse mafi mang sake…..puri sham bit jati hai…rat ho jati hai par abhi tak adi rohan aur abhi ka koi pata nahi hota hai wo log tab se abhi tak laute nahi hote hai….kafi rat ko wo log ate hai par tab tak sare log so chuke hote hai so arushi us waqt unse kuch kehna thik nahi samajhti hai…she decides that she will apologise to him tomorrow…….

Subah hoti hai….train was on right time so it reaches station at about 5 in the morning… by the time arushi woke up…adi has already left with abhi and rohan…and arushi didn't even get the chance to apologise to him,…..

So this was the tale of their journey…journey which was not that pleasant…a journey that none of them was going to forget all their lives…even if they want to…destiny wont let thm forget….with is journey ended one phase of their lives…they were now out from protectiveness of their homes and families and were expose to outer world…. Coming ahead is a journey which is more tougher and unpleasant than they hav faces till now…..ab dekhna ye hai ki ittni sare uljhano me ye do din ka safar kaha tak unki zindagiyo me apni jagah bana pata hai ya nahi……ya phir kahi ye safar hi unki zindagi na ban jaye….kyouki zindagi ke khel bahut ajeeb hote hai….. Kal kya hoga kisko pata…

End..

Take care Bye and Inshallah i will send it next part Soon..am waiting for ur comments..

Regards:

Rajeev Admirer Rabi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful part Rabi. pls dont take too much time to post thee next part eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey rabi nice part...
do cont soon... 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey rab sweety wow yaar masth part full of emotions loved reading it toooo toooo gooooood continue soon yaaar jaldi plzzzz can't wait more 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: golu_1677

wonderful part Rabi. pls dont take too much time to post thee next part eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for Liking😊Inshallah i will send it next part Very Soon....😊

Rabi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanasha1993

hey rabi nice part...
do cont soon... 😛

Thanks for Liking Tanasha...Inshallah i will send it next part Soon😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii

hey rab sweety wow yaar masth part full of emotions loved reading it toooo toooo gooooood continue soon yaaar jaldi plzzzz can't wait more 👏

Thanks Honiii😊😊Inshallah i will send It next part very Soon ....Thanks alot for liking😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks For Liking.. i will soon send it Next Part😊

Regards:

Rabi😳

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