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Dear Friends!!!!!

How r u All?? Here is DO DIL 1st Part Hope u Like it..

"Do Dil..."

Episode One...

19^th July 2000 summer's night…time was 11 pm ….we can see an over crowded platform…..every single person was in hurry and tension…. they were waiting for train to come so that they can board it…actually it was start semester time so all students specially the first yearites were going to their colleges…. And the station was crowded most coz of the persons who came to c off them than the actual travellers…finally the train came and 90% of crowd vanished from the platform... whole train filled with first yearites and their parents... u must be wondering ke why am I emphasising on first yearites only…so that's because…they were in majority on the train…most of the seniors knew that these introductory classes they can miss without any harm so they avoided going back so soon… while the first year students were very excited to go…they didn't wanted to miss any single event of their college…. There was an excitement in them abt their college and college life of which they hav heard so much… their parents were in too much worry… with every single student there were about 5-6 person who had come to say good bye to them… every body was instructing them wht to do how to do and wht nt to do… in normal circumstances. . students would hav got irritated by this kind of behaviour but right now they had much to thik nd worry about.. most imp was that they were not able to decide how to react or behave.. one part of their heart was happy that a new phase of their lives was going to start..which will give them opportunity capability friends allll but at the same time the other part of their heart was sad as they had to leave their homes and luvd ones… so they found it better to bear everything tht was going on around thm without any objection .. as it was for the last time…. From tomorrow there wud be no one to instruct them or Care for them…from now onwards they will have to survive on their own…..every single person was going through these emotional turmoil…… in sab ke beech we can see two gals sitting alone …no one was there to accompany them…

Gal: arushi tune bhiya bhabhi ko yaha ane se mana kyou kiya??

Arushi:dekh yar simmi logic ki bat hai agar mai bhabhi ko yaha ane deti to wo khud bhi roti aur mujhe bhi rulati..isiliye maine unko ane se mana kar diya…

Simmi: tu aur tere wahiyat logics.. tere chakkar me mujhe bhi akele ana para…

Arushi: wo kyou???

Simmi: papa ne bola…. Jab arushi akele ja sakti hai to tum kyou nahi….

Arushi: ye to bilkul sahi bola uncle ne…. waise bhi insane ko zindagi me sare kam akele hi karne hote hai…..

Simmi: hey bhagwan kaha mujhe is bore ke sath phasa diya tumne…

Arushi: kya??? mai bore???

Simmi: kisi se bhi pooch le sab yahi bolenge..

Arushi: thik hai to tu pure raste mujhse bt mat karna….rehna chup chap do din… phir pata chalega bore hona kaisa hota hai

Simmi: chal chor mai un samne walo se bat karlungi….

Arushi: kisse??? Samne to mujhe koi dikh nahi raha hai….

Simmi: are abhi nahi hai to kya hua a jayega na waise bhi train khulne me abhi kafi time hai…

Arushi: madam train khulne me abhi sirf 2 min baki hai n mujhe nahi lagta ke koi insane itna irresponsible hoga ke itni late se aye

Simmi: nahi bhagwan mere sath ina bura nahi kar sakte ke do din tere sath akele mujhe is dibbe me chor de

Train ki whistle bajti he and its starts moving slowly…. Tabhi 3 guys come there running in top speed… they starts searching for their seats… unme se ek bahut hi frustrated lag raha tha..he was reacting to every small thing..but his friends were giving a damn to it…finally they got their seats..it was with arushi n simmi…

Simmi: dekha maine kaha than a…akhir bhagwan ne meri sun hi li..ab tu bat nahi bhi karegi to bhi chalega

Arushi: ha ja kar unse bat… shakal se hi awara lagte hai…

Simmi: teri to akhen hi phuti hui hai….mujhe to teeno ke teeno bahut hi smart lag rahe hai khas kar ke wo beech wala….

Arushi: che… wo… shakal dekha hai aisa lag raha hai ke kisi ne usko juto se mara hai..upar se dekh kitna kit kit kar raha hai…

Simmi: wo to tu bhi har waqt karti rehti hai…

Arushi; kya kaha tune

Simmi: maine ?? maine kaha kuch kaha?? mai kabhi kuch kehti hu kya??

Arushi: simmi apna mu band kar n mujhe meri book de…

Simmi: tri book?? Teri book mai kaha se du???

Arushi: hey bhagwan… meri book tere bag me pari hai plz nikal ke de…..

Simmi; de rahi hu na chilla kyou rahi ho??? Pata nai bhiya bhabhi kaise jhelte hai tumko…..

Arushi: jaise bhi jhelna ho jhel lete hai tujhe pareshan hone ki jarurat nai hai.. tu chup chap meri kitab de…

Simmi:[giving her book] ye le n mujhe baksh..

Arushi book le leti hai n starts reading it.. udhar simmi un larko ko saman arrange karte huye dekhne lagti hai

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Posted: 18 years ago

Here is Its Introduction Promo .

http://www.youtube. com/watch? v=YLkoX025ViA

Rajeev Khandelwal As Aditiya Mehra
Arushi Agerwal As Amna Shariff
Simmi as neha bamp
Rohan As Iqbal Khan
Abhishek as chaitanya

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: tanasha1993
do cont soon

I will send It Next Part Soon

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Posted: 18 years ago

👏 hheyeyyyyy!! cute_rabi....that was an extremely lvely pat...very well written...loved it...continue soonnn!!!!!! 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

gr8 part

plz post da next part soon

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Posted: 18 years ago

wow cute_rabi till now your ff is awesome tooo gooood yaaar continue sooon 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kahish-rox
👏 hheyeyyyyy!! cute_rabi....that was an extremely lvely pat...very well written...loved it...continue soonnn!!!!!! 😳

Kashish_roz Thanks alot for liking My Fanfic ...u can call me Rabi 😊

I will send it next Part very Very Soon...Keep reading Do DiL...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: janu_2006
gr8 part

plz post da next part soon

Thanks for liking ,M going to post next Part Very Soon...Keep reading Do Dil...

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Honii
wow cute_rabi till now your ff is awesome tooo gooood yaaar continue sooon 👏

Thanks honi....m happy u like My Fanfic...well u can call me Rabi...i will send it Next Part Soon...

Keep reading Do Dill..

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Do Dil"

Episode 2:

Arushi book le leti hai n starts reading it.. udhar simmi un larko ko saman arrange karte huye dekhne lagti hai

In the mean time saman arrange karte huye ek bag se us larke ko jara sic hot lag jati hai…. ek to wo pehle se hi gusse me tha ab wo apne dosto pe chillane lagta hai

Guy: maine pehle hi kaha tha ke plane se chalte hai par koi meri bat suntan kaha hai

2^nd guy: chill yar itna gussa kyou ho rahe ho…choti si to chot hai

3^rd guy: wo bhi agar tum insano jaise kam karte to nahi lagti…

1^st guy: agar tum log insano ki jagah pe hote to ye sab nahi hota..waise pata nahi tumlog ko is train me kya maza ata hai??

2^nd guy: kyou kya burai hai???

1^st guy: kya burai hai??? ek to ye jug(rust) laga lohe ka dibba…. Plane ki do ghante ki journe ko ye 2 dino me pura karta hai…upar se ye rush.. I just hate it

3^rd guy: adi I think u r over reacting…

2^nd guy: adi rohan chill yar..ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya.. ye sab discuss karke koi faida nahi hai..ab kuch nahi ho sakta agar collage time pe pahuchna hai to hume isise jana hoga nahi to bhul ja….so chup chap dono yaha baith jao…

Adi: plz yar abhi…waise bhi mera dimag bahut kharab hai tu ise aur kharab mat kar…

Arushi: yar simmi kuch logo koi har bat me burai karne ki adapt kyou hoti hai…

Adi; kyou ki kuch logo ko dusro ki bato me nak ghusane me maza ata hai….

Arushi: mujhe tum jaise badtameez insane ki bati me nak ghusane ka koi shauk nahi hai…

Adi: fine then keep your silly mouth shut..

Arushi: I hav better option why don't you keep your oversmart ears closed…

Adi was about to say something when rohan took him aside…. Leaving arushi simmi and abhi….

Abhi: plz adi ki bato ka bura mat maineaga aactually thora sa gusse me hai..train se safar karne ki adapt nahi hai na….

Arushi: to laye kyou isko yah ape apna n humara jeena haram karne..ajeeb akru aur badtameez insane hai…

Abhi: aisa nahi hai..wo dil ka bura bilkul nahi hai…. chahta to plane se bhi ja sakta tha magar yaha train me sirf humari wajah se ya kahe to sirf humara sath dene aya hai…..anyways ye sab choriye… humara abhi tak introduction nahi hua hai thik hai…so… hi I am Abhisekh

Tabhi waha rohan n adi bhi a jate hai…

Rohan: an am rohan sharma… [ he pinches adi]

Adi: hmm. Oh .. hi am aditya mehra…

Simmi: am simran chopra [pointing to arushi] and she is arushi my best friend….

Arushi:[gusse se] mujhe apna nam pata hai simmi….

Adi:lagta hai ye humesha se aisi hi hai..

Arushi: kya???

Rohan:[speaks up quickly to change topic] so we all r together for next two days..cool…waise bhi kehte hai company achi to safar asan ho jata hai…. so I guess we r gonna hav a gud journey….

Arushi: I doubt tht..

Adi: nice journey wo bhi iske sath..god saves us…

Arushi: kuch kaha apne….

Adi: kam se kam apse to nahi…..

Abhi: so miss simran wht do u do????

Simmi: engg first year…wht abt u???

Abhi:me too engg 1^st year…

Simmi: oh great which college??

Abhi: nmch….

Simmi: I dunt believe this….

Rohan: don't believe wht??

Arushi: iska matlab hai ki hum bhi usi college me hai…

Rohan: oh that's great…yani humara sath sirf do din ka nahi 4 salo ka hai….great na….

Simmi: oh you mean u r also in d sam college..

Rohan: yup…

Simmi: great yar…[to adi who was busy with his cell] ap bhi shayad nmch me hi honge??

Adi: hmm…who me…nah…I don't hav so much brain to do engg..

Arushi: tell me something we dunt no…

Adi: pardon???

Rohan: oh plz iski bato pe dhyan mat do.. ye humare school ka topper raha hai…n abhi bhi he has got into indian law school

Simmi: oh that's the best in country

Adi: ha maine bhi kuch aisa hi suna hai..anyways ap logo ke branches kya hai…

Simmi: mine is electrical nd hers is IT….

Abhi: even I hav IT n rohan is in electrical…

Simmi: chalo ye to bahut acha hua… college jane se pehle hi dost bangaye….

Tabhi train platform pe ruk jatoi hai….

Adi: ab ye train kyou ruk gai??? Aise hi kachuye ki chal chal rahi thi and ab to finally puri hi ruk gai….

Rohan: ab train hai to platform pe rukegi hi na….

Abhi: yaha train 20 min rukne wali hai to chalo neeche se ghum ke ate hai….

Adi: kyou neeche kya neeta lulla ki sale lagi hai…

Rohan: nahi babaji ka langar laga hai ab chale…

Arushi: oh plz I cant take this any more…simmi mai neeche ja rahi hu tum chalogi???

Simmi: ruk na sab sath me hi chalte hai….

Arushi: bhul ja simmi waise bhi in jaise bare log aisi choti jagaho pe nahi utarte hai….

Adi: hey miss apki problem kya hai???

Arushi: app…

saying this wo train se utar jati hai…idhar adi full gusse me usko neeche jate huye ghurta hai…

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Do Dil..Rajeev & Amna New Part 3 Updated

Dear Friends!!!!!

How r u All?? Here is DO DIL 1st Part Hope u Like it..

"Do Dil..."

Episode One...

Gal: arushi tune bhiya bhabhi ko yaha ane se mana kyou kiya??

Arushi:dekh yar simmi logic ki bat hai agar mai bhabhi ko yaha ane deti to wo khud bhi roti aur mujhe bhi rulati..isiliye maine unko ane se mana kar diya…

Simmi: tu aur tere wahiyat logics.. tere chakkar me mujhe bhi akele ana para…

Arushi: wo kyou???

Simmi: papa ne bola…. Jab arushi akele ja sakti hai to tum kyou nahi….

Arushi: ye to bilkul sahi bola uncle ne…. waise bhi insane ko zindagi me sare kam akele hi karne hote hai…..

Simmi: hey bhagwan kaha mujhe is bore ke sath phasa diya tumne…

Arushi: kya??? mai bore???

Simmi: kisi se bhi pooch le sab yahi bolenge..

Arushi: thik hai to tu pure raste mujhse bt mat karna….rehna chup chap do din… phir pata chalega bore hona kaisa hota hai

Simmi: chal chor mai un samne walo se bat karlungi….

Arushi: kisse??? Samne to mujhe koi dikh nahi raha hai….

Simmi: are abhi nahi hai to kya hua a jayega na waise bhi train khulne me abhi kafi time hai…

Arushi: madam train khulne me abhi sirf 2 min baki hai n mujhe nahi lagta ke koi insane itna irresponsible hoga ke itni late se aye

Simmi: nahi bhagwan mere sath ina bura nahi kar sakte ke do din tere sath akele mujhe is dibbe me chor de

Simmi: dekha maine kaha than a…akhir bhagwan ne meri sun hi li..ab tu bat nahi bhi karegi to bhi chalega

Arushi: ha ja kar unse bat… shakal se hi awara lagte hai…

Simmi: teri to akhen hi phuti hui hai….mujhe to teeno ke teeno bahut hi smart lag rahe hai khas kar ke wo beech wala….

Arushi: che… wo… shakal dekha hai aisa lag raha hai ke kisi ne usko juto se mara hai..upar se dekh kitna kit kit kar raha hai…

Simmi: wo to tu bhi har waqt karti rehti hai…

Arushi; kya kaha tune

Simmi: maine ?? maine kaha kuch kaha?? mai kabhi kuch kehti hu kya??

Arushi: simmi apna mu band kar n mujhe meri book de…

Simmi: tri book?? Teri book mai kaha se du???

Arushi: hey bhagwan… meri book tere bag me pari hai plz nikal ke de…..

Simmi; de rahi hu na chilla kyou rahi ho??? Pata nai bhiya bhabhi kaise jhelte hai tumko…..

Arushi: jaise bhi jhelna ho jhel lete hai tujhe pareshan hone ki jarurat nai hai.. tu chup chap meri kitab de…

Simmi:[giving her book] ye le n mujhe baksh..

Arushi book le leti hai n starts reading it.. udhar simmi un larko ko saman arrange karte huye dekhne lagti hai

end

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rabi😊

Do Dil"

Episode 2:

Arushi book le leti hai n starts reading it.. udhar simmi un larko ko saman arrange karte huye dekhne lagti hai

In the mean time saman arrange karte huye ek bag se us larke ko jara sic hot lag jati hai…. ek to wo pehle se hi gusse me tha ab wo apne dosto pe chillane lagta hai

Guy: maine pehle hi kaha tha ke plane se chalte hai par koi meri bat suntan kaha hai

2nd guy: chill yar itna gussa kyou ho rahe ho…choti si to chot hai

3rd guy: wo bhi agar tum insano jaise kam karte to nahi lagti…

1st guy: agar tum log insano ki jagah pe hote to ye sab nahi hota..waise pata nahi tumlog ko is train me kya maza ata hai??

2nd guy: kyou kya burai hai???

1st guy: kya burai hai??? ek to ye jug(rust) laga lohe ka dibba…. Plane ki do ghante ki journe ko ye 2 dino me pura karta hai…upar se ye rush.. I just hate it

3rd guy: adi I think u r over reacting…

2nd guy: adi rohan chill yar..ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya.. ye sab discuss karke koi faida nahi hai..ab kuch nahi ho sakta agar collage time pe pahuchna hai to hume isise jana hoga nahi to bhul ja….so chup chap dono yaha baith jao…

Adi: plz yar abhi…waise bhi mera dimag bahut kharab hai tu ise aur kharab mat kar…

Arushi: yar simmi kuch logo koi har bat me burai karne ki adapt kyou hoti hai…

Adi; kyou ki kuch logo ko dusro ki bato me nak ghusane me maza ata hai….

Arushi: mujhe tum jaise badtameez insane ki bati me nak ghusane ka koi shauk nahi hai…

Adi: fine then keep your silly mouth shut..

Arushi: I hav better option why don't you keep your oversmart ears closed…

Adi was about to say something when rohan took him aside…. Leaving arushi simmi and abhi….

Abhi: plz adi ki bato ka bura mat maineaga aactually thora sa gusse me hai..train se safar karne ki adapt nahi hai na….

Arushi: to laye kyou isko yah ape apna n humara jeena haram karne..ajeeb akru aur badtameez insane hai…

Abhi: aisa nahi hai..wo dil ka bura bilkul nahi hai…. chahta to plane se bhi ja sakta tha magar yaha train me sirf humari wajah se ya kahe to sirf humara sath dene aya hai…..anyways ye sab choriye… humara abhi tak introduction nahi hua hai thik hai…so… hi I am Abhisekh

Tabhi waha rohan n adi bhi a jate hai…

Rohan: an am rohan sharma… [ he pinches adi]

Adi: hmm. Oh .. hi am aditya mehra…

Simmi: am simran chopra [pointing to arushi] and she is arushi my best friend….

Arushi:[gusse se] mujhe apna nam pata hai simmi….

Adi:lagta hai ye humesha se aisi hi hai..

Arushi: kya???

Rohan:[speaks up quickly to change topic] so we all r together for next two days..cool…waise bhi kehte hai company achi to safar asan ho jata hai…. so I guess we r gonna hav a gud journey….

Arushi: I doubt tht..

Adi: nice journey wo bhi iske sath..god saves us…

Arushi: kuch kaha apne….

Adi: kam se kam apse to nahi…..

Abhi: so miss simran wht do u do????

Simmi: engg first year…wht abt u???

Abhi:me too engg 1st year…

Simmi: oh great which college??

Abhi: nmch….

Simmi: I dunt believe this….

Rohan: don't believe wht??

Arushi: iska matlab hai ki hum bhi usi college me hai…

Rohan: oh that's great…yani humara sath sirf do din ka nahi 4 salo ka hai….great na….

2^nd guy: chill yar itna gussa kyou ho rahe ho…choti si to chot hai

3^rd guy: wo bhi agar tum insano jaise kam karte to nahi lagti…

1^st guy: agar tum log insano ki jagah pe hote to ye sab nahi hota..waise pata nahi tumlog ko is train me kya maza ata hai??

2^nd guy: kyou kya burai hai???

1^st guy: kya burai hai??? ek to ye jug(rust) laga lohe ka dibba…. Plane ki do ghante ki journe ko ye 2 dino me pura karta hai…upar se ye rush.. I just hate it

3^rd guy: adi I think u r over reacting…

2^nd guy: adi rohan chill yar..ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya.. ye sab discuss karke koi faida nahi hai..ab kuch nahi ho sakta agar collage time pe pahuchna hai to hume isise jana hoga nahi to bhul ja….so chup chap dono yaha baith jao…

Abhi:me too engg 1^st year…