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Posted: 18 years ago
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aaamaaaazinggg parts hahahaha yaar muje saal lage hain yeh parne mein hahahahahahaha....khair reasons are apart...but both the parts rocked...hehe yeh sujal waqi rishi ki kami mehsoos nahi hone de raha hahahahaha luved the convo between pratham and sujal hahahaha dono nihaiti gande hain hahahahaha ....continue soooon......

wiil be waiting for their first meeting...... u rocked...and chandu aur basanti to bus heheh wah bhai wah hehe..veryyy well defined hahahaha
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeev1



aaamaaaazinggg parts hahahaha yaar muje saal lage hain yeh parne mein hahahahahahaha....khair reasons are apart...but both the parts rocked...hehe yeh sujal waqi rishi ki kami mehsoos nahi hone de raha hahahahaha luved the convo between pratham and sujal hahahaha dono nihaiti gande hain hahahahaha ....continue soooon......

wiil be waiting for their first meeting...... u rocked...and chandu aur basanti to bus heheh wah bhai wah hehe..veryyy well defined hahahaha

Hahahaha.. Farah...!!😛 Tumne theek kahaa.. Sujal n Pratham bohat hee gande bachey hain.. hehehe... yeaah... thank GOD is mein Rishi nahi haii.. i was bored with tht guyy!!😆

Chandu and Basanti ka bhi scene ayega.. dont worry.. hehehe😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

gr8 part.... 👏 the sujal in ur ff iz jus 2 good.. 😃 .continue soon... 😊

Thnxx Guriyaa..!! Sujal agar good haii... toh u shld praise me.. instead of him.. cuz usse yeh cheapest ROLE maine hee diyaa haii.. hehehe😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Okay Golu jii.. I'll post it tomorrow.. hopefully..😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey no update today also???????? 😭 post soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

hey no update today also???????? 😭 post soon

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Hey Vandana.. I will post it today.. definitely!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sara kab post karogi wait nahin hota
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Posted: 18 years ago
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he u didnt post the part yesterday 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Recap: The Garewals are all set ready to leave for Sundernagar. Cg disgraces Sujal infront of everyone for coming late at home.


Part 6.

Its morning time. The garewals are having their breakfast.

Cg was having a toast with a glass of orange juice.
Veena and Shiv were also accompanying him.
Cg: hmm… toh phir hum parso nikal rahein hainaa?
Veena: yeh aap poochrahe hain yaa phir bata rahe hain?
Shiv gives a look on Cg.
Cg: hmm… mere khayaal se toh main pooch hee raha hoon.. kyunke tum logon k programmes toh mausam ki tarah rang badalte hain…
Shiv: Nahi Dad.. aisa kuch nahi hai… Hum agar parso jarahe hain toh jarahe hain.. ab is mein programme badalne waali kaunsii baat hai? Aur waise bhi wohh log bhi humara intezaar ker rahe honge..
Cg: (smiles) Acha jii… ab tumhein un logon ki fiker hone lagee… waah.. kya baat hai…
Shiv: (blushes) Nahi Dad… aisee koi baat nahi.. main toh bas waise hee kehraha tha..
Cg: tumhein wohh larki pasand toh hai naa?
Shiv: jee?? (acts)
Veena: acting mat keroo.. mujhe maloom hai k tumhein wohh larkii kitnii pasand hai…
Shiv lowers his gaze.
Cg: larkii larkii kya laga rakha hai? Uska naam hai Muskaan.. usse Muskaan keh ker hee pukaaroo..
Veena: wohh abhi tak uska naam zubaan per nahi charha naa.. isi liye.. abhi aadat nahi hai….
Shhiv: (to himself) Maa aap zubaan ki baat ker rahee hain.. Muskaan ka naam toh mere dil mein bass chukka hai…
Cg: kya sochrahe hoo bahee??
Shiv was lost for a second..
Cg: array… isse kya hogaya??
Veena uske saamney chutkii bajatii haii..
Shiv gains his consciousness..
Shiv: yeaaah?? Kyaa hua?
Cg: humein kuch nahi huaa.. lekin lagta hai k tumhein kuch hogaya haii..
Veena: haaaaaan…
Shiv: mujhe kya hona hai??? Kya huaa hai mujhe?? (surprised at thr behaviour)
Sujal joins.. and sings..
Sujal: "Loveria huaa… loveriaa huaa.. loveriaa huaa.."
Shiv: shut upp!!!
Cg gives a cold stare at Sujal.
Sujal passes a smile to his Dad.. lekin uski sarhee huyee shakal dekh ker uska mood bhi kharab hojaata hai…
Cg: well… Maine toh naashta kerliyaa hai… main abhi ayaa… (he gets up.. looks at Sujal and then walks out )
Sujal looks him going away…
Veena: Sujal.. tum bhi naashta kerloo…
Basanti brings some more hot n fresh breakfast.
Basanti: sahab aapka naashtaa…
Veena too leaves…
Shiv takes a sip of juice..
Sujal: thanks Basanti.. ( he sits and then whispers to Shiv ) Shiv Bhaiiyaa.. yeh mumma aur papa ko kya problem hai?? Mere aaaney se inka mood kyuun off hojaata hai…
Shiv: well… yeh toh tumhein khud bhi pata hona chahiye…
Sujal: mujhe pata hai.. lekin main phir bhi aapse poochna chahta hoon…
Shiv: what? ( he laughs )
Sujal makes a face.
Shiv: dekh yaar… terii raat waali harkat se… wohh tujhse naraaz hai…just sort out this problem by urself..
Sujal: kaise sort out keroon?? Itna mushkil kaam hai.. infact duniya ka sabse mushkil kaam kisi roothey ko manana hota hai…
Shiv smiles..
Shiv: jee nahi… agar kisi ko yakeen hoo k wohh kisi aur ko mana sakta hai to him sure he can do it… bas thorii see mehnat kernii partii haii…
Sujal: huh.. mehnat? Mujhe toh maloom hee nahi k is shabd ka matlab kya hai? Main toh sab kaam bina extra mehnat k hee kerta hoon.. jaisa k abhi keroongaa!
Shiv: kya kerega tuu?
Sujal: Mumma aur Papa ko bina koi mehnat kiye… abhi mana loonga…
Shiv: really? Wohh kaise>?
Sujal: mere paas.. ek fit plan hai… sunoo… ( he then talks to him… and explains him everything )

Veena was hanging her sarees in the cupboard…
Sujal comes from behind… and then holds her from her waist…and ussee sort of utha leta hai…
Veena: arrreyy!!!!!!!!! Yeh kya ker rahe hoo tum??? Main neeche giirrr jaoongii…. Mujhe neeche utaaaaaaroo!!
Sujal: sorry Mumma.. abhi nahii…
Veena: arrreyy!! Main marjaoongii… ( Sujal usse uthaa ker moves in a circular direction )
Veena feels dizzy…
Veena: Suuuuuuujal!!!!!! Kya ker rahe hoo tum!??! Paagal hogaye ho kyaaa???
Sujal: Pehle kahiye k aapne mujhe maaf kerdiyaaaa!
Veena: han haaan.. kerdiyaa… mujhe neeche utaaroo….
Sujal usse neeche uutaar deta haii… and then puts her onto the bed.
Veena holds her breath.
Veena: (out of breath) paagal hogaya thaa kya?
Sujal: jee nahi…. Lekin itna toh maloom hogaya k aapne mujhe maaf kerdiyaa…
Veena: koi maaf nahi kiyaa maine…. Phut jaa.. (lol)
Sujal: kyaa?? Maaf nahi kiyaa??
Veena: nahi.. chal ab dafa hojaa.. ek toh galati kerta hai ooper se mujhe maaf kerne ko bhi kehta hai…
Sujal: mumma.. main jaanta tha k aap aise nahi maannee waalii…is liye mere paas ek duusra tareeka bhi hai…
Veena: kyaa?? Ab mujhe aasmaan per pohanchayega kya??
Sujal: (laughs) Nahi Mumma.. itni jaldi nahi… abhi toh aapne merii aur Shiv Bhaiiya ki shaadi kerwanii hai… aur humarey bachon ko bhi khilaana hai… abhi ab nahi martii…
Veena: badmaaashh!! Kya bakwaas ker raha hai… chale jaa yahan se!!
Sujal laughs
Sujal: Okay.. ab no bakwaas… yeh dekhiye… main aapke liye kya laya hoon..
Veena: kya?
Sujal: (picks out a diamond bracelet out of pocket) yeh lijiye… aapke liye khoobsurat bracelet…
Shiv comes and stands near the door. And watches the whole scene.
Veena: (takes the bracelet from him) Yeh kahan se lii tune?
Sujal: bass…. Dil chaaha is liye khareed lii… array ab pehan ker bhi toh dikhaoo naa..
Veena: tuu bohat hushiyaar aur chalaak hogaya hai… apni maa ko kaise manana hai.. is baat ka achii tarah se ilm hai tujhe!
Sujal: agar jaantiin hain toh poochtii kyun hain??
Veena: hmm… (she puts on the bracelet) achii haii…
Sujal: bass?? Achii hai??
Veena: nahi… bohatt achii haii.. bass?? Ab jaa yahan se…
Sujal: Ohh Mumma… I love you!! ( he hugs her tightly )
Veena: haan haan… I love u 22… bhaag jaa ab!
Shiv watches it and becomes emotional.

Sujal comes..
Sujal: dekhaa mera kamaaal?
Shiv: haan.. dekh liyaa..
Sujal: ab maante ho naa mujhe?
Shiv: hmm… lekin tuney Mumma ko wohh bracelet kahan se laa ker dii?
Sujal: wohhh.. kya tha k… ek minute… zara side per aaker baat kerte hain…
Shiv: haan… bata ab…
Sujal: raat ko main Tina k saath bahar gaya thaa…
Shiv: yeh Tina kaun hai?
Sujal: array merii girl friend aur kaun??
Shiv: pata nahi larkiyon ko tujh mein kya pasand aata hai… fakeeer haii tuu.. marasii ki aulaad!! Purest form of Red Indian!
Sujal: array baat toh sunoo naa.. pehle hee shuru hogaye!
Shiv: acha sunaa…
Sujal: Raat ko jab main Tina k saath bahar gaya tohh….
Shiv: tohh?
Sujal: darasal hum car mein the..
Shiv: achaa..
Sujal: aur… jab wohh mere………..(he started to laugh)
Shiv: ab hans kyun raha haii paagalon ki tarah!!?!!? Aaagey bol…
Sujal: kaise boloon… mujhe sharam aati hai…
Shiv: kaminey… larkiyon ki tarah tujhe sharam bhi aati hai…
Sujal: bass.. ab khud hee samajh lo k raat ko bina light waali car mein kya hua hogaa…
Shiv: kuttey!! Kya bakwaas ker raha hai…??
Sujal: (he laughs) achaa… jaaney doo.. bas kisi tarah uski wohh bracelet merii shirt ki pocket mein girr gayee.., ghar aa ker jab subah utha toh dekhaa k merii pocket mein wohee bracelet thii…
Shiv: ohh… matlab tuney uss Tina ki bracelet Mom ko dedii…
Sujal: exactly!
Shiv: besharam! Nalaaik!! Tujhe zara sharam nahi aatii..
Sujal: array abhi toh ayeeii thii naa.. sharam! Hahaha…
Shiv: shut up… tera kuch bhi nahi hosaktaa… Mun dekh apnaa… aaine mein chehra dekh… Kisi charsiii se kum nahi hai… Charsiyaa! (lol)
Sujal: hahahahahahaha.. (he laughs like HELL! )

Shiv leaves while Sujal keeps laughing…
Cg comes..and looks at Sujal who was laughing…
Sujal usse dekh ker ek dum se khamosh hojaata hai and bcums serious.
Sujal swallows his saliva.
Cg: zyada hansoo mat… kyunke humesha hansne k baad insaan ko rona bhi parta hai…
Sujal: papa.. main toh bass..
Cg: shut upp… ( he leaves )
Sujal: (to himself) ufff… is budhey ko manana mere bass ki baat nahi…. ( heehe budhey refers to his baaaaap )

Cut to Sundernagar…

Savita was making a list of the things which had to be brought on tht day.
Mihir : kya ker rahee hoo Savitaa?
Savita: list bana rahee hoon.. yeh cheezein mangwaa lete hain… inki bohat zaroorat hai…
Mihir: hmmm.. theek hai.. Kashish ko kahoo wohh le ayegii
Savita: (stands up in fury) har cheez Kashish ki keregii kyaa?
Mihir: yeh tum kaisee baatein ker rahee hooo Savita? Wohh is ghar ki choti betii hai..
Savita: wohh aapki beti hogii.. meri nahi… Meri sirf ek hee beti hai.. aur wohh hai Muskaan! Suna aapne!?!?! (she leaves in fury)
Mihir: (to himself) tum kab samjhogii Savita.. k Kashish bhi humarii betii hee haii… wohh koi parayee nahi…

Muskaan comes..
Muskaan: Baoojii…
Mihir: haan beta…
Muskaan: Maa bohat ghussey mein gayee hain… kya phir se koi jhagra hua kyaa?
Mihir: nahi beta… aisa kuch nahi… tum toh jaanti ho naa apni maa ki aadat ko…
Muskaan: kahiin Kashish ki waja se toh nahi?
Mihir: (looks at her.. and then doesn't speak)
Muskaan: ohh… toh main samajh gayee… Baoojii.. lagta hai k ab Maa ko mujhe hee samjhana hogaa…

She comes inside Savita's room.
Muskaan: maa!
Savita: kya hai?? (she was doin some knitting)
Muskaan: aapko Kashish se problem kya hai?
Savita: kya bakwaas ker rahee haii?? Dimaag toh nahi kharaab? Mujhe usse kya problem hogii??
Muskaan: Main jaantii hoon Maa.. k aap usse apni beti nahi maanti.. lekin plzz.. aisee baatein bhi mat kaha kijiye jis se uska dil tootey…
Savita: ab maine aisa kya kehdiyaa?
Muskaan: Maa aap kaii baar aissee baatein ker deti hain jisse Kashish ko bohat chot pohanchtii hai….. agar aap usse apni beti nahi maantii.. toh mat maaniye.. lekin har waqt uski be zati mat keriye…
Savita: hhmm…. Tu uski itni taraf daaree kyun ker rahee haii??
Muskaan: Is liye kyunke wohh Baoji ki chotii betii aur merii choti behan hai!!
Savita was shocked.. but remained mute
Muskaan left.

Muskaan went into her room. Kashish was there too..
Kashish: Kya hua?
Muskaan: kuch nahi…( she said in a low tone )
Kashish: toh tumhara chehra itna utra utra kyun hai?
Muskaan: kaha naa kuch nahi…
Kashish: theek hai.. nahi batana toh mat bataoo… lekin mujhe yeh toh batao k jab wohh log tumhein dekhne ayeinge… toh kaunse kapre pehnogii?
Muskaan: swimming costume!
Kashish burst out into a laugh!
Kashish: kyaa? Swimming costume?
Muskaan: haan.. kyun.. koi burayee hai usmein??
Kashish: (controls her laugh) ahan.. bilkul nahi…. Tum wohee pehanna… aur mujhe yaqeen haii… km joh larka tumhein dekhne araha hai… wohh tumhein dekh ker khushi k maarey behosh hojayegaa… aur kahega… kitnii hottt haii!
Muskaan: (hits her lightly onto her head) bakwaas band keroo.. main toh aise hee kehrahee thii…
Kashish: (puts her arms around her neck) tohh main bhi aise hee kehrahee thii…
Muskaan smiles and then they both hug!!


Enjoy...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aww another cute part Sara!!Please cont soon!!

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