*Do Anjaane* RA (pt 42/pg 74) updated!!!

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@Rajeev_gr8

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Posted: 17 years ago

#531

Saraa plz cont soon cant w8 any more 😕

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zaira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#532

finally caught up with all the latest part's!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........they are awesome sara 👏 👏 👏.....!!!!!!! don't have words to describe them yaar 😊 👏 😊.............finally sujal realize and understand his true feeling for kashish 😉 ❤️ 😉 !!!!!........glad that he talked to shiv abt it 😊......hope that sujal and kashish love story start's soon ,........kashish has really helped him change (for good, of course 😊 😉)plzzzzzzzz.......can't wait more 😭 😭 😭.........continue soon plz.......waiting eagerly !!!!!!!

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alyna

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Posted: 17 years ago

#533

we r waiting for the latest partt

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#534

sara continue soon please... 😭

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Sara

@sara_naveed00

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Posted: 17 years ago

#535

Part 41.

Shiv had invited everybody at the garewal mansion for the picnic trip. But Sujal was unaware about it. To him, only Kashish, Muskaan, Shiv and him were leaving for the picnic. But Shiv had told everyone to come along with them.

Muskaan was brushing up her hair infront of the mirror. Just then Shiv entered inside the room quietly and bumped her with a shock.
Muskaan was dazzled.

Muskaan: Shiv… yeh aap kya karahe hain??
Shiv had hold her waist tight from the back!
Shiv: (was romancing . .. hehe) hmmmmm…
Muskaan: shiv… choriye naa.. koi dekh legaa…
Shiv: toh dekh lene do na.. waise bhi apni patni se chipka hua hoon.. kisi aur se nahi!
Muskaan: off oo… kaisee baatein karahe hain!?!??
Shiv: Muskaan.. (puts his head onto her shoulder) waise main kaafee dinon se soch raha tha.. k kyun ka tumhein kahin bahar ghoomaane le jaon?
Muskaan: ohh.. toh ab khayaal aaya aapko!
Shiv: haan…
Muskaan: kya main pooch sakti hoon k itni der baad aisa khayaal aane ki koi khaas waajeh?
Shiv: koi wajeh nahi hai baba… yeh toh mera pyaar… mera ehsaas hai tumhare liye!!
Muskaan: toh yeh pyaar… yeh ehsaas.. pehla kahan thaa?
Shiv: MUSKAAN! Tum sawaal bohat poochti hoo…
Muskaan narrowed her eyes…
Shiv: acha suno…! Aaj hum khandala jarahe hain… picnic k liye!
Muskaan: kyaa?? (surprised… yet happy)
Shiv: haan… aur waahan per 2 ya 3 din ka stay bhi kereinge!
Muskaan: sacchhh!??!
Shiv: haaan!
Muskaan: phir toh bohat maza ayegaa!! (excitedly)
Shiv: hmmm…(presses his cheeks against hers)
Muskaan: par… (ek dum se chera utar jaata hai)
Shiv: kya hua?? (looks at her)
Muskaan: shiv wohh…
Shiv: haan haan madam jee.. jaanta hoon… tum yehi kehna chahti ho na k hum donon akele kyun jarahe hain? Baaki ghar waale saath mein kyun nahi jarahe … haina?
Muskaan: hmm.. (nods)
Shiv: …well for ur surprise… aur is liye taa ke tum dukhi na ho .. maine baaaki sab ghar waalon humara saath chalne k liye convince kerliya hai!
Muskaan: really?
Shiv: haan!
Muskaan: thanks Shiv… aapko mera kitna khayaal hai!
Shiv: agar mujhe tumhara khayaal nahi hoga.. toh aur kisse hoga??
muskaan smiled…

Shiv: lekin…. Ek problem hai muskaan!
Muskaan: wohh kya?
Shiv: agar.. baaki sab log humare saath hongey, toh humein pyaar ya romance kerne ke liye time kaise milega???
Muskaan: kyaa??
Shiv: haan.. ab sab k saamne toh tumhein kiss viss nahi kersakta naa!
Muskaan: shiv!!! (hits him playfully)

Shiv: oo oo.. oo sorry sorry sorry! (groans softly)
Muskaan: choroongii nahi aapko! (hits him again)
Shiv: array baba maaf kerdo … bohat zor se lagti hai!! Aaahh… ooouccch!
Muskaan: (gets worried) kya hua… ? (stops hitting) lagee toh nahi???
Shiv: (makes a cute face) haan…(nods)
Muskaan: haan??
Shiv: (comes closer to her n then shakes his head in a NO direction) Nahii!!
Muskaan smiled.. and so as he…. Both ended up in loving embrace!

Dussrii taraf.. Sujal ki barhti huwi bechainii thi…. He still couldn't think of proposing to Kashish… aakhir yeh sab kuch wohh kaise kerega??? Is baar baat kisi affair ya healthy flirting ki nahi thi… this time.. it was real love… and sujal ko sach much Kashish se apne dil ki baat kehni thii… ab kashish ka jawaab kaisa hoga… positive yya negative.. wohh react kaise keregii…. Uffff.. yeh sab baatein… ya thoughts Sujal k mind mein baar baar araahee thhiin….
He took a shower quickly.. and got ready…

Jab wohh neeche aya toh was quite surprised… cuz sab log kahiin jaane ki taiyaari mein the… sab k luggages ek side per pare the… Cg was talking to Chandu.. while Veena was ordering the driver to put the luggage in the car….
Sujal was completely confused…puzzled..
Just then Shiv came from behind…
Shiv: kyun mere bhaaai… ready sheady hogaye kya?? Hmm?
Sujal: shiv bhaiyya… yeh sab kya horaha hai…? (acts to be a little frustrated)
Shiv: kya horaha hai?
Sujal: wohh dekhiye… (points at them)
Shiv: kaahaaan?? (looks at them) array acha… wohhh…
Sujal: aakhir yeh sab ho kya raha hai?
Shiv: array hona kya hai.. mom dad apna saammaan rakhwarahe hain .. aur kya?
Sujal: (folds his arms) kis khushi mein??
Shiv: khandala nahi jaana kya? Picnic k liye…??
Sujal: haan… lekin…
Shiv: lekin kya?? Ajeeeb insaan ho tum yaar… ek toh tumharii madad keraha hoon.. upar se fazool sawaal pooche jarahe ho!
Sujal: mujhe maloom hai lekin…mom dad saath kyuun jarahe hain?? Aap kya chahte hain, k meri mohabbat ki dastaan puuri duniya jaan jaye??
Shiv: yaarr…(puts arms around him) pehle mera programme bhi yehi tha k hum chaaron, yaani main, muskaan, tum aur kashish.. sab saath jayein… lekin tum toh apni bhabhi ko jaante ho na…
Sujal was lookin at him.. and listenin to him quietly..
Shiv: usse apni fiker kum, aur ghar waalon ki fiker zyada rehti hai… agar hum chaaron trip per jaate , toh muskaan mera naak mein dum kerdeti.. baar baar mujhse ghar waalon ka pata poochne k liye kehti… is liye… maine is problem ko hee khatam kar daala… socha k agar sab saath jayeinge toh muskaan bhi khush rahegi.. aur obviously main bhi khush rahoonga!
Sujal: tohh aap chahte hain k wahan per sab ko maloom hojaye k main Kashish se…
Shiv: (interrupts) dekh sujal… aaj nahi toh kal.. sab ko maloom toh hona hee hai… toh phir agar aaj maloom hojaye.. toh is mein bura hee kya hai?
Sujal: lekin main kashish ke jawaab se ab tak anjaan hoon bhaiyya… kya pata wohh na keh de…
Shiv: (pats on his head lightly) array duffer .. aisa waisa kuch nahi hoga… main hoon na…
Sujal: haan.. aap hain.. usii ka toh darr hai..
Shiv: kya matlab??
Sujal: (smirks) kuch nahi…
Shiv: hmm..
Sujal: lekin mujhe ek baat ki samajh nahi ayee… k mom dad aap ke saath chalne k liye ready kaise hogaye? I mean.. they don't go anywhere…
Shiv: tum toh jaante ho na mujhe… unhein sirf unka bara beta hee convince ker sakta hai!
Sujal raises his brows..
Shiv: aur waise bhi… I think all of us need some time for relaxation! Isn't it??
Sujal: relaxation kaisee..?? ek din mein kya hojaye ga…(looks away)
Shiv: ek din nahi… maximum 3 din…
Sujal: kyaa??
Shiv: haan.. 3 din… hum khandala 3 dinon k liye jarahe hain!
Sujal: lekin tab tak hum wahan kerein ge kyaa?
Shiv: tum logon ka toh pata nahi.. but I surely want to spend some time with Muskaan!
Sujal: hmmm .. not bad bade bhaiyya!
Shiv: (shrugs)
Sujal: lekin…
Shiv: ab kya huaaa?!?!?!?!?
Sujal: agar hum sab yahan se chale gaye… tohh office ko kaun sambhaalega ??
Shiv: array yaar…workers aur employees haina..
Sujal nods..

Cg: array.. tum donon upar kya karahe ho?? ( they both were conversing on the staircase ) neeche aaao.. jaana nahi hai kyaa??
Shiv: yes Dad… arahe hain!
Cg: hurry up bete!
Shiv: tum neeche pohancho.. main muskaan ko bula ker aaya…(moves up)
Sujal: aur main .. kashish ko! (rushes up too)

Kashish was putting up her things into her hand bag…
Sujal steps in…
Sujal: kya main andar aasakta hoon…
Kashish : (gazed him) tum already andar aa chuke ho…
Sujal: ohh.. im sorry.. wohh main..
Kashish: sujal! Don't be sorry… its all right…
Sujal: (smiles) bass.. yehi poochne aya tha k tum ready ho ya nahi??
Kashish: tumhare saamne kharee hoon.. aur tum ab bhi poochrahe ho k main hoon ya nahi..??
Sujal: haan.. wohh..
Kasshish: sujal… ho kya gaya hai tumhein?? Main kafee dinon se dekhrahee hoon k tum kaafee badal gaye ho…

Sujal: really? Main badal gaya hoon??? (questions her)
Kashish: haan..
Sujal: naah.. I don't think so!
Kashish: insaan ko khud kabbhi nahi maloom parega k wohh badal gaya hai… yeh toh sirf dekhne waale hee bata sakte hain!
Sujal: toh kya main pooch sakta hoon.. (folds his arms) k tum ne mujh mein kaisa badlaav mehsoos kiya?
Kashish stared him…
Sujal: hmm??

Muskaan stepped in…
Muskaan: jaana nahi hai kya?? Jaldi kero Kashish…
Kashish's concentration on sujal's question was diverted…
Sujal: arahe hain bhabhi…
Kashish: mmm.. (apne baal peeche kerte huye, picks up her hand bag… and peeche ek music bajta hai slowly…)

Sujal ki zulfein urtii hain.. aur us k maathe (forehead) per girte hain… He stares her dreamily…

Kashish bhi uski taraf dekhti hai…

Jab se tere naina… mere nainon se.. laaaage re… (kashish steps closer to him)
Jab se tere naina… mere nainon se.. laaaage re… (sujal uski aankhon mein khoya hua thaa…)

Tab se deewana hua… ( kashish waves her hand infront of his face.. and he becomes conscious now…)
Sab se begaana hua.. rab bhi deewaana laage re… (kashish asks him about the matter… but sujal doesn't answer)
Rab bhi deewaana laage re… hoooo…. (she leaves while.. sujal runs his hand thru his hair.. and smiles…)

Jab se tere naina… mere nainon se.. laage re…. ( both of them were walking downstairs.. and sujal ab bhi kashish ko dekh raha thaa… )

Music…

While the music is going on, everyone sits in the car.. and sets off for khandalaa! Cg, veena, shiv, muskaan and the driver were in one car.. while sujal, kashish, basanti and chandu were in another car!
Sujal pops out his head out of the car window… and gazes on the moorlands and grasslands.. the car was moving on…

{deewaana yeh toh deewana laage re…}
{deewaana yeh toh deewana laage re…} C.H.O.R.U.S … (the village woman were singing these lines… and sujal was smiling all the way)

Hoooo…jab se mila hai tera isshaara … ( sujal was literally singing now ). tab se jagiiiiin hai behcaaniyaan ho0o.. (kashish was surprised.. she was sitting with him in the front)
Jab se mila hai tera isshaara .. (he looked at her.. and narrated the lines) tab se jagiiiiin hai behcaaniyaan…. (he looked out while driving)
Jab se huyeeee… sargoshiyaaaan…..tab se barhiin hai madhosshiyaaan… (chandu and basanti, who were seated at the back were dancing and enjoying all the way)

Jab se jurri yaara ….tere mere mann k dhaage re….(he again looked at kashish with a serious but passionate expression…)
Tab se deewana hua… (he shaked his head)
Sab se begaana hua.. rab bhi deewaana laage re… (and was hitting the stearing hard)
rab bhi deewaana laage re… (kashish was clapping all the way)

{Music}
During the music, they stopped their cars at a closest dhaba.. all of them came out to take some snack..

Pratham too, joined them… he had come in his separate car… …

Kashish was drinking water from a bottle.. and splashed her face with it… aur jaan boojh ker, she splashed some water droplets onto sujal's face...as he was standing beside her...

the song continued playing at the background...

Jab se huyee hai tujhse shararat …. (kashish made an innocent face.. and put one of her fingertip into her lip)

tab se gaya hai chain-o-qaraaar ..h0o0o (sujal,with soaked face, looked at her and smiled)

Jab se huyee hai tujhse shararat …. ( kashish now felt
embarrassed at her silly mischievous behaviour)
tab se gaya hai chain-o-qaraaar ( she tore off her dupatta and wiped his face with it…)

Jab se teraaaa… aanchal dhalaaa… tab se koiiii… jaaduu chalaaaa… ( as she was still clearing off his face with her piece of dupatta, sujal kept staring her dreamily)

Jab se tujhe paaya ….yeh jiya dhak dhak….baaghe re…. ( she had finally done that.. and moved forward while passing a smile at him)

Tab se deewana hua… ( he watched her walking away )
Sab se begaana hua.. rab bhi deewaana laage rrreeee (put his hand onto his cheeks.. felt her presence)
rab bhi deewaana laage re… ho0o0o.. ( he smiled ..wohee cute waali. Hehehe)

jab se tere nainaa.. mere nainon se.. laaage rrreee… ( all of them sat back into their respective cars… and left for Khandala!)

Song: Jab se tere naina..
Movie: Saawariya
{song ends}

And the part ends as well… ! Hope u enjoyed it… 😛

Edited by sara_16 - 17 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#536

sara a very interesting part...i liked it very much..the story is going tooo goodd... very damn well written... me seriously enjoying sujal kii bechaini , uski tadap.. he wants to propose to kashish but this time even he knows the importance of proposing kii it is not a time-pass like always... the scene between sujal,kashish was so very sweett...whether it was the room scene or the paani splashing scenes...sujal is sooo cutee... uskii bechaini par mujhko pyaar aa raha hai..me sure kashish ke dil mein bhi kuch kuch ho raha hai..lekin she does not want to accept the fact kii she is atracted to sujal..going mast yaar... i loved reading the update.. and me so khush that you have continued.. i was seriously missing your fanfic.. ab me totally khush..the part was very achcha... the scene between muskaan and shiv also wasss tooo nice... keep up the good work going... 👏 sara do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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zaira

@le_me_star

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Posted: 17 years ago

#537

awesome part sara !!!!!!! 👏 😊 😉 😛 😆 👍🏼 😆 😛 😉 😊 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...........they are going to khandala for 3 days vacations 👍🏼, a surprise for sujal is that everyone is going.....including pratham 😉!!!! bechara sujal kya socha tha usne kye kashish koo private me propose karega 😉.....par ab to sari family jarahihey 😆 !!!!.......shiv convinced veena n cg too come along 😊 😉......even chandu n basanti are going 😊 😆 😊 !!!.......shiv n muskaan scene was so romantic n cute at the same time 😊 😉 😛.........shiv supportting sujal n helping him 2 propose his love for kashish 😉 ❤️ 😳 !!!! sujal n kashish scene was really sweet 😉 😛 😳 !!!.....muskaan interuptted or else we would have got 2 know in what way has sujal changed according to kashish 😉 😉 😉 !!!!! ..........sujal lost in his dream world 😉! ....sujal, kashish in one car 😉 along wt basanti n chandu 😆 !!! the song scequence it's really great 👍🏼, kashish trew so water on sujal face at which he smiled n kashish blushed 😉 😳 😊 !!!!!!........can't wait for them to reach khandala 😉, yaar sujal aur kashish ki love story to shuru karo wao plzzzzzzzzzzz 😭 😊 😉 😛.......let's see how is sujal going to prospose her???...her reaction??? family reaction????...........so many questions that i have stuck in my head 😕 😆 😕.......continue soon plzzzzzzzzz...........can't wait!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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nikita

@beauty_niki

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#538

so finally u updated and that part was fabulous. akhir kar they are heading towards khandala.lekin waha jakar na iss sujal ne kashish ko propose karna hi chahiye otherwise no use of going to khandala for them. hey shiv aur muskaan are really sweet couple. but sujal and kashish are the best yaar.hmmmm....... abb agge i think ki sujal kashish se jaror kahega that he loves her but kashish won't believe him aur use ignore bhi karegi shayad. lekin inn 3 dino mein sujal kashish kekareeb jane ki aur usse apna banane ki puri koshish karega and that will be really awesome and passionate.the part was great!!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzz.......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.