Shivi FF- meri duniya tu hi re part 13 updated on page 43 - Page 12

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Posted: 3 years ago

Yeh Dobi kab samjhegi?

Btw loved the update Partner!! Ahh My Softy Pandya kinna cute hain!! ❤️

Update soon Partner! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Shiva.. he has all my heart as always

Dobi Raavi continues to come up with adbhut schemes everyday 🤣

Lovely update Pixie! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Amazing update👏❤️

Raavi's brain is so slow

Shiva is a softie, loved Shivi's moment ❤️

Rishita was right about Dev, he is scared of a conforntation😡

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hope our Dobi realises soon.


I don't want Shiva or Raavi either to get hurt.


Dev being spineless and jerk so nothing new in it.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful ❤️

Waiting for nextt✨

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Posted: 3 years ago

Pixie, another lovely update! So looks like you are planning to keep Raavi, a dobi as long as possible. Dev stood her up on the date Shiva came to the rescue❤️ Let’s see if Raavi’s feelings are slowly changing. Looking forward to to the next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Continue soon..

It was amazing..

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Posted: 3 years ago

I love the way the story is going! Amazing update!🌸🤍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Amazing update pixie❤️

Caring Shiva is all loveeand dobi Raavi atleast started to thing about Shiva❤️❤️

Update soon!😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

PART-6

" Anita di, aapko kaise pata chala ki aap hardik bhai se pyar karte hai? Matlab aap bachpan se gombi ko chahte the na.to kya pyar dobara ho sakta hai? " Raavi asked her

Anita was a bit surprised at her question but she decided to adress her baby sister' concern.

" Gombi se mujhe pyar nahi, bachpana tha.shayad mai usse shaadi kar leti to Khush rehti, ya shayad nahi.pata nahi kya hota. Par hardik ne mujhe tab sambhala jab mai bilkul akeli thi, toot chuki thi.jab saara samaj mujhe ek matlabi aur lalchi aurat samajhta tha, usne mere andar ki acchai ko dekha.usne mujhe pyar ka sahi matlab sikhaya.jab main gombi se shaadi ka soch rahi thi to mere mann mai aur bhi kitna kuch chal raha tha, mujhe pandya store chahiye tha, materialistic cheezein chahiye thi.par hardik ke saath Aisa nahi hai raavi.mujhe sirf aur sirf uska saath chahiye." Anita said tearfully.

Raavi hugged her di.

" Mai bahut khush hu di ki aapko apne hisse ki khusiyan mil gayi."

Anita caressed her head

" Raavi, jab tu dev se shaadi ka sochegi to apne dil se puchna ki kya tu sach mai usse pyar karti hai? Mai jaanti hu tujhe pandya parivaar se pyar hai, par rehna to tujhe dev ke saath hai.kisise shaadi karne ka matlab uske saath apni puri zindagi baantna, yeh ek bahut bada faisla hai.soch samajhke lena" anita tried to explain to her sister ad best as possible.

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Raavi entered the store and grabbed a chocolate.shiva glared at her and she just glared back and continued eating her chocolate.

" Shiva.ek baat puchu? " She asked

" Mana karunga to nahi puchegi? " He asked

" Tujhe kabhi kisise pyar hua hai? " She asked and her heart pounded against her chest. She hoped the answer would be no.

" Yeh kaisa bakwas sawal hai? " Shiva asked her irritated.

" Bakwas sawal thodi hai.seedha sa sawal hai.hann ya na? " She asked again

Shiva went near her and pulled her by the waist.raavi dropped the chocolate she was eating.

" Shivaa.." his name escaped her lips.

" Hann." He said looking into her eyes.

Her eyes filled with tears.

" Kaun hai woh? " She asked, her voice a mere whisper.

"Bahut khoobsurat hai.uski ankhon Mai ek gehrayi hai, baaton mai masoomiyat.na jane kitne ladke uske deewane hai, pata nahi use mere hone ki khabar bhi hai ya nahi. " He said as he pushed a strand of hair behind her ear.

Raavi closed her eyes.

" Naam kya hai uska? " She asked clutching the end of her kurti.

Shiva came closer to her ear, his warm breath made contact with her ear and sent a shiver down her spine.

" Deepika Padukone " he said

Raavi's eyes opened and she glared at him as he laughed.

" Shivaaa " she shouted and ran after him as he tried to escape her wrath.

" Mai serious hu shiva " she said irritated

" Tu ek tarfa khayali relationship mai reh sakti hai to mai kyu nahi kisi filmstar se pyar kar sakta? Uski har film do do baar dekhi hai maine " he said

Raavi rolled her eyes.

" Accha, mai sawal badal rahi hu.tujhe kabhi kisi aisi ladki se pyar hua hai jise tune real Mai dekha ho? " She asked

" Dekh gadhedi, meri zindagi mai inn faltu ke jhamelo ke liye waqt nahi tha.bachpan se store, parivaar yehi mera sab kuch hai.ek tu hai jo chipkali ki tarah mujhse chipki hui hai.bas yehi hai shiva pandya ki duniya " he said arranging the items.

Raavi smiled.did he just refer to her as a part of his world?

" Matlab mai teri duniyaa hu? " She asked with a spark in her eyes.

Shiva rolled his eyes.she always has to give undue importance to herself.

"Bilkul bhi nahi. Tu woh hai jo zabardasti meri duniya mai ghus ayi hai aur jaane ka naam hi nahi le rahi hai " shiva retorted and pulled her hand to drive her away from the store.

" Shivaa.kya kar rahai hai? " She whined.

" Dhande ka time hai.abhi teri bakwaas nahi jhel sakta.nikal yahaan se " he said

Raavi made a face and made her way back home.

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" Mai to kehti hu dev aur shiva ki shaadi ek saath karwa do , ek saal ka hi to fark hai dono mai " suman said

" Par maa, dev ke liye to ladki fixed hai.shiva ke liye ladki kahaan se dhundenge itni jaldi? " Dhara said

" Ae bhagodikibeti, tu na bahut alsi ho gayi hai.apni zimmedari se peeche hatt rahi hai.apna raja beta kehti hai na tu shiva ko, to uske liye ek acchi dulhan nahi dhund Sakti? " Suman scolded dhara

Raavi entered pandya niwas just then.

" Kiske liye dulhan dhundne ki baat ho rahi hai? " She asked

" Shiva ke liye, aur kiske liye.dev ki dulhan to tu hai " dhara careessed her hair

Raavi felt a strange pain in her heart.shiva marrying? She had never imagined him to be married.she didn't feel right.

" Shiva ki dulhan? " She whispered

" Hann.maa keh rahi thi ek hi mandap par Dev aur shiva ki shaadi karwa de.mai.soch rahi hu aaj hi uske liye ladkiya dekhna shuru kar du.teri koi dost hai raavi jo tujhe shiva ke liye..." Dhara Turned around to find her gone.

Raavi couldn't here it anymore.she just ran away from the house with tears in her eyes.she collided with shiva on the way.his hands instinctively wrapped around her waist and her hands held his shirt.

Shiva looked at her hazel tear filled eyes.raavi looked back at him.she raised her hand and touched his face.shiva was confused with her actions.

" Kya hua hai tujhe? " He asked making her stand properly and taking a step back.

" Tu kisi aur se shaadi nahi kar sakta " she said

"Kya? " Shiva asked not understanding what she said

She just shook her head and ran away.she herself didn't know why was she reacting like this.she needed to clear her head.

Shiva called her name but she didn't listen.he entered and saw dhara bhabi standing with a confused expression.

" Yeh chipkali ko kya ho gaya bhabi? " Shiva asked

" Pata nahi.mujhe laga uski aur Dev ki shaadi ki khabar sunkar khusi se nachegi par uska reaction mujhe samajh nahi aya.apni shaadi se zyada use teri dulhan ki fikr thi " dhara said

" Meri dulhan? Yeh aap kya keh rahi ho bhabi? " Shiva asked

" Kyu? Teri bhi to shaadi karne ki umar ho gayi hai.koi ladki pasand ki hai ya mai dhundna shuru karu? Bilkul chaand jaisi dulhan laungi mai apne shiva ke liye " dhara patted her head lovingly.

" Mujhe shaadi nahi karni bhabi.aur na hi mai dev ki shaadi us chipkali se hone dunga " he said firmly.

"Dekh shiva.woh teri bhabi banne wali hai.ab tu use yeh chipkali, chudail yeh sab bulana band kar accha lagega kya ki tu apni bhabi ko...." Dhara stopped when shiva went away.

Ho kya gaya hai inn dono ko? Meri baat puri hone se pehle hi chale jaa rahe hai.

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Shiva couldn't hear this anymore.he just can't call her bhabi.he closed his eyes calming himself.he went to the only place that could calm him.his tree.

He sat there thinking about his childhood.

There were times when he was attracted to raavi.he won't deny that.especially in his teenage years.she was beautiful.any guy would be attracted to her.he had blamed it on his hormones and that idiot girl didn't understand boundaries.she had no ideaa what reactions her innocenct touches evoked in him.he learned to control his feelings as he grew up but still hearing about raavi and dev made him feel miserable.he always thought he will stop their marriage, but what if he can't? What if that girl actually ends up being his bhabi? The mere thought made him very uncomfortable.he clenched the branch if the tree harder.

He can't control his feelings seeing him with his brother at his own house everyday.he let out a sigh.if only things were not this complicated.didnt that gadhedi realise that Dev didn't love her? Forget Dev, but even she didn't care that much about dev as much she cared about being a pandya bahu.

Sometimes he just wants to shake her out of her unrealistic dream world.

He spent some time on the tree before heading back home.

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Raavi lay on her bed thinking about what is happening.just then she heard anita fighting with hardik bhai over the phone.

Anita cut the call and sat down on the bed grumpily.

" Kya hua anita di? " Raavi asked worried

" Maine hardik pe chilla diya." She admitted

" Woh to maine bhi suna.par kyu? " Raavi asked.

" Usme kisi Sneha ko ghar drop kiya aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi " anita said

" Bataya nahi to aapko kaise pata chala? " Raavi asked curiously

" Woh to maine pucha tab bataya na " anita said

Raavi laughed at anita.

" Ab tu hass mat.mai jaanti hu aisa kuch nahi hai, mai jaanti hu maine overreact kiya.par kya karu? Koi aur ladki uske kareeb ane ke khayal se bhi mujhe gussa ata hai aur rona bhi ata hai." Anita said

Raavi stopped laughing.thia is exactly how she felt when she heard about Shiva's marriage.the thought of anyone else coming near shiva made her feel terrible whereas dev always roamed around with girls of his school and college but it didn't bother her that much.

Did she love him? Was it always shiva?

" Mujhe dev se nahi, shiva se pyar hai " she whispered

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