SaiRat FF - Agar Main iss duniya mein nahi rahu toh bhi...Pt8 Pg48 - Page 33

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: JoonaMohalla

Aww, the silent process of Sai falling in love with her Virat Sir is so damn gorgeous. And once again. Appu magician weaves her magic and makes everything alright. Just loved the little moments. I know I have said it before but the way you create romance in everyday life. In your stories, romance is not a fluffy concept that seems so far out of reach that you can just stare, and know that it can't be touched as it is not possible. But the moments you create, the small moments that are not like a shining moon in a faraway sky but like little twinkle in the eyes that can be seen and felt. And the words you used made it all the better- Matter-of-fact love😳 Sai's matter-of-fact love❤️which she herself might not understand but everybody else can feel. Oh the wonderful, playful moments that transcended into something emotional. Only you can do it my Appu magician. Effortlessly making the characters swim into various emotions and drenching the readers into those emotions. It feels like pouring rain outside and warm blanket inside.

The way Virat got drenched in Sai's love, your readers did too Appu❤️


Lookie look who is back!!!! ❤️

I'll come back and edit...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: vivpri

Thank you so much for saving our Veeru darling 🥰 Romance is pouring like rain 😍😃 where is the black thunder? 😜 please serve some didi bezatti 😉


Thanks darling!!!

I ignore PPs existence... that's the biggest beizzati I can do!!! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sherry_24

Awesome, brilliant, fantabulous!!!! Such a beautiful chapter💜 Absolutely loved it. Just the small gestures and so much outpour of love ❤️ Wow!!


Thanks so much!!!! 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Beautiful updates

Loved how fireball Sai is back due to Virat’s presence

Please update soon


Thank you so much smiley9

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Arnavkibewi

I can’t say it enough... I love the way you write... I get so into the story that it feels so real... it takes talent to do that

the emotion and the Nok jok was great... the way Sai came to life son seeing him


as always please update again tomorrow .... waiting impatiently for the next part



Thanks so very much!!!😳

You're right... they are lifeless without eachother!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kiran1018

I am so truly and deeply in llloooovvveeee with this chapter. I just loved how each scene was so well written. I loved how nice, soft, and slow paced this chapter was. I feel you have truly thought out each emotion in each scene and wrote it down so wonderfully in words. This is my favorite chapter not only because I was so impatiently waiting and craving to read the intensity of emotions when Sairat are alone in their own space but also because of how softly, beautifully, without much words they express their love for each other. I feel like this is so close to how their characters are portrayed in the show. I really wish they would add a track like this in the show and it turns out exactly the way you have written it.


I can’t really tell you how I was glued at reading each scene while still being so anxious about being how close was I to the end of the chapter because I didn’t want it to end. I must say that the one thing I didn’t like about this chapter was that It was so short!!!! I wanted it to be longer and I wanted to get so engrossed in the story that I didn’t want this chapter to end so soon!! This should tell you how close this story is to my heart and how addicted I am to your writing. Love love love it!!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


Thank you so very much!!!

This was such a heartfelt comment! And such a great compliment that it resonated with the characters...

This wasn't short!!!! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Awweee wala update!!!!


Teasing, care, understanding and support.....alll lovely!!!


They are trying to get back to the normal routine and taking care ir the each other with domestic simplicity!!!


Ninad will come be more caring towards sai than even virat...... And hopefully Pakhi will not .ake any appearance...


Happy writing!!!


The family is getting closer to Sai and it is a one way street!

Pakhi has disappeared...teehee...

Thanks so much!!!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu


Awwwleeee.. tha is so much for this wonderful comment, Kashish dear!!! ❤️

Please update soon Appu I am literally bursting from excitement and curiosity

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Posted: 3 years ago


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Posted: 3 years ago

Story khatam😭

Koi nahi👍🏼

Finally dono gaddho ne muh khol diya, haaash🙇‍♀️

What a beautiful story it was, loved every bit of it❤️


You are an amazing writer, keep writing❤️

Epilogue milega kya?


#WhenTwoGaddhasOpenTheirMouth,SparksFly

#SaiKaBhaktBannaIsTheUltimateSukh

#ViratIsSoBoring,ViratSirSoundsNice

#HappyEndingHoGayi🥳

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