@Goldie: poor Urmila, her sorrows are never ending. She was just out of her baddest nightmare and now this... The one who made her to come out of that state is himself suffering now 🥺💔
Ram's condition is unimaginable, the pillar of strength, his brother, who never left his side in his life is now in this condition. Whereas Siya, how she will blame herself for all her family is going through. Those father son didn't felt shame on blaming this to Siya as well 🤬
This is getting worst, but this was the final blow to Raghuvanshis, after this they are not crying anymore...
@Khyati: I just can't describe how I felt to write the three emotions- Urmila, Ram and Siya. It pierced my heart 💔
"Yes, I wished that you should learn to be silent. But not in this way." This line made me cry Khyati, literally superb.! You have portrait it beautifully. I could see Ram ordering Lakshman to get up and to be again on his side. I could see Siya feeling sorry for scolding Lakshman in the past. She is begging to not punish her like that. I could see Urmila requesting Lakshman to not leave her side in the middle of their journey. I could see the pain of parents, tp witness their young son in this condition. I could the pain of other siblings, who are waiting for Lakshman to be back to tease them.. this poem wrenched my heart Khyati, it's so so so emotional 🥺
Thanks for the comments ❣️
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