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Posted: 4 years ago

Even with having zero faith she can feel envy right? She sees al this formal ritualistic celebration week after week for Varsha Shrivastav

But all she has to do is stack a bunch of glass bangles in her wrists and her husband doesnt care for it (he thinks it comes in the way at night, he has to be extra careful when he messes with her, he worries it might crack and tear her skin)

She wants the symbolism

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Posted: 4 years ago

I hope Ranaav now gets it that Viveka intentionally holds herself back.

She is as into him as he is into her.

Nisha, can he do something unexpected ans surprise her?

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Posted: 4 years ago

“Arey bhai Dadi aur inki dosti hai”

“WOHI TO” Viveka rolled her eyes in disgust 🤣


He loved everything about her he realized ♥️

Mum must be blind, he thought 🤣


It's fun to imagine an agitated Viveka, hopping around, trying to get her husband off her back 😆


She Lost seems to be a very profound title! 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Drugs & Dhoom Dham

“I mean you went to a ceremony right, there is one at your aunt’s every week I am guessing” he laughed

She smiled grudgingly

“Aur hamey… MUJHE I mean ek bhi nahi mili” she was almost in tears

He was stunned to see her so vulnerable

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“Umm”

“No, don’t tell anyone” she said sniffling trying to distract herself with changing pillow covers

A wad of notes fell out

“I live in a family of drug dealers I think” she bend down to pick up all the strewn bills

He laughed as he helped her gather the bills and coins

“Tumhe chahiye change?” she asked playfully as he crouched on his toes by the bed, finding every errant coin

“Whose is it? Why are you so eager to part with it?” he didn’t trust her

“Umm.. I suspect its Dadi’s, Papa se lekar yaha chhupa dee hogi unhoney, then she must have asked Dadu for more”

“How much is it

They both bent over the pillow counting

There was more than Rs.7000 in there, almost all crisp bills

They exchanged a look of shock

“You think its legal?”

She smelled them

“VIIII” he growled

“Don’t u smell money”

He shook his head in shock

“U can smell them

He grabbed her wrist cracking a bangle

“One down 58 to go” he muttered finding and removing the two halves from her wrist gently

“Abhi itne bhi nahi hain, I have fat wrists, so Dadi said they will look nice”

He laughed

“U are thinking she has fat everything” she smiled

He didn’t smile

“Mere parents ko nahi kehna haan? Nor yours yaar?” “Please please” she tried to pry her hand from his

“Mera haath to chhodo” she whispered

The Parashar kid was the limit

“Raa… kya kar rahe ho, Diya Karuna Dadi anyone can walk in on us… they are like Rakshit times three”

He laughed again and held her chin

“pehle promise karo” she whispered dodging his lips as he leaned over her as she lay on the bed…

“Pehle” “Ummm..” she squirmed and dodged

He held her chin and planted his mouth fully on top

He was literally laying on her

She quivered and moaned and shook, they kissed hungrily for a few minutes, the door open and footsteps in the living room didn’t deter them

“Don’t tell them”

“Lets go to bed”

“U want to be paid in s--- first?” she asked bluntly

He laughed out loud again rolling off her body

“Why don’t u want anyone to know?” he probed with eyes closed

She turned and lay on her side

“You know…”

He gently ran his hands thru his hair”

“Stop it…” she whispered

“What?”

“U are too hot to be doing even hotter things” she muttered

He smiled speechless

He turned to his side and looked at her

“If I promise to make a big ceremony happen without revealing it was you that wanted it?”

“MUJHE pata tha” she tried to sit up

He pushed her down

“Don’t… my parents begged for a real wedding I told them, we have to keep it simple since Dad was in the hospital” “Dadi was like dhoom dhaam se bhi nahi ho rahi shaadi, pata nahi baat kya chhupa rahi hai”

He cackled

“Dad’s fine now” he said

“I cant get married to u again”

“That bad huh?” he laughed

She looked at him smitten…

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Posted: 4 years ago

Diya countered Dadi “Dadi aap CAR se nahi utrogey? “Jab tak Veev Didi pregnant nahi ho jaati?” 🤣


Viveka usually has a very practical mindset but she does cherish her marriage. She wants to celebrate it with her family like she sees it for her cousins.

It's nice that she shared it with him! 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nisha, it would be fun to read about the ceremonies and all the nokzhok.

Can we indeed have a ceremony for these two ?

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Posted: 4 years ago

A wad of notes fell out

“I live in a family of drug dealers I think” 🤣


“Whose is it? Why are you so eager to part with it?” he didn’t trust her 😆


Diya Karuna Dadi anyone can walk in on us… they are like Rakshit times three” 🤣


“I cant get married to u again” 😲

“That bad huh?” he laughed 😆


“If I promise to make a big ceremony happen without revealing it was you that wanted it?” ♥️

How cute can he get? He might actually make that happen, irrespective of what she says now..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Alone at last . Raanav wants to make love but Viv is afraid any member of her family will walk in like Rakshit does. She is still talking about all the rituals she did not/could not do as they married because Satyen was in the hospital. Raanav told her they can have a wedding with all the rituals now as his father is well.

Thank you Nisha.

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Posted: 4 years ago

He should do it when Smrita goes to London 🤣😈

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Posted: 4 years ago

What Anu said was so true, the child who screams more, gets attention more.

Just because Viveka hardly says anything and goes along with the flow, I guess many of her wishes just gets buried.

Maybe now she should realise that there is someone special who would want to listen to her wishes and wants to fulfill it happily for her.

Nothing wrong to be Matlabi, once in a while.

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