P&P with a twist IV - Page 13

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Eastender


Jai Jagannath🙏🏽. In London, we have Rath yatra too. It starts from Hyde Park to Trafalgar Square but this year it was cancelled. The lockdown is easing from 19 July but we are not free of covid. Almost 30,000 people are infected by delta variant every day.


I have been following that.. it's very worrisome. Moreover, football has made people irrational like faith does in India! Euro 2020 has been what Kumbh was or Rath Yatra or grand marriages are going to be here.. 😒

Vaccines are a losing battle against variants! It's really grim.. please be safe! 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Duniya Dadi ki

He sat through the puja without complaining once, did every ritual the panditji was making everyone do, Naina was a little miffed that the pooja to celebrate her job turned out to be a “Naye poti ki pooja” for Harshu and Varshu and

“Naye dulhe dulhan” ki pooja for Vi and raanav

Satyen arrived promptly at 7 without Smrita

Rakshit and Lekha showed up at 8 when pooja was almost over

“There might be a surprise for u” Rakshit muttered to Raanav as the brothers sat side by side in the large living room emptied out (furniture placed in the hallway outside)

“mere liye?” Viveka smiled

“Nah… he needs to take care of that” Rakshit winked

“Kanjoos” Viveka said with a smile

Anu watched the dynamic between Lekha and Viveka and was disappointed

Lekha didn’t talk with Varsha nor Viveka

Dadi insinuated herself between every thing

“Hamare Harsha ka bhaag achha hai, tabhi ek aur showroom khulega batao” she told Raanav

He nodded amused

“Jab Savi ke do do bete hue mujhe achha nahi laga Lakshmi honi chahiye na?” Dadi was being pretentious

Anu looked like she would lunge and punch Dadi in the eyes

Akash held her hand tightly and sighed

“Ma jiske chaar chaar betiyan hui waha tumhe BETE chahiye the” Akash said with a chuckle

“Ek beta to jaroor hona tha, aage ka bhi to socho… nahi? Batao!” Dadi looked at Satyen

“Ek baat hai Amma mere 4 bete hotey main aapki charo potiyon ko apni beti banal eta, beton ka kya kaam” he flicked his hand disdainfully

Savi was shocked, she stared at him in admiration

Anu smiled with amusement

“You wont have any variety in samdhis you wll have to keep coming to our house and listen to all of Akash’s bad jokes”

“Shaadi ke 30 saal baad HUM bhi bad jokes bhi bad….( theatrically raising his arms)

PATTHAR KE SANAM TUJHE HUMNE

Papa had a fantastic voice and was quite tuneful, he sang two lines as Ma blushed

Dadi huffed in a corner

Dadu laughed

Panditji interrupted loudly

“Arey wah aap to bahut badhiya ga lete hain bhai saab?” Satyen was shocked

“Inke ishq mein seekh liye bhai saab” “Aur kuch nahi”

“Yeh duniya use ki zamana” Akash began the second song Satyen paused the two pandits and urged Akash to sing

“Akaash” Anu scolded him

Satyen looked at them with envy

The whole room clapped

Diya and Karuna sat in a corner texting about Piyush’s friends

Mayank Awasthi should be here shortly Piyush texted Karuna

Smrita appeared at 9, Satyen had blasted her yet again in firm but kind words

She wore a stunning saree and emerald necklace to contrast the blue

Dadi reached touched felt and peered at the necklace in the first hour

Viveka was beyond amused

“Hamari Biveka ke liye banwa do aisa set, Bablu (Akash) de dega rupay”

“Umm.. uh… um” smriti squirmed

Anu was inside with Savi

“Dadi I don’t wear jewelry” Viveka shouted over the cacophony

“Shaadi nayi nayi hui hai kaise nahi pehanogi? BATAO”

“Nahi Dadi” Viveka smiled

“Banwa dena, Bauji se thode rupay advance mein dilayen tumhe?” Dadi asked

Smrita was ready to punch Dadi was not giving her space

“Umm.. yeh jisne banwaya who ab nahi hai”

“DUNIYA MEIN NAHI HAI?” Dadi was shocked

“Nahi Dilli mein”

Viveka and twins were rolling on the floor

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Posted: 4 years ago

Dadi is irrepressible 😂 And it’s particularly satisfying when her lack of filter stokes Smrita!


Nisha, I love how you have brought out the intrinsic character of each of the Guptas and the Parashars in this chapter in the way you have them either speak, or think, or behave, or react.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Dadi is the best opponent for Smrita 😂😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Kanjoos, Ranaav, Viveka just accused you of being Kanjoos. Prove her wrong.

Dadi might be despicable when she deals with Anu but is hilarious when she is dealing with Smrita.

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Posted: 4 years ago

One can love Dadi or hate her. But none can ignore her. 😆

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“Jab Savi ke do do bete hue mujhe achha nahi laga Lakshmi honi chahiye na?” 👏

Anu looked like she would lunge and punch Dadi in the eyes

Akash held her hand tightly 🤣


beton ka kya kaam” 😛♥️

“You wont have any variety in samdhis 🤣

“Shaadi ke 30 saal baad HUM bhi bad jokes bhi bad 😆


Smrita was ready to punch Dadi was not giving her space 🤣🤣


“Umm.. yeh jisne banwaya who ab nahi hai” 😈

“DUNIYA MEIN NAHI HAI?” Dadi was shocked 🤣


Patthar ke Sanam is like the best song for some fun emotional blackmail! 😆♥️

Loved every bit of it!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Do unto others…

“Congratulations” Raanav raised his kheer bowl up high

“Thanks” Naina smiled slowly

She was leaning on the wall, happy beyond words now, wearing a marigold garland and teeka smears on her forehead

Viveka was bringing food to the dining table.

The apartment was filled with people, neighbors and friends and Bua’s family and Bua’s samdhis

Smrita sat in a corner with Satyen as Satyen chatted with Akash

Anu frequently stopped by to chat with them

A lot of food was cooked elsewhere and delivered around 8

Viveka and the twins were in charge of warming the subzis and pouring it out from the giant industrial tiffin carrier and bringing it with male cousins’ help to the dining table

The elderly sat in chairs along the wall

Dadu was feasting unnoticed

Dadi was busy gossiping with Garima Chachi’s cousin from east Delhi

Viveka glanced at her husband and Naina. At a distance they looked like they were made for each other. Tall, lithe, elegant and sophisticated…

“Parashar kid is her type” Viveka muttered “Ufff” she cursed as her pallu edge tassel dipped in the raita almost

She ran to the kitchen to rinse off the edge

She returned to the living room to stare

Smrita watched her from a distance

Not the first time she spotted her darling DIL shooting daggers at her sister

She shud discuss it with Lekha she thought with a wicked smile

“Aapko yaad hai who kaha tha?” “We met this gentleman who was in the advisory board for Banking Regulators Smri yaad hai aapko, like a month ago”

“Ask me where we met Manish Malhotra” she giggled like a stupid teen

Akash laughed

Anu passed by, she had noticed Smrita watching Viveka

“Anu yaar kha lein kya?”

“Aapne meri baat nahi suni aur 3 gaame gaaye hai sirf raita aur prashad milegi aapko”

“I could never do that to Satya” Smrita accused

“I bet you cant” Anu winked boldly

She was fearless’

“Aap baithen yaha” satyen invited

“Dekh rahe hain? 100 log hain is apartment mein”

“It feels like June” Smrita nodded wiping fake sweat

“We haven’t had a reception or anything for Veev, log bahut gussa hain hame laga we can pamper a few, aap log kha lein, if you feel uncomfortable andar AC on kar lein wahan baith jaayen”

“Oh no we will go” Smrita mumbled

“Sure… I can pack ur prashad” Anu said politely

“Ajeee nahi… main to khaaye bagair nahi jaaoonga”

“Aap yahi ruk jaayen subah Savi kachauri talne waalin hain” Anu smiled

“Savi ruk rahi hai?” Akash was giddy with happiness

“Jee”

“Chaliye mujhe balcony mein thodi jagah de dein” Satyen laughed

“Zaroor” Anu laughed

Smrita was furious

The light hearted flirting between Anu and him was making her real mad real fast

“Main raat ko 2 baje bhi chai pee sakti hoon agar aap jagey rahe to ban jaayega” Anu smiled

“Ab to koi chance nahi hai Anu ji I wont go I wont sleep”

“Ek gaana yaad aaya” Akash offered

Anu left………..

Viveka walked tentatively to where Naina and Raanav were

Naina’s expression changed

“Raanav do u want to eat?” Viveka checked

“umm sure…” he nodded

“Excuse me” Naina left

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Posted: 4 years ago

What exactly is Naina's problem?

Seems she has problem only with Viveka and will bad mouth Ranaav otherwise and when he is there along with her she will behave like a saint, Really?

I hope Ranaav gets that. He has been around girls. He knows who is attention seeker. But even if he knows he will have keep his mouth shut as Viveka would side with her sister.

Naina seems vindictive towards Viveka for no reason.

Viveka already has lot on her plate and if she is going to be taunted by mother in law for bond (not bond exactly) which Naina shares with Ranaav that would hurt Viveka no end.

Rannav take her to London permanently.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Do unto others.

Viveka seems to have a low esteem of herself. She feels jealous of Naina talking to Raanav and it is so obvious to Smrita. Viveka herself gives ammunition to Smrita to make her look unsuitable to Raanav. She should be happy and proud that Raanav chose her and he is very happy with her.

Edited by Eastender - 4 years ago

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